2024版高考英语一轮总复习写作专题专题9人际关系课件新人教版

写作专题专题九人际关系Ⅰ．应用文写作邀请信(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1．节目介绍；2．访谈的时间和话题。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。DearCaroline，_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHuaDearCaroline，AsthepersoninchargeoftheEnglishprogramme“TalkandTalk”ofourschoolradiostation,Isincerelyinviteyoutoparticipateinourprogramme．①Itistenyearssince“TalkandTalk”wasestablished．②Thisisanamazingprogrammewhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents．Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit．Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusagreatdeal．IfyouareavailablethisFridaymorning,I,togetherwiththewhole“TalkandTalk”staff,amwaitingforyourcoming．③I'dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyinvitationintoconsideration．Lookingforwardtoyourreply．Yourssincerely，LiHua1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如inchargeof,establish,havetroubleindoingsth．,urge,distinguished,agreatdeal,available,take...intoconsideration等。2．句式美：①句Itis＋一段时间＋since...，意为“自从……以来已经……时间了”。②句where引导定语从句。③句I'dappreciateitif...意为“如果……我将不胜感激”，是表达谢意的常用句型。假定你是李华，是学校学生会主席。请你代表学生会写封邮件给外教MsBrown，邀请她参加学生会组织的英语角(EnglishCorner)活动，内容包括：1．活动时间和地点；2．活动内容和目的；3．希望外教给予指导。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMsBrown，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【参考范文】DearMsBrown，I'mLiHua,chairmanoftheStudents'Union．Representingallthestudentsinourschool,I'msincerelyinvitingyoutotakepartinoneofouractivities,EnglishCorner．TheactivityisaimednotonlytoarouseourinterestinlearningEnglishandpractiseouroralEnglish,butalsotoofferusachancetomakemorefriends．Duringtheactivity,everyone,bothteachersandstudents,shouldtalkinEnglish．Thistime,wehopeyoucanofferussomemethodsofimprovingouroralEnglish．Youarealsoexpectedtointroducesomethingaboutyourcountry．Pleasecometojoinusintheschoolgardenfrom4：00p．m．to6：00p．m．everySaturday．Lookingforwardtoyourparticipation．Yours，LiHua阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasdeepintothenightmanyyearsago．Therainjustcamepouringdownoutside．Anelderlymanandhiswifeenteredthelobby(大厅)ofasmallhotelinPhiladelphia,USA．[悬念1]Ⅱ．读后续写Tryingtogetoutoftherain,thecoupleapproachedthefrontdeskhopingtogetaroomtostayinforthenight．“Couldyoupossiblygiveusaroomhere？”thehusbandasked．Theclerk,afriendlyyoungmanwithawinningsmile,lookedatthecoupleandexplainedthattherewerethreeconferencesinthetown．“Allofourroomsaretaken，”theclerksaid．“ButIcan'tsendanicecouplelikeyououtintotherainatoneo'clockatnight．Wouldyouperhapsbewillingtosleepinmyroom?It'snotexactlyasuite,butitwillbegoodenoughtomakeyoucomfortableforthenight．”Whenthecoupledeclined,theyoungmanpressedon．“Don'tworryaboutme．I'llmakeoutjustfine，”theclerktoldthem．Sothecoupleagreed．Ashepaidhisbillthenextmorning,theelderlymansaidtotheclerk,“Youarethekindofmanagerwhoshouldbethebossofthebesthotel．MaybesomedayI'llbuildoneforyou．[悬念2]”

Theclerklookedatthemandsmiled．Thethreeofthemhadagoodlaugh．Astheydroveaway,theelderlycoupleagreedthatthehelpfulclerkwasindeedexceptional,asfindingpeoplewhoarebothfriendlyandhelpfulisn'teasy．Threeyearspassed．Theclerkhadalmostforgottenthethingwhenhereceivedaletterfromtheelderlyman．Itrecalledthatstormynight,whenheofferedhiskindhelptotheelderlycouple．Intheenvelope,therewasaround-triptickettoNewYork,andaletteraskingtheyoungmantopaythemavisit．Theyoungmandecidedtosetoutimmediately．[悬念3]注意：续写词数应为150左右。“Do

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promise

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ago？”

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_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、理清文章大意关键：Who:ayoungmanandanoldcoupleWhere:inasmallhotelWhen:onarainynightWhat:Theoldcouplewantedtosleepinthehotelforthenight．How:Theyoungmanprovidedhisownroomforthecoupletolivein．大意：文章讲述了一位年轻人在一个雨夜把自己的房间提供给一对老夫妇的故事。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考：这对老夫妇是什么来头？悬念2思考：老人是在开玩笑吗？如果是许诺，他会信守诺言吗？悬念3思考：年轻人见到老人之后会发生什么事情？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：①年轻人还记得那天晚上的事情吗？

②老人是否会解释一下那天晚上的承诺？

段首句2思考：①老人对年轻人的话会怎样回复？

②新建的宾馆在哪里？③年轻人真的会成为宾馆的经理吗？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph1：重提诺言→惊讶→解释Paragraph2：难以置信→诚恳邀请→成功“Do

you

still

remember

my

promise

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ago？”

the

elderly

man

said

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the

young

man．Theyoungmanwaspuzzledandrememberednothingofwhattheelderlymanhadsaidyearsbefore．Hejustlookedattheelderlymaninsurprise,shakinghishead．“Well，”theelderlymanwenton．“IpromisedtobuildahotelforyouwhenIleftyourhotel．Youaresokindandsohelpful．I'msureyouwillturnouttobeagoodbossinthefuture．Ihavefirmtrustinyou．“You

must

be

joking，”

the

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man

said．“I'mserious，”saidtheelderlymanwithasmilearoundhismouth．Hethenpointedtoagreatnewbuildingthere．“That，”saidtheelderlyman．“IsthehotelIhavejustbuiltforyou．Ihopeyoucantakechargeofit．”Thus,theyoungclerkbecamethefirstmanagerofthehotel．Buthehadneverexpectedtheturnofeventsthatwouldleadhimtobecomethemanagerofoneoftheworld'smostfamoushotels．1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①shakinghishead作状语，映衬出了人物心理。②Youaresokindandsohelpful两个so连用，加强了说话者的语气。2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①文章使用了insurprise,turnout,pointto,takechargeof等高级词汇。②whattheelderlymanhadsaidyearsbefore这个宾语从句的使用是一个增分点。③thatwouldleadhim...是定语从句。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AsIsatonthebuswaitingtoarriveatschool,thesunshining,Ijustsattherefullofexcitementreadytoenjoythefirstdayofspring．Atlast,thebusstoppedandIstartedmyday．ThewholedayIwaswaitingforonething,noonbreak．Asthedaypassedby,Iheardthebellringandeveryonerushedoutofthedoor．Ihurriedandatelunchjusttogetoutside．AssoonasIwasout,myclosefriend,Rileycalledmeovertoplaybasketball．Weallstartedplayingandtimeflewbyasweheardthetimekeeperyell,“10moreminutes．”Fromthatpointon,thegamespedup．Scoreafterscore,thecompetitionprocesswasmoreintense．Ipassedittomyteammate,Austin,andhedisheditbackasIpulledupashot．Ifeltasiftheworldaroundmewerebarelymoving,andallIconcentratedonwastheballgoingtothehoop(篮筐)．NotknowingIwaspushedbackhard,Ihittheground．Ahugepainenteredmyleftankle．Iwantedtoscream,butIdidn't,hearingthepeoplearoundmeshoutforhelp．IjustlaythereasRileycameovertopickmeupandAustinfetchedawheelchairfromtheschoolclinic．Bothofthemhelpedmesitonthewheelchair．ItseemedlikethewholeschoolcircledaroundmeasIwasbeingpushedaway．ThemomentweenteredtheclinicwhereIalwaysfeltnervous,Ididn'tthinkmyanklehurtasbadlyasitdidjustnow,soIsaid,“I'mokay．”Thentheyhadtosendmebacktoclasswithoutanytreatment．TherestofthedayIfeltmyankleswelling(肿)upandIthoughtofhowstupidIwastosaythatmyankledidn'thurtintheclinic．“Ishouldhavegonehome，”IthoughttomyselfasIwasthrownthroughthisterriblepain．Afterschool,Iworriedhowtogobackhome．注意：续写词数应为150左右。Just

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oil．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________