读写结合增分写作 第十五组

eq\a\vs4\al(读写结合·增分写作\b\lc\|\rc\(\a\vs4\al\co1(,,,))第十五组)自主练评——试试自己能力如何(先自主构思并写作)一、应用文写作(常考体裁：短文投稿)你校将举行英语作文比赛。请你以“BenefitsofExercisingRegularly”为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1．定期运动的好处；2.你的建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。BenefitsofExercisingRegularly二、读后续写(常考话题：成长经历)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ATurning­pointPartyThecoldsnowwasfallingasKellystruggledhomefromschoolinDecember.Howshehatedthesnowandeverythingelseabouttheplace.HowshemissedThailand.“Ihateithere!Iwanttogohome！”Kellythought.Shereachedforasmallwhiteenvelopeinherpocket.InitwasaninvitationtoJennifer'sparty.Kellydidn'twanttogo.Shefeltawkwardatthethoughtofbeingatapartywithabunchofkidsshebarelyknew.SheclosedhereyesandrememberedthistimeofyearpeoplewouldholdafestivaltothanktheMotherofWaterinThailand.Theyusedbananaleavestomakealittleboatwithacandlelitinit,madeawishforthecomingyearandsettheboatfloatingontheriver.Kellysighedandpushedopenthedoortoherparents'restaurant.Theywerebusyworking.“MaybeIshouldgojustthisonceforMamaandPapa.TheyaresoworriedthatI'mnotmakinganyfriends.”Kellywentoverandtiedanapronaroundherwaist.Asshewaswashingdishes,shetoldhermotherthatshehadbeeninvitedtoapartyonFridaynight.Mamasmiledsayingnowshemightbehappyintheirnewhome.Kellynodded,thinkingtheplacecouldneverbeherhome.OnFridayevening,PapadroveKellytotheparty.Jennifermetheratthedoorandledherintothediningroom.Sixkidsfromherclasseswereseatedaroundthetable,onwhichweresittingsmallbrowncookiehouses.Theywereselectingcolorfulcandiesandgluingthemtotheirownhouses.Wow,shelovedmakingthings.Forthispartoftheparty,shecouldbeherself.ShedecidedtodecoratehercottagelikeoneofthegoldentemplesofThailand.Asshewasmakingit,Jenniferwonderedhowshedidit.TheothersjoinedstaringatKellywithadmiration.Kellyfeltawarmglow.MaybeIcouldfitinhere—alittle,shethought.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Afterdinner,thepartywentonandthetalkturnedtothecomingholidays.Suddenly,Kellycameupwithanidea.自悟赋能——看看他人高在何处(再晨读背诵学亮点)一、背“应用文”范文——学范式、学亮点BenefitsofExercisingRegularlyDoingexerciseonaregularbasisisnecessaryinourdailylife.Everyonebenefitsfromexercisingregularly,regardlessofage,sexorphysicalability.(第一段：引出话题)Foronethingnotonlycanregularexercisehelpuskeepagoodfigure,sleepbetterandreduceourhealthrisks(notonly位于句首的倒装句),butitcanstrengthenourbonesandmuscles，thusenablingustobuildastrongbody(结果状语)．Foranother，exercisingregularlyhelpskeepourthinkingandjudgmentsharpasweage.Itcanalsoreduceourriskofdepressionandanxiety.(第二段：经常运动的好处。此段列举运动的好处，话题为考生所熟悉，但在表达时要注意逻辑层次)Personally,howeverbusyweare(让步状语从句),weshouldtryeverymeanstosparecertainamountsoftimeforexercise.Onlyinthiswaycanwestayhealthybothphysicallyandmentally(only＋状语位于句首的倒装句)．(第三段：提出个人建议)二、悟“读后续写”范文——学构思、学表达[范文一]Afterdinner,thepartywentonandthetalkturnedtothecomingholidays.EveryonetalkedaboutChristmasmerrily.However,Kellywasintotalsilence,asenseoflosscreepinguponher(独立主格结构).Jenniferseemedtorealizesomething.“Kelly,whatdoThaipeoplecelebrateatthistime？”Theotherkidsallstaredatherwithoverwhelmingcuriosity.“Well,wecelebrateagrandfestivaltothanktheMotherofWater.”Kellysaidproudly.Shelookedattheiradmiringeyes,afeelingofbelongingnessenvelopingher(独立主格结构)．Suddenly,Kellycameupwithanidea.“Whynotexperiencethebeautifulfestivaltogether？”Shesuggestedmakingboatswithlightedcandlestofloatonthelake.Everyonewasfascinatedbyit,feelingeagertocelebratesomethingexotic.Atthatmoment,KellywonderedwhetheritwastimetoforgetthewarmThailandtemporarily.Coldastheclimatewas(as引导让步状语从句用倒装),deepinherheartwasglowingwarmth.Shewouldletgoofherhomesickness,andaccepthersecondhomewholeheartedly,notonlyforherparents,butmoreimportantly,forherself.[范文二]Afterdinner,thepartywentonandthetalkturnedtothecomingholidays.WhenitwasKelly'sturn,shesmiledandsaidmostThaipeopledidn'tcelebrateChristmas.Instead,theywouldmakeboatstothanktheMotherofWater.Allfriendsweregazingatherwithgreatcuriosity.Kellyfeltsogoodastherewassomuchforfittingin.Jenniferthenremarkedcautiouslythatshedidn'tdaretobotherKelly(宾语从句)becauseKellyalwayskepttoherself(原因状语从句)althoughshehadbeendy