浙江省z20联考读后续写-父子俩冰释前嫌讲义

题目JeffandIhadmanyconversationsduringtheyear,butIwillalwaysrememberthetimehetoldmeabouthisfamily.Hisfather,asuccessfulphysician,wascoldandstrictinJeff’swords.HisfatherhadevenpavedthewayforJefftoattendthesamecollegefromwhichhehadgraduated.Jeffwastwenty-sevenandasuccessfulbusinessplanneratacompanywithoutadegree.Hispassionwasskiing.Whenhegraduatedfromhighschool,hedecidedtodeclinehisfather'sofferand,instead,toworkwithaskipatrol(滑雪巡逻队).Withpaininhiseyes,Jefftoldmehestillrememberedthedaywhenhetoldhisfatherhewasgoingtogiveupcollegeandtakeajobataskiresort.HearingJeff’sdecision,hisfatherlookedoffintothedistance.ThencamethewordsthatstillechoedinJeff’smind:“Youlazykid.Nosonofmineisgoingtoworkwithaskipatrolanddoesnotattendcollege.Ishouldhaveknownyou’dneveramounttoanything!”Thetwohadnotspokensincethatconversation.Later,hewasbackintheareanearwherehegrewupandhecertainlydidnotwanthisfathertoknowhewasattendingcollege.Hewasdoingthisforhimself,notforhisfather.Hesaiditoverandoveragain.Jeff’ssisterhadalwaysremainedsupportiveofJeff’sdecisions.Shestayedincontactwiththeirfather,butJeffhadmadeherpromisethatshewouldnotshareanyinformationabouthislifewithhim.Thedaywhenthegraduationceremonycame,Iwalkedaroundtalkingtopeoplebeforeitstarted.Inoticedamanwithaconfusedexpression.“Excuseme,”hesaidashepolitelyapproachedme.“Whatishappeningheretoday?”“It’sgraduationday,”Ireplied,smiling.“Well,that’sodd,”hesaid,“mydaughteraskedmetomeetheratthisaddress.”Hiseyessparkledandhesmiled.“Maybeshecompletedherassociate’sdegreeandwantedtosurpriseme!”Ihelpedhimfindaseat.Paragraph1:AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname’sDr.Holstrom.”Paragraph2:Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.情节分析:Jeff一名成功的商业规划通，高中毕业生后想去滑雪巡查队工作。Jeff的爸爸Dr.Holstrom，一名内科医生，却希望他能上大学子承父业。两个人因此不欢而教，不见面。后来，处于内心的考量而非爸爸的建议，Jeff还是上了大学。在毕业典礼之际，善解他意的姐姐，一直也是他和爸爸之间的bridge邀请爸爸来到此处。虽然不知道为什么，他还是来了，并且碰到了我。人物身份:Jed:主要人物，想放弃大学，最后还是大学毕业。Dr.Holstrom:主要人物，因为儿子Jeff的不上大学而心生怨念，不与儿子说话Sister:次要人物，爸爸的弟弟见沟通的桥梁，两人和好的调停者。I:旁观者语言学习:1.对...要求严格bestrictwithsb.insth.2.为...铺平道路pavethewayfor...3.拒绝爸爸的意愿declinedad'soffer4.滑雪场skiresort5.眺望远方lookintothedistance6.回响在脑海echoinone'smind7.有所成就/作为amounttosomething8.反复地overandoveragain,repeatedly9.仍旧支持某人remainsupportiveof...10.毕业典礼graduationceremony11.一副迷惑的表情apuzzled/confusedexpression情节构建:(可以有多种思路)Paragraph1:AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,mynameisDr.Holstrom”Q1:Hearingthename,whatpoppedintomymind?(动作心理活动)02:WhatdidIdotoconfirmmyassumption03:DidIrevealthetruth?(动作+心理)04:Howtomovelogicallytoparagraph2Paragraph2:Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.Q1:AndwhatwasDrHolstrom'sreactionsatthesight?01:WhatdidJeffdoonthestage?02:Howdidjeffspothisfatherandwhatdidhedo?(情感+动作)Q3:Howdidthefatherandhissoninteract?(ending)(情节动作+情感动作+内心活动)参考范文：AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname’sDr.Holstrom.”

Thenameringinginmymind,Ifrozeonthespot.JeffHolstrom!Couldthisbethecold,sternfatherwhodemandedhissonattendcollegeorneverenterhishomeagain?Curiosityanddoubtbubblingup,IturnedaroundtogetaglimpseofDr.Holstrom,attemptingtofindsomefacialresemblances.Beamingandscanning,Dr.Holstromseemedtobelookingforhisdaughter.Speechesgiven,thedeanbegantoreadthenamesofthegraduates,invitingthemontothestageonebyonetoreceivetheirdiplomas.(89w)Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.

Havingreceivedhisdiploma,heturnedtowardtheaudience,radiantwithjoy.Suddenly,alonefigurepoppedintohiseyes

–Dr.Holstrom.IwasnotsurehowJeffspottedhiminthecrowd,butIcouldtelltheireyesmet.Dr.Holstrom,gazingatJeffthoughtfullyforafewseconds,openedhisarmsasiftoembracetheairaroundhim.Foramomenttimeseemedtostandstill.Jeffcamedown,smilingwithtearsineyes.“Myfatherishere,”hewhisperedtome,“IthinkI’mgoinghome.”(90w)默写版：AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname’sDr.Holstrom.”

Thenameringinginmymind,_____________我僵在了原地.JeffHolstrom!________________这就是那个冷漠严厉的父亲吗whodemandedhissonattendcollegeorneverenterhishomeagain?________________(好奇心和怀疑不断涌现,IturnedaroundtogetaglimpseofDr.Holstrom,______________________试图找到面部的相似性.Beamingandscanning,Dr.Holstromseemedtobelookingforhisdaughter.Speechesgiven,thedeanbegantoreadthenamesofthegraduates,________________________邀请他们一个接一个地上台领取文凭.(89w)Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.

__________________收到文凭证书,heturnedtowardtheaudience,radiantwithjoy.Suddenly,________________________一个熟悉地身影跃入他的眼帘–Dr.Holstrom.IwasnotsurehowJeff__________________在人群中发现他,butIcouldtelltheireyesmet.Dr.Holstrom,_______________________所有所思地盯着Jeff好几秒,openedhisarmsasiftoembracetheairaroundhim._________________片刻之间，时间仿佛静止了.Jeffcamedown,smilingwithtearsineyes.“Myfatherishere,”______________他低声对我说,“IthinkI’mgoinghome.”(90w)下水文：AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname’sDr.Holstrom.”Hearingthevoicewhichsoundedsofamiliar.Istoppedmystepsandturnedback,Holstrom!JeffHolstrom!CanthemanbeJeff’sself-centeredfatherwhodemandedthatJeffattendcollege?”Icouldn'tbelievemyears.CuriouslyIsteppedforwardandacloserlookattheman'sappearanceconfirmedmyassumption.Hewas!Atthis,Iinstinctivelywantedtorevealthelong-kepttruthtohimbutatasecondthoughtIroughlyguessedJeffssister'sintention:maybesheabigsurprise.SoIdidnothing,simplywaitingwantedformyturntocrossthestage.There.afterthepresidentdeliveredacongratulatoryspeech,eachstudentsteppedontothestagetoreceivetheirdiplomas/certificates.Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.Hisappear