13 社会正能量与志愿者招募 中考英语满分作文赏析

13社会正能量与志愿者招募NO.1（2022·重庆·中考真题）科学研究发现，快乐可让我们身体更健康、思维更敏捷、心态更阳光。独乐乐不如众乐乐。某英语网站以“传递快乐”为主题发起故事分享活动，请讲述生活中你通过传递快乐（直接或间接的），感染他人的小故事。要求：1.80-120词；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.起因，经过；2.结果，感悟；3.……_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】

Astudyshowsthathappinesscanmakepeoplehealthierinmindandmental.Ourpositivemoodhasaninfluenceonothers.Iwanttosharemyexperiencewithyou.

IhaveagoodfriendandhernameisLucy.Shewassoshortthatotherclassmatesalwayslaughedather.Shewasveryupset.AtthattimeIalwaystoldhersomefunnystoriestocheerherup.Andtobecometallandstrong,Ialsotaughthertokeepahealthydietanddosomeexercise.Littlebylittle,shebecameconfident.Fromthisexperience,Ilearnthathappinessisimportantanditcanbringusalotlikeamoresunnymindset.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“传递快乐”为题写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称和第一人称，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己传递快乐的经历；最后表达自己从这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。NO.2（2022·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。（1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。（2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。（3）树干太沉，她搬不动。（4）人们过来帮忙。（5）你认为……参考词汇：被吹倒beblowndown

挡住block

树枝branch

树干trunk要求：（1）词数：80~100个。（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua【满分作文赏析】DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,onWangHong’swayhome,shesawabigtreewasblowndownbywindanditblockedtheway.AfterWangHongsawit,shepickedupthebranchesonthegroundandthenmovedthetrunkagain.Butthetrunkwassoheavythatshecouldn’tmoveitbyherself.Whenotherpeoplesawwhatshewasdoing,theyweremovedbyherandcametohelpher.Finally,theysucceededinmovingthetrunkaway.Ithinksheisaverykindperson.Andfromthisstory,Ilearnthatweshouldoffertohelpwhensomeoneneedshelp.Itnotonlyhelpsothers,butalsomakesourselveshappy.Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua【解析】1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出，第二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。NO.3（2022·陕西·中考真题）学校是个大家庭，这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以“SchoolIsaBigFamily”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要求，从结构图的三个方面写一篇英文演讲稿。参考词汇：bepatient(with),careabout,encourage,share,help,understand,love,havefun,...要求：1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)Goodafternoon,everyone!Iamgladtobeheretogiveaspeech.Mytopicis“SchoolIsaBigFamily”._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime!【满分作文赏析】Goodafternoon,everyone!Iamgladtobeheretogiveaspeech.Mytopicis“SchoolIsaBigFamily”.First,mymathteacherispatientwithme.Shehelpsmetostudymathbetter.Second,myclassmateshelpmealot.I’mnotgoodatsports.MyfriendLiYunhelpedmewithrunningandIranfaster.Also,Icareaboutmyteachersandclassmates.OnedaymyEnglishteacherhadacoldandItoldhertodrinkmorehotwater.Shefeltwarmandthankedme.Ibelieveifweunderstandandhelpeachother,ourschoolwillbeabetterplace.Thankyouforyourtime!【解析】1.题干解读：本文以“SchoolIsaBigFamily”为题，并结合提示内容写一篇演讲稿，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段重点描述同学和老师对我的帮助，以及我对他人的帮助；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。NO.4（2022·福建·中考真题）假定你是李华，近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题的实践活动。请你结合以下图示，用英语给笔友John写一封信，分享活动过程和感受。词数80左右。注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。DearJohn,Howiseverythinggoing?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【满分作文赏析】DearJohn,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mgladtotellyoumyone-dayexperienceinricefields.OnJune18,myclassmatesandIwenttothecommunityfarm.Whenwearrived,wevisitedthefarmandwatchedvideosonfarming.Thenweworkedtogetherwithfarmers.Somelearnttoharvestrice.Somehelpedtocarryricewhileotherspickedearsofricefromthefields.Throughtheactivity,I’vegotthepleasureofhardworkandlearnttovalueeachgrain.Haveyouhadanyexperienceofthiskind?Yours,LiHua【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据图示内容，以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题写一篇作文。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主。人称以第一人称为主。写作时需涵盖要点，包括日期、地点、活动和感受，可适当发挥使行文连贯，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。NO.5（2022·山东泰安·中考真题）让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动，对其成长具有重要意义，可以帮助他们学习新技能，增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至，请根据下面表格中的内容提示，以“MyVolunteerWorkPlan”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划，并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。VolunteerWork◎Helpinthecitylibrary

◎Cleanupthecityparks◎Holdacharitybazaar（义卖）

◎Dovolunteerworkinahospital◎Visittheoldpeople’shome

◎…要求:1.可选择表格中的1-2个活动项目，也可自拟活动项目；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80-100；3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。MyVolunteerWorkPlan______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】MyVolunteerWorkPlanThesummerholidayiscoming.Iamgoingtodosomevolunteerwork.Iwillhelptocleanupthecitypark.Ofcourse,Iwillaskmorepeopletojoinme.Iwillcallupmyfriendsandaskthemtocome.Wewillpickupthelitter,theplasticbagsandotherwastethings.Ihopeourcitywillbemorebeautiful.Besides,Iamgoingtovisitsickkidsinhospital.Ilovechildrenandenjoygettingalongwiththem.Iwillsingforthekidsatthecityhospitaltocheerthemup.Ihopetheycanbebettersoon.NotonlydoIfeelgoodabouthelpingotherpeople,butalsoIgettospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo.Allinall,Iwillenjoymyselfinthesummerholiday.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假期间的志愿者计划。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称采用第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己的志愿者计划以及打算做些什么事情；第二段表达自己做志愿者的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。NO.6（2022·四川眉山·中考真题）本周日上午，一些外国学生将到三苏祠参观，现三苏祠急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华，请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。要点包括：1.自荐目的：成为志愿者；2.个人信息：身份，年龄，性格（外向、善于与人相处），本周日上午有空；3.个人优势：擅长英语，……；4.表达期望：获得机会并能做好，请本周五前回复。注意：1.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。参考词汇：三苏祠SansuTempleDearSir/Madam,IamgladtoseeyournoticeVolunteersWanted.Someforeignstudents…____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________