特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第14练

特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第14练练中自评——在强化训练中发展自己一、语法填空Walkingisgreatforweightloss,butthebenefitsgofarbeyondfromhigherenergyandbettermoodtostressrelief,creativityboost,andmore.Whetheryou'rejusthavingadowndayoradownlife,taking__1__walkcanliftyourmoodespeciallywhenyougooutdoors.Moneyforagymmembership,homeexercise__2__(equip),workoutclothesandshoes__3__(add)uptoalot.Butitdoesn'thaveto.Walkingrequires__4__(absolute)nothingbutstillprovidesgreathealthbenefits.And__5__itcansaveisnotonlyonthings,butalsoonhealthcare.Thosewhoexercisedregularlysavedmuchmoneywhenitcametohealthcarecostscomparedtothosenotmeetingtheminimumweeklyexerciserequirements.Sleepingasolideighthoursaday__6__(be)oneofthemostimportant__7__(thing)youcandoforyourhealth.Butsometimesthat'seasier__8__(say)thantodo.Thankfully,afastwalkmaybeallyouneed.Peoplewhoexerciseregularly,includingwalking,fallasleepmorequickly,sleep__9__(long),andhavebetterqualitysleep.Walkingisalsogoodforyourbrain.Whenyouwalk,yourfoot'simpact__10__thegroundsendspressurewavesthroughthearteries(动脉)thatincreasebloodflowtothebrain.,锁定最难的那一个——一个都不能错第8题的提示词为动词。分析句子成分可知，该空所需要填的词作状语。再结合句中than可知，than前后的状语形式应保持一致。微点：抓住句中表并列、因果、转折、条件等关系的线索词有助于解题。二、短文改错MyfatherhasjustreturnedbackhomefromHubei.Hestaysthereforhalfayear.Forthefirstthreemonth,helivedinWuhanandpickedfruitatafarm,whichisawonderplace.Afterwards,hehadtomovetoYichangtofinishotherjob.ThereheworkedinelegantSichuanrestaurant.Heloveditbecauseitremindedhimofhishometown.Thisjobwashard,butthereweresomenicepeopleworkwithhim.Hereallyhadfunduringthistrip,andthatsurprisedhimmostwasthathegothiscommunicationskillsimprovegreatlyintheprocess.Hehopestogobacktheresometimesinthefuture.查找最隐蔽的那一个——一个都不能少非谓语动词的错误有时很难发现，原因可能是考生没有关注整个句子的谓语和非谓语的位置和它们的逻辑意义。解决非谓语动词的误用问题，必须找准句子的主语和谓语成分。尝试找出短文中误用的非谓语动词。三、书面表达eq\a\vs4\al(体裁：发言稿)(2023·西宁一模)假定你是李华，你校英语角将举办主题为“Sharing”的英语沙龙活动，并特邀你在活动中发言。请你写一篇发言稿谈谈分享的益处。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allinall,sharingmakesushaveabetterlife.Thankyouforlistening!评中赋能——在细节打磨中完善自己推荐最美的那一篇—一分都不能丢eq\a\vs4\al(与其理论说教不如现身说法)悟范文·背范文/在诵读中提升Goodmorning,everyone!Sharingbringsmealot.Self-confidenceisthemostpreciousthingitbringsme.AsIenteredthethirdgradeofjuniorhighschool①，Iwasinanewclass.Ioftensharedallthechangeswithmynewfriends.Thecompetitiveatmospheremademenervous.Ifailedmyexamswithlowscoresuntilmybestfriendputhishandonmyshoulder②.AfterIsharedmyfeelingswithhim③，Ifeltveryrelaxed.Hiswordsofencouragementhelpedmeregainmyconfidence.Encouragingwordscanhelppeopleinadversitytotideoverdifficulties.Allinall,sharingmakesushaveabetterlife.Thankyouforlistening！学结构·学语言/在仿效中增分(一)学结构布局之妙本文是一篇发言稿，文章的开头首先表明了分享的好处，然后正文部分又以自己的具体经历予以例证，结尾抒发感悟。文章结构紧凑，层次清晰。简单句和复合句的交替使用，使文章读起来自然顺畅。(二)学语言表达之美1．本文以一般过去时态为主，兼用一般现在时。2．短文合理准确地使用了动词(短语)、名词及形容词等详细地描述了作者与好朋友分享的经历，使读者感受真切。如precious,entered,shared,atmosphere,nervous,failed,regain,tideover等。3．短文还使用了一些复合句式，使得本文的语言表达丰富，体现了一定的文学素养，如多种时间状语从句(如①②③句)等。客串阅卷老师评一番—一题两用把分添eq\a\vs4\al(同一篇习作的改错与升格)Goodmorning,everyone![Ibenefitalotfromsharing.①][Itbringsmeamostpreciousthing—self-confidence.②]IwasinanewclasswhenIwenttoseniorhighschool.Ioftensharedallthechangeswithmynewfriends.Thecompetitiveairmademenervously.[Iwasinlowspiritswithlowscores.③][Mybestfriendcametocomfortme.④][AfterIsharedmyfeelingswithhim,Ifeltveryrelaxed.⑤]Iregainedmyconfidencewithmywordsofencouragement.Encouragingwordscanhelppeopleinadversitytoovercomedifficulties.Allinall,sharingmakesushaveabetterlife.Thankyouforlistening！(一)3个错误要避免1．冠词误用：第二句中a→the2．形容词误用：第五句中nervously→nervous3．代词的误用：第九句中mywords→his_words(二)3个词汇抓住眼(将文中加黑词汇升级)1．wentto→entered2．air→atmosphere_3．overcome→tide_over(三)3个句式点亮篇1．用定语从句合并①②句I_benefit_a_lot_from_sharing,_which_brings_me_the_most_precious_thing_—_self-confidence.2．用并列连词合并③④句I_was_in_low_spirits_with_low_scores_and_then_my_best_friend_came_to_comfort_me.3．将⑤句改为状语从句的省略结构After_sharing_my_feelings_with_him,_I_felt_very_relaxed.语法填空答案：语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了散步对身体的好处。1．a考查冠词。walk的发音以辅音音素开头，故用冠词a,takeawalk表示“散步”，为固定搭配。2．equipment考查名词。由前文agymmembership可知，此空也应填名词和前面并列。equipment表示“装备”，为不可数名词。3．adds考查时态和主谓一致。分析句子可知，此空应填谓语动词，时态和前后文保持一致，用一般现在时；此句的主语为Money，故用动词第三人称单数形式。4．absolutely考查副词。分析句子可知，此空应填副词absolutely，作状语，修饰动词requires。5．what考查主语从句。分析句子可知，空处引导的是主语从句，从句中缺宾语且指代物，故用连接代词what。6．is考查时态和主谓一致。分析句子可知，现在分词短语Sleepingasolideighthoursaday作主语，故用动词第三人称单数，且时态为一般现在时，故用is。7．things考查名词复数。oneof后面应用可数名词的复数形式。8．tosay考查非谓语动词。分析句子可知，这里考查sth.＋be＋adj.＋todo结构，动词不定式主动表被动。再结合句中than可知，