高中英语-Book7 Unit4 Writing A letter of apology教学课件设计

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---Aletterhome---书面表达ALetterofApology书面表达评讲:道歉信书信文体Toupgradeyourwriting你的写作“升级”年份主题文体2013要求朋友是否方便为自己的叔叔接机书信（求助）2014询问旅游广告信息（外国学校暑假课程）完整性书信（咨询）2015向外国朋友给本校英文报约稿书信（约稿）2016请外教修改所附材料的文字和格式书信（求助）2017告知英国朋友下次上汉语课的计划书信（计划）近五年高考英语全国卷

I书面表达aletterofthanks(感谢信)aletterofapplication(申请信)aletterofinquiry(咨询信)aletterofaskingforhelp(求助信)aletterofsuggestions(建议信)aletterofapology(道歉信)aletterofcomplaint(投诉信)aletterofcongratulations(祝贺信)aletterofrecommendation(推荐信)…Wehavelearnedtowrite…道歉信文本概述（Letterofapology)

道歉信是要向对方陈述无法答应的所请所托的原因，对不愿为的事，可声明自己的一贯主张；对不能为的请托，更应陈述理由，说明自己为什么不能为。

道歉信的语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实，不要显出丝毫的虚情假意。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。★structure结构道歉信写作“三步曲”：

表示歉意；

说明具体原因提出补救办法；

再次致歉，希望得到理解。Para.1Para.2Para.3道歉信模版：Dear

,(1)Iamtrulysorrythat.

（道歉的原因）(2)Thereasonisthat.（介绍原因）(3)Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Ido/sincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.1.neatwriting书写3.content内容2.structure结构4.language语言WellorganizedandsmoothlydevelopedEverythingrequiredincludedNoChinglishNoGrammaticalmistakesExactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatternsWhatmakesagoodpieceofwriting?Goodfirstimpression假如你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约，请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1、表示道歉；

2、说明原因；

3、另约时间。注意：

1、词数100左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Apieceofstudent’swork(学生作品）

Howareyougoingrecently,Bob?IamverysorrytosaythatIcouldn’tgotothebookstorewithyouonthisSaturday.Iwanttogooutwithmyparentsforapicnic,thatcanrelaxmeandbroadenmyhorizons.Ihopethissuddenchangewillnotcausetoomuchtroubletoyou.CanwegotothebookstoreonSunday?Wewillmeetattheschoolgateat8a.m.inthemorninginordertohavemoretimetochoosebooks.Ifyoudon’tlikeit,pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuityou.Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyou.

15分22-25分upgradeHowtowriteagoodarticle?Anarticleisnotwritten,butpolished.

文章不是写出来的，而是改出来的。难点突破写得地道1.Iamwritingtomyapologytoyou.Iamwritingtomake/offer/expressmyapologytoyou.givegive写得地道2.Youdon’tbeangry.IwillgowithyouonSunday.①Ihopethechangewillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.②Pleaseacceptmyapologyfromthebottomofmyheart.③HowIwish

youcouldunderstandmeandacceptmyapology.sincere①Canwemeetattheschoolgateat8a.m.thisSunday?③Wouldyoumindmeetingattheschoolgateat8a.m.thisSunday?②What/Howaboutmeetingat…?④Ifitisconvenientfor/toyou,canwemeet…?3.Wecanmeetattheschoolgateat8a.m.thisSunday.写得得当Possibleconvincingreasons:1.Ihavejustbeenchosentocommunicatewithagroupofexchangestudentsonbehalfofmyclass.…,whichisagoodchanceformetolearnmoreabouttheirculture.出彩：1+1选材原则美德渗透，文化交融，国际视野，力所能及2.IhavejustbeenaskedtogotothenursinghometospendtheDoubleNinthFestivalwiththeelderlythisSaturday.…,whichisagoldenopportunityformetoshowloveforthem.1+13.IhavejustbeenchosentotakepartinanEnglishdebatecompetitionrepresentingourschool.…,whichisagoldenopportunityformetochallengemyselfandwinhonorforourschool.1+1美句强记：…,whichisagoldenopportunityforsb.todosth.写得漂亮1.Wecannotonlyhavemoretimetoselectbooksbutalsoattendabooksigning.Notonlycanwehavemoretimetoselectbooks,butalsoattendabooksigning.倒装2.Ihaveanunexpectedpartytoattend.Ican’taccompanyyoutothebookstore.①Ihaveanunexpectedpartytoattend,soIcan’t…②ThereasonwhyIcan’taccompanyyoutothebookstoreisthatIhave…③Havinganunexpectedpartytoattend,Ican’t…

④Withanunexpectedpartytoattend,Ican’t…⑤Ihaveanunexpectedpartytoattend,whichmakesitimpossibleformetoaccompany...①并列句②名词性从句③非谓语动词④with复

合结构⑤定语

从句①Wecanleaveearlysothat/inorderthatwewillhavemoretimetoreadbooksinthebookstore.3.Wecanleaveearly.Wewillhavemoretimetoreadbooksinthebookstore.②Wecanleaveearlywhichenablesustohavemoretimetoreadbooksinthebookstore.setout/off①状语

从句②定语

从句动词短语①Theactivityisofgreatimportancetomeand....4.TheactivityisveryimportanttomeandIdon’twanttomissit.②TheactivityissoimportanttomethatIdon’twanttomissit.③SoimportantistheactivitytomethatIdon’twanttomissit.①高级

句型②so…that倒装①IhavejustbeenaskedtohelpmyEnglishteachertoprepareforalecturethat/whichistobeheldthisSaturday.5.IhavejustbeenaskedtohelpmyEnglishteachertoprepareforalecture.ItistobeheldthisSaturday.②IhavejustbeenaskedtohelpmyEnglishteachertoprepareforalecturetobeheldthisSaturday.①定语从句②非谓语动词品一品DearBob,

I’mterriblysorrythatIcannotgotothebookstorewithyouthisSaturdayasplanned.

ThereasonisthatIhavejustbeenchosentomeetagroupofexchangestudentsonbehalfofmyclass,whichisagoldenopportunityformetolearnmoreabouttheirculture.HowIwishyoucouldunderstandmeandacceptmysincereapologyasmybestfriend.

WhataboutgoingthereonSundaymorning?Ifitisconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:30attheschoolgate.Ifnot,wouldyoupleasetellmewhattimesuitsyoubest?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua(109ws)upgrade24分Summary：Thekeytowritingaletterofa