读后续写个人成长类-GiftsforJace讲义高考英语一轮复习

阅读部分I'llneverforgetthedaythatoneofmyfifthgradestudents,Jace,shylyraisedhishandandsaidthathehadneverreceivedagiftduringreadingdiscussions.Jace'shonestysurprisedme.Whatwasevenmoreeyeopeningwasthefactthattheboyhadgonetenyearsandneverexperiencedthejoyandsurpriseofreceivingapresent.Itriedtosearchareasonthathemightbesayingthis.ThenIrememberedhisstory.Hismotherwasoutofthepictureandhelivedalonewithhisdad.Hisfatherhadahardtimeholdingdownajob,andetothinkofit,Ididn'tseehisfatheratenrollment(注册)orparentteacherconferences.AcoupleofweeksafterJace'sment,hewasabsentfromschool.ThishappenedtobethedayIwassendinghometheannualnoteabouttheclassroomChristmasgiftexchange.Traditionally,eachboywastobringagiftforaboyinthethreedollarrangeandthesamewastrueforeachgirl.Aswewerediscussingthespecifics,agirlraisedherhandandsuggestedthatwedoawaywithourtraditionalpolicy,andeachbuyagiftforJaceinstead.TheenthusiasmgrewasthestudentsdiscussedthekindsofthingstheyknewJacewouldlike.Wetookaquickvoteandunanimously(意见一致地)agreedtogoaheadwiththiswonderfulidea.Withgreatexcitement,thegiftsbegantoein.Studentswithbrighteyeswouldeagerlytellmehowtheyfoundthe“perfectgift”andhowtheirparentsspentmorethanthreedollarsonJace'sgift!Asthegiftspouredin,Irememberbeingsoproudofmythoughtful,selflessstudentswhoweretrulyshowingthespiritofChristmas.Afterseveraldaysofabsences,youcanimagineourdisappointmentwhenwelearnedthatJace'sabsenceswereduetothefactthathehadmovedaway!Iwassureofonething.Icouldn'tletmystudentsorJacedown.Ifoundmyinformationsheetandcalledeverynumberlisted.Apparently,Jace'sfatherhadlosthisjob,causingthemtorelocate.Nooneknewwheretheywere,andthecellphonenumberIhadwouldringwithnoresponsedespitemycontinuousefforts.EvenintoourChristmasvacation,Iconstantlygavethephonenumberashot.P1：Finally,at9：30PMonChristmasEve,Idecidedtotryonelasttime.P2：AsIdrovedowntheroadtoJace'shouse,Isawtheporchlightofhisfather'strailer(拖车式房屋)signalingwhichhomewashis.阅读主要信息时间：晚上地点：我的家；Jace家门外；Jace

家情绪：“我”失望，但又很期待；

Jace

失落事件背景：

Jace

未曾收到过礼物，“我”和同班同学制作了礼物，打算在圣诞节时送给Jace。但是在圣诞前夕，可能是因为Jace爸爸的失业，全家搬走，无法联系Jace具体事件：

圣诞前，我打算再打一次，做最后的尝试P1：Finally,at9：30PMonChristmasEve,Idecidedtotryonelasttime.此段主要内容：打通，获悉地址，前往送礼物粗线条情节：1.

我打

（动作链）2.

被人接（情绪）3.

我介绍情况（情绪）4.

他告知地址

（心理活动）5.

我驱车前往

（情绪）添加细节，扩展粗线条1.

ItookadeepbreathanddialedJace'sfather'snumberagain,hopingforadifferentoutethistime.2.

Thephonerang,andjustasIwasabouttoresignmyselftoanotherunsuccessfulattempt,atiredandslightlygruffvoiceanswered.“Hello?”3.

MyheartracedasIhurriedlyintroducedmyselfandexplainedthesituation,emphasizingthethoughtfulgestureofmystudentswhohadpreparedgiftsforJace.

4.

Therewasabriefsilenceontheotherend,andthenJace'sfatherexpressedamixtureofgratitudeandregret,providingmewiththeaddressoftheirtemporaryresidence5.

Delightedly,IgatheredthebeautifullywrappedgiftsanddrovetoJace'snewhomeP2:AsIdrovedowntheroadtoJace'shouse,Isawtheporchlightofhisfather'strailer(拖车式房屋)signalingwhichhomewashis.1.

我停车，敲门

（动作链）2.

（）迎接我3.

Jace收到礼物4.

告别5.

升华（扣题）成文Iparkedmycarnearbyandmademywaytothedoor,giftsinhand.Amomentlater,afterIknockedonthedoor,Mr.Johnsonopeneditwithatiredyetwelingsmile.Jacepeekedoutfrombehindastackofmovingboxes.Hiseyeswidenedwithsurpriseandcuriositywhenhesawthewrappedgifts.Heeagerlytoreopenthegifts,agenuinesmiletuggedatthecornersofhislips,growingwideruntilitstretchedacrosshisface.AsIsteppedoutofthetrailer,theporchlightcontinuedtoglow,whichseemedtotakeonanewsignificancethesimpleactofkindnessfromagroupoffifthgradershadbroughtwarmthandhopetoafamilyinneed.参考答案：Finally,

at9:30PMonChristmasEve,Idecidedtotryonelasttime.

By

then

Ireallydidn'tworryaboutcallingatalatehour.IwassousedtonoanswerthatIwasstartledtoheararesponse.Amazingly,

Jaceansweredthephone!IexplainedthestorytoJaceandtoldhimhowhisclassmatesreallywantedtodothisforhim.IspokewithhisfatherandthenextthingIknew,IwasdrivingtoJace'shome.AsIdrovedowntheroadtoJace'shouse,Isawtheporchlightofhisfather'strailer(拖车式房屋)signalingwhichhomewashis.IwasthrilledtoseeJace.

Ittookseveraltripsbackandforthtomycartogetallofthegiftsinside.Wefilledtheroomwithallofthecarefullywrappedgiftsthatwereespecially

forhim.Hewassosurprisedandgrateful.IwasgladthatIhadanunopenedboxofchocolatesthatIcouldgivetohisdad.

Jace'sjoyfulsmilethateveninglituptheskylikeastrandoftwinklelights.IwenttosleepthatnightthinkingaboutJaceandallofthefunhewasgoin