新教材必修unit2travelaroundwriting关于旅游的电子邮件

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Unit2Writing1.进展顺利

2.令人惊叹的景象

3.迫不及待做某事4.多语，超过5.在现代，在当代6.知道，了解9.被称为10.引领某人做某事11立刻，马上12.收到某人的来信。

gowellanamazingsightcan'twaittodomorethaninmorderntimesknowaboutbeknownasleadsbtodosthrightawayhearfromsbRevision回顾课文短语Ⅰ.回顾原文句型

1.我听说它是一个令人惊叹的景点，我迫不及待的想去。2.对于我来说，兵马俑的故事几乎令人难以置信。3.我们还计划去西安的其他几个地方。I'veheardthatitisanamazingsight,andIcan'twaittogo.Tome,thestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.We'realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi'an.4.我爸爸和我都期待去陕西历史博物馆，因为……MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,because……5.我们将坐火车，十月假期开始前一天离开。We'retakingthetrain,leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.1.【写作思路】（一审、二定、三明确、四分段）

（1）一审：确定写作体裁和主题体裁:应用文----告知信主题：告诉他自己的假期旅行计划及安排。

（2）二定：确定时态和人称（与体裁和主题息息相关）时态：一般将来时（对于即将到来的旅行的计划）一般现在时（一般描述）（3）三明确：明确写作要点

要点：①旅游时间和目的地②具体的旅游计划（交通方式、旅游景点、旅行的目的和意义）③旅游的心得体会（4）四分段（与写作要点息息相关）结合写作要点，整体分为三个段落，其中第二段为主体部分，详细叙述。(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases1.______________利用2.________________如下3._______________游览

4.________________出发5.________________七日游

6.________________欣赏风景7.____________动身去某地

8._____________名胜古迹takeadvantageofasfollowstakeatoursetout/offaseven-daytripenjoythesceneryleaveforplacesofinterest9.________________和……一起10.________________即将来临

11________________乘公共汽车12._________________旅游景点13._________________度假14.__________________15.____________________(了解)当地文化16._____________________拓宽知识面aroundthecornertakeabustogetherwithtouristattractionbeonholiday/vacation入住（旅馆）/退房checkin/outunderstandthelocalculturebroadenone’sknowledgeⅡ.While-writing假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的好友李华写一封e-mail，

分享你的出行计划。要点：1.元月21日下午2点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预订酒店，休息一晚。2.第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。3.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。4.元月24日乘坐高铁返回。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数100左右。参考词汇：highspeedrailway高铁book预订Disneyland迪士尼乐园recreationfacilities游乐设施souvenir纪念品ShanghaiScienceandTechnologyMuseum上海科技馆OrientalPearlTower东方明珠

Step1

Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.WhatweshalldoeverydaywhileinShanghai.Howabouttheplanforyourwinterholiday?paragraph1:Paragraph2:paragraph3Step2

Listphrasesandsentences.①________________vt.网上预订②________________登记③________________提前

④________________同时⑤________________四天的旅行

bookonlineinadvanceatthesametimeafour-daytripcheckin2.Sentences①随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。(as)Asthewinterholidayiscoming,Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.②到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网上预订，这样我们才有足够的精力去参观上海。(sothat)UponarrivinginShanghai,wewillcheckinthehotelforagoodrestfirst,whichwillbebookedonlineinadvance,sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytovisitShanghai.③下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏到上海的全景。(fromwhich)WewillclimbtheOrientalPearlTowerintheafternoon,fromwhichwewillenjoythewholeviewofShanghai.DearLiHua,Howiseverythinggoing?Asthewinterholidayiscoming,Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.Hereismyplan.WeareleavingLilingforShanghaibythehighspeedrailwayataround2:00p.m.onJan.21st.UponarrivinginShanghai,wewillcheckinthehotelforagoodrestfirst,whichwillbebookedonlineinadvance,sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytovisitShanghai.Onthesecondday,wearegoingtotheDisneylandtoexperienceallkindsofrecreationfacilities,andbuysomesouvenirsatthesametime.Onthethirdday,wewillvisitShanghaiScienceandTechnologyMuseuminthemorning.Besides,wewillclimbtheOrientalPearlTowerintheafternoon,fromwhichwewillenjoythewholeviewofShanghai.OnJan.24th,wewilltakethehighspeedrailwaybacktoLiling.

Howabouttheplanforyourwinterholiday?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,WangMing【活学活用】假定你是李华,最近你在魅力中国城(CharmingChina)的投票活动中幸运地抽到了几张去四川旅行的优惠券,你想邀请你的英国朋友Tom在国庆节期间和你及你的家人一起去四川游玩。内容要点如下:1.出发及返回时间;2.旅行安排:上午看熊猫,下午游览当地名胜古迹。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。I’mgladtotellyouapieceofgoodnews.Fortunately,IhavegotsometicketsfromCharmingChinarecently,whichwillgivemesomediscountsontravellingtoSichuan.WiththeNationalDayaroundthecorner,IwanttoinviteyoutovisitSichuanwithmyfamily.

DearTom,Howiseverythingwithyou?Wewillstartat8:00amonOctober1standreturnat5:30pm.Inthemorning,wewilladmirepandas,whicharenativetoChina.Theirclumsybehaviourswillmakeyouburstintolaughter.Afteradeliciousmeal,wewillvisitsomelocalmonumentsandwonderful