图表图画类作文写作市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件

大学英语图表/图画类作文写作第1页第1页主要内容图表类作文图画类作文

第2页第2页图表类作文1.图表作文基本形式2.范文分析3.词汇练习4.12月四级作文5.课后练习第3页第3页

图表在显示统计数字、数据时含有简捷而清楚特点,越来越被讲求高效率社会所接受,并在自然科学、社会科学及日常生活中广泛采用。在这一背景下,我国大学英语各级考试中写作部分,也先后出现了要求考生依据图表所提供信息进行写作题型。第4页第4页

1.图表作文基本形式

图表可分为图和表两大类

表即表格(table)

图又可细分为:饼状图(piechart)

线状图(linegraph)

条状图(bargraph)第5页第5页表格(tables)Top10countriessendingmostvisitorstoChinain1997and1996第6页第6页饼状图(piechart)

MajorCausesofRoadAccidentsinChina第7页第7页线状图(linegraph)

OilProductionAtZumaField第8页第8页条状图(bargraph)

China’stradewiththeU.S第9页第9页2.范文分析

图表类作文考察学生从非文字材料中获取信息、分析问题并处理问题综合能力。但是对大多数考生来说，写好图表类作文并非易事。本部分选取了一些真实图表作为讲评和训练教材。图表(一)和图表(四)就均选自ChinaDaily。依据前面图表(一)编写范文，以帮助同窗们从宏观角度理解三个自然段在内容上是如何分工。第10页第10页范文首先找出图表类作文在布局上规律,即三个自然段内容要点分别为:1)用文字描述该图表中数字信息2)分析图表中数据改变反应了什么问题3)对数据改变进行评论或得出应有结论第11页第11页Top10countriessendingmostvisitorstoChinain1997and1996第12页第12页Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthetable,therewasanobviousgrowthinthenumberofforeignersenteringChinabetween1996and1997.TakeoneofChina‘sneighboringcountriesforexample:Japanese,whotoppedthelisttwice,wentupsteadilyfrom1.548millionin1996to1.582millionin1997.PeoplefromgeographicallyremotecountrieslikeAmericaalsoincreasedwithinthesetwoyears.Comparedwith1996,thenumberofAmericansrosedramaticallyby40,000bytheendof1997.ForeignershaveavarietyofpurposesforcomingtoChina.Sincethereformandopening-updriveinthelate1970s,Chinahasgrownintoalandofopportunities.TomeetChina'sboomingtrade,manybusinesspeoplefromabroadwastenotimeindoingbusinesswithChinesepartners.AnothermajorreasonisduetoChina'smanytouristattractions.AmazedbyChineseancientcivilization,sometravelersevenneverhesitatetorepeattheirsweetmemoriesbackinChina.第13页第13页InordertomakeChinamoreappealingtoforeigners,westillhavetremendoustaskstoaccomplish.TofurtherexpandSino-foreigneconomiccooperation,Chinashouldcontinuetoimproveitsinvestmentclimatebyspeedinguptheconstructionofinfrastructuresuchashighwaysandtelecommunications.Agoodinvestmentclimatealsoincludesflexiblegovernmentpolicies,morecomprehensiveservicestoforeigninvestors,andquickerresponsetotheirdifficulties.Next,majorcitiesinChinashouldimprovebankcardsystemssothatoverseasvisitorswillfinditmucheasiertoshopordrawcashwiththeircreditcards.第14页第14页3.词汇练习起始段落首先,我们要注意以上范文是如何起笔,并从中找出写第一自然段中第一句话惯用套语,如：Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthetable,+主题句Thetable(piechart,linegraph,bargraph)shows(orindicatesormakesitclear)that+主题句Itcanbeseenfrom(orItisclearfrom,Itisevidentfrom)thetable(piechart,bargraph)that+主题句第15页第15页图表类作文练习

下面一个练习能够帮助扩大用英语表示数据词汇量环节一,请依据下列自然段中所提供文字信息,在相应网格上画出线状图来。环节二,请重新阅读这一自然段,并在表示开始、上升、下降和水平向前发展动词、名词下面划横线;在表示程度改变副词下面划波浪线;将表示时间短语用括号括起来。所有这些画出表示法,都是图表类作文中使用频率很高词语。环节三,重读答案中线状图,并将图中数字信息转换成文字信息。第16页第16页Ifwestartwith1975,wecanseethatatthebeginningoftheyear,inflationstoodat5%.Itincreasedsteadilyoverthenext12monthsto8%.Atthebeginningof1976,inflationleveledoffforasixmonthperiod,andthendecreasedgraduallyby2%duringtherestoftheyear.Unfortunately,overthenextsixmonths,inflationroseslightlyandreached9%bythemiddleof1977.Theninflationwentupdramaticallyto17%duringthenext12months.Afteradropof3%overthe2ndhalfof78,inflationincreasedrapidlyuntilitreachedapeakof24%inmid-79.Itthenfellto20%bytheendof79andsubsequentlyleveledoffuntilthemiddleof1980.第17页第17页参考答案第18页第18页4.12月四级作文12月四级作文考察是“教育投资和其带来回报”问题。表格中数字代表不同教育水平对应失业率和周薪，一套代表是失业率百分比，另一套代表是周薪。第19页第19页第20页第20页范文.Fromthebarchartgivenabove,wecanobservethatitreflectsthestatisticsofincomeamongpeopleofdifferenteducationalbackground.Thosewhopossessadoctoraldegreeearn1,551dollarsmedianweekly,rankingfirstamongpeopleofothereducationlevel.Themedianweeklyearningsofpeoplewithassociatedegreeandbelowcannotreachtheaverageof797dollars,rankingfrom768dollarsto451dollars.Asfortheunemploymentrate,2.5%ofpeoplewithdoctoraldegreewillsufferformunemployment.However,theunemploymentrateofpeoplewithsomecollege,nodegreeandlowerdegreesurpassthemeanvalueof7.6%，rankingfrom8.7%to14.1%。第21页第21页ThebarchartofEducationPaysrevealsaphenomenonthatthereexitssomedifferenceinincomesandunemploymentrateamongpeoplewithdifferenteducationallevel.Quiteafewreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon:foronething,withtheadvancementoftechnologyandtheadjustmentofindustrialstructure,quiteafewhigh-techindustriesemergeovernight,whichleadstoasoardemandofworkforceswithhigheducationaldegree,thus,itisnaturalthatgraduateswithbachelor’andhigherdegreegetahighpay-packetandenjoyastablejob.Additionally,thosewitheducationalbackgroundunderassociatedegreeareeasilydismissedandpaidbylowsalary.Theycanbereplacedanytimeduetothefactthattheirjobsareeasyandcanbefinishedbyaveragepeople.Definitely,thehighereducationdegreeyouget,themorelikelyyouaretoenjoyacompetitiveedgeintheemploymentmarket.Thus,theauthoritiesshouldenforcesomepoliciestoensuretheequityofeducation.Onlyinthiswaycanmorepeopleleadastableandcomfortablelife.第22页第22页5.Exercise

最近对班上同窗进行了题为“影响你选择音乐原因是什么”调查，其结果下列。现在请用英语写一份简朴调查结果阐明，并针对图表中任何一个数据所反应情况谈谈你见解。第23页第23页第24页第24页Samplewriting

RecentlyIhavecarriedoutasurveyamongthestudentsofourclass.Thesurveywasconductedtofindoutwhatinfluencesthemusicwelistento.Accordingtothesurvey,TVandfilmshavethestrongesteffectonteenagers’choiceofmusic,50percentofthestudentssharingtheopinion.About30percentofthestudentssaytheyareinfluencedbyfriendswhendecidingwhattolistento.Radiocomesthird,with20percentofthestudentschoosingit.Parentsseemtohaveverylittleinfluence.Only10percentofthestudentssaytheylistentowhattheirparentsrecommend.第25页第25页Inmyopinion,oneofthemajorreasonswhyTVandfilmsinfluenceourchoiceofmusicsomuchisthatthemusicinthefilmusuallygoeswithbeautifulpictures,orexpressescertainfeelingsofheroes.Goodfilmmusic,asisoftenthecase,canaccompanyaperson’sentirelife.Honestlyspeaking,I’mprettyamazedathowminorthepartparentsplayinguidingstudentstowardsfindingalifelonginterestinmusic.Forme,Iamforeverwillingtohearmymom’sopiniononthekindofmusicIlistento,forIbelieve,withbroadenedhorizons,parentsareteachersofusineveryaspectoflifeandtheiradviceisalwaysworthconsidering.第26页第26页图画类作文图画作文通常包括三部分：描述图画段阐释寓意段处理问题段/发扬展望段/举例段第27页第27页图画描述段

描述图画段基本写法：三句写出图画，一句点出中心思想。第一句，指出话题，说是什么事情第二句，描写图画第三句，描写图画第四句，点明中心思想惯用结构：Asisshown/…，wecanseeclearlythat…/，Thepurposeofthepictures/thedraweristoreveal/exposetousacommonandseriousprobleminChina/inoursociallife.第28页第28页阐释寓意段般说来，写9句，约100个字。这一段主要结构是寓意阐发，而后多是原因分析和后果分析。惯用结构：

Thesetofdrawings/Thiscartoonisreallythought-provoking.Thisthought-provokingcartoontells/warnsusthat…第29页第29页

处理问题段

这种段落比较好写，典型套路就是国家或者政府应当怎么样，社会应当怎么样，我们应当怎么样，然后只有这样，就会怎么样，最后是战胜克服困难，明天会更加好。大约写5句，50个字左右。第30页第30页举例段

首先注意举例数量，一个例子能够，多个例子也能够；例子多样性、多侧面；一定要适当，切题，第31页第31页发扬展望段

普通结构是：表明正面态度＋进行好处列举＋展望美好未来。第32页第32页

总而言之，图画作文包括这五种段落，写作时，注意审题，看指令让你写是哪三段组合，然后进行拼接组图.第33页第33页Directions:

1)describethesetofdrawings,Interpretitsmeaning,and2)pointoutitsimplicationsinourlife.第34页第34页SamplewritingTheabovetwopictureshaveshapedcontrasttoeachother.Asisshowninthefirstdrawing,theflowerisplacedinacozygreenhousewhichsheltersitfromtheseverewindandstorm.Withpropertemperatureandothergoodconditions,theflowerisgrowinginfullbloom.Incontrast,whenremovedfromthegreenhouseandexposedtothewindandstorm,theflowerimmediatelyfadesandwithers,withmostofitspetalscastaboutontheground.Thetwopicturesshowusthattheflowergrowinginthegreenhousecannotwithstandtheordea