读后续写专题第10章如何进行高分替换讲义-高三英语作文写作复习

读后续写之高分替换小词小句替换&形容词副词◆替换三要点:1、换词性:e.g.动词=其名词形式的动宾短语2、高分替换词:高中短语/小词/句式3、叠词(加形容词副词):加形容词:在名词前，生动形象/细节加副词:在动词/形容词前后，加强程度复合叠词:叠两/三词，叠动宾替换三要点:1、换词性可变形词的不同词性用法:➢delight(n.快乐开心;v.使快乐);delighted(adj.快乐的)2，Asenseofdelightenvelopedthemotherasshereceivedthesurprise.(名词)当母亲收到了惊喜时,一种喜悦感笼罩着她。.Delightedandtouched,themotherheldthetwinsinherarmstightly.(动词分词)感到欣喜若狂和感动的，母亲紧紧地抱着双胞胎。Thethoughtofwarmthbroughtbythetwinsgreatlydelightedher.(动词)一想到双胞胎带来的温暖，她就非常高兴。2、高分替换词①常用结尾升华词:the+adj.+story那个..的故事theadventure那次冒险经历theincident那事故theoccurrence发生的事情thepractice那次实践the+adj.+experience那次..的经历whathadhappened已发生的事whathadoccurred发生的事thehappenings已发生的事thewholeprocess整个过程②常用环境词汇:the+adj.+creature那..的生物the...animal那..的动物that..beast那..的野兽theatmosphere氛围thevehicle车辆/交通工具形容词可用:nameless/unknown/scaryfierce凶猛的/strong强壮的/violent暴力的(同.上)thesurroundings周围thetransportation交通工具.③常用词汇替换:WayAboutManyImportantenoughmethod方法/approach方法/strategy策略/measure措施regarding/concerning/associatedwith/asto关于numerous无数的/countless无数的/loadsof大量/许多significant重大的;vital/crucial至关重要的;essential基本的sufficient充足的;adequate足够的;abundant丰富veryxtremely非常地;considerably相当(大/多)地;quite相当地amazingly/surprisingly惊人地;unbelievably难以置信地overwhelmingly压倒性地;tremendously非常/异常地goodremarkable了不起的;outstanding杰出的;splendid出色的incredible惊人的;extraordinary非凡;exceptional特别/优等admirable令人钦佩的;respectable可敬的3、叠词(加形容词副词)(勿过度使用)(1)加形容词:名词前(生动形象/细节)●thehungry/angrywolf饥饿/愤怒的狼●thefierce/violentbear:入凶猛/暴力的熊●Facegleamedwithsurpriseddelight,Peterfailedtoutteraword.脸上闪耀着惊讶的喜悦，彼得一句话也说不出来。(2)加副词:动词/形容词前(加强程度)●Thenightwindhowledruthlessly,namelesscreaturesmurmuredfrequentlyinthedark,andthemoonlightshoneweaklyontheground.夜风无情地呼啸着，无名生物在黑暗中频频地喃喃自语，月光微弱地照在地上。(3)叠词(名词/动宾)(叠两/三词)●Theimmediateapproachprovedpracticalandeffective.眼前的办法证明是切实可行的。●Meanwhile,thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,addedacardtheyhadmadeandwalkedoutofthekitchen.与此同时，双胞胎准备了早餐托盘,加了张他们制作的卡片，走出厨房。●Sowesetofftothemoviestogether,boughtourtickets,popcornanddrinksandsettleddownfortably.于是我们一起去看电影，买了票、爆米花和饮料,安顿下来。叠词语料库①高分形容词：好的（正向/事情）方法做法effective有效的;practical实用的;fruitful富有成效的;constructive建设性的/有助益的;，beneficial有利的；advantageous有利的;有好处的;.favourable有利的经历故事meaningful有意义的;significant重大/影响深远的;worthwhile值得的;beworthdoing值得做....valuable有价值的;.precious宝贵的;priceless无价的人真善美admirable令人钦佩的;值得赞赏的respectable值得尊敬的①高分形容词：事物动物环境（极端类）动物:fierce凶猛的/狂热的烈的;violent暴力的天气/环境:raging猛烈的/狂暴的(aragingstorm/thunder)环境:wild暴风雨的(wildweather)动物环境（柔和）gentle温柔的;mild温和的;calm平静的;delicate细膩/柔和的;peaceful平和的;warm温暖的;moderate/balmy温和的①高分副词：好好地做...appropriately/properly适当地;reasonably合理地;好好地做..pletely/thoroughly彻底地/全面地;inapropermanner以恰当的方式经常地（频率）regularly经常地/规律地;frequently经常地;constantly不断地;inaregularmanner有规律地很少/偶尔（频率）rarelydosth很少做某事;occasionally偶尔地dosthonceinawhile偶尔做某事;动物天气心情fiercely猛烈地;violently猛烈地;wildly疯狂地intensely强烈地/剧烈地;rheatedly激烈地(说)overwhelmingly压倒地/无法抵抗地;uncontrollably不可控加强程度actually实际上;indeed确实;obviously/apparently明显地;undoubtedly毫无疑问地p