读后续写亲情类为母亲准备蛋糕并打扫卫生讲义-高三英语二轮复习

读后续写的提升是学生自己写出来的，更是学生自己修改出来的。写是输出，要能写出来，就要先输入，也就是学生的知识体系中需要有素材，和相应的表达方式。读英文名著，是最有效的输入方式之一。名著中的表达方式就是学生需要的。例如，形容在很饿的情况下看见了食物，你会怎么写？eatitasquicklyaspossible,或者atethemwithinafewminutes。那么你考虑过wolfdown？或者heswallowedthebrandyandatethefoodlikeahuntedanimal。这表达方式来自HarryPotterandthePhilosopher'sStone和Great.Expectations。【续写故事】Itwasanearlywintermorning.Joanwassleeping

soundlywhenthephonerunginthelivingroom.Shemilledoverandglancedattheclockonthewall--itwasalreadynineo'clock.Everyweekendmorning,hermotherhadtoworkpart-timeinthecafe.AlthoughJoanwasstillsleepy.sheknewshehadtogetup.Afterall,shedidn'texpectherbrotherMike,whowassleepinglikealog,tohearthephone.Shequietlywentovertothelivingroom.Whenshepickedupthereceiver,ontheotherendcamethewarmheartedgreetings,“Goodmorning,myDear!”

Recognizingthevoicefromherfather,Joanwasimmediatelysurroundedbyasenseofjoyandthesleepinesssweptaway.那是一个初冬的早晨。琼正在酣睡，这时客厅里的电话响了。她转过身来，瞥了一眼墙上的钟——已经九点钟了。每个周末早上，她的母亲都要在咖啡馆做兼职。尽管琼仍然很困。她知道她必须起床。毕竟，她没想到睡得像木头一样的哥哥迈克会听到电话。她悄悄地走到客厅。当她拿起听筒时，另一端传来了温暖的问候：“早上好，亲爱的！”琼认出了父亲的声音，立刻被一种喜悦包围，睡意一扫而空。Joan'sfatherwasaseaman,whorarelycameback.Workingontheseawasreallyhard.Born

inanot-richfamily,JoanandMikefeltthestressoflifebuttheywerehappytoenjoythefamilyatmosphere.Atschool,theywerestraight-Astudentsthroughouttheacademiccareerandactivelyinvolvedinschoolactivities.Theybecametheprideoftheschoolandtheenvyofthestudents.琼的父亲是一名海员，很少回来。在海上工作真的很辛苦。琼和迈克出生在一个并不富裕的家庭，他们感受到了生活的压力，但他们很乐意享受家庭的氛围。在学校，他们在整个学术生涯中都是全优学生，并积极参与学校活动。他们成了学校的骄傲，也成了学生们羡慕的对象。“Goodmorning,Dad,what'sup?”

Joansaidinaneasytone.“Ihavebeenverynicerecently,mybaby.Todayisyourmother'sbirthday,andIhaveorderedheracakeonlineanditshouldcometothehouseinoneandhalfanhour.

Doremembertotakethecake.”“早上好，爸爸，怎么了？”琼轻松地说。“我最近过得很好，我的宝宝。今天是你妈妈的生日，我在网上给她订了一个蛋糕，应该在一个半小时后送到家里。记得把蛋糕拿走。”Hearingherfather'swords,Joanfeltalittleashamed.HowshecouldforgetMum'sbirthday!Shetookaglanceatthedirtyclothespiledonthesofaandtheoilyfloorthathadn'tbeenmopped(拖地)forafewdays--Therewastwohoursbeforehermothercameback.ShecalculatedtheyhadenoughtimetoprepareasurpriseforMum.听到父亲的话，琼感到有点惭愧。她怎么会忘记妈妈的生日！她瞥了一眼沙发上堆着的脏衣服和还没拖地的油地板(拖地)过了几天——过了两个小时她妈妈才回来。她估计他们有足够的时间给妈妈准备一个惊喜。Thinkingofthis,shefeltfullofexcitement.“Well,Dad,nowI'mgoingtowakeMikeup.WewillgiveMumasurprise!"想到这里，她感到非常兴奋。“好吧，爸爸，现在我要叫醒迈克。我们会给妈妈一个惊喜！”JoanhungupthephonewithDad,andhurriedlywenttoMike'sroomtosharehimherBigCleaningplan.AfterlisteningtoJoan,Mikereadilyacceptedheridea.琼挂断了爸爸的电话，匆匆忙忙地去迈克的房间和他分享她的大扫除计划。听了琼的话，迈克欣然接受了她的想法。TheBigCleaningplanbegan._________________Withthecakeplacedonthetable,Mumcamein._____【名著情景】1.Amyhadtowashthecupseverymorning,andcleanthespoons,theteapotandglasses.Shethenmustdusttheroom,thenAuntMarch’sbirdmustbefed,thedogcombedandtentripsadayupstairstogetthingsforMrs.March.Afterthetiresomework,shemustdoherlessons,thenshewasallowedonehourofexerciseorplay.2.WhileMrs.Marchtookoffhercoatandshoes,thegirlsranabout,tryingtomakethingscomfortablefortheirmother.Megarrangedtheteatable,Jobroughtwoodforthefire,andBethwalkedaroundthekitchen,quietandbusy,whileAmygavedirectionstoeveryone,asshesatatthetable.Astheygatheredaroundthetable,Mrs.Marchsaid,withaparticularlyhappyface,

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I’vegotatreatforyouafterdinner.”3.“Givethemallmydearloveandakiss.TellthemIthinkofthemallday,anddreamofthematnight.AyearseemsverylongtowaitbeforeIseethem,butremindthemthatwhilewewaitwemayallwork,sothattheseharddaysarenotwasted.IknowtheywillrememberallIsaidtothem,thattheywillbelovingchildrentoyouandIwillbefonderandprouderthaneverofmylittlewomen.”以上段落均来自LittleWomen。【下水作文】TheBigCleaningplanbegan.JoantookchargeofwashingthedirtyclotheswhileMikestartedtosweepthefloor.Therewereatonofclothes,which

madeJoantiredandsweaty.TheoilyfloorleftMikeexhausted,too.Theythoughtofmother---shedidthehouseworkbyherselfeverydayandhadtodopart-timejob.They

feltmoreashamed.Sotheyweredeterminedto

dustthewholeroom

everywhere.Atthesametimetheymanagedto

prepareagreattreatfor

mother.Thenthecakewasdeliveredontime.Withthecakeplacedonthetable,Mumcamein.

Mikehurriedto

putslippers

beforemotherwhileJoanimmediatelytookoveralltheitemsfrommother'shands.“Oh,myhoney,thank

youverymuch.”

saidmothersmilingly.Onturningbackandseeingthebrightandneathouse,

shestoodrootedtothespotforaminute.

Movedanddelighted，shegaveasweetkissaJoanandMike.Joanpointedthecaketotellmotherthatthiswasfather'sloveforher.

Greattearsswaminmother’seyes.

Beforeenjoyingthelunch,theytogethersurroundedthephoneandmadeacalltotheirfather,

sharingthefeelingsoflongingandmissing.默写版：TheBigCleaningplanbegan.JoantookchargeofwashingthedirtyclotheswhileMikestartedtosweepthefloor.Therewereatonofclothes,______________这让她很累并且汗流浃背。TheoilyfloorleftMikeexhausted,too.Theythoughtofmother---shedidthehouseworkbyherselfeverydayandhadtodopart-timejob._________________她感到更加羞愧。Sothey_________________________________决心把整个房间的灰尘打扫干净.Atthesametime______________________________