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ContinuationWritingCompanionofDaughterandMotherTherewassomethingintheelderlywoman'sgracethatcaughtmyeye.Althoughslowandunsureofhersteps,thewomanmovedwithdeliberation（从容）,andtherewasnohesitationinhergestures.Itwasafewyearsago,andIhadtakenapart-timeholiday-seasonjobinavideostoreatthelocalshoppingmall.Frominsidethestore,Icouldseethepeopleoutsiderushingby.Theelderlywomanenteredthestore,alongwithherdaughter,whowasdisplayingaseriouscaseofimpatience,rollinghereyes,sighingandcheckingherwatcheveryfewseconds.Iguessedifshehadpossessedarope,shewouldhavefastenedittohermothertodragheralongtokeepstepwiththerushofothershoppers.TheelderlywomanseparatedfromherdaughterandbegantoseekthroughtheDVDsonthenearestshelf.Aftertheslightesthesitation,IwalkedoverandaskedifIcouldhelpherfindsomething.

Thewomansmiledupatmeandshowedmeatitlewrittenonanoldpieceofpaper.RatherthanrushofftolocatetheDVDforthewoman,IaskedhertowalkwithmesoIcouldshowherwhereshecouldfindit.Lookingback,IthoughtIwantedtoenjoyhercompanyforamoment.

Somethingaboutherdeliberatemovementsremindedmeofmyownmother,

who'dpassedawaythepreviousChristmas.ImissedmymomandstillfeltregretfulaboutthemomentswhenI'dusedmyimpatiencetomakeherlifeunhappy.Aswewalkedalongthebackofthestore,Iintroduceditsfloorplan:oldtelevisionshows,actionmovies,cartoons,sciencefiction.Thewomanseemedgladoftheunrushedcompanyandcasualconversation.WefoundtheDVDandshethankedme,sayingthatitwastheoneshe'denjoyedwhenshewasherdaughter'sage.

Unwillingly,Iaccompaniedhertothecashregister,realizingIhadtoreturntheelderlywomantoherdaughter,

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stilltappingherfootatthefrontofthestore.Paragraph1:Astheelderlywomanwaswaitinginthequeueatthecashregister,Iwalkedovertoherdaughter.______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Togethertheymadetheirwaytowardthestoreˈsexit.______________________________________________________________________:Videostore:afewyearsago;theyearafterhermotherpassedaway01Readforsetting&charactersC--CharactersThemomThedaughter

IS--Setting(where/when)WhereWhenTherewassomethingintheelderlywoman'sgracethatcaughtmyeye.Althoughslowandunsureofhersteps,thewomanmovedwithdeliberation(从容),andtherewasnohesitationinhergestures.Itwasafewyearsago,andIhadtakenapart-timeholiday-seasonjobinavideostoreatthelocalshoppingmall.Frominsidethestore,Icouldseethepeopleoutsiderushingby.Theelderlywomanenteredthestore,alongwithherdaughter,whowasdisplayingaseriouscaseofimpatience,rollinghereyes,sighingandcheckingherwatcheveryfewseconds.Iguessedifshehadpossessedarope,shewouldhavefastenedittohermothertodragheralongtokeepstepwiththerushofothershoppers.TheelderlywomanseparatedfromherdaughterandbegantoseekthroughtheDVDsonthenearestshelf.Aftertheslightesthesitation,IwalkedoverandaskedifIcouldhelpherfindsomething.elderly;grace;determined;impatient;irritable易怒的;

Thewomansmiledupatmeandshowedmeatitlewrittenonanoldpieceofpaper.RatherthanrushofftolocatetheDVDforthewoman,IaskedhertowalkwithmesoIcouldshowherwhereshecouldfindit.Lookingback,IthoughtIwantedtoenjoyhercompanyforamoment.

Somethingaboutherdeliberatemovementsremindedmeofmyownmother,

who'dpassedawaythepreviousChristmas.ImissedmymomandstillfeltregretfulaboutthemomentswhenI'dusedmyimpatiencetomakeherlifeunhappy.Aswewalkedalongthebackofthestore,Iintroduceditsfloorplan:oldtelevisionshows,actionmovies,cartoons,sciencefiction.Thewomanseemedgladoftheunrushedcompanyandcasualconversation.WefoundtheDVDandshethankedme,sayingthatitwastheoneshe'denjoyedwhenshewasherdaughter'sage.

Unwillingly,Iaccompaniedhertothecashregister,realizingIhadtoreturntheelderlywomantoherdaughter,

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stilltappingherfootatthefrontofthestore.

likemymotherlonely

regretfullonely;01Readforsetting&charactersC--CharactersThemomThedaughterThesellerelderly;grace;determined;likemymotherimpatient;irritable;

lonely;regrettedAmotherandadaugtherenteredavideostore.02ReadforcluesIaccompaniedthemothertofindtheDVDshewanted.Theoldladywenttothecashregister;thedaughterwasstilltappingherfoot.??????????PlotdiagramPara1.

Astheelderlywomanwaswaitinginthequeueatthecashregister,Iwalkedovertoherdaugher.Para2.Togethertheymadetheirwaytowardthestore’sexit.par1-2beginningpar3-6duringpara7climax

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Astheelderlywomanwaswaitinginthequeueatthecashregister,Iwalkedovertoherdaugher.____________________________________________________________________A.请问你是女士的女儿吗？对方爱答不理......B.父母亲是生我们养我们的人，他们做的一切都是为我们好，我们应该尊重他们....C.劝诫她趁着母亲还在身边好好陪伴,对待母亲D.自己感到很后悔，没有陪伴母亲,让母亲不开心E.听了我说的话，女儿似乎被触动了.....走向她的妈妈Emotions

thedaughter:________________

I____________________________________ACDE02ReadforcluesandemotionsParagraph2:

Togethertheymadetheirwaytowardthestore’sexit.______________________________________________________________________

arrogant傲慢的----ashamed/movedcautious---regrettedParagraph2:Togethertheymadetheirwaytowardthestore’sexit.______________________________________________________________________A.女儿放慢了脚步，伸出自己的胳膊，随意却又鉴定地挽住了母亲。B.母亲紧紧地抱着女儿，脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容。C.看着她们的笑脸，我意识到，就在这一刻，两代人之间的坚冰融化成一条温暖的溪流D.轻柔的音乐在店里回响，如同母亲的轻抚，让爱的音符流进了人

们的灵魂和心田。E.第二天，母亲来店里向我道谢。ABCD02Readforcluesandemotionsemotions:

delighted&moved03theme:

Identifythethemebyaskingyourself:Whoistellingthestory?Whatisthestoryabout?Whatistheauthortryingtosaytothereader?familyrelationshiporhelpA.Theelderlywomanenteredthestore,alongwithherdaughter,whowasdisplayingaseriouscaseofimpatience,rollinghereyes,sighingandcheckingherwatcheveryfewseconds.B.

Lookingback,IthoughtIwantedtoenjoyhercompanyforamoment.C.Somethingaboutherdeliberatemovementsremindedmeofmyownmother,

who'dpassedawaythepreviousChristmas.D.ImissedmymomandstillfeltregretfulaboutthemomentswhenI'dusedmyimpatiencetomakeherlifeunhappy.E.

Unwillingly,Iaccompaniedhertothecashregister,realizingIhadtoreturntheelderlywomantoherdaughter,

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stilltappingherfootatthefrontofthestore.04Readforlanguagestyles05topolishthesentences

情节1.我询问“请问你是哪位女士的女儿吗？”她爱答不理Whenaskedwhethertheelderwomanwashermother,shesaidyeswithannoyanceinherreply,halfsighandhalfgroan.情节2.趁着母亲还在身边，好好陪伴,对待母亲Strivingtokeepmyvoicecalm,Imentioned

neverhadIgotthetruemeaningofthewords“Imissyou”untilIreachedformymom’shandanditwasn’tthere.当我问她那个老妇人是不是她的母亲时，她说是的，回答中透露着恼怒，半是叹气半是抱怨。05topolishthesentences

情节3.自己感到很后悔，没有陪伴母亲,让母亲不开心Eventoday,IwasoverwhelmedwithregretsandguiltwhenthinkingofhowIhadturnedablindeyetomymother’scompanionandherloneliness.情节4.听了我说的话，女儿似乎被触动了Impressedbymywords,sheseemedtoberemindedofthemomentswhenshewasalwaysimpatientwithhermother.05topolishthesentences

情节5.

女儿放慢了脚步，伸出自己的胳膊，挽住了母亲。Shesloweddownherpace,stretchedoutherarm,andlinkedhersthroughhermother’sinacasualbutdeterminedway.情节6.看着她们的笑脸，我意识到，就在这一刻，两代人之间的坚冰融化成一条温暖的溪流----------我也开心愉悦起来Seeingtheirsmilingfaces,Irealizeditwasatthisverymomentthattheicebetweentwogenerationsmeltedintoawarmcurrent,flowingintotheirhearts.

Seeingthetwoimmersedthemselvesinthebeautyofthemusicandenjoyedthepreciousmother-daughtertime,Icouldhardlysuppressthesmileandenjoyedthesamehappinessaswasfloodingthroughme.05ahappyandharmoniousending

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轻柔的音乐在店里回响，如同母亲的轻抚，让爱的音符流进了人们的灵魂和心田。Thesoftmusicflowedacrosstheshop,asgentleasamother’stouchandflowedoverpeoplewithnotesofloveintotheirsoulsandhearts.2.阳光透过窗户，照在他们身上，见证了这和谐的场面，温暖而永恒。Thesunlightfilteredthroughthewindowandshoneontheirshoulders,witnessingtheharmoniuslove,warmandeternal永恒.3.当我注视着那对母女的背影时，我的心里泛起了一丝暖意，并夹杂着幸福。ArippleofwarmthmingledwithhappinessranthroughmyheartwhenIstaredafterthemotherandherdaughterfadinginthecrowds.Astheelderlywomanwaswaitinginthequeueatthecashregister,Iwalkedovertoherdaughter.“Mindsomeadvice?”Iaskedcautiously.Sherolledhereyesandmumbledwithannoyance,“ofcoursenot”,halfsighandhalfgroan.Strivingtokeepmyvoicecalm,Imentioned

neverhadIgotthetruemeaningofthewords“Imissyou”untilIreachedformymom’shandanditwasn’tt