2023学年完整公开课版aChristmasstory

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Somechildrenfrom________familieswereaskedaboutwhattheyandtheirparentswantedfor__________.Andthentheywereofferedwhattheyliked.Butahardquestionwasraised.Theyhadtomakea_________betweentheirgiftsandfamily’sgifts.Itisquite______________thatallthechildrendecidedtogiveuptheirsandpickthegiftsfortheir_________,asintheirhearts,_________reallymattersandtheywantedtoshowtheir_____________totheirparents.poorChristmaschoicemoving/touching/surprisingparentsfamilythanks/loveGivingisbetterthangetting.aChristmasstoryBobbyplotsettingcharactersashopownerwantedaChristmasgiftforhismotheronacoldsnowyChristmasEveapoorfamily

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Frustratingly,hehadnothing,anditwasChristmasalready.Wipingatearfromhiseye,Bobbystartedtowalkdowntothestreet.Hewalkedfromshoptoshop,lookingintoeachdecoratedwindow.Everythingseemedsobeautifulandsooutofreach.ItwasstartingtogetdarkandBobbyunwillinglyturnedtowalkhome…Attention:whatacharacterdoes

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Readingfortheplothadnoideanomoneyfrustratedsaddiscoveredashinydimeexcited(Neverbeforehad...)couldbuynothingdisappointed(Hisexcitementquicklyturnedcold)presented...asked...??eagerhopefuldevelopment

ReadingforwritingpurposeWhatdoesthewriterwanttoconveyinthestory?loveBobbyhismotherstrangersBobbytheshopownerfamilymembers…lookedat…/…puthishandon…/saidtohim”YoujustwaithereandI’llseewhatIcandoforyou.”?kindfriendlyPredictionThetwoparagraphstobecontinuedshouldbefullof_____________.love/warmthAttention:whatacharacterdoes

whathe/shesaysvividindetailWritingpreparationFocusonthetwogivensentencesAfterwhatseemedanage,theshopownercameout.“Couldthisbetrue?”thoughtBobby.SomethingtheshopownerdidandsaidWhere?somethingunbelievablebuyaflowerwiththedimefor…Whatdidheexpect?intheflowershopWhere?intheflowershop?WritingPreparationPara1Afterwhatseemedanage,theshopownercameout.Q1.Whatmighthedoandsay?flowersinhishands“TheflowersarewhatIcandoforyou”“Youcanhavetheseflowersforyourmotherasagift....”Whattheflowerslookedlike.forfree?howmuch?abunchof/adozenoflongstemredrosestiedwitharibbonkeptinawhiteboxpinkcarnationsarrangedwithsmallwhiteflowers(baby’sbreath)wrappedinpurplepapergave/handedflowerstoBobbyWritingPreparationPara1Afterwhatseemedanage,theshopownercameout.Q1.Whatmighthedoandsay?Q2.What'sBobby'sreactiontotheoffering?

DescribeBobby’sexpressionoractionatthemomentWithhiseyeswideopen,hehesitatedtotakethem.Hismouthfallingwideopen,hecouldn’tbelievehisears.Coveringhismouthwithhishand,hewaspuzzled.coverhismouthwithhishand/mouthfallwideopen/eyeswideopenWritingPreparationPara2“Couldthisbetrue?”thoughtBobby.Q1.Whycouldn’tBobbybelieveit?HethoughtnooneelsewouldgivehimsuchagreatgiftHeneverexpectedhewouldget...withonlyadime.Q2.Whatwouldtheownersaytomakehimbelieve?YouarethelastcustomerontheChristmasEve…Theseflowersareonsaleforonlytencents…Iamdeeplymovedbyyouas..TheseflowersarejustgiftsfromSantaClaus…WritingPreparationPara2“Couldthisbetrue?”thoughtBobby.Q3.HowwouldBobbyfeelthen?Joywelledupinsidehim.Thesmileonhisfaceshonelikeadiamond.Heshedtearsofhappiness.Hewaswildwithjoy.Tearsfillinghiseyes,heofferedhisheartfeltgratitude.Arippleofexcitementranthroughhim.Q4.Whatwouldhappenintheend?…wished“MerryChristmas”…Holdingtheflowersfirmlyinthearms,Bobby…Walkingoutoftheshop,Bobby…Bobby

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Whichwordscoverthemostimportantinformationaboutthestory?WritingPreparationFocusonthekeywordsDraftacontinuationPara1Afterwhatseemedanage,theshopownercameout.Para2“Couldthisbetrue?”thoughtBobby.Tips

forcontinuationwritingfortheplotforthelanguageWritingTheplotmaybesimple.Thedescriptionmustbedetailed.动作描写心理描写环境描写Readinginferlogicallyimitatenaturally……Thestructuresandwordsshouldberich.ApossibleversionPara1

Afterwhatseemedanage,theshopownercameout.There,inhishands,lyingtwelvelongstem,redroses,withleavesofgreenandtinywhiteflowersalltiedtogether.Bobby’sheartsankastheownerplacedthemgentlyintoalongwhitebox.“Thatwillbetencents,youngman,”theshopownersaid,reachingouthishandforthedime.ApossibleversionPara2

“Couldthisbetrue?”thoughtBobby.Nooneelsewouldgivehimanythingforhisdime!Sensingtheboy’shesitation,theshopowneradded,”Ijusthappenedtohavesomerosesonsalefortencentsadozen.Wouldyouliketobuythem?”ThistimeBobbydidnothe