2021年高考英语考前复习：作文写作技巧与范文汇编

2021年高考英语考前复习：作文写作技巧与范文汇编

一、技巧剖析

“一审”即审题。主要是看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体

是什么，准备写作的人称和时态：如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，

宜采用现在时态。

“二写”即列纲。主要是列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的

英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同(近)义词或同义句

代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。

“三连”即连句成文。根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的

情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但

要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。

“四改”即修改润色全文。主要是看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏

要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓

一致、冠词等。总之做到：

A-三审：体裁、时态、人称；

i三思：词汇一短语一句式；

工三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯

二、常用句式

1、用于文章开头的句型有：

(1)Thereisageneraldiscussiontodayabouttheissueof...；Thosewhoobjectto...arguethat...；

Theybelievethat...；Butpeoplewhofavor...,ontheotherhand,arguethat...

(2)Facedwith...,quiteafewpeoplearguethat...；Butotherpeopleconceivedifferently.

(3)Currentlythereisawidespreadconcernthat...

(4)Nowpeopleingrowingnumberarecomingtorealizethat...

(5)Nowitiscommonlyheldthat...；ButIdoubtwhether...

(6)Recentlytheissueof...hasbeenbroughttopublicattention.

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(7)Sb.argues/maintains/holds/insists/believesthat...Nowmoreandmorepeoplesharethisbelief.

(8)Moreandmorepeoplearerealizing/havecometorealize...

(9)Thereisnodenying/doubtthat...

2、过渡性词语

1)表递进关系的过渡词

besides,inaddition,moreover,furthermore,what*smore,what'sworse,ontheonehand...,

ontheotherhand...等。

［例］我不喜欢那件衣服，而且它太贵了。

(1)1don'tlikethedress；besides,it'stooexpensive.

(2)1don'tlikethedress；moreover,it'stooexpensive.

2)表转折对比的过渡词

but,however,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,despite,inspiteof,whereas,

nevertheless等。

［例］他原以为自己理解了那道题，但是他错了。

(l)Hethoughtheunderstoodtheproblem,buthewasmistaken.

(2)Hethoughtheunderstoodtheproblem,however,hewasmistaken.

3)表目的过渡词

forthisreason/purpose,sothat,inorderto/that等。

［例］为了让学生听清，老师提高了声音。

(1)Theteacherraisedhisvoicesothatstudentscouldhearhimclearly.

(2)Inordertomakehimselfbearedclearly,theteacherraisedhisvoice.

4)表示因果关系的过渡性词语

because,as,since,for,thanksto,thus,therefore,asaresultof,onereasonisthat...,

anotherreasonisthat…等。

［例］由于天在下雨，你最好乘出租车。

(l)Asifsraining,you'dbettertakeataxi.

(2)It'srainingsoyou'dbettertakeataxi.

5)表示列举事实的过渡性词语

forexample/instance,suchas,take...fbrexample,thatistosay,asfollows,inotherwords

等。

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［例］许多伟人从贫困中崛起，例如林肯和爱迪生。

(1)Manygreatmenhaverisenfrompoverty-LincolnandEdison,forexample.

(2)Manygreatmenhaverisenfrompoverty,forexample,LincolnandEdison.

6)表特定的顺序关系的过渡词

first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,aboveall,firstofall,then,next,finally,

intheend,atlast,eventually等。

［例］努力学习，最终你会成功的。

(1)Workhard,andyouwillsucceedintheend.

(2)Workhard,andyouwillsucceedintime.

7)表示并列的过渡性词语

and,or,also,too,aswellas,neither...nor...,notonly...butalso...,either...or...,not...but...

等。

［例］他不但给我建议，还给我钱。

(l)Hegavememoneyaswellasadvice.

(2)Hegavemenotonlyadvicebutalsomoney.

8)表示条件的过渡性词语

if,unless,as/solongas,onconditionthat等。

［例］只要有生命，就有希望。

(l)Aslongasthereislife,thereishope.

(2)Wherethereislife,thereishope.

9)表示让步关系的过渡性词语

as,though,evenif/though,who(what,when,where)ever/nomatterwho(what,when,

where)等。

［例］不管谁违法都要受到惩罚。

(l)Nomatterwhobreaksthelaw,hewillbepunished.

(2)Whoeverbreaksthelawwillbepunished.

10)表总结的过渡词

inaword,ingeneral,inshort,tosumup,finally,inconclusion,insummary,generally

speaking,allinall等。

［例］一般而言，语言是用来交际的。

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(l)Ingeneral,languageisforcommunication.

(2)Generallyspeaking,languageisforcommunication.

3、衔接常用句式

①Themainreasonwhy...isthat...

②Thereasonsareasfollows.

©Take...forexample.

©Besides,weshouldnotneglectthat...

©Wonderfulas...is,however,ithasitsowndisadvantagesaswell.

@AsfarasI'mconcerned,I'minfavorofthefirst/secondview.

4、结尾

结尾的方法有很多，如总结式、重复式、结论式、暗示式和求解式等。

结尾一般是文章的升华或对文章主题的归纳，也是写好文章的关键。好的结尾能唤起读

者共鸣，深化主题，给人回味，引人深思。

用于文章结尾的句型有：

(1)Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemaysafelyarrive

at/draw/cometo/reachtheconclusionthat...

(2)Itishightimethatweputconsiderable/great/specialemphasison...

(3)Wemustlookforallimmediatemethod,becausethepresentsituationof...ifpermittedto

continue,willsureleadto/resultin...

(4)Manysolutions/methodsarebeingofferedhere,allofthemmakesomesense,butnoneisquite

satisfactory.Theproblemshouldbeexaminedinanewway.

(5)Thereisnoimmediatesolutiontotheproblemof...,but...mightbehelpful/beneficial.

(6)Noeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemof...,butthegeneralawarenessofthe

necessity/importanceof...mightbethefirststepontherightway.

(7)Thereislittledoubt/denyingthat...

(8)Itis,therefore,obvious/evidentthatthetaskof...requireimmediateattention.

(9)Asfaras...beconcerned,Ibelieve/thinkthat...

(10)Inconclusion,...

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(11)Inmyopinion,Iaminfavorof...

(12)Personally,Ipreferto...

(13)Inshort,...shouldlearnto...；Onlyinthiswaycanthemostdifficultproblemsbesolved

properly.

(14)AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththeopinionthat...

三、常用句型的使用

I.那就是(说)…；亦即…

Thatistosay,...

=Thatis,...

=Namely,...

例：我们生活需有规律。也就是说，早睡早起戒除烟酒。

Weneedtolivearegularlife.Thatis,wecankeepgoodhoursandrefrainfromsmokingand

drinkinginthedailyactivities.

2.(A)基于这个理由

...Forthisreason...

(B)为了这个目的

...Forthispurpose,...

例：基于这个理由，我已决定把行医作为未来的职业。

Forthisreason,Ihavedecidedtotakepracticingmedicineasmyfuturecareer.

3.我们有理由相信…

Wehavereasonstobelieve(that)子句

例：我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。

Wehavereasonstobelievethatcorporalpunishmentshouldbestrictlyprohibited.

4.事实上

Asamatteroffact,...

=Infact,...

例：事实上健康才是最重要。

Asamatteroffact,itishealththatcounts.

5.(A)例如

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...Forexample,...

(B)拿…做例子

Take...forexample.

例：例如我们盲目地提高生活水准，却降低生活品质。

Forexample,weelevatethelivingstandardsblindly,butlowerthequalityoflife.

6.此外我们不应忽视…

Besides(Inaddition),weshouldnotneglect...

例：此外，我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。

Inaddition,weshouldnotneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.

7.相反地…

onthecontrary,...

=bycontrast,...

例：相反地少数学生似乎还在鬼混。

Onthecontrary,afewstudents,itseems,arestillfoolingaround.

8.另一方面…

ontheotherhand,...

例：政府应严格执法，另一方面大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯。

Thegovernmentshouldenforcelawsstrictly.Ontheotherhand,thepublicalsoshoulddevelop

thegoodhabitofreducingpollution.

9.然而很可惜的是…

However,itisapitythat子句

例：然而很可惜的是他总是临时抱佛脚。

However,itisapitythatheshouldalwayscramattheeleventhhour.

10.换言之…

inotherwords,...

=toputitdifferently

例：换言之我会尽最大的努力达成我的目标。

Inotherwords,Iwilltrymybesttoattain(gain,liveupto)mygoal.

11.别人可能认为这是事实，但我不是。我认为…

Itmaybetrueasassumedbyothers,butIdon't.Ibelievethat子句

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例：别人可能认为这是事实，但我不是。我认为…

Itmaybetrueasassumedbyothers,butIdon't.Ibelievethatifyouhavestrongdetermination

andperseverance,thesuccesswillcertainlycometoyouintheend.

12.从此之后我己发现…

Eversincethen,Ihavefoundthat子句

例：从此之后我已发现…

Eversincethen,Ihavefoundsmilethebestwaytoavoidanypossibleconflictsinourdailylives.

13.这样说来，假如…当然毫无疑问地…

Inthislight,if...,therecansurelybenodoubt(that)子句

例：这样说来，假如我们能善用时间，当然毫无疑问地我们会成功。

Inthislight,ifwecanmakegooduseoftime,therecansurelybenodoubtthatwewillget

somewhere.

14.更严重的是…

Whatismoreseriousis(that)子句

例：更严重的是我们不珍惜野生动物。

Whatismoreseriousisthatwedonotcherishthewildlife.

15.鉴于社会的实际需要…

Inviewofthepracticalneedofsociety,

例：鉴于社会的实际需要，愈来愈多人对学英语有兴趣。

Inviewofthepracticalneedofsociety,therearemoreandmorepeopleinterestedinlearning

English.

用于文章结论句

16.如果能实践这三点…

Ifonecanreallyputthethreepointsintoaction(practice),...

例：如果能实践这三点…。

Ifonecanreallyputthethreepointsintoaction(practice),hewillsurelybeabletoliveahealthy

andhappylife.

17.做这些简单之事，我们一定可以…

Bydoingthesesimplethings,wesurelycan

例：做这些简单之事，我们一定可以快乐出门平安回家。

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Bydoingthesesimplethings,wesurelycangooutofthedoorhappilyandcomebackhomesafe

everyday.

18.如此我相信…

Inthisway,Ibelieve(that)子句

例：如此，我相信大家能够像我一样享受乘坐公车的乐趣。

Inthisway,Ibelievethatallthepeoplemaybeabletoenjoythebusridelikeme.

19.实践这些…

Byputtingthem(theabove)intopractice,

例：实践这些，在智育方面我一直能不断进步。

Byputtingthem(theabove)intopractice,Ihavebeenabletomakeconstantprogressin

intellectualeducation.

20.(A)唯有符合此三项要求，我们才能…

Onlybylivinguptothethreerequirements,canwe

(B)唯有通力合作，我们才能…

Onlywithcombinedefforts,canwe

例：唯有通力合作，我们才能期望台湾不久有新的面貌.

Onlywithcombinedefforts,canweexpectTaiwantotakeanewfaceinduecourse.

21.最后，但并非最不重要…

Lastbutnoleast,

例：最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。

Lastbutnoleast,theshortcomingineducationisthecausecontributingtojuveniledelinquency.

22.这证据显示…的重要性在怎么强调都不为过。

Thisevidenceshowsthattheimportanceofcannotbeoveremphasized.

例：这证据显示交通安全的重要性在怎么强调都不为过。

Thisevidenceshowsthattheimportanceoftrafficsafetycannotbeoveremphasized.

23.由于这些理由，我…

Forthesereasons,I

例：由于这些理由，我认为在台湾接受大学教育是明智的。

Forthesereasons,IthinkthatreceivingcollegeeducationinTaiwaniswise.

24.总而言之…

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Inconclusion,...

=Tosumup,...

例：总而言之，好国民应该遵守交通规则。

Inconclusion,agoodcitizenshouldabidebytrafficregulations.

25.因此我们能下个结论，那就是…

Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusion(that)子句

例：因此，我们能下个结论，那就是世上自由最珍贵。

Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusionthatnothingissopreciousasfreedomintheworld.

26.如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问地…

Ifwecandoasmentionedabove,therecanbenodoubt(that)子句

例：如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问地，我们就能精通英语。

Ifwecandoasmentionedabove,therecanbenodoubtthatwecanmasterEnglish.

27.因此，这就是…的原因

Thus,thisisthereasonwhy

例：因此，这就是我重感冒的原因。

Thus,thisisthereasonwhyIcaughtabadcold.

28.所以，我们应该了解…

Therefore,weshouldrealize(that)子句

例：所以，我们应该了解学英文不能没有字典。

Therefore,weshouldrealizethatinlearningEnglishwecannotdowithoutadictionary.

29.因此，由上列的讨论我们可以明了…

We,therefore,canmakeclearfromtheabovediscussion(that)子句

例：因此，由上列的讨论我们可以明了毅力可以克服任何困难。

We,therefore,canmakeclearfromtheabovediscussionthatperseverancecanovercomeany

difficulty.

四、过渡词填空

1、在现代社会，人们越来越离不开手机——很多人在开车、过马路时都在使用手机。针对

这一现象，请以“TheUseofMobilePhones”为题，按下列要点，用英语写一篇短文，呼吁人

们文明使用手机。

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1.手机给人们的生活带来的好处；

2.不恰当使用手机的危害；

3.使用手机的注意事项。

注意：

1.词数：120左右；

TheUseofMobilePhones

Inmodemsociety,itseemsthatpeoplecan'tgowithoutmobilephonesinhand.Theygrasp

everychancetousetheirmobilephones,evenwhentheyaredrivingorcrossingroads.

Thereisnodoubtthatmobilephonesdobringuslotsofbenefitsinourdailylife.Apartfrom

keepingusinformedofwhat'sgoingonaroundtheworld,theyalsorelieveusfromstressthrough

theirentertainmentfunctions.

However,theimproperuseofmobilephonesislikelytoresultinbadconsequences.For

example,usingmobilephoneswhiledrivingorcrossingroadsdistractstheusers'attention,thus

causingterribleaccidents.Therefore,theuseofmobilephonesshouldbebannedinsituations

wheresilence,attentionandsecurityareneeded.Besides,toshowrespectforothers,weshouldn't

talkonthephoneatthetopofourvoiceinpublicplaces.

Lefsuseourmobilephonesinacivilizedway,andjoinhandstocreateaharmonious

society!

2、江苏省提出高考改革方案，英语可能不再计入高考总分。某英文报就此征集文章。请你

写一篇短文，包括下列内容要点：

1.赞成的理由：英语降温，有利于其它科目，减轻负担；

2.反对的理由：影响英语教学；不利于长远发展；

3.你的观点和两条理由。

注意：

1.词数120左右；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

2.可以适当增加细节，不可逐字翻译；

3.参考词汇：高考thecollegeentranceexamination

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RecentlyJiangsuProvinceshasmadeaplantoreformitscollegeentranceexamination.

【参考范文】

RecentlyJiangsuProvinceshasmadeaplantoreformitscollegeentranceexamination.Itis

saidthatprobablyEnglishwillnotbeincludedinthecollegeentranceexamination.Opinionsare

greatlydividedonthistopic.

Thosewhosupporttheplanholdtheviewthatwhenstudents5enthusiasminlearningEnglish

isreduced,theywillhavemoretimetolearnothersubjects.Moreover,theywillhaveless

homework,thusnolongersufferingfromsomuchpressure.

However,everycoinhastw。sides.Peoplewhoareagainstitthinkthereformwillnotonly

haveabadinfluenceontheteachingandlearningofEnglish,butalsoaffectstudents9long-term

development.

PersonallyIamnotinfavorofit.Firstly,Englishismorethananinternationallanguage.Itisan

importanttool.Also,wecannotgetalongwellwithothercountriesandlearnabouttheirculturesif

wedon'tunderstandtheirlanguage.

3、你喜欢快餐食品吗？快餐食品在青少年和儿童中很流行。请根据提示写一篇120词左右

的发言稿，内容要点包括：

1.快餐流行的原因（至少2点）

2.弊端（至少2点）

3.个人看法

开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Fastfood

Dearfriends,

Nowadays,fastfoodisbecomingmoreandmorepopularamongchildrenandteenagers.I

thinkthereareseveralreasonsforitspopularity.

Firstifsveryconvenientandcansavealotoftime.Youcangointoafastrestauranttoorder

yourfoodanditisreadyinnotime.Besides,youcantakeitawayoreatthere.What'smore,it

offersexcellentserviceandtastyfood.

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However,fastfoodisnotgoodforpeople'shealth,especiallychildren.Thereistoomuchfat

inthefoodandyoucan'tgetenoughfreshvegetables.Alsothefoodisveryexpensive,whichmay

costyoumuchmoney.

Wearewhatweeat.Therefore,it'sveryimDortantforustoformhealthyeatinghabitsand

eatfastfoodaslittleaspossible.It'sonlyachoicewhenyouarereallyinahurry.

That'sall.Thankyou!（132词）

4、当前有不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film

orbook,whichdoyouprefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：

1.看电影：省时，有趣，易懂

2.读原著：细节更多，语言优美

3.我的看法及理由

注意：1.词数100/20,文章题目和开头己经给出；

2.可根据内容做适当添加；

3.参考词汇：originalbook或bookintheoriginal（原著）

Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?

Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.The

reasonisthalittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymore

interesting,anditiseasiertofollow.

Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailed

informationfromtheoriginal.Meanwhile,thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyand

beautiful.

Personally,Iagreewiththesecondview.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.IthinkIcan

stayathome,readingquietlyinasituationofmyown,andwhat'smore,Iamabletobetter

understandtheauthorsideas.Inaword,toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilm

basedonit.

5、作为即将进入高三的学生，将要面对更繁重的学习和生活压力，因此，保持积极心态非

常重要。现在，请围绕“积极心态与健康、学习、交友及家庭生活”四个方面的关系，以Keeping

aPositiveAttitude为题目，写一篇英语短文，阐述你的观点及理由。

注意：I.词数：120字左右；。

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2.短文题目已给出，并不计入总词数。

DearMary,

I'mgladtohearthatyouareconsideringmakingupwithAnna.IfIwereyou,Iwould

considerabikeasabirthdaypresentforher.

AsfarasIknow,Annalikestakingexercisebyridingabike.Inthemeanwhile,youcan

oftengoonanoutgoingbybiketogether,whichishelpfulinrebuildingyourfriendship.Besides,

takingabikeisanenvironmentallyfriendlymeansoftransport.It'sconvenientfbrhertoget

aroundaswell.Apartfromgivingheragift,youcanalsoadoptothermeans,suchastravelling,

seeingamovie,havingdinnerorgoingshoppingtogether.Nomatterwhatyoudo,beingsincereis

themostimportant.Ireallyhopethatyoucanbegoodfriendsforever.

Bestwishes!

6、某英文报纸就“中国城市普遍存在的交通拥堵问题”邀请中学生展开讨论。请你根据以下

提示，写一篇英语短文。

1.简要描述这一交通问题；

2.分析造成该问题的主要原因（至少写两点）；

3.提出解决该问题的建议（至少写两点）。

注意：

1.短文须包括所有要点，可适度发挥，使行文连贯。

2.词数120左右，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。

3.不得提及本人姓名和所在学校。

InspiteofthefastdevelopmentoftransportationinthemajorcitiesofChina,moreandmore

trafficproblemsarearising.

InspiteofthefastdevelopmentoftransportationinthemajorcitiesofChina,moreandmore

trafficproblemsarearising.Aseriousoneisheavytraffic.Veryoften,weseecarsinfrontofus

parkedonbothsidesofthestreet,drivingdownthestreet,orstuckintrafficwithdriverswaiting

impatiently.

There5remainlytwofactorsthatcausethisproblem.Inthefirstplace,vastpopulation

contributestoheavytrafficandgrowingnumbersofprivatecarsaddtothepressureonthesevere

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trafficconditions.What'sworse,somepeopleareunawareoftheimportanceofobeyingtraffic

regulations,soifsnotuncommontoseeaccidentsblockingtraffic.

Personally,Ithinkthatratherthanpromoteprivatecars,it'sbettertoimprovethepublic

transportationsystemwithscientificroaddesignandpropermanagement.Moreimportantly,

nevercantrafficjamsbeeasedwithoutself-disciplinedcitizens.

7、随着互联网的发展和流行，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了。某英文报近期开辟专

栏，讨论中学生网上购物的问题。请结合实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件，谈

谈你对中学生网购的看法。

1.网上购物的好处（比如方便快捷，节省时间，价格低等；）。

2.网上购物的缺点（比如快递比较耗时，无法试穿试用，质量得不到保证等）。

3.中学生对网购应该持什么样的态度。

注意：

1.词数120左右，开头结尾已为你写好；

2.网购的好处与缺点至少各两点；

3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

【答案】【知识点】F2书面表达议论文

【范文】

Deareditor,

WiththedevelopmentandpopularityoftheInternet,onlineshoppinghasbecomemoreand

morecommoninChina.I'mwritingtosharemyviewsaboutonlineshopping.

Ontheonehand,Ibelieveifsconvenientandeconomical.Withthehelpofonlineshopping,

wecanbuythingswewantathomewithaclickofthemouseinsteadofgoingtotheshopping

mall.Besides,wemightsavemoneybycomparingthepriceofgoodssoldindifferentonline

shops.

Ontheotherhand,itmightleadtomanyproblems.Foronething,yourpackagecan'talways

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reachyouontimeduetovariousunexpectedreasons.Foranother,youcan'ttryontheclothesto

seeiftheyfityouornotlikeyoudowhenshoppinginarealshop.

AHinall,Iholdthathighschoolstudentsshouldhaveacautiousattitudetowardsonline

shoppinginordertoavoidwastingmoneyorbuyingthingsofpoorquality.

五、过渡词的应用一一例子

有的学生在作文中使用过多简单句，成了简单句堆砌；有的写复杂句时，动辄用so,and,

then,but,or,however,yet等非但达不到丰富表达方式的目的，反而使句子结构松散、呆

板。为了避免这种现象，可以通过使用不同的过渡词，不仅能够丰富句型，而且还能够把思

想表达得更清楚，意义更连贯。例如：

【例1】

TVandwebsite

TVandwebsitearepopularmedia.Theyhavesomethingincommon.Bothofthemmake

moneyfromads.Websitesalsohavedifferentsections.Youmaychoosetheoneyouaremost

interestedin.

Theyaredifferentinmanyways.MovingpicturesareshownonTVwithsoundand

interpretation.Itmakesyoufeelthatyouarejustonthespot.Theprogramschangeeveryday.

ProfessionalTVreportersdothereportforTV.

Someinformationonwebsiteschangeallthetime.Notallofitissoupdated.Everybodycan

writearticlesforwebsitesratherthanprofessionalreporter.

Everymediumhasitsownfeatures.Itishardtosaywhichisbetter.

这段文字用简单句表达，它们之间内在的逻辑关系含糊不清，意思支离破碎。如果使用过

渡词，将单句与其前后合并，形成主次关系，就把一个比较复杂的内容和关系表达得层次清

楚、结构严谨。

修改后的文章：

TVandwebsite

BothTVandwebsitearepopularmedia.Theyhavesomethingincommon.Bothofthemmake

moneyfromads.SimilartoTV,websitesalsohavedifferentsections,sothatyoumaychoosethe

oneyouaremostinterestedin.

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However,theyaredifferentinmanyways.Aboveall,movingpicturesareshownonTVwith

soundandinterpretation,whichmakesyoufeelasifyouarejustonthespot.Then,theprograms

changeeverydayandprofessionalTVreportersdothereportfbrTV.UnlikeTV,some

informationonwebsiteschangeallthetime,butnotallofitissoupdated.Inaddition,everybody

canwritearticlesfbrwebsitesratherthanprofessionalreporter.

Inaword,everymediumhasitsownfeatures,soitishardtosaywhichisbetter.

修改后的文章用过渡词来衔接上下段

第一段第一句为：BothTVandwebsitearepopularmedia.Theyhavesomethingincommon.

第二段第一句为：However,theyaredifferentinmanyways.

第三段第一句为：Inaword,everymediumhasitsownfeatures...

这篇短文每一段的第一句都是主题句，在每个主题句前使用Both...and,However,Inaword

使全文有序地衔接起来。

如果在文章中再恰当使用其他的过渡词，会使文章增色很多。

【例2】

高三学子要经历各种各样的考试，在考试中难免会遇到失利，这给同学们造成了很大的困

扰。最近，你们在英语课上就考试失利这个问题展开了讨论，请陈述讨论的结果，内容要点如下

1.考试失利的好处（两点）

2.考试失利的弊端（两点）

3.你应对考试失利的做法。

注意：1.短文必须包括所列内容；

2.词数120左右;

3.文章标题和开头已给出。

Failureinexams

As望RalLknQ型，SeniorThreestudentswillexperiencevariousexamsanditishardtoavoid

failuressometimes,whichgreatlyupsetthem.Recently,ourclasshadaheateddiscussionabout

failureinexams.JHLeixaireJheiesuks,

△\空@114缸&&3"1therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesoffailingintheexam.Generally

spcakin£iliswidelybelicYedJhatthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows,mbeginwithit

remindsstudentstodevotethemselvesmoretotheirstudies.以dd助叫■让helpsstudentsrealize

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inwhataspecttheyareweakin,thusleadingthemtoimprove.

HoweYer,somedisadvantagesmayarisefromfailureinexams.Firstly,itruinsstudents'self^

confidencesobadlythatsomeofthemevennolongerstudyhard.颉心第。侬乂teachersand

parentsshowtheirdissatisfactionwiththesestudents,whichmakesthematterworse.

E-CCawithfailuresinex孤whatIusuallydoistoturntomyteachersforhelp.Theywill

alwaysanalyzemyproblemsandgivemesomeadviceonhowtodealwiththem.Theircomfort

andencouragementmeanssomuchtome.

四、提升表达结构

1.变简单句为并列句或复合句

Naturalresourcesareverylimited.Theywillbeexhaustedinthenearfuture.ltisnottrue.Butit

becomesamajorconcernaroundtheworld.Thisisawidelyacceptedfact.

—Itisawidelyacceptedfactthatthereisamajorconcernaroundtheworldfortheexhaustionof

limitednaturalresourcesinthenearfuture,thoughitisunlikelytobetrue.

2.借用关键词汇（介词，不定式等）压缩句子长度，提升句子品味

Theflathasanareaof25squaremetresandthereisabedroom,abathroom,andakitcheninit.

Theflathasanareaof25squaremetreswithabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.

3.语态互换

Someonesawhimstudyinghardinhisstudy.

Hewasseenstudyinghardinhisstudy.

4.语序调整

Thescholardidn'twriteasinglepaperthewholeterm.

fNotasinglepaperdidthescholarwritethewholeterm.

5.强调句式

Youmustwritetomewhenyougetthere.

fDoremembertowritetomewhenyougetthere.

6.感叹及省略

Timeflieslikeanarrow,

fHowtimeflies!

Lookoutforcarswhenyouarecrossingthestreet.

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Lookoutforcarswhencrossingthestreet.

7.语气虚拟

Youdidn'ttakemyadvice,soyoufailedintheexam.

fIfyouhadtakenmyadvice,youwouldn'thavefailedintheexam.

8.非谓语动词的使用

Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.

—Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.

9.插入语

Ithinkthebookiswellworthreading.

fThebook,inmyopinion,iswellworthreading.

10.格言警句的套用

(1)Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者,事竟成。

(2)Everycoinhastwosides.凡事皆有好坏。

(3)Nopains,nogains.不劳无获。

(4)It'snevertoolatetolearn.活到老学到老。

(5)Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。

(6)Oneisnevertoooldtolearn.学无止境。

⑺Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事实胜于雄辩。

(8)Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。

11.句式调换

Hecamehereat5pmyesterday.

fHedidn'tcomehereuntil5pmyesterday.

-*Notuntil/till5pmdidhecomehereyesterday.

五、黄金模板(分析原因，提出建议型)

Nowadays,therearemoreandmoreXXinsomebigcities.Itisestimatedthat用具体数据

说明XX现象.WhyhavetherebeensomanyXX?Maybethereasonscanbelistedasfollows.

Thefirstoneisthat原因一.Besides,原因二.Thethirdreasonis原因三.Tosumup,the

maincauseofisdueto指出主要原因.

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Itishightimethatsomethingshouldbedoneuponit.Ontheonehand,解决建议一.Onthe

otherhand,解决建议二.AllthesemeasureswillcertainlyreducethenumberofXX.

【牛刀小试】书面表达

假平你是李华，请绐你的美国网友Mary写一封郃件，建议格报名参加今年7月为“5

天的四川成都熊猫饲养员（breeder）夏令营，报名问站是e内容包

括：

1.提出建议；

2.活动内容；

3.报名方式。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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范文

DearMary,

Howisitgoing?Knowingthatyou'recrazyaboutgiantpandas,Ican'twaittorecommend

toyouaninterestingandmeaningfulsummercamp-thePandaBreederSlimmerCamp.

ThecampfallsonJuly15thandlasts5daysinChengdu,Sichuan,whereyouhavebeen

dreamingoftravelling.Onthefirstday,alltheparticipantswillbegivensomebasic

panda-breedinglessons,whichwillhelptobetterperformthenexttasks.Thentheyare

scheduledtospendthefollowingfourdaysvisitingbabypandasandbreedingthemwiththe

helpofthezookeepers.Whatanamazingexperienceitwillbe!

Ifyouwouldliketoapply,pleaselogonthewebsiteandfillinyour

personalinformation.Iguaranteeyouafabuloustime.

Yours

LiHua

【牛刀小试】为了共同防控新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情，学期初教育部发布了延期开学

的通知，学生在家进行了一个多月的网