高考二轮总复习课件英语专题六书面表达

第三部分写作专题六书面表达英语2023内容索引NO.1写作总策略•破解书面表达3维度NO.2分类突破•提升书面表达写作技能NO.3真题实战•经典对练拿高分写作总策略•破解书面表达3维度NO.1维度一学习评分标准,实现高分有方向[评分标准]第五档(21~25分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。—覆盖所有内容要点。—应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。—语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。—有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档(16~20分)完成了试题规定的任务。—虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。—应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。—语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,有些许错误主要是因为尝试使用较复杂语法结构或词汇。—应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档(11~15分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。—虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。—应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。—有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。—应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。[评分标准解读](一)如何理解“应用了较多的词汇”这里所说的“应用了较多的词汇”,是指词汇使用的多样性,如词性的多样性、高级词汇的使用、同义词与反义词的使用、短语的使用等。(二)如何理解“应用了较多的语法结构”“较多的语法结构”就是指句式结构的多样性。毋庸置疑,单调的句式和结构、长度相近的句子会使文章呆板单调,缺乏生气和活力,而灵活多变的句式则使行文丰富多彩,生动、自然、流畅。感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、强调句型、定语从句、非谓语动词短语等语法结构的正确使用,可以使文章的语言充满层次感,从而较好地反映出作者的语言运用能力。(三)如何理解“上下文的连贯性”评分标准指出,书面表达应该注意“上下文的连贯性”,并能“有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑”。此处所说的连贯性,是指段与段、句与句之间以一种明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排,做到在文意与结构上层次分明,条理清楚,连贯流畅。(四)如何理解“语言的得体性”评分标准中对考生所要求的“语言得体”,就是要求考生在表达时应根据说话的对象、时间、地点、场合等选择使用恰当的英语语言,同时不同体裁和题材的文章对用语方面也有着不同的要求。维度二用好“4策略”,写出高分作文策略1遵循“两美”原则,打造内外兼美好作文高级词汇就像一颗颗耀眼的明珠,为作文增添光彩,从而使考生稳拿高分。选词时应注意两点:1.不“人云亦云”原则写作时宜多用具体词,少用笼统词。笼统词具有较强的概括性,考生相对熟悉,但具体词能形象地描述事物或反映细腻的感情色彩变化,使表达更出彩。策略2词汇高级,“语”众不同笼统词具体词happyoverjoyed欣喜若狂的;thrilled兴奋的;delighted高兴的;joyful快乐的;ontopoftheworld欢天喜地beautifulcharming迷人的;attractive吸引人的;appealing有吸引力的;splendid壮丽的;cute/lovely可爱的;elegant优美的;fine精美的importantvital必不可少的;significant重要的;essential必不可少的;principal最重要的;primary首要的;fundamental根本的;crucial至关重要的difficulttough艰难的,棘手的;complicated复杂的;challenging具有挑战性的笼统词具体词goclimb爬;slip溜;move移动;wander漫游,游荡;pace踱步;struggle艰难地行进;dash猛冲;rush冲,急速行进;head朝……行进;flee逃跑;speed快速前行;hurry迅速移动;jog慢跑;race快速移动see/lookobserve观察;notice注意到;witness目击;stare凝视,盯着看;glance瞥一眼;spot发现;examine(仔细地)检查;lookaround环顾;lookthrough快速查看,浏览;catchsightof看见;comeinto(one’s)view映入(某人的)眼帘like/enjoy/lovecherish珍爱;treasure珍视,珍爱;befondof喜欢;bekeenon对……着迷;goinfor爱好(某活动);becrazy/madabout热衷于,痴迷;haveatastefor喜爱笼统词具体词thinkreflecton/upon认真思考;allowfor考虑到;turnover深思熟虑;consider考虑;takeaccountof/oaccount考虑到;givepriorityto优先考虑针对训练1同义词替换(1)Inordertoenrichstudents’after-schoollife,anexhibitionofstudents’traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool,whichinspiresagrowinglovefortraditionalart.→Inordertoenrichstudents’after-schoollife,anexhibitionofstudents’traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool,which

agrowinglovefortraditionalart.(2021浙江卷满分作文)

(2)DuetoCOVID-19,itisdifficultforfarmerstoselltheirproduce,makingthemveryhopeless.→DuetoCOVID-19,itis

forfarmerstoselltheirproduce,makingthemveryhopeless.

sparks

tough/challenging2.短语优先原则(1)用短语代替单词不仅会给文章增加亮点,而且用短语凑词数也是一个很好的选择。①形容词变短语的方法(of+同根名词):veryimportant/useful/valuable/beneficial/helpful→ofvital/greatimportance/use/value/benefit/help②动词变短语的方法——替换升级:动词对应短语wearbedressedinknow/realizebeawareof/befamiliarwithunderstandfigureout/makesenseofshouldbesupposedtousemake(good/full)useof,takeadvantageof,makethebestofencouragecheersbupmasterhaveagoodcommandofthankexpressone’ssinceregratitudeto/begratefultorepresentonbehalfof动词对应短语succeedmakeit/achieveone’sgoalshelpdosbafavour,lend/givesbahandvalueattachimportancetovisitpayavisittosupportbeinfavorofrememberkeep/bear...inmind③副词变短语的方法——同义短语替换:副词对应短语verymorethanproperlyinplacequickly/immediatelywithoutdelay/hesitationactuallyasamatteroffactpossiblywheneverpossible(2)多选用多样的短语,展现自己的语言功底。恰当地选用一些更贴切、地道的表达对提高书面表达的得分档次至关重要,所以在有些情况下,考生不妨考虑巧妙地运用如下多样表达。汉意常用表达多样表达能够做某事beabletodosthbecapableofdoingsth,beequaltodoingsth努力做某事trytodosthstrivetodosth,sparenoefforttodosth,makegreateffortstodosth,applyoneselftodoingsth汉意常用表达多样表达必须要做的事情somethingyoumustdoamustforyou参加joinin,takepartinparticipatein,engagein忙于bebusywithbeoccupiedwith/in,beengagedin即将来临becomingbearoundthecorner,beapproaching,bedrawingnear某人想到某事sbthink(s)ofsthsthoccur(s)to/strike(s)sb,sbcome(s)upwithsth向某人道歉saysorrytosbmakeanapologytosb,apologizetosb汉意常用表达多样表达擅长begoodatbeskilledat,haveagiftfor疲惫不堪betiredfeelexhausted不同种类的differentkindsofawiderangeof,avarietyof,varietiesof对……有益beusefulto,begoodforbeofbenefitto,dogoodto,bebeneficialto大家认为peoplethinkthat...it’swellacknowledged/accepted/believedthat...汉意常用表达多样表达在我看来inmyopinionasfarasI’mconcerned,personallyspeaking,fromwhereIstand,frommyperspective引起人们的关注attractpeople’sattentionarouse/drawpeople’sattention,causepublicconcern越来越多的moreandmoreanincreasingnumberof,agrowingnumberof受……欢迎bepopularwithenjoywidepopularityamong/withanincreasingnumberof/agrowingnumberofAsfarasI’mconcernedmorethanofgreatbenefit

策略3句式丰富,彰显能力1.特殊句式,风景独好(1)运用强调句:强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分,它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成为:①强调句型基本结构为“It+is/was+被强调部分+that/who+句子其他部分”;②借助于助动词do/does/did对谓语动词进行强调。针对训练3对加黑部分进行强调(1)At

that

festivalyousharedsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.→

yousharedsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.(2022浙江1月卷满分作文)

(2)Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntil

he

had

read

the

news

in

the

newspaper.→

heknewwhathadhappened.

ItwasatthatfestivalthatItwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthat

(3)Iexpect

Youthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.→

Youth

canpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.(2021新高考全国Ⅰ卷满分作文)

Idoexpect(2)运用倒装句,以示强调。在写作中,倒装句应用比较广泛,涉及的句型也比较多,包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有:①“only+状语”置于句首时,句子用部分倒装;②none、neither、nor、not、never、hardly、little、seldom等否定词以及atnotime、bynomeans等短语置于句首时,句子用部分倒装;③在so/such...that...结构中,当so/such...位于句首时,其后的句子用部分倒装;④as、

though引起的倒装句;⑤表示方位的副词或者表示地点的介词短语置于句首且句子的主语是名词时,句子用全部倒装。针对训练4句型转换(1)Itnotonlyprovidesuswithabundantresources,butitalsoplaysaroleinmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem.→Notonly

uswithabundantresources,butitalsoplaysaroleinmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem.(2022全国甲卷满分作文)

(2)Wehadhardlyarrivedatthefarmwhenwesawmanyorangeshangingfromthebranches.→Hardly

atthefarmwhenwesawmanyorangeshangingfromthebranches.(2020全国Ⅱ卷满分作文)

doesitprovidehadwearrived

(3)Sheissopatientwitheachstudentthatwealllikeher.

→Sopatientwitheachstudent

wealllikeher.(2020全国Ⅰ卷满分作文)

isshethat(3)运用省略句,避免不必要的重复。针对训练5句型转换(1)WhenIfeeldepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.→

,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.(2021新高考全国Ⅰ卷满分作文)

(2)Ifitispossible,avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas,shoppingmalls,Internetbarsandsoon.→

,avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas,shoppingmalls,Internetbarsandsoon.

WhenfeelingdepressedIfpossible(4)运用虚拟语气,表达假设或建议。针对训练6补全句子(1)Withouttheocean,

(没有生物能存活),humansincluded.(2022全国甲卷满分作文)

(2)Thereforeitishightimethat

(我们采取措施)toprotecttheocean.(2022全国甲卷满分作文)

nolivingthingswouldsurvivewetookmeasures(5)适时感叹,必要强调。针对训练7补全句子

(我们玩得多么开心啊)!Notonlydiditgiveusrelaxation,butalsoitgotusclosertonature.(2020全国Ⅱ卷满分作文)

Whatawonderfultimewehad2.三大句式,编排巧妙(1)运用定语从句,让表述更丰满。针对训练8句型转换(1)I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinTalkandTalk,anewly-establishedprogrammedealingwithavarietyofhottopicsteenagersareinterestedin.Itisgainingincreasingpopularityamongusstudents.→I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinTalkandTalk,anewly-establishedprogrammedealingwithavarietyofhottopicsteenagersareinterestedin,

amongusstudents.(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷满分作文)

whichisgainingincreasingpopularity(2)Ninetystudentsfromtwentyclassesparticipatedintheraceandamongthemthirtyweregirls.→Ninetystudentsfromtwentyclassesparticipatedintherace,____________

thirtyweregirls.(2020新高考全国Ⅰ卷满分作文)

amongwhomwhatbenefitsstudentsmost

themajorityofstudentsbeinginterviewedtendtolearnEnglish

thatourschoolisgoingtoholdaclassmeeting(3)运用状语从句,让逻辑更清晰。针对训练10补全句子(1)

(只要我们尽力),wewillmakeadifferencetothemarineenvironment.(2022全国甲卷满分作文)

(2)

(尽管我被拒绝了),Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.(2021新高考全国Ⅰ卷满分作文)

AslongaswetryourbestRefusedas/thoughIwas/Although/Though/WhileIwasrefused3.活用非谓语,让表达言简意赅用非谓语动词整合简单句、并列句或复合句,提升表达档次,使句子凝练高端。针对训练11句型转换(1)Itrainedheavilyinthesouth.Therewereseriousfloodsinseveralprovinces.(用非谓语动词短语转换)→Itrainedheavilyinthesouth,

inseveralprovinces.

causing/leadingtoseriousfloods(2)WhenwearefacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet,wecan’ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.(用非谓语动词短语转换)→

,wecan’ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.(2021全国乙卷满分作文)

(3)Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,whichmakesitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.→Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,

.(2021全国乙卷满分作文)

FacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet

makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected策略4过渡巧妙,完美文章过渡词语就像纽带一样把文章紧紧连接起来,更像润滑剂,使文章衔接流畅。1.文章或段落起始常用的过渡词语tobeginwith(首先),firstofall(第一,首先),inthefirstplace(首先),asyouknow(如你所知),asisknowntoall(众所周知),asisshownin...(正如在……显示的那样)2.文章或段落结尾常用的过渡词语therefore/thus(因此),inconclusion(总之,最后),inbrief(简言之),tosumup(总而言之),inaword(总之),generallyspeaking(总体上讲),onthewhole(总的说来)3.常用的表示先后次序的过渡词语first(第一),second(第二),next(其次,然后),lastbutnotleast(最后但同样重要的),afterthat(之后),eventually/finally(最后,最终),sincethen(从那以后),afterwards(以后,后来),meanwhile(同时),immediately(立刻)强烈推荐以下组合适用于两点的情况:ontheonehand,ontheotherhand;foronething,foranother(thing)适用于三点或以上的情况:tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally;tostartwith,next,inaddition,lastbutnotleast;mostimportantly,moreover/furthermore,finally7.常用的表示强调的过渡词语furthermore/moreover(而且),besides(此外),actually/infact(实际上),also(而且,也),indeed(的确),inparticular(尤其,特别),naturally(当然),hopefully(有希望地)针对训练12补全句子(1)

(因此),studentsshouldsparemoretimeforEnglishreadingratherthanwatchingmoviesorlisteningtomusictoomuch.(2022全国乙卷满分作文)

(2)

(首先),assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.

(3)

(此外),wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.(2021全国乙卷满分作文)

Therefore/ThusFirstofallBesides维度三研究典例,掌握高分技巧【典题印证】(2022全国甲卷)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.海洋的重要性;2.保护海洋的倡议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文的题目已为你写好。Our

Oceans,Our

Responsibility三档作文示例

教师点评

1.审题不仔细。根据题目中的内容,本文应重点阐明海洋的重要性而不应该大讲特讲如何保护海洋;另外本文也缺乏保护海洋的倡议。2.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误。official应改为officially;set

up是及物动词短语,因此It与set

up之间为被动关系,因此在set

up前加was。3.句式单一。虽然句子结构基本正确,但使用的句子基本都是简单句。4.文章松散,句与句之间缺少必要的衔接手段。五档作文示例

教师点评

Theoceanplaysanimportantroleinourworldtoday.Notonlydoestheoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.Besides,therearevarietiesofresourcesintheoceanforustoexploit.Thus,itisimperativetoprotecttheocean.Ontheonehand,wemustmakepeoplerealizetheimportanceofprotectingtheocean.Ontheotherhand,governmentsallovertheworldshouldtakemeasurestoprotecttheocean.Themorepeopleareinvolved,thebettertheoceanenvironmentis.Allinall,itishightimethatwedevotedourselvestoprotectingtheocean.Toprotecttheoceanistoprotectourselves.分类突破•提升书面表达写作技能NO.2题型1告知信、邀请信、申请信和感谢信文体布局

必备短语

1.informsbofsth告知某人某事2.providesomeinformationforsb为某人提供一些信息3.workoutmyschedule制定我的计划4.showsbaround...带领某人参观……5.signupfor...报名参加……6.mean/intendtodosth打算做某事7.payavisitto...参观……8.makeadifference有影响,起作用9.bescheduledat/on...被安排在……10.makepreparationsfor...为……做准备

套用句式1.Now,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.现在,我写信通知你一些相关的细节。2.Thelecturewillbeginat8:00amandendat11:00am.讲座将于上午8:00开始,上午11:00结束。3.Avolleyballmatchisgoingtobeheldinafewweeksandourteamwillparticipate.几周后将举行一场排球比赛,我们队将参加。4.Don’tmissthechanceandpleasegetthereontime.不要错过此次机会,请准时到达那里。5.Youhadbettermakesomepreparationsbeforegoingthere.在去那里之前,你最好做些准备。文体布局

必备短语

套用句式文体布局必备短语

套用句式1.I’mwritingtoapplyforthejob/post/positionas...我写信申请……的工作/职位。2.Foronething,Icanhelp...Foranother,IcanimprovemyEnglish,makemorefriendsandenrichmylife.一方面,我能帮助……另一方面,我能提高我的英语水平,结交更多的朋友,并且丰富我的生活。3.Igraduatedfrom...University,majoringin...Ihavebeenworkingin...sincemygraduation.ThereforeIhaveattainedrichexperienceinthisfield.我毕业于……大学,主修……。毕业后我一直在……工作。因此,我在该领域积累了丰富的经验。4.IamconfidentthatI’msuitablefor.../I’mqualifiedtodo.../I’mequalto(doing)sth我确信,我适合……/我能胜任(做)……5.Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。文体布局必备短语

1.taketheopportunity利用此次机会2.returnone’skindness回报某人的善意3.withone’shelp/withthehelpofsb在某人的帮助下4.expressone’sgratitude/thanksforsb表达对某人的感激5.recallthosebeautifuldays回忆那些美好的日子6.thanksto/becauseofyourencouragement由于你的鼓励7.bepatientwithsb/havemuchpatiencewithsb对某人有耐心8.beyonddescription/words难以描述/无以言表9.timelyhelpandassistance及时的帮助和支持10.considerateandenthusiastictreatment周到、热情的招待套用句式1.IamwritingtoexpressmythanksforyourhelpingmeimprovemyspokenEnglish.我写这封信是为了感谢你帮助我提高英语口语。2.Mytruegratitudeisbeyondwords.任何语言都无法表达我真挚的谢意。3.Weallthankyouandareverygratefulforwhatyouhavedoneforus.我们都非常感谢你,也非常感激你为我们做的一切。4.ThankyouagainforyourwonderfulhospitalityandIamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.再次感谢你的盛情招待。我期待不久后会再次看到你。5.I’dliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmygreatappreciationforyourtimelyhelpandassistance.我想借此机会感谢你给我及时的帮助和支持。【典题印证】(2022甘肃武威凉州区一模)今年寒假后各校都未能如期开学,宅家网上学习(learningathomeonline)是大家的共同记忆。假如你叫李华,你的美国朋友David也将开始宅家学习,你想分享自己的经历,请电邮告知,主要内容是:1.上网课的优点;2.上网课的弊端;3.你的感悟。注意:1.词数100左右。首尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Hello,David!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【文思梳理】本文要求写一封电子邮件,告知美国朋友David你网上学习的经历。根据题干信息及所给要点可列出提纲:第一段:得知David将宅家学习,表示难过;第二段:分析上网课的优缺点;第三段:分享个人感悟。【满分范文】Hello,David!It’ssadtoknowthatyou’llhavetohaveclassesathome.(写信背景)

Owing

totheoutbreakofthedisease,wehadtohaveonlinecoursesathomeinsteadofattendingschoolafterthewinterholiday.Actuallyitisnotthatbad.Onlinecoursesbreak

throughthelimitationoftimeandspace,providinguswithgreatconveniencetostudy.(上网课的优点)Butitalsohassomedisadvantages,one

of

whichisitsbadeffectsonoureyesight.(上网课的弊端)

All

in

all,everycoinhastwosides,andthekeyistouseitproperly.As

far

as

I

am

concerned,ifyoucanmake

full

use

ofeverypossiblemeansappropriatelytostudy,itwon’tmatterwhether

you

study

online

or

in

the

classroom.(分享感悟)

Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua

课堂应用Writing

1(2022内蒙古赤峰二模)假定你是李华,你校将于下周五举办一场主题为“不带手机进校园”的英语演讲比赛。请你给外教Eric写一封邮件,邀请他担任评委,内容包括:1.比赛的时间和地点;2.比赛的目的;3.表达期盼。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerelyyours,LiHuaIthinkitisawin-winactivity.Foronething,Icanhelptakecareofthechildren.Foranother,IcanimprovemyEnglishaswellasmakingmorefriends.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Sincerelyyours,

LiHua

Writing

3假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。题型2建议信、道歉信、求助信、祝贺信和推荐信文体布局

必备短语

1.give/offersbsomeadviceon...就……给某人提建议2.asksbforadvice向某人征求意见3.inmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofview在我看来4.find...helpful/useful/beneficial认为……有帮助/有用/有益5.follow/take/adoptone’sadvice采纳某人的建议6.takesthintoaccount/consideration把某事考虑在内7.withregardto关于8.putforward提出9.sharesthwithsb与某人分享某事/物10.takesthseriously重视;认真对待套用句式

1.I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...Hereareafewsuggestionsofmine.很高兴收到你的来信,信上关于……向我征求意见。这里是我的一些建议。2.Thefollowingaremysuggestions./Mysuggestionsareasfollows.我的建议如下。3.Inmyopinion/Personally/AsfarasI’mconcerned,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions.在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。文体布局

必备短语

1.keepapromise信守诺言2.beabsentfrom缺席3.apologizetosbforsth因某事向某人道歉4.saysorrytosb对某人说抱歉5.begone’sforgivenessforsth因某事恳求某人的原谅6.Itisconsiderateofsbtodosth.某人做某事是体贴的。7.acceptmyapology接受我的道歉8.havenochoice/optionbuttodosth除了做某事别无选择9.failtodosth未能做某事10.beoccupiedin忙于套用句式

1.Iamwritingtoapologizefor.../Iwouldliketomakeanapologyfor...我写信是为……道歉。2.IregrettoinformyouthatIcannot/amunableto...我遗憾地告知你,我不能……3.IwantyoutoknowhowbadIfeelaboutitandtoassureyouthatitwillneverhappenagain.我想让你知道我有多难过,我向你保证这种事情不会再发生了。4.Itwouldbeverykindofyoutogivemeanotherchanceto...Ipromiseitwillneverhappenagain.你能再给我一次机会……太好了。我保证不会再发生这种事情。5.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapology.我真诚地希望你能够站在我的位置想一想,并且接受我的道歉。文体布局

必备短语

套用句式

1.IhavesomedifficultiesinEnglishpronunciation,whichbothersmealot.SoIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp.我在英语发音方面有一些困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。2.I’meagertogetyourtimelyhelp./I’meagerforyourtimelyhelp.我渴望得到你及时的帮助。3.Facedwith/Facingsomanydifficulties,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.面对如此多的难题,我不得不向你求助。4.I’msureIcanmakegreatprogresswithyourhelp.我确定在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。5.Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.I’dreallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我,我真的很感激。文体布局

必备短语

套用句式

1.CongratulationsonyourwinningthefirstplaceintheChemistrycontest.祝贺你在化学竞赛中获得第一名。2.ItisthemostjoyfulnewsthatIhaveheardforalongtime.这是很久以来我听过的最令人高兴的消息。3.IamdelightedtolearnthatyouhavewonthefirstplaceintheEnglishspeechcontest.获知你在英语演讲比赛中荣获第一名,我很开心。4.IamwritingtoexpressmycongratulationsonyoursuccessintheCollegeEntranceExamination.我写这封信是为了表达我对你高考成功的祝贺。5.Iwishyouallpossiblejoyandhappiness.祝你开心幸福。文体布局

必备短语

套用句式

4.SoIholdthebeliefthat...be(am/is/are)quitesuitableforthepost.所以我认为……很适合这个职位。5.Thanksforyourattentionandhopetoreceiveyourreply.多谢你的关注,希望能收到你的回复。【典题印证】假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教MissEvans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介;2.指导内容;3.商定时间地点。注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。DearMissEvans,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【文思梳理】本篇求助信的主题是请外教帮忙修改英语短剧。根据题干信息及所给要点可列出提纲:第一段:说明写信目的(请求外教帮忙指导,并让对方知晓请求指导的内容);第二段:详细介绍英语短剧的剧情并指出需指导的细节问题;第三段:表达感谢,并期待早日得到回复。【满分范文】DearMissEvans,

Howiseverything?Iwaswonderingifyoucouldguideustoreviseashortplayadapted

fromourEnglishtextbook.(求助事由)

Thestory,The

Million

Pound

Bank

Note,isabouttheadventureofapooryoungmanwhowasgivenamillionpoundbanknotebytworichgentlemen.Heturnedamillionaireovernightandmetdramaticchangesinhislife.When

adaptingtheplay,wemetsomedifficulties.Couldyoukindlygiveusguidanceontwoaspects?Firstly,wehopethatyoucanchecktheuseofthelanguageforus.Secondly,pleasegiveussomedirectiononouractingandtones.Would

it

be

possible

for

us

to

meetinourclassroomat5pmthisFriday?Wearelookingforwardtoyourreply.(商定时间、地点,表达期望)

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

课堂应用Writing

1(2022广西柳州摸底)假如你是李华,请给你的外国朋友Tom写一封信,给他提供一些汉语学习方面的好的建议,并陈述理由。要点如下:1.培养兴趣;2.多阅读;3.看中文电影。注意:1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearTom,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearTom,

AsforthegoodwaystolearnChinesewell,mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstandforemost,beinterestedinwhatyouarelearning.Asweallknow,interestisthebestteacher.Ifyouhaveaninterestinsomething,it’seasierforyoutopayattentiontoitforalongtime.Inaddition,it’salsoagoodideatoreadmoreChinesebooks.Thisisbecauseyoucanlearnmanynewwordswhilereading.Lastbutnotleast,youcantrytoimproveyourChinesebywatchingChinesemoviesaswell,whichwillhelpyoutoimproveyourlisteningandspeakingskills.Ihopeyoucantakemyadviceintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua

DearJohn,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearSir/Madam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerelyyours,LiMingWriting

4(2022陕西名校一模)假如你是李华,你的留学生朋友Jim邀请你周五去听二胡音乐会,但是你因故不能同去。请你用英文给他写封信,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearJim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearJim,

I’mpleasedtoreceiveyourinvitationtoattendtheerhuconcertforIamreallyfondoftraditionalChinesemusic.ButI’msorrythatIcan’tgowithyou.Ihavetoexpressmyapologytoyou.Ihavemadeanappointmentwithmymathsteacheraheadoftime.Asyouknow,Ihavesomedifficultieswithmaths.Wehavemadeanappointmenttohaveaface-to-facetalkaboutmytroubleandhewillgivemesomeinstructionsonhowtolearnitwell.Nevertheless,Ifindthere’sanothererhuconcertonSunday.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,canwemakeitonSunday?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua

题型3发言(演讲)稿、倡议书和通知文体布局与必备短语

套用句式

5.Iamsurethatwithyourgreatefforts,youwillenjoyacolorfullifehere.我确定付出巨大努力后你将会享受这里丰富多彩的生活。6.Thankyouforlistening.谢谢大家的聆听。文体布局与必备短语

套用句式

1.Inordertobuilda“harmonioussociety”,Ithinkweshouldtryourbesttodowhateverwecan.为了建设“和谐社会”,我认为我们应该尽最大努力去做我们能做的事情。2.NowIwouldliketocalloneveryonetopayattentiontothepresentdisasterscausedbyhumanactivities.现在我想要呼吁每个人关注目前由人类活动造成的灾害。3.Inmyopinion,weshou