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Theoldergenerationstendtohaveverytraditionalideasabouthowpeopleshouldlive,thinkandbehave.However,somepeoplebelievethattheseideasarenothelpfulinpreparingyoungergenerationsformodernTowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisIntroducethetopicof'traditionalideasandmodernlife',thenpartlyagree:someideasareoutdated,butothersarestillhelpfulParagraphaboutideaswhicharenotsohelpfulWork-havingacareerforlifeisnolongerRelationships-'rules'aboutwhoandwhentomarryareGenderroles-traditionalfixedrolesofmenandwomenhaveParagraphabouttraditionalideaswhichweshouldn'tWork-workhard,doyourbest,takeprideinyourworkBehaviour-politeness,goodmanners,respectforothersCommunity-helpothers,beagoodneighbour,lookafterlocalConclusion:repeat/summarisetheIELTSWritingTask2:'structure'isnottheIoftenreceivequestionsfromstudentslikethis"HiSimon.Iusedyour4-paragraphstructurewithshortintroductionandconclusion,butIonlygotband6.5.Ineedaband7,soshouldItryadifferentCanyouseewhatiswrongwiththisquestion?Thestudentisassumingthatessaystructureisthesecrettoahighscore.Butremember:evenagreatessaystructureisnothingwithoutgoodcontent(ideas,vocabulary,correctgrr).Ifyou'restuckonband6or6.5,youprobablyneedtoimprovethecontent,notthestructure.IELTSWritingTask2:thekeystoahighMemorisedphrasesforanyessay,originalordifficultwords,complexgrticalstructures,alongintroductionwithbackgroundandthesisstatement:theseareNOTthekeystoahighscore!IfyouwanttogetthehighestscorepossiblewithyourcurrentlevelofFocusonansweringthequestionwell.Thismeansthatyouneedgoodideas(whichiswhynningisimportant).Exinyourideasindetailinthemainbodyparagraphs.Workontopicvocabularyratherthan'anyessayvocabulary'.Forgetabout'complexstructures'and'difficultwords'.Whenyoutrytoohardtomakeyourwritinglookdifficult,itusuallyjustseemsstrangeorwrong.Keepyouressaystructuresimple:ashortintroductionandconclusion,andtwowell-developedmainbodyinaddition1,Ineverycountry,theremaybetalentedamateurfilm-makerswhojustneedtogiventheopportunitytoprovethemselves.Tocompetewithbig-budgetproductionsfromoverseas,thesepeopleneedmoneytopayforfilmcrews,actorsandahostofothercostsrelatedtoproducinghigh-qualityfi.Ifernmentsdidhelpwiththesecosts,theywouldseeanincreaseinemploymentinthefilmindustry, efromfilmsales,andperhapsevenariseintouristnumbers.NewZealand,forexample,hasseenanincreaseintourismrelatedtothe'LordoftheRings'fi,whichwerepartlyfundedbyernmentsubsidies.备注：一个意群可以不用连接词（红色部分没有“连接词forexample,forinstanceaparticularlygoodexampleis2.IdonotbelievethatnetEarthexistsonlyforthebenefitofhumans,andthereisnothingspecialaboutthisparticularcenturythatmeansthatwesuddenlyhaverighttoalloworencouragetheextinctionofanyspecies.Furthermore,thereisnocompellingreasonwhyweshouldletanimalsdieout.Wedonotneedtoexploitordestroyeverylastsquaremetreoflandinordertofeedor modatetheworld’spopulation.Thereisplentyofroomforustoexistsidebysidewithwildanimals,andthisshouldbeouraim.备注：also，Inaddition,moreover,furthermore用来连接并列关系的两个意群；这里furthermore前的观点“人类无权决定动物生死” furthermore之后的观点3,Ontheonehand,strictpunishmentscancertainlyhelptoencouragepeopledrivemoresafely.Ontheotherhand,Ibelievethatsafedrivingcanbepromotedinseveraldifferentwaysthatdonotpunishdrivers.备注：howevermeanwhile,ontheotherhand4,Employment-basedhealthinsurancedeclinedfrom177.4millionto176.3million,drivingtheoveralldecreasesininsurance.Incontrast,thenumbercoveredernmenthealthinsuranceclimbedfrom83.0millionto87.4ThailandandHongKongarelookingtospurtheireconomybyreducinginterestrates,whichwillencouragepunters,buttheywillhavetowaitforU.S.cutsbecausetheHongKongdollarispeggedtothegreenbackandBangkoktraditionallyalignsThairateswithAmerica's.Incontrast,MalaysiaandthePhilippinesareusinghigherinterestratestocontrolinflation.备注：表示对比bycontrast;inYousaybycontrastorincontrast,orincontrasttosomething,toshowthatyouarementioningaverydifferentsituationfromtheoneyouhavejustmentioned.the，a/an冠词：the;a/an其中the叫定冠词，an/a叫不定冠词限定词包括：形容词性物主代词(my,its,ouryour...)；数量词(each,every,all,much,enough,another)单数实意名词前边往往需要有冠词(a/an，the)familyysavitalroleinthegrowthofathe：当作者第一次提到某个名词，或者泛指一类名词时(thewriterdoesnothaveoneparticulariteminmind,butagroupasagenericwhole)ø+名词复 (ø表示前边不加冠词或者限定词MotherbirdsoftenregurgitatefoodtofeedtheirPenguinscantravelgreatdistancestobringfoodandregurgitateitfortheirøKindnessisthequalityofbeinggentle,caring,andIfyouhavepatience,youareabletostaycalmandnotgetannoyed.a/an+单数名词acanmaintaincontactwithhisfriendsatanytimeofathetheThenounreferstomaybemorecleare.g.ifonesay“thecar”,itisassumedthereadercanmoreeasilyidentifywhichcarthewriterhasinmind.asopposedto“acar” previously如：iborrowedabookfromMrLiandthebookisinteresting.2）该名词有介词短语，分词，定语从句等修饰语例如：thegirlunderthetree;theboyswimmingwithmybrother;thebagthatiboughtyesterday3)ThatwasthemostsuccessfulexperimentthatourlabeverInthiseconomy,consumerswillpreferthecheapestlaptopstheycan4)Subjectsremainedfocusedonthefirststimulusthattheywerepresentedwith.That’sthelasttimeIeverflythatairline.备注：某名词有修饰成分并不一定会让该名词变的identifiable。当该名词不是identifiable时还是不需要加the例如：1)iwantthemanwhoknowswhatlove2)IwantamanwhoknowsloveIn[1]aspecificmanfromagroup(probablyknownfromthecontext)ispointedoutandidentified;in[2]atypeofmanisdefined–inthiscase,ahypotheticalPronounsaresmallwordsthattaketheceofanoun.Wecanuseapronouninsteadofanoun.Pronounsarewordslike:he,you,ours,themselves,some,each...Ifwedidn'thavepronouns,wewouldhavetorepeatalotofnouns.Wewouldhavetosaythingslike:Doyoulikethemanager?Idon'tlikethemanager.Themanager'snotfriendly.Withpronouns,wecansay:Doyoulikethemanager?Idon'tlikehim.He'snotThis：可以指代句子YouusethistoreferbacktoanideaorsituationexpressedinaprevioussentenceorSomeyoungpeoplemaycommitcrimesasameanstogetmoney.ThisposesathreattosocialItWeuseittorefertothemainorthefirstmentionedtopicofadiscussion.Thesubjectisusuallyanounornounphrase例子：WhereisyourcarItisintheUsedtorefertoafactorsituationthatisalreadyknownor例子：whenthefactoryclosesitwillmean500peoplelosingtheirThatThenumberoffemaleholdersofmaster’sdegreeishigherthanthatofmaleholders.tyofgoodstransportedbyroadishigherthanthatbypipeline.TheyWeusetheytorefertopeople,animalsorthingsthathavealreadybeenmentionedorareeasily例子：WhereareJohnandLizTheywentfora备注：technologyenablesa togetaccesstoinformationinalmostanyfield.Theycantyperelatedquestionsintoasearchengine.这里they使用错误，a Alargenumberofalargenumberofindividuals/vehicles/ 例子 crimeswerejustasnumerousastheyaretoday;numerousisanumberofdifferentisanumberofdifferentkindsexamplesexamplesofthesameTheislandofferssuchawidevarietyofsceneryandThiscityhasavarietyofgoodstoresandahostofItproducesahostofsilentvictims:parentssiblings,partnerschildrengrandchildrenandfriends.Hehasworkedwithahostofothercharities.PlentyisPlenty 既可以可数又不可Plentyisespeciallytoindicatethatthereisenoughofsomething,ormorethanyouTherewasstillplentyoftimetotakeJilloutforMostbusinessesfaceplentyofalot There'salotofworkbeingdoneAlotofpeopleAnamount usedespeciallywithuncountablealargeamountofmoneywork,energy Anenormousamountofhelpfrom Anamountofproducts也可以例子 tiesofAgreattyof：（anamountoforanumberof例子 tiesofThesheer tyofinformationA tyofdrugsTradingStandardsOfficershaveseizedalarge tyofcounterfeittobaccoTheIRAhad missioneda tyofweaponsAgreat/gooddealof (much主要跟不可数名词例子：IttakesagreatdealoftimeTheyspentagreatdealofmoneyTherehasn'tbeenagreatdealofThiscouldnothaveworkedwithoutagreatdealofhonestyoneveryone'sRugbyRugbygetsagreatdealofevisionAmassofthingsAmassofthingsisalargenumberofgroupedtogether.SINGAmassofsomethingisalargeamountofit.amassofsoldiers（一群）Onhisdeskisamassofbooksandpapers.（一堆）There'smassesofworkforhertodo.amassofinformationDiscussbothsimonNowadaysanimalexperimentsarewidelyusedtodevelopnewmedicinesandtotestthesafetyofotherproducts.Somepeoplearguethattheseexperimentsshouldbebannedbecauseitismorallywrongtocauseanimalstosuffer,whileothersareinfavourofthembecauseoftheirbenefitstohumanity.DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownItistruethatmedicinesandotherproductsareroutinelytestedonanimalsbeforetheyareclearedforhumanuse.WhileItendtowardstheviewpointthatanimaltestingismorallywrong,Iwouldhavetosupportalimitedamountofanimalexperimentationforthedevelopmentofmedicines.Ontheonehand,thereareclearethicalargumentsagainstanimalexperimentation.Touseacommonexampleofthispractice,laboratorymicemaybegivenanillnesssothattheeffectivenessofanewdrugcanbemeasured.Opponentsofsuchresearcharguethathumanshavenorighttosubjectanimalstothiskindoftrauma,andthatthelivesofallcreaturesshouldberespected.Theybelievethatthebenefitstohumansdonotjustifythesufferingcaused,andthatscientistsshouldusealternativemethodsofOntheotherhand,reliablealternativestoanimalexperimentationmaynotalwaysbeavailable.Supportersoftheuseofanimalsinmedicalresearchbelievethatacertainamountofsufferingonthepartofmiceorratscanbejustifiedifhumanlivesaresaved.Theyarguethatopponentsofsuchresearchmightfeeldifferentlyifamemberoftheirownfamiliesneededamedicaltreatmentthathadbeendevelopedthroughtheuseofanimalexperimentation.ally,Iagreewiththebanningofanimaltestingfornon-medicalproducts,butIfeelthatitmaybeanecessaryevilwherenewdrugsandmedicalproceduresareconcerned.Inconclusion,itseemstomethatitwouldbewrongtobantestingonanimalsforvitalmedicalresearchuntilequallyeffectivealternativeshavebeendeveloped.2是找不同；找出自己和范文的差距，不懂的划出来提问。如果，课让我们写的汉语思路的作文的倒是很好但是写不，１,的词最好不要，换成文化遗产，促进情感健康6126分的同学“1”常常（结构主要是宏观上的通顺）句法（）（有没有画面）备考写作本质上是尊重概率；看看有没有让自己的这几个方面更好一点点。不是努力就会成功。努力只会增加成功的概率。以在，审题，结构，词法（表达），句法，逻辑，细节，通顺，上帮助到你的话，就是有用的。Somepeoplethinkschoolsshouldonlyteachstudentsacademicsubjects.Othersthinkschoolsshouldalsoteachstudentshowtodiscriminatebetweenrightandwrong.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion. Itissometimesarguedthatcoresubjectshelpimprovepeople’scareerprospectsandgeneratesalwealth,whileothersconsiderthateducationshouldincludeandenhancemoraleducation.Thereissomethingtobesaidforeachsideofthe这个改写上明显coresubjectshelpimprovepeoplescareerprospectsandgeneratesalwealth这句和原句schoolsshouldonlyteachstudentsacademicsubject差别很成schoolsarecesonlytoimpartknowledgepredictedtosimonThursday,March22,IELTSWritingTask1:fullHere'smyfullessayforlastweek'slinegraphThelinegraphcomparesthepercentageofpeopleaged65ormoreinthreecountriesoveraperiodof100years.Itisclearthattheproportionofelderlypeopleincreasesineachcountrybetween1940and2040.Japanisexpectedtoseethemostdramaticchangesinitselderlypopulation.In1940,around9%ofAmericanswereaged65orover,comparedtoabout7%ofSwedishpeopleand5%ofJapanesepeople.TheproportionsofelderlypeopleintheUSAandSwedenrosegraduallyoverthenext50years,reachingjustunder15%in1990.Bycontrast,thefiguresforJapanremainedbelow5%untiltheearly2000s.Lookingintothefuture,asuddenincreaseinthepercentageofelderlypeopleispredictedforJapan,withajumpofover15%injust10yearsfrom2030to2040.By2040,itisthoughtthataround27%oftheJapanesepopulationwillbe65yearsoldormore,whilethefiguresforSwedenandtheUSAwillbeslightlylower,atabout25%and23%respectively.(178words,bandHiCanyoulmewhyyouusedapresenttenseinthesecondparagraphhere.'ItisclearthattheproportionofelderlypeopleINCREASESineachcountrybetween. Isitbecauseitincludespastandpresentandfuture,andit'sconsideredasageneraltrend?Thankyou.PostedPostedby:Emi|Thursday,May03,2012atHiSimon,Greatnoticedthatudividedtheperiodintotwo50years,1940-1990aspastand1990-2040asfuture.Aquestionlikethisinvolvesprojection,howshouldwedecidewhichyearinthegraphis"present".thisiscriticaltotheuseofdifferenttenses.thanksPostedPostedby:MW|Saturday,May05,2012atThat'srightHiDon'tworryaboutthattoomuch.Justuse'now'asthepresent.Ionlyusedthefuturefor2030to2040Postedby:Simon|Monday,May07,2012at结论：可以一般现在时；而bepredictedto建议只用在横轴全 Thetableshowspercentagesofconsumerexpenditureforthreecategoriesofproductsandservicesinfivecountriesin2002.Itisclearthatthelargestproportionofconsumerspendingineachcountrywentonfood,drinksandtobacco.Ontheotherhand,theleisure/educationcategoryhasthelowestpercentagesinthetable.Outofthefivecountries,consumerspendingonfood,drinksandtobaccowasnoticeablyhigherinTurkey,at32.14%,andIreland,atnearly29%.TheproportionofspendingonleisureandeducationwasalsohighestinTurkey,at4.35%,whileexpenditureonclothingandfootwearwassignificantlyhigherinItaly,at9%,thaninanyoftheothercountries.ItcanbeseenthatSwedenhadthelowestpercentagesofnationalconsumerexpenditureforfood/drinks/tobaccoandforclothing/footwe