特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第20练

特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第20练练中自评——在强化训练中发展自己一、语法填空Itisn'tunusualforforeignerstoexperiencesomelevelofcultureshockinChina.Thecountryisfamedfor__1__(it)uniqueculture,andyouwillhavenoshortageofnewthings__2__(explore)andlearnabout.China'sfastdevelopmentislikelytomaketheadjustmentmore__3__(comfort)formostnewarrivals.Thelanguagebarriercanbe__4__bigchallengeforforeigners.Thereareafewreasonsforthis.Apart__5__ChineseMandarin,hundredsofotherdialectsexist.Insomeruralareas,__6__(disappointing),somepeoplecan'tevenspeakMandarin.Thesecondreasonis__7__eventhoughyoungpeoplelearnEnglishnowadays,theenvironmentdoesn'tgivethemmany__8__(opportunity)touseit.Thismeansthatwhilemanypeoplecanunderstandeasyphrases,they'reoftenquiteshywhenitcomesto__9__(speak)．Peoplegenerallydon'tbothertranslatingthingsintoEnglishoutsidebigcities,wherethebiggestnumbersofforeigners__10__(find)．Assuch,it'sagoodideaforforeignerstolearnafewusefulphrasesinChinesebeforearrivinginthecountry.锁定最难的那一个——一个都不能错第1题的提示词为代词it，代词的考查往往是部分考生的易错点，但分析句子可知，介词for后接名词culture，作宾语，故其前需用形容词性物主代词its。微点：把握代词所处的位置是解决代词类问题的关键。名词前面往往使用形容词性物主代词；动词后往往使用宾格形式；如果是该代词与句子主语一致，往往使用其反身代词。二、短文改错IhavelearntthatourEnglishassociationneedsomevolunteerstomeetthevisitingBritishstudentandIwanttoapplyfortheposition.Firstly,IcanspeakfluentlyEnglishandhavelittledifficultycommunicatewithEnglishspeakers,whichwillmakemyworkeasier.Secondly,IshowagroupofAmericansaroundourcampuslastyear.Thisexperiencewillbeenablemetodobetterthisyear.ItiscertainthatIamsuitablethejob.Thirdly,mycommunicationskillwillhelpthemhavethebetterunderstandingofChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitwhileyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoaccountorgivemethechance.查找最隐蔽的那一个——一个都不能少句子成分间的并列连词是短文改错题型的一个难点。尝试从文中找到连词的误用。三、书面表达eq\a\vs4\al(体裁：邀请信)假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1．展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________评中赋能——在细节打磨中完善自己推荐最美的那一篇—一分都不能丢eq\a\vs4\al(与其理论说教不如现身说法)悟范文·背范文/在诵读中提升DearHenry，IamwritingtoinviteyoutovisitaChinesepaper-cuttingartexhibitionwithme.IknowyouhaveshownagreatinterestinChineseculture,soIbelievethisexhibitionwillbeawonderfulopportunityforus①.TheexhibitionwilltakeplaceattheCityArtGalleryfrom10thto20thSeptember.Itisconvenientlylocatedinthecitycenter,justashortwalkfromourschool.TheexhibitionwillshowcaseawiderangeofChinesepaper-cuttingartworks,highlightingtherichhistoryandculturalsignificanceofthistraditionalartform②.Additionally,therewillbedemonstrationsbyskilledpaper-cuttingartists,providinginsightsintothetechniquesandskillsinvolvedinthisuniquecraft③.Ilookforwardtoexploringtheexhibitiontogether.Yourssincerely，LiHua,学结构·学语言/在仿效中增分(一)学结构布局之妙第一段发出邀请：参加剪纸艺术展；第二段介绍展览的时间、地点及内容；第三段使用了邀请信的常用结尾句。文章层次清晰，段落划分合理，段落之间、句与句之间的衔接自然顺畅。(二)学语言表达之美1．本文准确地运用了各种时态，如现在进行时、一般现在时、一般将来时等。2．文章使用了一些高级词汇，如showagreatinterestin,takeplace,beconvenientlylocatedin,showcase,awiderangeof,additionally,demonstrations等。3．文章使用了多种高级句式，提升了作文的高度，如宾语从句(如①句)，分词短语作状语(如②③句)等。客串阅卷老师评一番—一题两用把分添eq\a\vs4\al(同一篇习作的改错与升格)DearHenry，[IamwritingtoinviteyoutoattendtheChinesepaper-cuttingartexhibitionwhichistobeheldintheartgalleryfrom8：00amto5：00pmnextSundayinourcitycenter.①][Paper-cuttingisatraditionalartforminChinaandithasahistoryofmorethan1,500years.②]Peopleoftenusepaper-cuttingtodecoratetheirhomeduringfestivalandweddings.Inthisexhibition,youcanseepaper-cuttingwithallkindsofforms.[Inaddition,somefamousartistswillperformhowtocutpaperonthespot.③]IwishthatyoucouldtakethisopportunitytolearntraditionallyChineseculturefurther.Lookingforwardtohearfromyousoon.Yourssincerely，LiHua(一)3个错误要避免1．名词单复数类错误：第三句中festival→festivals2．词性类错误：第六句中traditionally→traditional3．非谓语动词类错误：最后一句中hear→hearing(二)3个词汇抓住眼(将文中加黑词汇升级)1．usepaper-cuttingtodecoratetheirhome→beautify_their_home_with_paper-cutting2．forms→patterns3．take→grasp(三)3个句式点亮篇1．用不定式短语作定语改写①句I_am_writing_to_invite_you_to_attend_the_Chinese_paper-cutting_art_exhibition_to_be_held_in_the_art_gallery_from_8：00_am_to_5：00_pm_next_Sunday_in_our_city_center.2．用定语从句改写②句Paper-cutting_is_a_traditional_art_form_in_China,_which_has_a_history_of_more_than_1,500_years.3．用therebe句型改写③句In_addition,_there_are_some_famous_artists_who_will_perform_how_to_cut_paper_on_the_spot.语法填空答案：语篇解读：文章讲述了随着中国的快速发展，越来越多的外国人来到中国，但他们不免会产生文化冲突。1．its考查代词。介词for后接名词culture，作宾语，故其前需用形容词性物主代词its。2．toexplore考查非谓语动词。句子已有谓语have，故空格处需填非谓语动词。根据并列结构learnabout可知，空格处需填动词不定式toexplore，作定语，修饰newthings。3．comfortable考查形容词。islikelytomake之后是宾语theadjustment，空格处应用形容词comfortable和more一起构成比较级，作宾语补足语。4．a考查冠词。此处表示泛指，且big的发音以辅音音素开头，故需填不定冠词a。5．from考查介词。介词短语apartfrom为固定搭配，意为“除了……之外”。6．disappointingly考查副词。此处需填副词形式disappointingly作状语，修饰后面的整个句子。7．that考查名词性从句。系动词is后所接句子结构完整，空格处需填连接词that引导表语从句。8．opportunities考查名词复数。空格前有形容词many，故需填名词复数opportunities作动词give的宾语。9．speaking考查非谓语动词。whenitcomesto“当谈到……”，介词