读后续写+Find+back+my+dog-Spider+讲义 高三英语二轮复习

山东潍坊一模读后续写真题呈现：Iwaseightyearsoldandwasn'tawareofallthearrangementsbeingmadeforour

journeyasafamilytoLondonin1950.MymotherwasingreatpainandwishedtovisitspecialistsinLondon.MyfatherreluctantlyhadtosellourpropertyinQueensland.Thedaybeforeweboardedtheship,Fatherunwillinglysaidgoodbyetohisfive-year-oldcattledog,Spider,whowaslovedbyusall.Father'sfriendSandywastobehisguardianwhilewewereoverseas,ashehadbeengettingtoknowSpiderformanyweeks.Sixweekslater,anairletterarrivedfromSandy,givingmyfatherthenewsthatSpiderhadrunawayjusttwoweeksafterwehadsailed.SandyhadadvertisedconstantlyonABCandotherregionalnewspapers.Despitemany"sightings",thedogwasneverfound.ItseemsSpiderjustkeptrunningandsearchingforus.Ashewascattledog,myfatherthoughthewouldshoeordingo-trapped,becauseofhisappearance.ButourfamilythoughtthatFatherheldasecretshopethatSpiderwasstillalive.WesailedbacktoAustraliatwoyearslaterandre-establishedourhome.MyimmediatelybeganhisownsearchforSpider.Onecoldwinter'sSaturdaymorningeightmonthsafterourreturn,myfatherhadacallfromanelderlyladylivingonherownontheoutskirtsofthetown.Asshetoldmyfatheronthetelephone,itwas"justglimpsesofadingo-typedogintheshadows"ofherdisusedtenniscourt.Thatwasenoughformyfathertointerruptmyhomework.WesetoffinhisblueandblackJensencarwhichhehadbroughtbackfromEngland.Itwashardlytherightvehiclefortheroughroadswetravelledthatday.Fiveandahalfhourslater,wefoundtherun-downoldproperty.Sadly,shetoldmyfatherthatthe"dingodog"hadn’tbeenaroundforafewdays.Myfatherhadastrangelookinhiseye.HeputtwofingerstohislipsanddidhisspecialwhistleforSpider.注意：1.

续写词数应为150个左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.Oncehomewehadthetaskofgettingalltheprickles

(刺)

offhim.这份续写其实和强基联盟续写是同一文本，但是这份改编的更好👍。0.

确定人称1.

梳理原文情节

--

人物：Spider/

我

/father

；mother/oldwoman/Sandy2.

构思情节P1:

Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.①

衔接1：我和爸爸的反应：紧张期待②Spider：出现

+

冲向父亲③

爸爸和Spider

的互动：热泪

+

爱抚；狗：舔/摇尾巴/发出声音④

场景人物：我和老太婆感动哭⑤

衔接2：感谢了老太婆，我们把Spider

带回了家P2:Oncehomewehadthetaskofgettingalltheprickles(刺)offhim.①

衔接3：prickle的引申

--Spider

这些年很苦②

细节添加：给Spider洗澡

+Spider的反应：超乖超配合③

细节添加：爸爸还带Spider去检查

+

万事ok④

从那以后，Spider再也没有离开过我们⑤

结尾：某天下午，我看着Spider

跟着我父亲进进出出，突然觉得好幸福。【下水作文1】P1:Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.Therustlingintheundergrowthcausedmyhearttorace,andIcouldseemyfather'sfacetensewithanticipation.Inaburstofmovement,athin,familiarfigureemergedfromthebushes,anddartedintomyfather’sarmswithunrestrainedjoy.Myfather'seyesbrimmedwithtearsashegentlystrokedSpider,whorespondedbycrazilylickingmyfather'sfaceandwagginghistail.TheelderlyladyandIstoodby,movedtotearsbytheprofoundreunionunfoldingbeforeus.Afterofferingearnestappreciationtotheoldwoman,wecarefullyplacedSpiderinthecar,andbroughthimbacktothelovinghomehesorightfullydeserved.P2:Oncehomewehadthetaskofgettingalltheprickles(刺)offhim.Aswecarefullyremovedeachpricklefromhim,itbecamepainfullyapparentthatSpidersufferedalotduringthepastlongyears.Also,wegavehimagentleandthoroughbath,duringwhichSpiderbehavedremarkablywell,clearlyrelievedandhappytobebackhome.Myfather,withgreatconcern,eventookSpidertothevetforacomprehensivecheck-up,andfortunately,everythingwasokay.Fromthatdayforward,Spiderneverwanderedfarfromourside,becominganinseparablepartofourfamilyoncemore.Oneafternoon,watchingSpidertrotbesidemydad,Iwassuddenlyoverwhelmedwithhappiness,realizingourgreatfortuneinbeingreunited.【下水作文2】Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.

“ItmustbeSpider!”

myfatheryelledexcitedly.Andthenextmomenthewasoutinthebush,followingthesoundofthebark.Curiously,Ifollowedmyfather’sfootsteps,prayingthatsomemiraclewouldcomeup.Yes,thereinthebushlayadog,skinnyandhungry,AnditwasourSpider,thedogwehadbeenmissingbadlyandlookingformadly.Hestruggledtohisfeet,approachedusandthrewhimselfintomyfather’sarms,whichmadehiseyesmoisten.Asiffindingbackhislong-losttreasure,myfatherscoopedupthedog,putitintothecarand,withheartfeltgratitudetotheoldlady,headedbackhome.Oncehomewehadthetaskofgettingalltheprickles

(刺)

offhim.Wegavehimathoroughbath,cleaninghimupwithsoap,andcarefullyexaminedhisteethandears.Laterwewouldwalkalongthebeachandwatchtheshipscomeinandoutoftheharbor.

Spiderenjoyedthisroutine

andmyfatherwouldtellhimstoriesaboutalltheexperienceshehadwhilehewasaway.Spiderwasalwaysbyhisside,faithfulandloyalasever.Theyhadbeenthroughsomuch,but

yearsandvastdistancescouldn'tbreaktheirbond.

Spiderfoundhiswaybacktous

againstall

odds.

Weweregratefultohavehimback,andweknewthathewouldalwaysbeacherished

memberofourfamily.参考范文：Suddenlythere

wasasoundinthebush.Outofthegrowthflewthisbattereddogrightinto

myfather'sarms.Spiderhadleapedoverthetenniscourtfencewithgreatforceandcertainty.

Myfather'seyesshone,andtheoldladyandIstoodtherewithtearsinoureyes.Hekeptlicking

myfather'sfaceandmakingchokingnoises.Hesmeltdreadful.Wewrappedhiminanold

blanketandIheldhimonmylaponthewaybac