2024届高三英语作文复习写作专项读后续写：不爱芭蕾爱拳击（追逐梦想）讲义素材

读后续写：不爱芭蕾爱拳击题目：BalletwasawayoflifeinKelly’sfamily.HereldersisterSerenawasnowdancingatatopcollege.ThoughKelly’smomalwayswantedhertofollowinhersistersfootstepsandKellyherselfwasgoodatballet,herloveforballethadfadedyearsbeforeandshewaseagerforanewchallenge.Onedayatschool,asKellyleftthedancestudioshewalkedpastthegym,fascinatedbyboxers(拳击手)traininginsidetheboxingring.Shewasdeeplyimpressedbyhowhardtheyhitandhowfasttheymoved.Infactshedlongbeenattractedtoboxing.Shepulledapieceofpaperfromherbackpack.OnthefamiliarOakwoodHighSchoolClubSign-upSheetwasthephrase:BOXINGCLUBTRYOUT(选拔).ThatwaswhatKellyreallywantedtodo.Sheknewhermomhadhighexpectationsforherwhenitcametoballet.Tiredoftryingtokeepupwithhersister,Kellywasreadytocarveherownpath.Thenextday,shegatheredhercourageandtoldSerenaabouthernewpassion.AtfirstSerenadidn’tunderstandandthoughtshewasjustjoking.ButwhenshesawKellywasserious.shereplied,“YouknowMomwantsyoutobeaballetdancer,right?Besides,boxingisonlyforboys,andyou’resogoodatballet.Leanintoyourstrength,Kelly."“ButthisiswhereIwanttoputmystrength,”Kellyinsisted,“andwhatexactlydoesonlyforboysmean,anyway?Boxingisasportforeveryone!”Gradually,touchedbyherdeterminationandpassionSerenabegantounderstandandsupporther.Kellycouldfeelit.Hersisterwasgoingtorespectherdecisionnomatterwhat.Butthatwasnothingcomparedtothepreparationsforthetryout,whereshewasrequiredtoshowherfootworkandpunching(击打)abilitieswithothercandidates.Boxingdidn’tcomenaturaltoKelly,butshehadmadeuphermindtostickwithherchoice.Para1：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Para2：ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.范文：Para1：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Everydayafterschool,insteadofpracticingdancing,shetrottedtowardsthegymtolearnthebasicboxingskills,endeavoringtoenhanceherpunchingabilities.Nevertheless,yearsofballetpracticemadeherinitialpunchesnotpowerfulenoughtoknockothersover.Exhaustedasshewas,/Despitethephysicalchallengesandexhaustion,Kellyderived(得到)anunprecedentedsenseofaccomplishmentandcontentmentthatshehadn’tfeltinyears.Asthedayprogressed,finallycamethetryoutday.Ontheboxingring,courageousanddetermined,Kellypunchedheropponenthardandbeathimeventually.每天放学后，她不再练习跳舞，而是快步走向体育馆学习基本的拳击技巧。然而，多年的芭蕾舞练习使她一开始的出拳不够有力，无法击倒别人。尽管身体上的挑战和疲惫，Kelly获得了多年来从未有过的成就感和满足感。随着时间的推移，终于到了选拔赛的日子。在拳击场上，好斗而坚定的凯莉给了对手一拳，最终击败了他。笔记： 现在分词做伴随状语；“...assbwas,虽然...但是...（克服困难句型）”；衔接下段Para2：ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.TheinstantKellyspottedhernameonthelist,shefeltamixtureofdelightandthrillsurgingthroughherandallherdedicatedendeavorspaidoff.Dartingtowardshomelikeanarrow,scarcelycouldshewaittosharetheexcitingnewswithSerena,bothofwhomresolvedtorevealthesecrettohermom.LearningthatKellywasadmittedintotheBoxingclub,Momfellsilentforawhileandrepliedinanunexpectedway.“Iamsoproudofyou.Forgivemeforimposingtheballetdreamonyou.Youhavetherighttocarveyourownpathandpursuewhatyoutrulylove.”Hearingthesewords,KellyembracedMomtightlyandaradiantsmilespreadoverherface.当凯莉看到自己的名字出现在名单上的那一刻，她感到喜悦和激动涌上全身，她所有的努力都得到了回报。她像箭一样飞奔回家，迫不及待地想把这个激动人心的消息告诉塞蕾娜，她们俩都决定把这个秘密告诉她妈妈。得知凯利被拳击俱乐部录取后，妈妈沉默了一会儿，然后以一种意想不到的方式回答。“我为你感到骄傲。原谅我把芭蕾梦强加给你。你有权利开辟自己的道路，追求你真正喜欢的东西。”听到这些话，凯莉紧紧地拥抱了妈妈，脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。笔记：theinstant...一....就...;混合情绪句型；迫不及待句型；某人终于理解了对方；动作定格结尾最终自测：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.每天放学后，她不再练习跳舞，而是快步走向体育馆学习基本的拳击技巧。然而，多年的芭蕾舞练习使她一开始的出拳不够有力，无法击倒别人。尽管身体上的挑战和疲惫，Kelly获得了多年来从未有过的成就感和满足感。随着时间的推移，终于到了选拔赛的日子。在拳击场上，好斗而坚定的凯莉给了对手一拳，最终击败了他。ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwer