中考英语作文指导之改错课件

中考英语作文指导之改错ppt课件1新年词汇春

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SpringFestival拜年payanewyearvisit爆竹鞭炮firecracker除夕EveofChineseNewYear春联Springcouplets辞旧迎新ringouttheoldyearandringinthenew

year饺子Jiaozi庙会templefair鸣钟辞旧岁ringouttheoldyear年画(traditional)NewYearpictures年夜饭theEvefeast;年终大扫除Year-endhouseholdcleaning守岁stayuplateontheNewYear'sEve团圆饭familyreuniondinner压岁luckymoney,giftmoney舞龙dragondance新年词汇春

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SpringFestival2一、Languageerrorsinwriting

纠错一、Languageerrorsinwriting

纠3１.

be多余或缺少I’menjoystudyingEnglish.

Itbadforourhealth.

IenjoystudyingEnglish.Itisbadforourhealth.１.be多余或缺少I’menjoystudying42.时态错误Atthattime,theyalwayshelpmewithmyEnglish.

IhadenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImeethim.

Atthattime,theyalways

helped

mewithmyEnglish.I

haveenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceI

met

him.2.时态错误Atthattime,theyalwa5Myfavoritesportisrun.

Ithinkdosomesportsisveryimportantforus.

Myfavoritesportis

running.Ithink

doingsomesportsisveryimportantforus.Myfavoritesportisrun.Myfa63.非谓语动词错误Ilikedosports.IwishtakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.

IwishtotakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.Ilikedoingsports.3.非谓语动词错误Ilikedosports.Iw74.副词位置错误Iverythankher.

Iverylikefootball.

Ithankherverymuch.Ilikefootballverymuch.4.副词位置错误Iverythankher.Ith85.代词错误Theyaregoodforusbody.

Ihopemealsobecomeabasketballplayer.

They

are

goodforourbody.Ihope

Ialsobecomeabasketballplayer.5.代词错误Theyaregoodforusbo96.缺介词或介词错误IthankhimverymuchhelpmestudyEnglish.

Heevencametomyhomeforhelpme.

Ithankhimverymuch

forhelpingmestudyEnglish.Heevencametomyhome

to

helpme.6.缺介词或介词错误Ithankhimverymu10Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealthy.IhaveevergivedupEnglish.(单词错误)(动词P.P.错误)Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealth.Ihaveevergiven

upEnglish.7.其他错误Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitin11It’sgoodformyhealth.Notonlymakemebrave,butalsomakemebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itimportantforyoutotakeanhourtosportseveryday.It’sgoodformyhealth.Itnotonlymakesmebrave,butalsomakesmebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itisimportantforyoutospendanhouronsportseveryday.（缺主语）（句型错误）It’sgoodformyhealth.Noto12中考英语作文指导之改错ppt课件13Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,

Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼写）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ican’tforgetthatdaybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.!Capitalletter（大小写）Punctuation（标点符号）Findoutthemistakesinthef146.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.remember7.Ithoughtitishungry.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Tense（时态）Verbagreement(主谓一致)Wordform(词形）6.Iwillrememberedthatday1510.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfather’shelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort,…12.IwenttoGuiyangbyabuswithmymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogiveitupFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Phrases(短语和固定搭配）14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawanoldladylying…10.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibec1616.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.playedwith15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Missingwords（漏词）18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’order（词序）Usingwrongword（选词错误）16.Weplayedsnowinfrontof1722.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefully21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoGuiyangbybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.IwenttoGuiyangonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.ChineseEnglish（中式英语）Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.22.Heencouragedmetolookf18Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,soDuringthewinterholiday191.是否有大小写错误(capitallettersorlowercaseletters)

是否有拼写错误(spellingmistakes)

是否有标点错误(punctuationmistakes)4.是否有语法错误

(grammarmistakes)

主谓是否一致动词的时态语态的使用是否正确词组的搭配是否合乎习惯

…CommonErrorsinEnglishwriting1.是否有大小写错误(capitallettersor20

1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。

2.字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密，看不清，占不满格。3字数太多，显得太罗嗦，出格就看不见了。字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够，不会得高分。1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。21

规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写22中考英语作文指导之改错ppt课件23中考英语作文指导之改错ppt课件24以“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文，提示如下：1孙老师，25岁，1.65米,打扮入时。2关心热爱学生。3教学方法生动有趣。4与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；实战训练以“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字25Pre-writing1.审：2.定：“MyEnglishTeacher”

为题写一篇100字作文记叙文，第三人称，一般现在时篇章结构：三段式首段：个人简历正文：教学特色尾段：作者的评价Pre-writing2.定：“MyEnglishTea26

befashionable

lovestudents,andcareaboutthestudents

belivelyandinterestinggetonwellwith…,bepopularwith…Writing:3.列打扮入时2.热爱学生，关心学生3.生动有趣4.相处融洽，深受欢迎befashionablelovest27MyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.①Sheisveryfashionable.②Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.③Herlessonsareinterestingandlively;④MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!Writing

4.连：连词成句，连句成篇MyEnglishTeacherWriting

4.连：28复写Rewriting：5、美——润色丰富要点；

6、改——查错改错7、抄——修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。复写Rewriting：6、改——查错改错7、抄——修改无误29MissSun,ourEnglishteacher,is25yearsold,and1.65meterstall.Sheisveryfashionable.Sinceshelovesusandcaresaboutourneeds,sheisveryhelpfulinourdailylife,Notonlyisshehelpfulinlife,butalsoherteachingmethodsareunique.Forexample,sheknowshowtomakeherlessonslivelyandinterestingandwearecrazyaboutherlessons;Besides,MissSungetsonwellwithusandsheisverypopularamongstudents.Inaword,MissSunisauniqueteacher,andweallloveherandherteaching!MyEnglishTeacherMissSun,ourEnglishteacher,30中考英语作文指导之改错ppt课件311.考试=坐公车赶上车的人——欣赏沿途的风景，更有甚者，已经换乘其它的车，奔向更远的目的地没赶上的人——羡慕，懊悔，捶胸顿足，仰天长叹……于事无补1.考试=坐公车赶上车的人——欣赏沿途的风景，更有甚者，已经32Homework以“ApersonIWillNeverForget”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求：1.短文内容应包括人物外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘