读后续写PostcardsFromTheWorld讲义-2023届高三英语二轮复习

试题原题阅读下面材料，依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。PostcardsFromTheWorldWhilethesunwashedoverthegrassofmygrandmother’sfrontgarden,Isunkintothefamiliarityofoneofherarmchairs.

Life,

asIknewit,

hadchanged.

Mybelovedgrandmother,

mynanny,

astandinparentintheabsenceofmyfather,

hadcancer.

Itwasterminal,

andcouldneverbecured.AsshewatchedGetawayontelevision,

sheremarkedtomethatshe’dneverleftAustraliaandthatnowsheneverwould.

Iswallowedthesadness

thatcamewithknowingthatchaptersofherlifeweretobeleftunwritten.Atwork,

feelinghelpless,

Iwipedtablesandtookordersandthought.

HARD!TheSaturdayafternoonlunchrushwasnotenoughtolullmefrommythoughts.

Wrackedwithgrief,

IponderedthepowerofFacebookandthecollectivestrengthofhumanempathy.

Iracedfromtheendofmyshifttoaskstrangersontheinternetforhelp.“MyNannyDelhascancer.

It’sterminalandshewillneverseetheworld.

Pleasesendherpostcardssoshecanseetheworldfromherarmchair:Icanoffernothingbutgratitude.〞Iresolvednottobreatheawordofthis;

shouldnothinge,

Icouldn’tbeartocarryherdisappointmentalongwithmyown.

Shouldsomethingwanderintoourhumblelittleletterbox,

IwouldconsideritablessingandembraceitlikeIembracedherlittle,

shrinkingframe.DaysturnedtoweeksandNanny’shealthworsenedrapidlyintheearlymonthsof2018.

Lifetookmethroughmyfulltimestudy,

babysittingandwaitingtables,

alongwiththeresponsibilityof

caringforagrandparentwhowastoosicktocareforherself.AsIhelpedNannyintheearlyhoursofthosemornings,shewouldchattome,sometimesjoys,othertimes,sorrows.Whatevershesharedbecameprecious.留意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Oneafternoon,finally,apostcardfromthe

UnitedStatearrivedinourletterbox.

_________________________________________________________

Inthemonthsthatfollowed,herlivingroombecameadeparturehallandourflightsdeparteddaily.____________________________________✔

试题分析●写作分析1.主要人物〔角色〕：①I:Iwipedtablesandtookorders.②Mybelovedgrandmother:mynanny,

astandinparentintheabsenceofmyfather,

hadcancer.

Itwasterminal,

andcouldneverbecured.2.主题：人与社会——现实中和善的行为形成的情感共鸣

主要情节：父亲过世，留下患癌症的奶奶相依为命，但不幸的是，奶奶的病无法治愈。奶奶常常跟我说，她从未离开过澳大利亚，也可能永久无法去旅行。对于奶奶的心愿，我也一时无计可施。后来，我最终想到利用Facebook发起求助活动，盼望远方的生疏人能给奶奶寄明信片，让奶奶通过明信片去感受外面的世界。世界各地的人们纷纷寄来明信片，给奶奶带来诸多抚慰。......3.续写情节支配：●第一段：Oneafternoon,finally,apostcardfromtheUnitedStatearrivedinourletterbox.

①〔与开头句连接〕这张明信片是什么内容？表达什么意思？②奶奶看到这张明信片有什么感受？③〔与下文开头句连接〕来自世界各地的明信片如雪花般来到跟前●其次段：Inthemonthsthatfollowed,herlivingroombecameadeparturehallandourflightsdeparteddaily.

①〔与开头句连接〕我和躺在病床上的奶奶一起观赏网友们寄自世界各地的明信片②明信片给奶奶带来了什么③对人们善行的感悟✔

下水作文●下水作文

Oneafternoon,finally,apostcardfromtheUnitedStatearrivedinourletterbox.ItwasaboutagrandcelebrationoftheEaster,wherepeopleweremakingandsendingcolorfuleggsandbunnies.ItwasobviousthattheAmericanfriendjustwantedtooffermygrandmotheragoodwish,encouraginghertofightagainstthecancerbravely.Withoutanyhesitation,Irantomygrandmotherexcitedly,postcardinhandtightly.Thoughabitweak,mygrandmothergatheredherstrengthandaskedmetoreadittoher.Thosewordsandthepicturebrightenedherinnerworldofenjoyingtheworld.Fromthatdayon,postcardsfromdifferentcornersoftheglobestreamedinourhumbleletterbox.(102words)

Inthemonthsthatfollowed,herlivingroombecameadeparturehallandourflightsdeparteddaily.Icherishedeveryminute,sharingcustomsandpracticesfromdifferentcountrieswithmybelovedgrandmother.EverydayIwouldsitherbedside,showingherthewonderfulpicturesandtellingheraboutthemarvelousstoriesbehindthecolorfulpostcards.Dayinanddayout,weenjoyedthesplendidhistoryandcultureofChina,journeyedthroughthebeautifulsceneryofnorthernEurope,experiencedthehardshipwhenpassingthroughtheSaharaDesert.Everydestinationbroughtmygrandmotherendlessjoyandinspiredhertofacethediseasewithgreathope.Thosepreciousmomentscouldn’tkeepmygrandmotherstaywithmelonger.However,itwaspeople’skindnessthatwarmedourlastdarkdays.(108words)参考范文：Oneafternoon,finally,apostcard

fromtheUnitedStatesarrivedinourletterbox.

The

simple

postcardfromAmericatooursleepylittleseasidetowninAustraliawastomeabeaconoflight.

Iheldittightinmyhands,readand

rereadthewordsscrawledacrosstheback:NannyDel,thinkingofyouinMichigan,

...

Fromthatday,ourletterbox

becamethedestination

forpostcardsfromallovertheworld.Ourletterboxbecameahotel,acmodatingtravelwearycardsfromeverywhere:India,Italy,China,andJapan.Thecardswereloveandmementosfromallcornersofthe

Isat

nexttomyNanny,

readingthecardstoher.Tearsofhappinessmixed

withgrieffellontothosepostcards.Inthe

monthsthat

followed,herlivingroombecameadeparturehallandour

flightsdeparteddaily.

Herhospitalbedbecameanairportlounge,whereweresearchedandplannedournextdeparture.WevisitedMilanandcruisedtheJapaneseSeabeforehoppingovertoTaiwan.WetravelledtheentiretyoftheUnitedStates.Nannyhungoutforeveryvisitfromthepostman,eagerlyawaitingnewsofhernextdeparture."Ijustcan'