高中英语复习-定语从句在写作中的运用-课件

Welcometomyclass!Welcometomyclass!1Doyoulikethesongwhosenameis"Tryeverything"?Whichgrammaritemdoyouthinkthesentencesuse?AttributiveClauseWealllikethesongwhosenameis"Tryeverything“whichisthethemesongofZootopia.Doyoulikethesongwhosena2

TheRestrictiveAttributiveClauseinwriting(限制性定从在写作中的运用)LearningObjectives：1Knowthefunctionsofeachrelativepronounandadverbinrestrictiveattributiveclausecorrectly;2UsetherestrictiveattributiveclausecorrectlytotranslatesentencesUsetherestrictiveattributiveclausecorrectlytowriteashortintroductivepassage.

Developthestudents’abilityofcorporationandassessment,andlearntheoptimisticspiritofthecartooncharacters.

GrammarandwritingTheRestrictiveAttributive34关系代词修饰成分（从句）省略whichthatwhowhomwhose物人、物人人人、物主、宾语主、宾语主、宾语宾语定语在从句中作宾语时可以省略连接词：关系副词修饰成分（从句）省略whenwherewhy表时间的名词表地点的名词reason在从句中作状语，从句不能缺主语或宾语不可省略4关系代词修饰成分（从句）省略whichthatwhowho4Testhowwellyoumasterit?Testhowwellyoumasterit?5Zootopiaisamodernmammalmetropolis(动物大都市).Alltheanimalshavetheirownlivingplaceinthemodernmammalmetropolis.Alltheanimalscanliveinpeaceinthemodernmammalmetropolis.WhatdoyouknowaboutZootopia?Zootopiaisamodernmammalmetropolis

whereall

theanimalshavetheirownlivingplaceand

canliveinpeace.Howtocombinethe3sentencesintoonebyusingtheattributiveclause?Zootopiaisamodernmammal6Judy

hasdreamedofbecomingapolicesinceshewasyoung.Judy

becomesthefirstrabbittojointhepoliceforcewho/thatJudy_________hasdreamedofbecomingapolicesinceshewasyoungbecomesthefirstrabbittojointhepoliceforceJudyhasdreamedofbecominga7Nick

isafox.Judyworkswith

Nickinacase.whomNick

isafox____Judyworkswithinacase.Nickisafox.whomNickisafo8ThisisNick’sfriendwhosenameisFlash.ThisisNick’sfriend.HisnameisFlash.ThisisNick’sfriendwhosena9Therewasatime_______Judywasveryconfusedaboutthecaseofanimaldisappearance.whenTherewasatime_______Judyw10WiththehelpofNick,Judysucceededfinally.That’sthereason_______JudyandNickbecomegoodfriends.whyWiththehelpofNick,Judysu11Let'spractice!Correctyoursentences！Let'spractice!Correctyourse12Zootopiaisamodernmammalmetropolis

whereall

theanimalshavetheirownlivingplaceandcanliveinpeace.Judy

who

hasdreamedofbecomingapolicesinceshewasyoungbecomesthefirstrabbittojointhepoliceforce.Nickisafox

whomJudyworkswithinsolvingthecase.Nickhasafriend

whosenameisFlash.Therewasatime

whenJudywasveryconfusedaboutthecaseofanimaldisappearance.That’sthereason

whyJudyandNickbecomegoodfriends.Whenshouldweuseattributiveclauseinwriting?IntroduceaplaceIntroduceapersonIntroducethetimeIntroducethereasonZootopiaisamodernmammal13Let'spractice!Writingtime！Let'spractice!Writingtime！14Writing:WriteanintroductionofZootopia

假如你是校电视台的主播李华。因电视台栏目“电影之声”需要写一篇电影介绍报告。以下是一些电影相关信息。片名：Zootopia导演：ByronHoward发行公司：TheWaltDisneyCompany(发行:releasev)

上映日期：2016-03-04剧情介绍：疯狂动物城是一座现代动物都市。每种动物在这里都有自己的居所。动物们在这里和平共处。自小就梦想成为警官的Judy，成为史上第一任兔子警官。不过乐观的兔子警官要和一群强硬的大块头动物警察合作可不是件容易事。为了证明自己，她决心侦破一桩动物失踪案;追寻真相的路上她被迫与狐狸Nick联手，最终获得成功。写作要求;1请结合实际需要和自己的观影感受写一篇100词左右的电影介绍。其中剧情可适度增加细节。2作文中需要写上自己的观影感受3尽量使用多种定语从句表达相关内容。

第二步：合理分段，合理扩充第一步：认真审题

—文体？时态？人称？要点？Writing:Writeanintroduction15zWriting:WriteanintroductionofZootopia

假如你是校电视台的主播李华。因电视台栏目“电影之声”需要写一篇电影介绍报告。以下是一些电影相关信息。片名：Zootopia导演(director)：ByronHoward发行公司：TheWaltDisneyCompany(发行:releasev)

上映日期：2016-03-04

剧情介绍：疯狂动物城是一座现代动物都市。每种动物在这里都有自己的居所。动物们在这里和平共处。自小就梦想成为警官的Judy，成为史上第一任兔子警官。不过乐观的兔子警官要和一群强硬的大块头动物警察合作可不是件容易事。为了证明自己，她决心侦破一桩动物失踪案;追寻真相的路上她被迫与狐狸Nick联手，最终获得成功。写作要求;1请结合实际需要和自己的观影感受写一篇100词左右的电影介绍。其中剧情可适度增加细节。2作文中需要写上自己的观影感受3尽量使用多种定语从句表达相关内容。

Para1:generalintroductionPara2:mainplotPara3:yourfeelingWritingtime!zWriting:Writeanintroductio16Discussingtime!

作文评价表（25分）Excellent/good/needimprovement+分内容能用约100词表达完整的内容（10分）结构每个句子主谓结构完整符合语法（6分）表达手段有充分使用到各种关系词的定语从句（6分）书面书写，卷面3分Showtime!Discussingtime!17

Helloeveryone！I’mgladtoshareafilmwithyou.ThisfilmiscalledZootopia，whose

directorisByronHoward.Zootopia

which

isreleasedbytheWaltDisneyCompanywasonshowonMarch3rd,2016.

Zootopiaisamodern

mammalmetropolis

wherealltheanimalshavetheirownlivingplaceandcanliveinpeace.Thereisa

rabbit

whose

nameisJudy.

Judy

who

hasdreamedofbecomingapolicesinceshewasyoungbecomesthefirstrabbittojointhepoliceforce.However,theoptimisticJudyfindsthatit’shardtoworkwiththose

policemenwho

arebigandstrong.Luckily,sheisencouragedbythe

wordsofMayor

Lionheart

who

isthetopleaderinZootopia.Helloeveryone！I’mgladt18Hesaysthateveryonecouldbeanything

thattheywantinZootopia.Toproveherself,sheisdeterminedtoworkoutacaseoftheanimaldisappearance.AndNickisafox

whomJudyworkswithinsolvingthecase.Nickhasafriend

whosenameisFlash.Du