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读后续写：一只手男孩（教师版）一、原文WhenJayceCrowderwasinkindergarten,hebegannoticingthathelookeddifferentfromhisclassmates.Theyhadtwohands.Buthehadonlyone.Itstartedwhenoneboyteasedhim.Jaycewasinabadmood.He'dreturnhomeinDesMoines,Iowa,withquestions:WhyamIdifferent?Whyme?Why?"Heactuallytoldusthathewasmadatlookingsodifferentfromothers,"saidhismother,CortneyLewis."Thatreallyhurthim."Lewisadmittedshedidn'tknowwhattodoatthatpoint.Howcouldsheprovideanswerstoherson'squestionswhenshehadneverfoundthoseanswersherself?Afewweekslater,LewiscamehomefromherjobandturnedontheTVtoanewsstoryaboutTrashaunWillis,aneighthgraderfromWashingtonmiddleschool,Iowa.Theboy,then14,hadbecomeanInternetstarafterpostingvideosofhisslamdunk(扣篮),and,likeJayce,hewasmissingmostofhisleftarm.LewiscalledJaycein.Hewasshocked,staringatonedunkafteranother.Atthetime,itseemedthatwatchingTrashaunwouldsimplybeaninspiringmomentforJayce—he'dseeashiningrolemodelwithaseeminglysimilarborndisability.Andhaditstayedjustthat,Lewiswouldhavebeenhappy.ButlittledidsheknowthatafamilyfriendhadalreadyreachedouttotheDesMoinesRegister,askingthenewspapertohelpsetupameetingwithTrashauntoencourageJayceandbuildhisconfidence.Afewdayslater,thegoodnewsthatTrashaunacceptedtheinvitationtomeetJaycecame.Afterthemeeting,Jaycelearnedtoaccepthisdisability.二、分句练习Para1:Afewdayslater,thegoodnewsthatTrashaunacceptedtheinvitationtomeetJaycecame.在Jayce的期待中，见面的一天终于来了。①特殊句式那天终于来了。Finallycametheday.InJayce’santicipation,finallycamethedaywhenthetwoboysgatheredtogether.②定语从句见面的那天thedaywhentheygatheredtogether③名词期待expectation/anticipation一看到对方，两人就笑了，并相互拥抱。①特殊句式一……就……Scarcelyhadsbdonewhensbdid.Scarcelyhadtheirglancesmetwhenbiggrinsemergedontheirfaces,accompaniedbyatighthug.②动作看到对方Theirglancesmet.③动作两人笑了Biggrinsemergedontheirfaces.④动词短语伴随着beaccompaniedby他们很快变熟了，愉快地在球场上打了一下午篮球。①动词短语变熟getacquaintedTheygotacquaintedverysoon,spendingawholeafternoonplayingbasketballonthecourtincheerfulspirit.②地点在球场上onthecourt③心情愉快地incheerfulspirit在聊天的过程中，Trashaun激励Jayce要勇敢和自信，去征服生活中的所有挑战。①介词短语在……的过程中inthecourseofInthecourseofchatting,TrashauninspiredJaycetobebraveandconfidentenoughtoconquerallchallengesinlife.②动词短语激励某人做某事inspiresbtodosth③动词征服conquer“只有你自己才能打败你自己。”Trashaun坚定地说。①名词只有nothingbut...“Nothingbutyourselfcandefeatyou.”Trashaunsaidfirmly.②动词坚定地说sayfirmlyPara2:Afterthemeeting,Jaycelearnedtoaccepthisdisability.Jayce不再抱怨命运的不公，而是开始乐观面对生活。①介词短语不再insteadof;asopposedtoInsteadofcomplainingabouttheinjusticeofhisfate,Jaycebegantoadoptamoreoptimisticattitudetowardslife.②名词短语命运的不公theinjusticeofhisfate/destiny③动词短语乐观面对生活adoptanoptimisticattitudetowardslife在Trashaun的激励下，Jayce开始练习投篮，希望有一天能像他的榜样那样熟练地扣篮。①动词短语被……激励bemotivatedbyMotivatedbyTrashaun,Jaycegotdowntopractisingshootingbasketball,expectingtobeasskillfulashisrolemodelinslamdunkoneday.②动词短语开始getdowntodoing;embarkonsth③形容词像sb一样熟练asskillfulassb由于Jayce身上发生的这些变化，这位母亲的心头卸下了一个沉重的负担。①介词短语由于owingto;onaccountofOwingtoallthesechangeshappeningtoJayce,thismotherfeltagreatweightwastakenoffhermind.②名词短语在Jayce身上发生的这些变化allchangeshappeningtoJayce③固定表达某人心头卸下负担Agreatweightwastakenoffsb’smind至于Trashaun，他从来没有想过他的视频会产生如此大的影响，这让他下定决心去帮助更多的残疾青少年。①介词短语至于asto;asforAsforTrashaun,neverhaddreamedthathisvideoswouldexertsuchasignificantimpact,whichmadehimdeterminedtoassistmoredisabledadolescents.②特殊句式某人从未……Neverhadsbdone;Undernocircumstanceshadsbdone③动词短语产生如此大的影响exertsuchasignificantimpact④动词短语帮助残疾青少年assistdisableadolescents三、最终自测Afewdayslater,thegoodnewsthatTrashaunacceptedtheinvitationtomeetJaycecame. 在Jayce的期待中，见面的一天终于来了。一看到对方，两人就笑了，并相互拥抱。他们很快变熟了，愉快地在球场上打了一下午篮球。在聊天的过程中，Trashaun激励Jayce要勇敢和自信，去征服生活中的所有挑战。“只有你自己才能打败你自己。”Trashaun坚定地说。Afterthemeeting,Jaycelearnedtoaccepthisdisability.Jayce不再抱怨命运的不公，而是开始乐观面对生活。在Trashaun的激励下，Jayce开始练习投篮，希望有一天能像他的榜样那样熟练地扣篮。由于Jayce身上发生的这些变化，这位母亲的心头卸下了一个沉重的负担。至于Trashaun，他从来没有想过他的视频会产生如此大的影响，这让他下定决心去帮助更多的残疾青少年。最终范文Para1:Afewdayslater,thegoodnewsthatTrashaunacceptedtheinvitationtomeetJaycecame.InJayce’santicipation,finallycamethedaywhenthetwoboysgatheredtogether.Scarcelyhadtheirglancesmetwhenbiggrinsemergedontheirfaces,accompaniedbyatighthug.Theygotacquaintedverysoon,spendingawholeafternoonplayingbasketballonthecourtincheerfulspirit.Inthecourseofchatting,TrashauninspiredJaycetobebraveandconfidentenoughtoconquerallchallengesinlife.“Nothingbutyourselfcandefeatyou.”Trashaunsaidfirmly.Para2:Afterthemeeting,Jaycelearnedtoaccepthisdisability.Insteadofcomplainingabouttheinjusticeofhisfate,Jaycebegantoadoptamoreoptimisticattitudetowardslife.MotivatedbyTrashaun,Jaycegotdowntopractisingshootingbasketball,expectingtobeasskillfulashisrolemodelinslamdunkoneday.OwingtoallthesechangeshappeningtoJayce,thismotherfeltagreatweightwastakenoffhermind.AsforTrashaun,neverhaddreamedthathisvideoswouldexertsuchasignificantimpact,whichmadehimdeterminedtoassistmoredisabledadolescents.

一只手男孩（学生版）一、原文WhenJayceCrowderwasinkindergarten,hebegannoticingthathelookeddifferentfromhisclassmates.Theyhadtwohands.Buthehadonlyone.Itstartedwhenoneboyteasedhim.Jaycewasinabadmood.He'dreturnhomeinDesMoines,Iowa,withquestions:WhyamIdifferent?Whyme?Why?"Heactuallytoldusthathewasmadatlookingsodifferentfromothers,"saidhismother,CortneyLewis."Thatreallyhurthim."Lewisadmittedshedidn'tknowwhattodoatthatpoint.Howcouldsheprovideanswerstoherson'squestionswhenshehadneverfoundthoseanswersherself?Afewweekslater,LewiscamehomefromherjobandturnedontheTVtoanewsstoryaboutTrashaunWillis,aneighthgraderfromWashingtonmiddleschool,Iowa.Theboy,then14,hadbecomeanInternetstarafterpostingvideosofhisslamdunk(扣篮),and,likeJayce,hewasmissingmostofhisleftarm.LewiscalledJaycein.Hewasshocked,staringatonedunkafteranother.Atthetime,itseemedthatwatchingTrashaunwouldsimplybeaninspiringmomentforJayce—he'dseeashiningrolemodelwithaseeminglysimilarborndisability.Andhaditstayedjustthat,Lewiswouldhavebeenhappy.ButlittledidsheknowthatafamilyfriendhadalreadyreachedouttotheDesMoinesRegister,askingthenewspapertohelpsetupameetingwithTrashauntoencourageJayceandbuildhisconfidence.Afewdayslater,thegoodnewsthatTrashaunacceptedtheinvitationtomeetJaycecame.Afterthemeeting,Jaycelearnedtoaccepthisdisability.二、分句练习Para1:Afewdayslater,thegoodnewsthatTrashaunacceptedtheinvitationtomeetJaycecame.在Jayce的期待中，见面的一天终于来了。①特殊句式那天终于来了。②定语从句见面的那天③名词期待一看到对方，两人就笑了，并相互拥抱。①特殊句式一……就……②动作看到对方③动作两人笑了④动词短语伴随着他们很快变熟了，愉快地在球场上打了一下午篮球。①动词短语变熟②地点在球场上③心情愉快地在聊天的过程中，Trashaun激励Jayce要勇敢和自信，去征服生活中的所有挑战。①介词短语在……的过程中②动词短语激励某人做某事③动词征服“只有你自己才能打败你自己。”Trashaun坚定地说。①名词只有②动词坚定地说Para2:Afterthemeeting,Jaycelearnedtoaccepthisdisability.Jayce不再抱怨命运的不公，而是开始乐观面对生活。①介词短语不再②名词短语命运的不公③动词短语乐观面对生活在Trashaun的激励下，Jayce开始练习投篮，希望有一天能像他的榜样那样熟练地扣篮。①动词短语被……激励②动词短语开始③形容词像sb一样熟练由于Jayce身上发生的这些变化，这位母亲的心头卸下了一个沉重的负担。①介词短语由于②名词短语在Jayce身上发生的这些变化③固定表达某人心头卸下负担至于Trashaun，他从来没有想过他的视频会产生如此大的影响，这让他下定决心去帮助更多的残疾青少年。①介词短语至于②特殊句式某人从未……③动词短语产生如此大的影响④动词短语帮助残疾青少年三、最终自测Afewdayslater,thegoodnewsthatTrashaunacceptedtheinvitationtomeetJaycecame. 在Jayce的期待中，见面的一天终于来了。一看到对方，两人就笑了，并相互拥抱。他们很快变熟了，愉快地在球场上打了一下午篮球。在聊天的过程中，Trashaun激励Jayce要勇敢和自信，去征服生活中的所有挑战。“只有你自己才能打败你自己。”Trashaun坚定地说。Afterthemeeting,Jaycelearnedtoaccepthisdisability.Jayce不再抱怨命运的不公，而是开始乐观面对生活。在Trashaun的激励下，Jayce开始练习投篮，希望有一天能像他的榜样那样熟练地扣篮。由于Jayce身上发生的这些变化，这位母亲的心头卸下了一个沉重的负担。至于Trashaun，他从来没有想过他的视频会产生如此大的影响，这让他下定决心去帮助更多的残疾青少年。最终范文Para1:Afewdayslater,thegoodnewsthatTrashaunacceptedtheinvitationtomeetJaycecame.InJayce’santicipation,finallycamethedaywhenthetwoboysgatheredtogether.Scarcelyhadtheirglance