译林英语必修3Unit3Narration-Writing-课堂课件(21张)

NarrationWriting学习目标1.了解写作的重要性2.掌握记叙文写作的要点3.实战演练

高分英语的特性一、条理性：段落完整，层次分明。二、流畅性：文章层次清晰，行文连贯。常用关联词。三、间接性：语言简洁，不重复，不啰嗦。四、多样性：词语丰富，句式结构多变。小词语原则，状语提前原则，短语优先原则，并列句/特殊句式原则，长短句交替原则和整洁分段原则。五、准确性：语法正确，时态、语态、用词和句法等。避免拼写错误。六：思想性：文章立意要高。1.外在美观2.结构明了3.用词高级4.句式精彩5.过渡自然Whatisnarration?

Narrationisaboutaseriesofeventsrelatedtopersonalexperience.Elementsofnarrationwhatwhenwherewhowhyhow行文结构1.Thebeginning:开门见山地交代时间、地点、人物等

a.Theotherday,whenIwasonmywaytoschool,Imet...b.Iwillneverforgetthedaywhenmymotherwaswaitingformeintherain.

2.Thebody:

详述故事经过，包括起因、发展、高潮、结果等

a.Theybothlookedworried,andthenIwenttohelpthem.b.Atthatmoment,sheappearedatthedoor...3.Theending:

总结全文，发表感想。a.Hearingthis,allofusweremovedtotears.b.IwasverygladthatIhadhelpedtheminEnglish.c.Ittaughtmewhatrealloveis.记叙文的写作要点：1.时态：过去时态，动词富于变化。2.人称：第一人称：叙述者亲眼所见的经历。第三人称：不受“我”活动范围以类的人或事物的限制3.顺序：时间顺序（顺序和倒叙）4.叙述的过度：关联词5.叙述与对话：记叙文的基本要领1.头绪分明，脉络清楚：对六要素构思2.突出中心，详略得当：分清主次，定好详略3.用活语言，准确生动：Whatimpressedmemostisthat…令我印象最深刻的是Amongvariouskindsofexperiences/personsinmymind,…isthemostunforgettableone.在我脑海里的各种经历/人中，。。。是最令人难忘的。1.Mychildhoodmemorywascolorfulandeverythinginmychildhoodmemorywasfullofsmilesandencouragement.开头常用语：2.Thereisasayingthat,’’Yesterdayisahistorywithplentyofbeautifulandunforgettablememories.’’我的童年多彩斑斓，我童年里的一切都充满了微笑和鼓励。Through

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Tosumup,thoughI’mneverachildanymore,IstillmissmychildhoodandI’mwillingtokeepitinmymindforever.WhenIwasalone,Icouldn’thelpthinkingoftheexperience.Ilearnedalotfromit.结尾常用语译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件1、几天前theotherday;severaldaysagotwohourslater2、使人感到意外toone’ssurprise3、就在这时atthatmoment;atthattime常用关联词译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件①副词：suddenly,unfortunately,luckily,immediatelyasaresult……

Whatwasworse②so/such…that…译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件

根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。短文要写得连贯、完整。Sample1译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件Tom/rideabikeAlongthestreet/roadAfewdaysago/theotherday/oneday2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件Acar/runfastto/runintohimTom/falloffhisbikeSuddenly

2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件Thedriver/frightened/runaway2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件Awoman/rememberthenumberofthecarThepoliceThedriver/catch2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件KeywordssentencesAwomansawtheaccidentandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolice.Thedriverwascaught.rideabike/runfasttoseetheaccident/rememberthenumber/callthepolice/becaughtbefrightened/runawayhithim/falloffhisbikeWhenTomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.Thecarhithim.Andhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverwassofrightenedthatheranaway.译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件译林英语必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT课堂课件(21页)-精品PPT课件

Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreet

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hesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.

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heranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.

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andtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,

thedriverwascaught

andpunishedforhiswrongdoing.Passage2

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