读后续写练习写作讲义 高三英语一轮复习写作专项

读后续写

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。“Number7,JobieNymble,takesthelead,”criedtheannouncer.“Justonemorehurdle(跨栏)and—”Cheerserupted.“JobieNymblefromRiversideMiddleSchooltakesfirstplaceinthegirls’100-meterhurdles!”

ThecrowdwentwildasJobie’steammatesscreamedandyelled.

DeterminedtogoallthewaytoCountyChampionships,Jobiepattedherwornneon-greentrackspikes(钉鞋).Theywereburstingattheseams(接缝处),butshedidn’tcare.Theywereherluckyshoesandshelovedthem.“NextSaturday,we’retakinghomethegold,”Jobiewhisperedtoherspikes,excitedlyretyingthem.

“Don’tforget,guys,”saidoneofherteammatescheerfully.“MybirthdaypartyisnextFridayatHiddenPark.”

“Beep.Partyrecordedincalendar,”jokedJobieinherbestrobotvoice.

Jobiebrimmedwithexcitementallweeklong.Attrackpractice,sheleapedoverthosehurdlesfasterthanshe’deverleapedbefore.

ThedayofMarisol’sparty,Jobieputonherfavoriteoutfit:herfancyblueshorts,anoldtrackT-shirtfromherdad,andherluckyspikes.

ThepartywasinfullswingwhenJobiearrivedatHiddenPark.Musicandthesmellofgrilledfoodfilledtheair.TwoofJobie’steammatesrushedtowardher,breathlessandbarefoot,askinghertotrytheslide.Jobie’seyesdartedtowardthepartyarea.Suddenly,shesawit.TheBIGGESTinflatable(充气的)slideshehadeverseenwasonthefarsideofthepark.Smilingkidszoomeddowntheslideatunspeakablespeeds.

Withoutthinkingtwice,Jobietookoffherspikesandrushedtowardtheslide.ItsladderstretchedtotheskylikeJack’smagicalbeanstalk,butshereachedthetopinnotime.Shesatdown,slippedtotheedge,andclosedhereyesassheletgo.Jobiecouldn’tgetenough,conqueringtheslideoverandoveragain.Whenitwasfinallytimetogohome,shereluctantlymadeherwaybacktothetrackwhereshe’dlefthershoes.注意：1．续写词数应为

150

左右；2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Paragraph1：Assheeyedtheareafromadistance,panicsetin.Paragraph2：Thenextday,withoutherluckyspikes,Jobiewasamongthebesttrackteamsgatheringforthechampionships.

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Assheeyedtheareafromadistance,panicsetin.Jobiepickedupthepace,herheartpoundingloudertheclosershegot.Whenshereachedtheplaceshehadleftthem,herheartalmoststopped.“They’regone!”shescreamed.“Myluckyspikesaregone.”Fearcreptoverherassheanxiouslycircledthewholeareaandscannedforanysplashofneon-green.Jodie’steammateshelpedhersearchthepark,tryingtofindanytraceofthespikesbutinvain.Noluckyspikes.Bynightfall,thepoorgirlhadnochoicebuttodragherbarefeethome.“Solong,gold,”Jobiegroaned.

Thenextday,withoutherluckyspikes,Jobiewasamongthebesttrackteamsgatheringforthechampionships.Inherbrand-newshoes,sheacceptedtherealitythatthiswasnotagameofchance.Teammatespattedherbackassheslowlywalkeddowntothestartingline,whichalsoinstilledgreatpowerinher.Startingbuzzergoing,Jobiewasoffinaflash.Shesetfocusonthefinishingline,leavingbehindanyself-doubtorworryuntilshefinallybreastedthetapeearlierthananyoneelse.Inthecheersandshouts,Jobiesquattedtountieherspikesasusual,onlytorealizethattherewasnosuchthingasluckyspikesandthatsuccesswasneverastrokeofluck.当她从远处看着这片区域时，恐慌开始了。乔比加快了脚步，越靠近，她的心跳得越厉害。当她走到离开他们的地方时，她的心几乎停止了跳动。“他们走了!”她尖叫道。“我的幸运钉鞋不见了。”恐惧笼罩着她，她焦急地环视着整个区域，寻找着霓虹绿色的痕迹。乔比的队友帮助她搜索公园，试图找到任何刺钉的痕迹，但一无所获。没有幸运钉。夜幕降临时，这个可怜的女孩别无选择，只能光着脚回家。“再见了，黄金。”乔比呻吟道。第二天，没有了她的幸运钉鞋，乔比成为了参加锦标赛的最好的田径队之一。穿着崭新的鞋子，她接受了这个现实:这不是一场碰运气的游戏。当她慢慢走向起跑线时，队友们拍着她的背，这也给她注入了巨大的力量。蜂鸣器一响，乔比就跑了。她把注意力集中在终点线上，把任何自我怀疑和担忧抛在脑后，直到她最终比任何人都早冲过终点线。在一片欢呼声中，乔比像往常一样蹲下来解开她的钉鞋，却意识到没有所谓的幸运钉鞋，成功从来都不是运气。

原文本的故事

Assheeyedtheareafromadistance,panicsetin.

Jobiepickedupthepace,herheartpoundingloudertheclosershegot.Shewasfull-onsprintingnow.Whenshereachedtheplaceshe’dleftthem,herheartstopped.

“They’regone!”shescreeched.“Myluckyspikesaregone.”

Jobie’steammateshelpedhersearchthepark.

Noluckyspikes.

“Solong,gold,”Jobiegroaned.

Thenextday,thebesttrackteamsinthecountygatheredatHiddenParkforthetrack-and-fieldchampionships.

Squeak-squeak,squeaksqueak.Jobie’sfeetdancedajitterytwo-stepinherbrand-newspikes.

“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles,”saidtheannouncer.

Jobiegulped.

“Go,SweetSpikes!”Teammatespattedherbackassheslowlywalkeddowntothestartingline,herfeetsquishywithsweat.

Runnerswerereadynow.

Jobiehadjustsneakedapeekatthepackedbleacherswhenafamiliargreenglowattheendcaughthereye.

“Myspikes!”Shegasped,eyeingtheshoesdanglingfromthebleacher’sedge.Someonemusthavefoundthemandsetthemthere.

Buhhhhhwentthestartingbuzzer.

Inaflash,Jobiewasoff.Shesetfieryfocusonherluckyspikesassheclearedhurdleafterhurdle.

Closerandclosershegot.Shewasnearlythere.

Justonemorehurdleand—“Number52,JobieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddleSchool,”bellowedtheannouncer.

Jobiegrabbedherluckyspikesandrushedovertoherroaringteammates.

AsJobiesquattedtountiehershoes,Marisolcriedout,“Jobie,youbrokearecordforthehurdles!”Thensheadded,“Luckyyou.”

“Luckyme?”Jobiefrozeatfirst.Then,afteraminute,shelookeddownatherfeetandsmiled.

Noluckyspikes.

Beamingwithjoy,Jobiewhispered,“Luckyme.”当她从远处看着这片区域时，恐慌开始了。乔比加快了脚步，越靠近，她的心跳得越厉害。她现在正在全力冲刺。当她走到离开他们的地方时，她的心跳停止了。“他们不见了!她尖叫道。“我的幸运钉鞋不见了。”乔比的队友帮助她搜索公园。没有幸运钉。“再见了，黄金。”乔比呻吟道。第二天，全县最好的田径队聚集在隐蔽公园参加田径锦标赛。Squeak-squeaksqueaksqueak。乔比的脚穿着崭新的钉鞋，紧张地跳着两步舞。“下一个是女子100米栏，”播音员说。Jobie一饮而尽。“加油，甜穗!”当她慢慢走向起跑线时，队友们拍拍她的背，她的脚被汗水弄得软绵绵的。选手们已经准备好了。乔比刚刚偷偷看了一眼拥挤的露天看台，就在最后一道熟悉的绿光吸引了她的目光。“我的尖刺!”她喘着气，盯着看台边上晃来晃去的鞋子。一定是有人发现并放在那里的。起跑哨声响了。一瞬间，乔比离开了。当她跨过一个又一个跨栏时，她把火热的注意力集中在她的幸运钉鞋上。她离我越来越近了。她就快到了。再过一个栏，“52号，乔比·尼布尔，为河滨中学夺得金牌，”播音员吼道。乔比抓起她的幸运钉子，冲到她咆哮的队友那里。当乔比蹲下来解鞋带时，玛莉索喊道:“乔比，你打破了跨栏纪录!”然后她又说:“你真幸运。”“幸运的我?”乔比一开始愣住了。过了一会儿，她低头看着自己的脚，笑了。没有幸运钉。乔比喜气洋洋地低声说:“我真幸运。”读后续写1则阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TheChristmasholidayswerefastapproaching,andwehadorderedmanygiftsonline.So,whenthedoorbellrang,Iwassuresomeofthepackageshadarrived.1rantothedoorandswungitopen,butnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlookeddown,onlytofindabeautifulcalicokitten

（杂色猫）sittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Therewasnowaythatshecouldhaverungthedoorbellbyherself,wasthere?Wefiguredthatsomeonehadfoundthekittensomewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.Theyaccuratelyguessedwewouldwelcomeanadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.MyhusbandcalledherourlittleangeLsowenamedheraccordingly.Shehadacalmaura

（气质）

aboutherasshewalkedstraightintoourhomeandhearts,fittinginperfectly.Itseemedasifshewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisbighousewithus.Shewasanoldsoulandturnedouttobetheperfectcompanion.Alwaysbymyside,shewasmorelikeapuppythanakitten.Wisebeyondheryears,sheenjoyedwanderingthroughthetunnelsandmysteriousroomsasmuchasIdid,butwithmuchlessfear.Angelicathecalicowascourageous.So,Itookapagefromherbookanddecidedtobebrave,too.Therewasanundergroundstonecellar

（地窖）Ihadbeeneagertoexplore.Theonlywayinwasdownarickety

（摇晃的）laddertoitsmurkydepths.Iguesseditwasanoldrootcellar,probablytwelvefeetdeep.IhadpromisedmyhusbandthatIwouldn'texploredangerousareasunlessheorsomeoneelsewasaround.ThoughIknewIwasstretchingit,IfiguredthatAngelicawouldcountasmycompanion.Iwasreadytoexplorethiscellar,andsowasshe.Iequippedmyselfwithagoodflashlightandwarmclothes,andcarefullystarteddownthericketyladderwhileAngelicawaslookingdownatmefromabove.Faintcrackandsuddencrashwerewhat1couldremember.注意：续写词数应为150左右；请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Paragraph11wokeupwithpiecesoftherotting,brokenladderlyingaroundmeonthestonecellarfloor.Paragraph2Itseemedmycompanion,Angelica,was

mylasthope.下水1：Iwokeupwithpiecesoftherotting,brokenladderlyingaroundmeonthestonecellarfloor.Myheartracing,Itriedtomovebutrealizedthatmylegwascaughtunderoneoftherungs.PanicsetinasIstruggledtofreemyself,butitwasnouse.Iwastrapped.SweatdrippeddownmyforeheadasIfranticallysearchedforawayout.

Thedank,mustyairmadeitdifficulttobreathe,andthedarknessonlyaddedtomyfear.

Icalledoutforhelp,butnooneanswered.ItwasthenthatIrealizedIwasalone,andnooneknewwhereIwas.Thethoughtofbeingtrappedinthatcellarforevermademeshudder.Itseemedmycompanion,Angelica,wasmylasthope.

Icouldhearhermeowingfromabove,

andIknewshewastryingtofindme.Icalledouttoher,and

afterwhatfeltlikehours,Isawaflickeroflight.

Iheardherlittlepawsonthebrokenladder,andthenshewasthere,sittingnexttome.Hercalmdemeanorandsoftpurrsinstantlycalmedmedown.IknewthatIhadtobestrongforher,andsoItookadeepbreathandassessedthesituation.Withherhelp,Iwasabletomaneuvermyselfoutofthetrapandclimbuptosafety.Angelicahadsavedmylife,andIwasgratefulforherbraveryandcompanionship.Fromthatdayon,wewereevencloser,andIknewthatnomatterwhatchallengeslayahead,wewouldfacethemtogether.下水2：Iwokeupwithpiecesoftherotting,brokenladderlyingaroundmeonthestonecellarfloor.Themustysmellofthecellarmingledwiththesmellofdampearthandoldwood.

Myheartracing,Itriedtopiecetogetherwhathadhappened.HadI