上海市虹口区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题写作练习-2023届高三英语二轮复习

上海市虹口区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分

层-写作

一、建议信

1.（2022•上海虹口•统考一模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin

120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbeIowinChinese.

明启中学拟举办一次摄影展。现就布展方式（校图书馆或校园网站）征集学生意见。假

设你是王磊，请给学生会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件必须满足以下要求：

1.简述你写邮件的目的及你对布展方式的选择；

2.说明你的理由（从体验感、互动性或影响力等方面对这两种布展方式进行对比）。

2.（2021•上海•统考三模）DireCtions:WriteanEngIishcompositionin120-150

wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbeIowinChinese.

假定你是明启中学的高中学生李华。某电视台线上学习节目打算增设两个栏目。初步拟

定从"ReadingforFun"、"TextbookLearning"、"HomeworkGuidance”、**0nIine

Listeningv以及“QuestionsandAnswers”五个栏目中选取两个，特此向所有在线学

习者征求意见。请你给电视台写封邮件，推荐两个栏目。邮件内容须包括：

1）你推荐的两个栏目；

2）你推荐这两个栏目的理由。

注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。

3.（2021•上海虹口•统考二模）DireCtions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin

120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbeIowinChinese.

腾讯公司（TenCentCOmParIy）就微信用户的阅读偏好做了一项调查，调查结果如下图。

请你仔细观察这张图片，然后谈谈这张图片反映出的现象或问题，并向微信用户提出你

的建议。

注意：作文中不得出现你自己的真实姓名、班级及学校。

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4.（2020∙上海虹口∙统考二模）Directions:WriteanEngIishcompositionin120

-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbeIowinChinese.

假如你是明启中学的学生李华。为了推动校园文化建设，展现当代学生风采，校学生会

正策划学生“校园之星”评选活动。学生会初步拟定了“学习之星”，“才艺之星”和

“运动之星”三个评选项目。请你给学生会写一封电子邮件，要求增加一个评选项目，

并就这个评选项目谈谈你的看法。你的邮件必须包含以下内容：

1.你要求增加的评选项目；

2,你的理由；

3.你对此项目评选的具体实施建议。

注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。

二、推荐信

5.(2021•上海虹口•统考一模)DireCtions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin

120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbeIowinChinese.

假定你是明启中学的学生李华，你校交换生AlIen打算在圣诞节为他的父母各送一件

具有典型中国文化特色的礼物。他初步选出了四件礼物：旗袍(CheOngSam)、紫砂茶具

(purpIecIayteaset)、丝绸围巾(SiIkscarf)ʌ书画折扇(caIIigraphyandpainting

foldingfan),现在发邮件向你咨询。请你给他写封邮件，谈谈你的意见。内容包括：

1.为他父母分别推荐的一件礼物；

2.推荐这两件礼物的理由；

3.对AIlen父母的问候。

注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级和学校等真实信息。

6.(2020•上海虹口•统考一模)Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin

120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

手机给现代人的生活带来了很多便利，甚至改变了人们的日常生活方式。人们常常会在

手机上下载一些常用的应用程序(app)。你平时使用较多的是哪一类应用程序呢？请你

向同学们推荐一款应用程序，并阐述理由。

三、开放性作文

7.（2022,上海虹口•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120

-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbeIowinChinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。某英语杂志最近发起了一个高中生英语征文活动，其

主题与内容见下表。要求参加征文活动者除了写出规定的内容外，还须补充至少两点内

容，并进行进一步的阐述。请按要求写一篇作文，参加这个征文活动。

英语征文活动

主题thepowerofasmile

微笑有助于缓解压力，提高学习效率；微笑是有感染力/(ContagiOUS),可以

内容

影响身边的人。

你补充的内容1.……;2.……；⑶……）

注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。

8.（2021•上海虹口•统考一模）DireCtions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin

120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假定你是明启中学的学生李华。学校将举行一次演讲比赛，主题为我心目中的英雄。“灿

烂星空，谁是真的英雄？”做出惊天动地之举的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是

英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄……请你结合具体事例写一份演讲稿，阐述你

心目中真正的英雄。

注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。

四、概要写作

9.（2022,上海虹口•统考一模）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarize

themainideaandthemainpoint（s）ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.

UseyourownwordsasfaraspossibIe.

AreOceansSilent?

Mostseacreatures,fromwhaIesanddoIphinstofish,sharksandshrimps,

respondtosound,andmanycanproduceit.Theyuseittohuntandtohide,find

matesandfood,sendmessagesandgivewarnings,estabIishterritories,warn

offcompetitors,confusetheirtargets,deceiveenemies,andsensechangesin

waterandconditions.Marineanimalsclickbones,grindteethandbelchgases

（磨牙寸丁嗝）；usespeciaIorganstomakevariousnoises.Farfromthe*siIent

deep,,theoceansaresonoisy.

Intothisage-longconfusednoise,inthebIinkofanevolutionaryeye,has

enteredanewthunder：thetrembIingsoundofmightyenginesas46,220Iarge

shipspassedtheworId,sshippingcourses.Scientistssaythatbackgroundnoise

intheoceanhasincreasedroughlyby15decibels（分贝）inthepast50years.

ItmaynotsoundIikemuchinoveralIterms,butitisenough,accordingtomany

marinebiologists,tomaskthenormaIsoundsofoceanIifegoingaboutits

business.Atitsmostintense,someevensaynoisecauseswhaIestobecome

disoriented,dolphinstosufferfrom'thebends',fishtogodeaf,leavetheir

breedinggroundsorfaiItoformgroups—enoughtodisorganizethebasicbioIogy

oftwothirdsoftheplanet.

“UnderseanoisepoIIutionisIikethedeathofathousandcuts”,says

SylviaEarie,chiefscientistoftheU.S.NationalOceanicandAtmospheric

Administration."Eachsoundinitselfmaynotbeamatterofcriticalconcern,

buttakenaIItogether,thenoisefromshipping,earthquake-reIatedsurveys,

andmiIitaryactivityiscreatingatotaIIydifferentenvironmentthanexisted

even50yearsago.Thathighlevelofnoiseisboundtohaveahard,sweeping

impactonIifeinthesea.

10.（2022•上海虹口•统考二模）DireCtiOns:Readthefollowingpassage.

Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint（s）ofthepassageinnomorethan

60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

WhyIsLitteringaSurprisinglyBigIssue?

ComparedwiththeblindingIyobviousenvironmentalissueswehearabout

everyday,Iitteringoftentakesabackseat-butit'smorepressingthanwe

maythink.

Ifyouweretothrow,say,abananapeel（香蕉皮）outofyourcarwhile

drivingalongthemotorway,thatwouldbeacompIeteIyharmlessaction,dueto

thefactthatit,spartofafruit-right?ActuaIly,no.Abananapeelcan

takeuptotwoyearstodecompose（分舟单），andwithathirdofmotoristsadmitting

toIitteringwhiledriving,that,sawhoIeIotofabandonedbananapeeIs,or

muchworse.AnorangepeeIandacigarettebutthasasimiIarbiodegrading（生

物降解）termtothatofabanana,buttinandaIuminiumcansIastupto100years,

andpIasticbottIesIastforever,asdogIassbottIes,StyrofoamcupsandpIastic

bags.

DespitethefactthatIonger-IastingmateriaIswiIIservetodamagethe

environmentanditsanimalsforIonger,wecan,tonIymeasuretheseverityof

acertaintypeofrubbishbyitsIifetime.ForexampIe,despitehavingafairly

shortbiodegradingperiod,morethan120tonsofcigarette-relatedIitteris

abandonedintheUKeveryday.SimiIarly,ourreguIarIitteringhereandthere

hascausedtheUK,sratpopulationtoincreaseby60million.Thissuddenly

isn,tsomysteriouswhenyouconsiderthatsincethe1960sourannuaIIittering

hasincreasedbyanastonishing500percent.

11,snotacheaphabiteither:UKtaxpayerssheIveout£500millioninorder

tokeepourstreetsclean,andwhenyouincIudeourgreenspaces,thatgoesup

to£1billion.So,it'snotsurprisingthatifcaughtfIy-tippingyoucould

facea£20,000fineorevenjaiItimeand,ifyouIitteredsomethingdangerous,

thecourtcouldgiveyoufiveyearstoserve.

TotakebackourbeautifuIcountrysideandcitiesweneedtodomorethan

simplynotIeavingrubbishwhereitoughtnottobe.Weneedapridemakeover,

andweneedtotruIycaremoreabouttheworIdaroundus.

11.(2021∙上海虹口∙统考一模)Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.

Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan

60words.UseyourownwordsasfaraspossibIe.

IsStudent-IoanForgivenessUnforgivable?

RoughIy45miIIionAmericanscurrentIyhold$1.6triIIioninstudentdebt,

withtheaveragestudent-loanreceiverowingbetween$20,000and$25,000,

accordingtotheFederaIReserve.AmongthoseactiveIymakingpaymentsontheir

debt,theaveragemonthIyinstaIImentisbetween$200and$300.Andwith5.3

millionmorepeopleunemployedthaninFebruary,rightbeforetheU.S.felIinto

theeconomicdepressioncausedbypandemic（流彳亍病），somepeopIesaythat

student-debtforgivenesscouldbebeneficiaItotheeconomy.

“Student-debtcanceIIationfeeIsIikeoneofthemostaccessibleexecutive

actionstostimuIatetheeconomyatthemoment,“saysSuzanneKahn,director

oftheEducation.KahnsaysthemovewouIdalsohelpclosetheweaIthgapbetween

whiteAmericansandpeopIeofcoIor.Some90%ofBIackstudentsand72%ofLatino

studentstakeoutloansforcolIegeversusjust66%ofwhitestudents,according

toananalysisfromtheConsumerFinancialProtectionBureau.

Butothersarguethatsweepingstudent-loanforgivenessdoesn,thelpthe

peopIewhoneedaidmost.AmericanswithcolIegedegrees,asawhole,havebeen

lessinfluencedbytheeconomiceffectsofCOVID-19thantheir

non-colIege-educatedcounterparts.Besides,theyraiseconcernsthatifthe

governmentwipesoutcurrentstudentloans,futurecolIegestudentsmayhave

amotivatortotakeondebts,hopingtheywiIIalsobeforgiven.Collegesmay

inturntendtoraisetheirpricesfurther.

What,sclear,accordingtothebothsidesoftheaisle（过道），isthat

economiccrisesworsentheproblemofstudentdebt.ThelasttimetheU.S.dipped

intoarecession,stategovernmentscuttheirinvestmentsincollegesand

universities-which,inturn,raisedtheirtuitionpricesandforcedstudents

totakeoneverIargerIoans.

Inrecentweeks,thegovernmenthaswaIkedafineIineontheissue,offering

supportforabiIIcallingfor$10,000worthofstudent-loanforgivenessbut

turningdownanythingclosetoaplantoissue$50,000perborrowerthrough

executiveaction.

That,snotsustainabIeintheIongrun.Itremainstobeseenifthe

governmentcanarriveatapoliticalsoIutionthatis.

12.（2021•上海•统考三模）DireCtiOns:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarize

themainideaandthemainpoint（s）ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.

UseyourownwordsasfaraspossibIe.

NewTestingMethodinEraofOnlineLearning

InresearchpubIishedtodayinScienceofLearning,engineersfrom

RensselaerPolytechnicInstitutedemonstratehowatestingstrategytheycaII

“distancedonIinetesting“caneffectivelyreducestudents,abilityto

receiveheIpfromoneanotherinordertoscorehigheronatesttakenat

individualhomesduringsociaIdistancing.

“OfteninremoteonIineexams,studentscantaIkoverthephoneorinternet

todiscussanswers,“saidGeWang,achairprofessorofbiomedicaIengineering

atRensseIaerandthecorrespondingauthoronthispaper."Thekeyideaofour

methodistominimizethischanceviadiscreteOPt√m∕N3t√0∕7（离散优yf匕）aidedby

knowledgeofastudent,scompetencies.”

Whenadistancedonlinetestisperformed,studentsreceivethesame

questions,butatvaryingtimesdependingontheirskillIeveI.Forinstance,

studentsofhighestmasterylevelsreceiveeachquestionafterothergroupsof

studentshaveaIreadyansweredthosequestions.Thisapproach,Wangsaid,

reducesthemotivatorforstudentstoreceiveheIpfromthosewhohavemore

masteryofthemateriaI.Inordertodeterminetheorderofeachstudent's

questions,theircompetenceIeveIsareestimatedusingtheirgradepoint

averages,SATscores,ormidtermscores,dependingonwhatisavaiIableata

specificpointinthesemester.

Accordingtostatisticaltestsandpost-examsurveys,thismethodreduced

thepointsgainedthroughcheatingbyordersofmagnitude（数量级）whencompared

toconventionalexammethods.Asanaddedbenefit,Wangsaid,whenstudentsknew

colIusionwouIdnotbepossible,theyweremoremotivatedtostudycIassmaterial.

Wangandhiscolleagueshopetosharethisinnovationofteachingmethodsand

theorybeyondtheRensseIaercampus.

“WepIantodeveIopagoodpIatformsothatotherscaneasiIyusethis

method,''saidWang,amemberoftheCenterforBiotechnologyand

InterdiscipIinaryStudiesatRensseIaer.

13.(2021∙上海虹口∙统考二模)Directions：Readthefollowingpassage.

Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan

60words.UseyourownwordsasfaraspossibIe.

HowSafeIsYourBed?

Doyouconsideryourbedasafeplaceofrestandcalm?Doyousinkinto

amattressafterahardday,sworkandfeeItensionandstressdrainawayas

yourestyourwearyheadonasoftpiIlow?Well,youmightnotfeelsorelaxed

ifyouknewthattinypestswerehidingthere!Itseemsthatbedsmaynotbe

suchagoodplaceforourhealthandhappiness—theycouldactuaIIybemaking

usill!

Recentstudieshaveshownthatbacteria,fungianddustmites,somesmaIIer

thanthediameterofahair,liveinourbedding.Whenwemovearoundinour

sleep,wedisturbthemandtheyarebouncedupintotheair—whichwethen

breatheinaswesIeep.AccordingtotheAmericanLungAssociation,fourout

offivehouseholdsintheUnitedStatesnowhavehighlevelsofdustmites,

althoughit'snotthemitesthemseIvesthatcausetheproblems,buttheir

droppings.Theseare“highIyaIIergenicffaccordingtoDrWilliamBerger,a

feIlowwiththeAmericanAcademyofAlIergy,AsthmaandImmunology."Evenif

youaren,taIlergic∙∙∙theycanstiIIirritateyou,thewaypepperwouIdifit

bIewintoyournoseandeyes.”

BrendanBoor,AssistantProfessorofCiviIEngineering,whocarriesoutbed

research,aIsofoundthatbeddustintheairIeadstoaIIergies-causingwatery

eyes,sneezing,coughsandasthma.HehasrecommendedwaystoIimitourexposure

totheseboringaIIergens:

Firstly,hesuggestsvacuumingyourmattressregularly-weekly,oreven

daily.HeaIsorecommendsdoingawaywithcarpetsandwashingfloors.Using

aIIergen-proofbedcovers,hesays,canreducetheriskofgettingaIIergies.

Inaddition,washingbeddingandpillowsfrequentlycanhelp,ascanaportable

aircIeanerpIacednearthebed.

IfyoudoasBrendanBoorsuggests,youwiIIbreatheincIeanerairasyou

sleep・••orwiIIyou?IsitreaIIysafeforyoutogobackinyourbed?

14.（2021∙上海虹口∙统考一模）Directions：Readthefollowingpassage.

Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint（s）ofthepassageinnomorethan

60words.UseyourownwordsasfaraspossibIe.

WanttobeaSmartGiftGiver?

DuringaIIkindsofhoiidays,millionsofpeopIewiIIbuygiftsforIoved

ones,whichisgreatexceptthattonsofthosepeopIewillmakethesameglaring

mistake,andbuythewronggifts.What,sgoingon?

Giftbuyinghasbecomeadeceivinglyselfishpursuit.Wedon'tactuaIIy

IookforthingspeopIewanttoreceive.Instead,wetendtoIookforthingsthat

wewanttogive.It,sasubtIe,butprettysignificantprobIem.

ResearchhasshownthatgiverstendtovaIuethegiftstheybuyconsiderably

morethanreceivers.GiftsarevaIuedroughIy10to33percentlessbyreceivers

thanwhatgiverspaidforthem.JoeIWaIdfogeInotedthisinScroogenomics:Why

YouShouldn,tBuyPresentsfortheHolidays,his2009bookongift-giving.

ThedifferenceseemstocomefromasimplemisplacedbeliefthatthoughtfuI

presentsarethebestpresents.Theyarenot.Infact,theymightjustbethe

worstpresents.Themorethoughtyouputintoapresent,themoreIikeIyyou

aretostrayfrombuyingwhatthepersonyouarebuyingthepresentsforactuaIIy

wants.

Inotherwords,peopIeIettheirgift-givingegos（自我）getinthewayof

greatpresents,especialIywhenthereceiverissomeonetheywanttoshowthey

knowrealIywell.Fortunately,theanswertoourcolIectiveinsistenceon

guessingwhatpeopIewantissimple:stopit.

Ifthat,stooimpersonaI,there,sanotherhelpfulruleofthumb（经验

之^i炎）.Insteadofbuyingrestrictivegifts,Iikegiftcardsforspecificstores,

buygiftsthatallowforflexibility,likegiftcardsthatcanbeusedmore

broadly（or,betteryet,cash）.Peopletendtoprefergiftcardstoactualgifts,

andcashtoboth,SteffeIexpIained.SteffeI,sIatestresearch,whichfocuses

ongiftcardgiving,pointstoexactlythispoint一一thatversatiIity（用途

广泛）isthekeytobettergiftgiving.

15.(2020•上海虹口•统考二模)DireCtiOns:Readthefollowingpassage.

Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan

60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

Coco-CoIa,sInnovativeSolutiontoPlasticPolIution

PIasticpoIIutionhasbecomeoneofthemostpressingprobIemofthe21st

Centurywithplasticwastealmosteverywhere.Itisestimatedthatjustin2016,

theworIdproducedover320milliontonsofplastic,andthisnumberissetto

doubIeby2034.

PIasticwasteevenmakesitswayintoouroceanswith8millionpiecesof

plasticpoIIutionperdaypollutingourwatersanddestroyingthehabitatfor

hundredsofspecies.ItisnowbeIievedthattheremaybearound5.25trillion

piecesofplasticintheoceanweighingintotaIupto269,000tons.11,sbeen

crystaIclearforalongtimethatthesituationishorribleandsomethingneeds

tobedone,andfast.Luckily,Coca-CoIasteppeduptothechaIIengeandcame

upwithoneinnovativeandrathereffectivesolution.Thefirmisreplacingits

pIasticwrappinginEuropewithanewpaperboardtechnology.

ThisnewtechiscalledtheKeeICIipanditisafirstforthenon-aIcohoI

ready-to-drink(NARTD)industry.UsingKeeICIips,Coca-CoIaaimstoremoveaII

plasticwrapfromitscanmultipacksinaII?EuropeanUnionmarketsbytheend

of2021.ThefirmisoptimisticthatthemovewiIIsave2,000tonsofpIastic

and3,000tonsofC02annuaIly.

“InnovationisakeyprincipleofoursustainabIepackagingworkandthe

appIicationofthisfullyrecyclablepaperboardKeeICIipTM,whichiscomposed

ofatopboardthatthecansclipintoandcentraIcardboard'keel'-simiIar

toaship,skeel—thatstabiIizesthepack,isanotherexampleofhowweare

deIiveringonourcommitmenttoremoveaIIunnecessaryandhardtorecycIe

single-usepIasticfromourproducts.Wehopethiseco-friendIyinitativeis

aconsciousapproachtodealingwithplasticpolIution,“saidJoeFranses,Vice

President,SustainabiIityatCoca-CoIaEuropeanPartners.

16.（2020•上海虹口∙统考一模）DireCtions:Readthefollowingpassage.

Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint（s）ofthepassageinnomorethan

60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

TheZeigarnikEffect

HaveyoueverfoundyourselfthinkingaboutapartialIyfinishedproject

forschoolorworkwhenyouweretryingtofocusonotherthings?Orperhaps

youwonderedwhatwouIdhappennextinyourfavoriteTVshoworfiImseries.

Ifyouhave,you,veexperiencedtheZeigarnikeffect.Youtendtoremember

unfinishedtasksbetterthanfinishedtasks.KnowIedgeoftheZeigarnikeffect

canbeputintouseineverydayIife.

TheeffectisespeciaIIyweIIsuitedforhelpingovercomeprocrastination

ordelayinganactiontoalatertime.Weoftenputoffbigtasksthatseem

overwhelming.However,theZeigarnikeffectsuggeststhatthekeytoovercoming

procrastinationistojustgetstarted.ThefirststepcouldbesomethingsmalI

andseemingIyinsignificant.Infact,it,sprobabIybestifit,ssomething

fairlyeasy.

TheZeigarnikeffectcanbeusefuIforstudentswhoarestudyingforanexam.

TheeffecttelIsusthatbreakingupstudyperiodscanactualIyimproverecalI.

SoinsteadofcrammingforanexamaIIinonesitting,breaksshouIdbescheduIed

inwhichthestudentfocusesonsomethingelse.Thiswillcauseintrusive（侵

入的）thoughts,enabIingstudentstorehearseandconsoIidatetheinformation

thatmustberemembered,leadingtobetterrecaIIwhentheytaketheexam.

TheZeigarnikeffectaIsopointstoreasonswhypeopIemayexperiencementaI

healthprobIems.IfanindividuaIIeavesimportanttasksincompIete,the

intrusivethoughtsthatresu11canIeadtostress,anxiety,difficultysIeeping,

andemotionaIdistress.Conversely,compIetingataskcangiveanindividual

asenseofaccompIishmentandIeadtoafeelingofcIosurethatcanimprove

psychologicalwell-being.

TheZeigarnikeffectcanactualIybeusedtopositiveIyimpactyourwork

productivity.

参考答案：

1.Towhomitmayconcern:

I,veIearnedthataphotographyexhibitionistobeheldandthatyou,re

coIIectingadviceonthewayofarrangement.I,mwritingthislettertosharemy

opinionswithyou.Inmyopinion,itismoreadvisabIetoholdthephotography

exhibitioninschooIIibrarythanoncampuswebsite.Myreasonsareasfollows.

Atfirst,theIibraryofourschooIisspacious,whichprovidesvisitorswith

aComfortabIeenvironmentforappreciatingtheexhibition,sotheywiIIhaveanice

experience.Besides,watchingtheexhibitionatschooIIibraryismoreconvenient

forvisitorstointeractwithothers.Lastbutnotleast,aphotographyexhibition

heldoncampuswebsitehasfarlessimpactthanthatheldinschoolIibrary,because

peopIemayassumethatholdingaphotographyexhibitiononwebsiteisjustIikea

virtuaIactivity.Therefore,IsuggesttheexhibitionbeheIdinschooIIibrary.

Yours,

WangLei

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。明启中学拟举办一次摄影展，现就布展方式征集学生意

见，要求考生给学生会写一封邮件表达自己的想法，内容要点包括：1.简述你写邮件的目

的及你对布展方式的选择；2.说明你的理由（从体验感、互动性或影响力等方面对这两种

布展方式进行对比）。

【详解】1.词汇积累：

建议：adviceTsuggestions

在我看来：InmyopinionTAsfarasIamconcerned

宽敞的：spaciousTcapacious

“匕夕卜：BesidesTWhat,smore

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Inmyopinion,itismoreadvisabIetohoIdthephotographyexhibitioninschooI

Iibrarythanoncampuswebsite.

拓展句：IholdthebeIiefthatitismoreadvisabIetoholdthephotographyexhibition

inschoolIibrarythanoncampuswebsite.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I,velearnedthataphotographyexhibitionistobeheldand

thatyou,recoIIectingadviceonthewayofarrangement.（运用了that弓I导的宾

语从句）

【高分句型2]Atfirst,theIibraryofourschooIisspacious,whichprovidesvisitors

withacomfortableenvironmentforappreciatingtheexhibition,sotheywiIIhave

aniceexperience.（运用了WhiCh引导的非限制性定语从句）

2.Deareditors,

Iknowyou,regoingtosetupnewprogramsonIine.SoI'mwritingtosuggest

twoprograms---uReadingforFun,,andαHomeworkGuidance,,asanonIinelearner.

FirstofaII,Ithinkreadingisofgreatsignificance