金华十校4月读后续写讲义高三英语一轮复习

金华十校4月读后续写读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。ItwasourturntoopenourpresentsthisparticularChristmasmorning.Thelivingroomwasalreadycoveredwithtornwrappingpaper.Obviously,thechildrencouldhardlywaittodiscoverthehiddentreasures,whichtheyhadexpectedfornearlyamonth.Nowweadultssataroundtheroomwithourpresentsatourfeet,slowlyremovingthepaper,tryingtomaintainourdignityinfrontofthechildren.Mywife,Brenda,andherfamilyhaveatraditionofgettingeachothergag(恶作剧)gifts.ThisalwaysmakesmeabituneasyatChristmasormybirthday,neverknowingwhatformofembarrassmentlieswaitingformeunderthethinbordersofthewrappingpaper.Recently,mysixyearolddaughterChristyseemedtobusyherselfwithsomethingwhileIwasplayingputervideoflightgames.Nowshewasstandingdirectlyinfrontofme.Theexcitementofthemomentjustbeamedacrossherface.Itwaseverythingshecoulddotokeepherselffromhelpingmeripthepaperfromeachpresent.Finally,IcametothelastgiftandwithmynaturalSherlockHolmesability,Iconcludedthatthishadtobethegaggift.Witheveryonelookingon,IdecidedtogoaheadandgetitoverwithjustletthemhavetheirlaughandItorethepaperandthereitwas...atoyairplaneabouttwoincheslong.OurholidayguestsstartedgigglingtothemselvesasIlookeduptomywifewithanunpleasantsmileonmyfaceandblurtedout,"Atoyairplane?Areyoukiddingme?"BrendagavemethelookthatlookthatalwaystellsmeIhavejustsaidsomethingwrongandshouldhavegivenitasecondthought.Ihadfailedtolookatthenametag(标签)beforeIopenedthepresenttoseewhoitwasfrom.AsIpickedupthepaperfromthefloorandreadthenametag,myheartsank.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Onthetagwerethelettersthatread,“ToDad,LoveChristy”._____________Paragraph2:Staringatthegift,Isuddenlythoughtofawaytoliftherup.__________________主要人物：I信息：ThisalwaysmakesmeabituneasyatChristmasormybirthday,neverknowingwhatformofembarrassmentlieswaitingformeunderthethinbordersofthewrappingpaper.Recently,mysixyearolddaughterChristyseemedtobusyherselfwithsomethingwhileIwasplayingputervideoflightgames.OurholidayguestsstartedgigglingtothemselvesasIlookeduptomywifewithanunpleasantsmileonmyfaceandblurtedout,"Atoyairplane?Areyoukiddingme?"AsIpickedupthepaperfromthefloorandreadthenametag,myheartsank.从以上句子可以判断出主人公我的特点：不喜欢圣诞节恶作剧礼物+喜欢玩飞行游戏+觉得飞机玩偶就是恶作剧礼物+知道飞机是女儿送的心情沉重MysixyearolddaughterChristy信息：Recently,mysixyearolddaughterChristyseemedtobusyherselfwithsomethingwhileIwasplayingputervideoflightgames.Theexcitementofthemomentjustbeamedacrossherface.Itwaseverythingshecoulddotokeepherselffromhelpingmeripthepaperfromeachpresent.从以上句子可得知女儿的特点：知道我喜欢飞机游戏+在我要拆礼物时特别兴奋次要人物：MywifeBrenda主要情节：第一段：从第二段第一句话Staringatthegift,Isuddenlythoughtofawaytoliftherup.我突然想到一个让她高兴的办法，可以得知，第一段小女儿应该是不开心或伤心的。此外，还需要写到作者的懊悔，作者对女儿的道歉解释或者安慰，但结果肯定是不尽如人意的。所以第一段情节：‘我’懊悔+孩子伤心+我道歉/安慰+道歉/安慰不成功第二段：从第二段第一句话Staringatthegift,Isuddenlythoughtofawaytoliftherup.得知，后面主人公‘我’想出了办法逗孩子开心，所以接下来的内容就是让孩子开心的内容，后面女儿肯定是被逗笑的。最后面再来一句升华主题的句子。所以第二段情节：用自己的办法让女儿开心起来+女儿开心反应+主旨的升华下水作文：Paragraph1Onthetagwerethelettersthatread,“ToDad,LoveChristy”.ScarcelyhadIdiscoveredthenamewhenanounceofrepentancesurgedthroughmybody,hardlyabletobelieveinmysillyreaction.ItwasinaflashthatChristyburstintotearssinceshemusthavethoughtthetoyairplanecouldexerttremendousfascinationonme.Accordingly,Iwasinaflurrytoconsoletheaggrievedpoorcreature,lappingherinmyarms,beggingforherforgiveness.However,myawkwardandunskillfulparentingexperiencecontributedtomyfailureinfortingher,whichplungedmeintodeepvexation.(88字)Paragraph2:Staringatthegift,Isuddenlythoughtofawaytoliftherup.Ihikedherupontomyshoulders,andpickedupthegift,tryingtomimicthescenewhereshewasontheplane.Iranaroundthelivingroom,incessantlyexclaiming,“Look,weareflyinginthesky.”Notlongafterthat,agaleoflaughtercamefrommydaughter,abigsmilewrittenonherface.Eventually,mysinkinganduneasyheartwasreplacedbyasighofrelief.Sincethen,theplanehasbeeastronglovingbondlinkingmydaughterwithme.(85字)句法：ScarcelyhadIdiscoveredthenamewhenanounceofrepentancesurgedthroughmybody,hardlyabletobelieveinmysillyreaction.我刚一发现这个名字，心里就涌起一股悔恨之情，几乎不敢相信自己的愚蠢反应。（倒装句）ItwasinaflashthatChristyburstintotearssinceshemusthavethoughtthetoyairplanecouldexerttremendousfascinationonme.刹那间，克里斯蒂哭了起来，因为她一定以为玩具飞机会对我产生巨大的魅力。（强调句）However,myawkwardandunskillfulparentingexperiencecontributedtomyfailureinfortingher,whichplungedmeintodeepvexation.然而，我笨拙的育儿经验，使我无法安慰她，这使我深感苦恼。（定语从句）Ihikedherupontomyshoulders,andpickedupthegift,tryingtomimicthescenewhereshewasontheplane.我把她抱到我的肩膀上，拿起礼物，试着模仿她在飞机上的场景。（非谓语作状语）Notlongafterthat,agaleoflaughtercamefrommydaughter,abigsmilewrittenonherface.没过多久，我女儿发出一阵大笑，脸上写着灿烂的笑容。（独立主格）范文：Onthetagwerethelettersthatread,“ToDad,LoveChristy”.Ifeltsoagonizedandregretfultoseeherjoyreplacedbyalookoftotalembarrassmentandhumiliation.Shemustbeprayingthatnobodywoulddiscoverwhomthegiftcamefrom.Anditwasn'tjustanypresent.SheknewIwasfascinatedwithplanes.IquicklykneltdownandembracedChristytightly,willingtogiveanythingtotakebackthosewords.IexplainedIhadthoughtitwasfromMom,butsinceicamefromher,thatmadeitdifferent.However,nothingIsaidcouldremovethehurtinherheart.(93words)Staringatthegift,Isuddenlythoughtofawaytoliftherup.Itookthattoyairplaneinmyhandandbeganmakingvividairplanenoises.Itaxied(滑行)ontothe"runway",andacceleratedanditwassoonintheair.Iputsomuchexcitementintothatairplanethatotherchildrenwantedaturnplayingwithit.AndjustlikealittleselfishkidIsaid,“No,thisismine!”Itwasn'tlongbeforeChristybelieveditwasreallyacharminggiftandsmiledagain.Now,Ikeepthelittleplaneasareminderofmygirl'sloveandalso,thepowerofwords.(96words)好句：Ifeltsoagonizedandregretfultoseeherjoyreplacedbyalookoftotalembarrassmentandhumiliation.看到她的快乐被完全的尴尬和羞辱所取代，我感到非常痛苦和遗憾。IquicklykneltdownandembracedChristytightly,willingtogiveanythingtotakebackthosewords.我很快跪下来，紧紧地拥抱克里斯蒂，愿意付出任何代价来收回这些话。Itaxiedontothe"runway",andacceleratedanditwassoonintheair.我滑行到“跑道”上，然后加速，飞机很快就飞上了天空。Iputsomuchexcitementintothatairplanethatotherchildrenwantedaturnplayingwithit.我在那架飞机上投入了如此多的兴奋，以至于其他孩子都想玩它。Itwasn'tlongbeforeChristybelieveditwasreallyacharminggiftandsmiledagain.没过多久，克里斯蒂相信这真的是一份迷人的礼物，再次笑了。Now,Ikeepthelittleplaneasareminderofmygirl'sloveandalso,thepowerofwords.现在，我保留着这个小飞机，作为对我女儿的爱和语言力量的一种提醒。现学现做之翻译练习：1._______________________thenamewhen_______________surgedthroughmybody,hardlyabletobelievein_____________.我刚一发现这个名字，心里就涌起一股悔恨之情，几乎不敢相信自己的愚蠢反应。（倒装句）2.___________________Christyburstintotearssinceshemusthavethoughtthetoyairplanecould____________________onme.刹那间，克里斯蒂哭了起来，因为她一定以为玩具飞机会对我产生巨大的魅力。（强调句）3.However,myawkwardandunskillfulparentingexperiencecontributedtomyfailureinfortingher,______________________.然而，我笨拙的育儿经验，使我无法安慰她，这使我深感苦恼。（定语从句）4.I_______________________,andpickedupthegift,tryingto______________whereshewasontheplane.我把她抱到我的肩膀上，拿起礼物，试着模仿她在飞机上的场景。（非谓语作状语）5._______________,agaleoflaughtercamefrommydaughter,______________________.没过多久，我女儿发出一阵大笑，脸上写着灿烂的笑容。（独立主格）6.Ifeltso__________________toseeherjoyreplacedby_______________________.看到她的快乐被完全的尴尬和羞辱所取代，我感到非常痛苦和遗憾。7.Iquickly_______________________Christytightly,____________anythingtotakebackthosewords.我很快跪下来，紧紧地拥抱克里斯蒂，愿意付出任何代价来收回这些话。8.I___________the