读后续写制作非同寻常的蛋糕讲义浙江省台州名校联盟2023-2024学年高三上学期12月考试英语试题分析

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Theairwasgettingcooler.Theleaveswerestartingtofallfromthetreesthatlinedthestreets.AsNicolewalkedfromschooltothesmallbakeryshophermotherhadjuststarted,shebuttonedhersweaterandlookedupintothebluesky.Hermotherexpectedhertowalkthethreeblocksfromschool,butshewasalwaysstandingonthestepsofherbakeryshop,wavingandwaitingforNicole.空气越来越冷了。街道两旁的树开始落叶。当妮可从学校走到她妈妈刚开的小面包店时，她扣上毛衣，抬头望向蓝天。她的母亲希望她从学校走三个街区，但她总是站在面包店的台阶上，挥手等待妮可。Nicolealwaystoldaboutherdayashermompouredasmallglassofmilk.Afterhersnack,Nicolepletedherhomeworkandthenwasallowedtohelpinthebakery.Recently,hermothertaughtherhowtofrost(给糕饼覆上糖霜)anddecoratecupcakes.Nicolelovedtopipe,orsqueeze,thecolorfulfrostingthroughthepastrytubeontothetopsofminiaturecakes.Shelovedhearingthecustomers'reactionstoherdesigns.妮可总是在妈妈倒一小杯牛奶时讲述自己的一天。吃完零食后，妮可完成了家庭作业，然后被允许在面包店帮忙。最近，她妈妈教她如何结霜(给糕饼覆上糖霜)和装饰纸杯蛋糕。妮可喜欢用管道把五颜六色的糖霜通过糕点管挤到微型蛋糕的顶部。她喜欢听顾客对她的设计的反应。ForaslongasNicolecouldremember,shelovedart.Sheimpressedherteacherseveryyearwithwatercolorpaintingsandclaysculptures.Shehadwontheschool'sartcontesttwoyearsinarowandwasworkingonthisyear'sprojectwhenshebegandecoratingcupcakes.Nicolehadneverconsideredbakingtobeanartformuntilnow.Shecouldseehowherintricateandimaginativecreationswereinspiringtohermother'scustomers.从妮可记事起，她就热爱艺术。她每年都用水彩画和泥塑给老师留下深刻印象。她已经连续两年赢得了学校的艺术考试，当她开始装饰纸杯蛋糕时，她正在做今年的项目。直到现在，妮可从未考虑过烘焙是一种艺术形式。她可以看到她复杂而富有想象力的创作是如何激励她母亲的顾客的。Nicolewasstrugglingandhavingadifficulttimethinkingofsomethingoriginalforthisyear'sartcontest.Therulesstatedthattheprojectsimplyhadtobecreatedentirelybythestudent,withoutanyadulthelp.Therewerenorestrictionsonsizeormaterials.妮可一直在努力，很难想出今年艺术比赛的原创作品。规则规定，该项目必须完全由学生创建，没有任何成人帮助。尺寸或材料没有限制。注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Asshesatanddecoratedachocolatecupcakewithsmallanimalshapesforachild'sbirthdayparty,Nicolehadanincredibleidea.Onthenightoftheartshow,Nicole’soversizedcupcakebroughtsurprisedlooksfromherfriends,teachers,andthecontestjudges.

文本分析：故事大意放学后，妮可完成了家庭作业，然后被允许在面包店帮忙。最近，她妈妈教她如何给糕饼覆上糖霜和装饰纸杯蛋糕。虽然从小热爱艺术，直到现在，妮可从未考虑过烘焙是一种艺术形式。她已经连续两年赢得了学校的艺术考试，当她开始装饰纸杯蛋糕时，她正在做今年的项目。可她怎么也想不出一个好的创意。续写情节发展：续写第一段就是这样！“她大声地说。第二天放学后，她让母亲教她如何制作纸杯蛋糕和糖霜。如果规则规定整个项目必须在没有帮助的情况下制作，她就必须自己完成。妮可花了几个小时仔细地测量配料，她的第一批纸杯蛋糕非常完美。为了制作出她想象中的可食用画布，妮可必须做一些数学运算。她把面糊翻了一番，在一个大圆锅里做了一个巨大的纸杯蛋糕。她在巨大的糖果上涂上糖霜，然后开始工作，把她的艺术作品从一个简单的草图转移到糖霜上。续写第二段妮可在解释自己的创作过程时面带骄傲，强调了艺术与烘焙在她的项目中的和谐。评委们不仅对技术技巧印象深刻，而且对两种看似截然不同的创造力的创新融合印象深刻。烘焙纸杯蛋糕的香气在房间里飘来飘去，为体验增添了另一层感官。妮可的巨型纸杯蛋糕为她赢得一等奖后，她的母亲为她的艺术项目切蛋糕并提供服务。大家一致认为它的味道和看上去一样好。官方范文，Asshesatanddecoratedachocolatecupcakewithsmallanimalshapesforachild'sbirthdayparty,Nicolehadanincredibleidea."That'sit!"shesaidoutloud.Thenextdayafterschool,sheaskedhermothertoteachherhowtomakethecupcakesandfrosting.Iftherulesstatedthattheentireprojecthadtobemadewithouthelp,shewouldhavetodoitallherself.Nicolespenthoursmeticulouslymeasuringtheingredientsandherfirstbatchofcupcakesturnedoutperfect.Tocreatetheediblecanvasshewasimagining,Nicolewouldhavetodosomemath.Shedoubledthebatterandmadeonegiantcupcakeinalargeroundpan.Shefrostedhergiantconfectionandthenwenttowork,transferringherartworkfroma

simplesketchtothefrosting.Onthenightoftheartshow,Nicole'soversizedcupcakebroughtsurprisedlooksfromherfriendsteachers,andthecontestjudges.

Nicolebeamedwithprideassheexplainedhercreativeprocess,emphasizingtheharmonyofartandbakinginherproject.Thejudgeswereimpressednotonlybythetechnicalskillbutalsobytheinnovativefusionoftwoseeminglydistinctformsofcreativity.Thearomaofthebakedcupcakeswaftedthroughtheroom,addinganothersensorylayertotheexperience.AfterNicole'sgiantcupcakeearnedherthefirstprize,hermothercutandservedherartproject.Everyoneagreedthatittastedasgoodasitlooked.参考范文一，Asshesatanddecoratedachocolatecupcakewithsmallanimalshapesforachild'sbirthdayparty,Nicolehadanincredibleidea.

Shecouldbineherpassionforartandherskillsincakemakingtocreateacupcakethatnoonehadeverseen.Nosoonersaidthandone.Withgreatdevotionandexcitement,sheburiedherselfinthedesigns.Itwasafternumerousdraftsthatshehadabrilliantdesign.Thenaccordingtothecontestrules,shelockedherselfinthekitchenandattemptedtomakethecakeonherown.Itwasharderthanshehadimaginedandthecakewasn’tsolidenoughtobelikewhatshewasthinking.However,themorechallengingthetaskwas,themoreexcitedanddevotedshebecame.Finally,afterdaysoffailuresandredoing,Nicolesucceededinmakingherdreamcupcake.

Onthenightoftheartshow,Nicole’soversizedcupcakebroughtsurprisedlooksfromherfriends,teachers,andthecontestjudges.

Itwasmoreanartcraftthanacake.Itsvividcolors,appealingaroma,andthefabulousdesignallmadepeoplefrozeninaweandappreciation.Butwhatimpressedpeoplewashertalentembodiedinthecupcake.Thejudgedallgavehighscorestoherandtheheadmastertoldherthatshewouldbetheprideofthistown.Undoubtedly,Nicolewasthewinner,whichwonlaughterandcheersfromeveryonepresent.Attheendofthepetition,Nicolewasgenerousenoughtocutofftheoversizedcupcakeandshareditwitheverybody.Thecupcakenotonlyfeastedtheaudience’seyesbutalsotheirstomaches.Whatageniusandwhatanunforgettablepetitionnight!参考范文二，Asshesatanddecoratedachocolatecupcakewithsmallanimalshapesforachild'sbirthdayparty,Nicolehadanincredibleidea.

Sherealizedthatshecouldmergeherpassionforartwithhernewfoundskillsinbaking.Thecupcakedecorationprocesssparkedherimagination,andsheenvisionedcreatingalargerthanlifecupcakesculpturefortheupingartcontest.Withouthesitation,shedevotedherselfinthekitchentothecreationofherdreamcake.Occasionally,hermomwouldknockandaskwhethersheneededhelp,butNicolerefusedeverytimebecauseshewasalsocuriouswhetherh