2020-2021学年 牛津必修第一册Unit4 Lesson5 Integrated skills II课件

Unit4Lookinggood,feelinggoodIntegratedskills(II)EssaywritingAnessayisabrief,non-fictioncompositionthatdescribes,clarifies,argues,oranalysesasubject.CommonkindsofessaysNarrativeessayCause-effectessayArgumentessayReactionessayComparisonessayPlanningyourwritingLearningaboutthetexttypeLearningaboutthestructureLearningaboutthelanguageASADALI2010.00.00INO.00Partsofanargumentessay

TheintroductionThebodyTheconclusionintroducethetopicdevelopthetopicbygivingdetailsconcludetheessayTheIntroductionThefirstparagraphThehook:Thehookasksaquestionorusesaninterestingobservationtocatchthereader’sattention.Theconnectingsentences:Twoorthreesentencesareusedhelpconnectthereadertothetopic.Thethesisstatement:Thethesisstatementisonesentencethattellsthereaderwhatthewriterplanstosupport,discussorproveintheessay.Inrecentyears,moreandmorepeople,especiallysomeyounggirls,choosetotakeplasticsurgeries.Wouldyouliketobecomemorebeautifulthanpeoplearoundyou?PlasticsurgeryThehookAskaquestionOfferaninterestingobservationTheconnectingsentencesThecompetitioninoursocietymakesbeautyanobsession.Withdevelopingtechnology,plasticsurgeryhassteppedintoourlife,likeamagicianwhoturnsanuglyducklingintoabeautifulswan.Someapplauditwarmlywhereasotherscriticizeandevencondemnitharshly.DifferentopinionsBackgroundinformationThethesisstatementPersonally,Iamopposedtoplasticsurgery/Iapproveoftakingaplasticsurgery,andIbasemypositiononthefollowingreasons.ThebodycConsistingofthreeorfourparagraphsBodyTopicsentence1Supportingdetails(Concludingsentence1)Topicsentence2Supportingdetails(Concludingsentence2)Topicsentence3Supportingdetails(Concludingsentence3)Argument1approvalFirst,itcanmakepeople’sappearancemorebeautiful.(Topicsentence)Accordingtothedictionary,plasticsurgerymeansthemedicalpracticeofchangingtheappearanceofpeople’sfacesorbodies,eithertoimprovetheirappearanceortorepairinjuries.Ifapersonhadanaccidentandhisfacewereinjured,plasticsurgerycouldrestorehisorherappearance.(Supportingdetails)disapprovalTobeginwith,peopledonotalwaysgetsatisfactoryresultsfromplasticsurgery.(Topicsentence)Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplehavetogobackundertheknifebecausethefirstsurgeryfailedtoproducesatisfactoryresults.Noonecanmakesurethattheresultofaplasticsurgerywillbeexactlywhatthepatientexpected.(Supportingdetails)Argument2approvalSecond,itcanmakepeoplemoreconfident.(Topicsentence)Asuccessfulplasticsurgerycannotonlychangeaperson’sappearance,butbringhimorherconfidence.Itsinfluenceontheperson’smentalitycan’tbeignored.(Supportingdetails)disapprovalInaddition,plasticsurgerycanbedangerous.(Topicsentence)Somepeoplesufferterriblepainandhaveserioushealthproblemsaftersurgery.Peopleshouldnotrisktheirhealthtochangetheirphysicalappearance.Therealproblemoftenliesinthenegativeself-imageintheirmind,ratherthanintheirbody.Insteadofhavingplasticsurgery,theyshouldfirsttrysafermethodstoimprovetheirbodyimage,suchashavingahealthierlifestyle.(Supportingdetails)Argument3approvalLastbutnotleast,plasticsurgeryenablesindividualstobecomemorecomfortableandcontentwiththemselves.(Topicsentence)Thisoftenmakesthemmoreoutgoingandincreasinglywillingtotrynewthings.Theycantakefulladvantageoflookingandfeelingtheirbestandthereforegenerallybecomehappier.(Supportingdetails)disapprovalMoreover,peoplemaygetaddictedtoplasticsurgery.(Topicsentence)Peoplehaveplasticsurgerybecausetheywanttoimprovetheirappearance.However,thereisnoperfectionafterall.Peoplewhoundergoplasticsurgeryoncetendtogetmoreoperationstochangeotherpartsoftheirbodyafterwards.(Supportingdetails)Thiskindofaddictionmayruintheirlives.(Concludingsentence)TheconclusionThelastparagraphoftheessayAsummaryofthemainpointYourresponseandpossiblesolutionsAstrongfinalsentenceForthesereasons,peopleshouldneverhaveplasticsurgery.Therefore,Ifirmlybelievethatweshouldsaynotoplasticsurgery.Iftheywanttoimprovetheirconfidenceintheirappearance,theyshouldthinkofothermethodsthatarelessrisky,suchasexercise.Tosumup,theadvantagesofplasticsurgeryoutweighitsdisadvant