如何提高句子的档次省名师优质课赛课获奖课件市赛课百校联赛优质课一等奖课件

怎样提升书面表示句子档次

1/1261.关键点齐全2.较多语法结构和高级词汇

3.全文结构紧凑

高档书面表示要求：2/1261.时间：昨天下午放学后请依据下述情况写一篇80-120个单词英语新闻广播稿，准备在你校广播台播出。2.地点：回家路上3.人物：高一（2）班两名男生田力和段凯4.事件：边骑车边谈笑，后追逐一辆公交车，以为好玩。公交车遇红灯停下，两人来不及刹车，摔倒在地。一人左手臂摔断，一人腿部受伤。5.警示：严格恪守交通规则，切忌在马路上嬉笑玩耍。3/126Therewasanaccidenthappenedtotwostudentsinourschoolyesterdayafternoon.(经典病句）Therewasanaccidentthathappenedtotwostudentsinourschoolyesterdayafternoon.(定语从句）Anaccidentoccurredtotwostudentsinourschoolyesterdayafternoon.（高级词汇）Anaccidenthappenedtotwostudentsinourschoolyesterdayafternoon.4/126TianLiandDuanKaiwereridingbikessidebysideonthewayhomeafterschool.Theyweretalkingandlaughingloudly.TianLiandDuanKaiwereridingbikessidebysideonthewayhomeafterschool,talkingandlaughingloudly.（用分词合并）Afterschoolwasover,TianliandDunkaifromGrade1wereontheirwayhomebybike,talkingandlaughinghappily.5/126

3.Whentheysawacarwhichwaspassingby,theystartedtorunafterit.Theythoughtitwasveryinteresting.Seeingapassingcar,theystartedtochaseit,thinkingitgreatfun.Thebusstoppedwhenthetrafficlightturnedred.Unfortunately,thebusstoppedthemoment

thetrafficlightturnedred.6/126Thetwostudentswereveryclosetothebusandtheycouldn’tstoptheirbikesintime.Thetwostudentsweresoclosetothebusthattheywerenotabletostoptheirbikesintime.

7/126One’sleftarmwashurt

andtheother’slegwashurttoo.

One’sleftarmwasbroken

whiletheother’sleggothurt.(防止用相同结构和词汇）（高级连词）Onehadhisleftarmbroken

whiletheothergothisleghurt./theotherwasbadlyhurtintheleg.)(高级结构）Theywereknockedofftheirbikes,onewiththeleftarmbroken,andtheotherwithoneleghurt.(高级介词短语/独立主格结构）

8/126Theyfelloffthebikes.Tianli’sbrokehishisleftarmandDunkaihurthisleg.Asaresult,theywereknockedoffthebikes,onewithhisleftarmbrokenandtheotherwithhisleghurt.9/1265.

Ifwedon’tobeytrafficrules,wemightdie.a.Ifwegoagainsttrafficrules,wemightloseourlives.b.Ifwegoagainsttrafficrules,wemightendupinhospital.c.Goingagainsttrafficrulesmightcostusourlives.d.Don’triskourlivesgoingagainsttrafficrules.(各种表示）10/126

Anaccidenthappenedtotwostudentsinourschoolyesterdayafternoon.Schoolwasover.TianliandDunkaifromGrade1weregoinghomebybike.Theyweretalkingandlaughinghappily.Whentheysawacarwhichwaspassingby,theystartedtorunafterit.Theythoughtitwasveryinteresting.Thebusstoppedwhenthetrafficlightturnedred.Thetwostudentswereveryclosetothebusandtheycouldn’tstoptheirbikesintime.Theyfelloffthebikes.TianlibrokehisleftarmandDunkaihurthisleg.11/126①Anaccidenthappenedtotwostudentsinourschoolyesterdayafternoon.②Schoolwasover.TianliandDunkaifromGrade1weregoinghomebybike.Theyweretalkingandlaughinghappily.③Whentheysawabuswhichwaspassingby,theystartedtorunafterit.Theythoughtitwasveryinteresting.④Thebusstoppedwhenthetrafficlightturnedred.⑤Thetwostudentswereveryclosetothebusandtheycouldn'tstoptheirbikesintime.⑥Theyfelloffthebikes.Tianli’sbrokehishisleftarmandDunkaihurthisleg.12/126①Anaccidentoccurredtotwostudentsinourschoolyesterdayafternoon.②Afterschoolwasover,TianliandDunkaifromGrade1wereheading

homebybike,talkingandlaughinghappily.③

Seeingapassingbus,theystartedtochaseit,thinkingitwasgreatfun.④

Unfortunately,thebusstoppedthemomentthetrafficlightturnedred.⑤Thetwostudentsweresoclosetothebusthat

theywerenotabletostoptheirbikesintime.⑥Asaresult,theywereknockedoffthebikes,onewithhisleftarmbrokenandtheotherwithhisleghurt.13/1266.Hegotupat7o’clock.（使用各种句式）Itwasnotuntil7o’clockthathegotup.Notuntil7o’clockdidhegetup.(强调句）（倒装句）Hedidn’tgetupuntil7o’clock.14/1261.Ihadagoodidea.a.Agoodideaoccurredtome.b.Icameupwithagoodidea.2.Don’tworry.We’lltrytohelpyou.makeeveryeffortto,makegreateffortstosparenoeffortsto,tryeverymeanstodoallwecanto,dowhatwecanto各种表示&高级词汇15/126Practice:1.

Thereare80%ofthepopulationliveonfarming.

2.

At8thismorning,therewereabout50Americanstudentscametovisitourschool.80%ofthepopulationliveonfarming.At8thismorning,about50Americanstudentscametovisitourschool.16/126Practice:（用分词合并）Hehadfinishedhishomework.Hewentouttoplayfootball.

Iwasmovedbyhiswords.Idecidedtolendhimahand.Movedbyhiswords,Idecidedtolendhimahand.Havingfinishedhishomework,hewentouttoplayfootball.17/126

Practice:（用连接词连接）Thepolicesearchedeverywhere.Themissingboycouldnotbefound.Thepolicesearchedeverywhere,butthemissingboycouldnotbefound.

Thoughthepolicesearchedeverywhere,themissingboycouldnotbefound.18/126Practice:

(防止用相同结构和词汇）1.Ilikesports.Ilikemusic,too.Ilikesportsandmusicaswell.Ilikesportsaswellasmusic.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglishwhilemysister’sfavoritesubjectishistory.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglishwhilemysister’sishistory.b.

MyfavoritesubjectisEnglishwhilemysisterlikeshistorybest.19/126Myoldgrandfatherfellasleepinthesofa.Hehadabookonhisknees.Practice:（用介词短语）Myoldgrandfatherfellasleepinthesofawithabookonhisknees.20/126提升句子档次小结：

1.用分词短语合并句子用介词短语合并句子用独立主格结构合并句子用连接词连接句子2.用高级结构和词汇3.用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句4.用不一样结构和词汇…21/126

你英国朋友正在做一个课题；世界各地生日庆贺方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日方式。请你依据以下关键点写一篇短文：一、通常方式1．生日聚会2．生日礼品3．生日祝福二、我认为更有意义庆贺方式和理由*词数100-120（浙江卷）22/126

NowstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinmanyways.Usually,apartyisheld.Bestfriendsandrelativeswillcometotheparty.Theyusuallybuyagift.Theyshowtheirbestwishes.Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestooanditisbecomingverypopular.ButIthinkthatit’sbettertohelpotherpeople.Weknowthatit’simportanttolearntohelpotherpeople.Helpingotherpeoplecandousalotofgood.Peoplewillhelpyoubecauseyou’vehelpedthemandyou’llbehappy…23/126

NowadaysstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinvariousways.Usually,apartyisheldsothatpeoplecangettogether.Bestfriends,aswellasrelatives,aregoingtobeinvited.It’spolitetobuyasmallgiftwhichstandsforone’sbestwishes.What’smore,sendingshortmessagesonone’sbirthdayisbecomingmoreandmorepopular,asaresultofitsconvenience.However,asfarasI’mconcerned,it’smoremeaningfultocareaboutothersthanaboutoneself.Asisknowntoall,togiveisbetterthantoreceive.Birthdaysmeannotonlybeingolderbutmorehelpfulandusefultotheworld.Therefore,it’sofimportancetolearntohelpothers.Helpingothersonone’sbirthdaycandoyoualotofgood.Foronething,peoplewillhelpyouinreturninthefuture;foranother,you’llbehappy.Asaresult,Ithinkitbettertohelpotherstospendone’sbirthday.24/126

NowadaysstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinvariousways.Usually,apartyisheldsothatpeoplecangettogether.Bestfriends,aswellasrelatives,aregoingtobeinvited.It’spolitetobuyasmallgiftwhichstandsforone’sbestwishes.What’smore,sendingshortmessagesonone’sbirthdayisbecomingmoreandmorepopular,asaresultofitsconvenience.However,asfarasI’mconcerned,it’smoremeaningfultocareaboutothersthanaboutoneself.Asisknowntoall,togiveisbetterthantoreceive.Birthdaysmeannotonlybeingolderbutmorehelpfulandusefultotheworld.Therefore,it’sofimportancetolearntohelpothers.Helpingothersonone’sbirthdaycandoyoualotofgood.Foronething,peoplewillhelpyouinreturninthefuture;foranother,you’llbehappy.Asaresult,Ithinkitbettertohelpotherstospendone’sbirthday.25/126

NowstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinmanyways.Usually,apartyisheld.Bestfriendsandrelativeswillcometotheparty.Theyusuallybuyagift.Theyshowtheirbestwishes.Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestooanditisbecomingverypopular.ButIthinkthatit’sbettertohelpotherpeople.Weknowthatit’simportanttolearntohelpotherpeople.Helpingotherpeoplecandousalotofgood.Peoplewillhelpyoubecauseyou’vehelpedthemandyou’llbehappy…26/126(1)NowstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinmanyways.(2)Usually,apartyisheld.Bestfriendsandrelativeswillcometotheparty.（用where定语从句）(3)Theyusuallybuyagift.Theyshowtheirbestwishes.（和并句子）(4)Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestooanditisbecomingverypopular（用which定语从句）.(5)But(替换）Ithink（替换）thatit’sbettertohelpotherpeople.(6)Weknowthatit’simportanttolearntohelpothers.Helpingotherpeoplecandousalotofgood.(7)Peoplewillhelpyouinreturnandyou’llbehappy（用Foronething,Foranother替换）.NowadaysstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinvariousways.Usually,apartyisheldwherebestfriendsaswellasrelativescangettogetherandhavefun.Theyusuallybuyasmallgiftwithwhichtoexpresstheirbestwishes.Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestoo,whichisbecomingverypopular.However,asfarasI’mconcerned,it’sbettertodosomethingforothers.Asisknowntoall,it’sofimportancetohelpothers.Helpingothersonone’sbirthdaycanbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsodoyoualotofgood.Foronethingpeoplewillhelpyouinreturn;foranother,you’llgethappinessoutofthat.27/126NowadaysstudentsinChinacelebratetheirbirthdaysinvariousways.Usually,apartyisheldwherebestfriendsaswellasrelativescangettogetherandhavefun.Theyusuallybuyasmallgiftwithwhichtoexpresstheirbestwishes.Sometimes,peoplesendshortmessagestoo,whichisbecomingverypopular.

However,asfarasI’mconcerned,it’sbettertodosomethingforothers.Asisknowntoall,it’sofimportancetohelpothers.Helpingothersonone’sbirthdaycanbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsodoyoualotofgood.Foronethingpeoplewillhelpyouinreturn;foranother,you’llgethappinessoutofthat.

Inshort,thebestwaytocelebrateourbirthdaysistohelpothers.28/126最近，学校组织高三学生开展了一场讨论。讨论主题是：周末要不要上课呢？请依据下表提供信息，写一篇150字左右短文，客观介绍一下讨论情况，而且简单地表示自己观点。50%要上课,高考6月举行,要抓紧时间复习;50%不要上课,休息好，提升效率其中一天学习Recently,thestudentsofSenior3inourschoolhavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldhaveclassesonweekends.29/126

Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat__作文题目_____.Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat_观点一________.Intheirviewsthereare2factorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:inthefirstplace,___原因一_______.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,___原因二_____.Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat___观点一_____.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeopleholdtheideathat___观点二_______.Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand，___原因一_______.Ontheotherhand,____原因二_____.Therefore,thereisnodoubtthat___观点二______.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat__观点一或二______.Itisnotonlybecause________,butalsobecause_________.Themore_______,themore________.30/126Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethatwhetherweshouldhaveclassesonweekends.Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.50%ofstudentsthinkthattheyshouldhaveclassesonweekends.Intheirviewsthereisthefactorcontributingtothisattitudeasfollow:becausetheCollegeEntranceExaminationthisyearwillbeheldinJune,andstudentsshouldmakefulluseoffreetimetoreviewwhattheyhavelearnt.31/126Students,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Another50%areagainsttheideaofhavingclassesonweekends.

Intheirpointofview,studentsshouldhaveagoodrestonweekendssothattheycanstudymoreeffectivelyduringtheweekdays.32/126AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthatweshouldhaveclassesonweekends.Itisbecause------33/12650%ofthemthinktheyshouldhaveclassesonweekendsbecausetheCollegeEntranceExaminationthisyearwillbeheldinJune,andstudentsshouldmakefulluseoffreetimetoreviewwhattheyhavelearnt.Another50%areagainsttheideaofhavingclassesonweekends.Theybelievestudentsshouldhaveagoodrestonweekendssothattheycanstudymoreeffectivelyduringtheweekdays.34/126这几年，“考生该不该复读”这个话题一直为社会各界所关注。下表是你班同学讨论结果，请你客观介绍情况，并简明阐述自己观点。多数同学认为少数同学认为1.不该复读1.应该复读2.对应届生不公平2.能够考上好大学3.增加家庭经济负担3.有利于未来就业4.精神压力大4.上何种大学是人生重要转折点

whetherstudentsretakeclassesafterfailingthecollegeentranceexamination

thestudentswhotaketheexamforthefirsttime

turningpointinlife

hasnochancetobeadmittedtooneuniversity,

35/126一中学班级就生活在城市或乡村问题进行了辩论。下面是部分辩论统计关键点，请确定你观点，参考该统计关键点并发挥想像，写一篇题为LivingintheCityortheCountryside短文。Thecity:somanythingstodo;makemoremoney.Thecountry:tooquiet;boring;nojobsThecountry:quiet;enjoysomuchinnature.growfoodonafarm.Thecity:verynoisy;crowded.36/126

Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)___作文题目______.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin__题目议题_____.Generallyspeaking,itiswidelybelievedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.Firstly,___优点一______.Andsecondly___优点二_____.JustAsapopularsayinggoes,"everycoinhastwosides",__讨论议题______isnoexception,andinanotherword,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,___缺点一______.Inaddition,____缺点二______.Tosumup,weshouldtrytobringtheadvantagesof__讨论议题____intofullplay,andreducethedisadvantagestotheminimumatthesametime.Inthatcase,wewilldefinitelymakeabetteruseofthe____讨论议题___.37/126近期，中学聘请外教之风愈演愈烈，请你结合下表对其利弊发表自己观点。好处1.提升学校著名度。2.提升学习英语兴趣，口语表示能力增强。3.更加好地了解外国文化。弊端1.花费高。2.一些外国人难以适应我国生活方式，甚至担心自己安全。3.外国人不了解中国学生特点。自己观点一切需要靠自己注意：1.词数：100左右 2.短文应包含表中全部关键点3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 38/126There’snodoubtthatschoolswillbebetterknown.What’smore,it’sgoodforstudentstodevelopinterestinEnglishstudyaswellaslearnmoreaboutforeigncultures.Meanwhile,theiroralEnglishwillbeimprovedalot.Ontheotherhand,someforeigners,thoughwellpaid,finditdifficulttogetusedtothewayoflifeinaforeigncountryandtheysometimesworryabouttheirsafety.Themostimportantthingisthattheyarenotquitefamiliarwiththestudents.Asaresult,manystudentscan’tbenefitfromthem.39/126中学生要不要参加社会实践？1．应参加社会实践2．有利于了解社会，取得经验3．有利于培养能力，学以致用1．不应参加社会实践2．太年轻，不能很好地适应社会3．浪费时间、精力、也没有机会注意：40/126Theybelievesocialpracticecanhelpthemknowmoreaboutthethingsaroundthemandgivethemmuchexperience.Bydoingso,thestudents’abilitycanbedeveloped.Besides,theycanputwhattheyhavelearnedinthebooksintopractice.Ontheotherhand,theythinkmiddleschoolstudentsdon’thavetodosocialpractice,becausetheyaretooyoungtofittheworld.Theysayit’sawasteoftimeandenergy.What’smore,therearenosuchchances.41/126IsaTrainingClassorFamilyTeacherNecessary?有些人认为有必要另一些人认为没有必要跟老师学比自己学好能够巩固课堂所学内容能够学到更多东西轻易养成依赖习惯学生需要时间休息许多培训班和家教以赢利为目标42/126Firstly,it’smoreeffectivetostudywithateacherthanbythemselves.Secondly,itcanstrengthenwhatislearntinclass.Besides,theycanlearnalotmore.Foronething,studentscaneasilyformthehabitofdependence.Foranother,studentsneedtimetorelaxfromtimetotime.What’smore,thepurposeofmanytrainingclassesandteachersistomakemoney.43/126连句成文时间空间细节连贯呼应词与词搭配句与句相连44/126高考纲领中惯用连接词1.

表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：

whatismore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系不过，然而，相反：

but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.45/1263.表示因果关系

因为，所以，所以:

since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;

4.表示条件关系假如，只要:

if;oncondition(that);

aslongas除非:

unless

不然:

or46/126

5.表示时间关系当…时候:

when;while在…之后:

after

在…之前:

before

直到:

until一…就…:

assoonas

以后，然后:

later;

afterwards很快:

soon

最近:

lately;

recently自从…:since

从那时起:

fromthenon47/1266.表示特定次序关系首先，最主要:

aboveall

其次:

secondly

然后:

then;next

最终:

finally;intheend7.换一个方法表述换句话说:

inotherwords;thatistosay;

48/1268.进行举例说明比如，比如:

forinstance;forexample;like;suchas9.用于陈说事实实际上:

infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:

totellyouthetruth49/12610.

对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总来说:

onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword

50/126Ononesideoftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuilding—ourlibrary.(NMET1999范文)AsfarasIknow,everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.(NMET范文)What’smore,Icangotobedearlier.(NMET范文)怎样使用恰当连接词51/126Practice

1

请在以下句子中（间）填上恰当关联词或意思有联络短语。XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacar____________Icouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itwasnotlong_______thepolicecame.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.wheninorderthatbeforeAssoonas

52/1265.Doyouagreewithmyarrangement?________,dowritetomesoon.6.Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping.__________,wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends.___________,Isaved$80.8.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.___________,itmaymakeusfat.Ifnot/soInadditionAsaresultWhat’sworse53/126May25,SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday.Thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly.Shedidn’tadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop.ShesaidthatImadeitdirty.Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest.Iquarreledwithher.Themanagerturnedup.Heaskedwhatwasthematter.Heknewallaboutthis,heapologizedtomeandcriticized(批评)thesalesgirl.Theychangedanothercoatforme.Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily.54/126May25,SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday.___________Thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly.______________Shedidn’tadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop.__________ShesaidthatImadeitdirty.______________Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest.___________________Iquarreledwithher.___________________Themanagerturnedup.Heaskedwhatwasthematter.___________________________Heknewallaboutthis,heapologizedtomeandcriticized(批评)thesalesgirl.Theychangedanothercoatforme.Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily.However,

AtthebeginningLaterInawordIgotsoangrythatAfterthat/Assoonas/ThemomentJustatthatmoment55/126恰当连接词(Exercises)Yesterday,apolicemanstoppedacar----Hondaatthecornerofthestreet,because

itnearlyknockeddownaboywhowasridingatwo-wheelbicycleonthesidewalk.

Yesterday,therewasapolicemaninthestreet.Hestoppedacar.Thecarwasatthecorner.ItlookedlikeaHonda.Therewasaboyonthesidewalk.Hewasridinghisbicycle.Thebicyclewasatwo-wheeler.Thecarnearlyknockeddowntheboy.56/126恰当连接词(Exercises)LastSunday,twoYoungPioneerswereontheirwaytotheChildren’sPalace.Theysawaboxfalloffapassingtruck.Theyshouted“stop”tothedriveratthetopoftheirvoice.

LastSunday,twoYoungPioneerswereontheirwaytotheChildren’sPalacewhentheysawaboxfalloffapassingtruck.Without

delay,theyshouted“stop”tothedriveratthetopoftheirvoice.

57/126

联合国教科文组织某考查团正在我国某乡村参观考查。假定你是接待人员,请依据以下提醒以讲话稿形式简明介绍这个村情况：

1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)改变：过去很穷，78年后改变很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来学校很小，现已经过改建。新建教学楼有4层，是村里最美建筑物。村全部学龄儿童在此无偿就读。注意：1）关键点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100-120之间。Practice书面表示：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.58/126Ladiesandgentlemen,

Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,

ithaschangedalotsince1978③andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.书面表示：Nowitistakingonanewlook.59/126

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥

Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦and⑧whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨What’smore,

theyenjoyfreeeducation.⑩Mayyouenjoyyourstayherethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.

60/126Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisasmallone

with/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②

However,ithaschangedalotsince1978③

andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.

④

Peoplehereliveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤

andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦

andthenewlybuiltteachingbuilding⑧

whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifulone

inthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨

What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducation.

⑩

Mayyouenjoyyourstayhere/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.

61/126春季高考作文给澳大利亚朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生学习和生活带来改变。Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.17分62/126高考满分作文

I’mverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesinceourhomeworkhasreduced.Beforethat,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwastheonlything

weshoulddo.Intheevening,wealsohadalotofhomeworktodo.Wecouldnotgotobed

until

11:30.Nevertheless,

since

reducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime.Intheevening,IalsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.Inolongerstayuplate;onthecontrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.

Inshort,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.63/126丰富语法结构(Ex.1)1.Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.Hecameinandtherewasababyinhisarms.(用with结构),pleasegivemeane-mail.isthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.OnhisarrivingWhatsurpriseshimHecamein,

withababyinhisarms.64/1264.因为不知道他电话，他没法跟Tom联络。(用非谓语）5.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)

6.TomandMarylikesingingsongs.(使用倒装）Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthat，hecan’tgetintouchwithTom.

Notknowinghistelephonenumber

heknewwhathadhappened.丰富语法结构(Ex.2)Tomlikessingingsongs,Mary.sodoes65/1267.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.（使用比较句型结构）9.Becausetheweatherisfine,manypeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternhill.（使用独立主格结构）bymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.,alargenumberofpeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.hespoke,excitedhefelt.丰富语法结构(Ex.3)FollowedThemorethemoreTheweatherbeingfine66/1261.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’l