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友情类读后续写2024届高三一轮复习Continuationwriting题目呈现2题目呈现3Danielwasthenewboyinourschool.Theteacherassignedmetohim.Hecouldn’thearortalkSohehadanadultwithhim.Sheexplainedwhatprofessorswereteachinginsignlanguage.SometimesIgotcaughtstaringathimandmyfriendsteasedmeallday.Inoticedhimgoingeverywhereallalonewithnofriendsatall.SometimesIfeltworried,maybeevenconcerned.Wewereassignedaslabpartnersandsurprisinglyhewasn’tasbadasIthought.Wewouldbothsitquietlyanddoourwork.Butwhenitcametocommunicationandhistranslatorwasn’tthere.itwasamess.Atfirst,Icouldbarelyunderstandwhathewasdoingwithhishands.Icouldseeinhiseyesthathewasgettingannoyedatme.Fromtryingtocommunicatewithsignlanguagehemovedtopicturesandwords.Thatworkedwellforbothofus.butmydrawingskillswerenotasgoodashis,soIstucktowardsandgestures.题目呈现4Thesecondsemesterwentbywellandquickly.DanielandIunderstoodeachotherprettywell.Icouldunderstandsomeofhishandmovements.IrealizedthatDanielwasdifferentfromanyone.I’devermetmeincluded.Whenhesawthatpeoplecouldn’tunderstandhim,hecameupwithanotherwayofcommunicating.Hisartisticabilitywasmatchless.Thenhebecamemybestfriendandwebothunderstoodeachotherprettywelldespiteourdifferences.Duringthewinterbreak.ItriedtogetDanieltoplaysomegameswithmeand.tomysurprisehewasbetterthanIexpected.Ialsolearntalotfromhim.段首句5para1:IdecidedtolearnsignlanguagesecretlyandplannedtogiveDanielasurprise.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________para2:Danielwasnotclosewithme.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________原文分析6原文分析7Mainidea：Imetmybestfriends______1_______firstlyseemedhard_________2______(approach).__________3________webecamecloserasIspentmoretimewiththeboyandappreciatedaseriesofgoodqualitiesofhim,suchasquickwitand_______4_______(creative).________5_______(try)tounderstandDanielbetter,Idecidedtolearnsignlanguagetosurprisemyfriend.whotoapproachButcreativityTrying段首句8para1:IdecidedtolearnsignlanguagesecretlyandplannedtogiveDanielasurprise.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________para2:Danielwasnotclosewithme.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑥结尾/升华①衔接para1段首句③开启para2段首句④承接para2段首句②串联①③⑤串联④⑥段首句9para1:IdecidedtolearnsignlanguagesecretlyandplannedtogiveDanielasurprise.HowwouldIlearnsignlanguage？Wasthelearninghardforme？WhatwouldIdothen？WhileIwaskeepingasecret,whatwouldDanielthinkofme?段首句10para2:Danielwasnotclosewithme.Whatwasmyfeelingthen?WhatdidIdotoresumeourfriendship?WhatwasDaniel’sreactionwhenherealizedmyeffort?情节梳理11潜心学习-我的变化-朋友误会-采取措施-解除误会-收获更坚固的友谊在这个过程中两人可能会出现那些情绪呢？如何刻画？语言积累12伤心，难过Danielstartedtodistancehimselffromme,_________leftmefeelingsadandhurt.Heshookhisheadmiserably,tears___________(stream)downhischeeks.which定语从句streaming独立主格Tears_________(blur)hiseyesandhisheartseemedtobetorn.blurred无灵主语语言积累13内疚So___________________(embarrass)wasDanielthathecouldnotfindaproperwaytoexpresshisfeelings.__________________(overcome)byguilt,Iduckedmyheadtoavoidlookingathiminhiseyes.embarrassedSo…that…部分倒装Overcome-ed分词做伴随状语Regretfulbut_______(determine),Isummonedupcouragetosaysorry.determined二连形语言积累14轻松、愉快Asenseof___________(relieve)envelopedme.Heletoutasighof________________(relieve)andbeamedawarmsmile.relief无灵主语relief短语_________(greet)uswithabigsmile,hecontinuedhisstory.Greeting-ing分词做伴随状语范文欣赏IdecidedtolearnsignlanguagesecretlyandplannedtogiveDanielasurprise.Fromthenon,Icommittedmyselftolearningsignlanguageinsecret.Ipracticeddiligentlyeverynight,determinedtosurpriseDanielwithmynewfoundability.IdedicatedsomuchefforttolearningsignlanguagethatthereweremomentswhenDanielmistookmyfocusonthesubjectforawanderingmindinclass.ButIhadtoavoidhisquestioningeyesinthefearofspoilingmylong-brewedsurprise.JustwhenIwashappyabouttheprogressImade,Icametospotsomethingunusual.范文欣赏Danielwasnotclosewithme.Heintentionallyavoidedme.Herefusedto“talk”tomeatschoolandhehunguponmeafterclass.Oneday,Iapproachedthequietboyandgestured“I’msorry”insignlanguage.Seeingthat,hiseyeslitupwithunexpectedjoy.“Youaremybestfriendforever.”Icontinuedtosign.Hewasstunned.Iexplainedtohimmylearningplans.Hiseyesoverflowedwithtearsandhegestured,“Thefactthatwearefriendswillneverchange!”范文欣赏IdecidedtolearnsignlanguagesecretlyandplannedtogiveDanielasurprise.ThedecisiontolearnsignlanguagesecretlyinordertosurpriseDanielwasacommitmentItookseriously.Everynight,Idedicatedmyselftopracticingdiligently,soastoimpressmybestfriendwithmynewfoundability.However,myintensefocusonlearningsignlanguagesometimescausedDanieltomistakeitasalackofinterestinclass.Ihadtoevadehisinquiringgaze,fearingthatrevealingmysecretwouldspoilthesurpriseIhadplannedforsolong.范文欣赏Danielwasnotclosewithme.Daniel