14 旅游话题 中考英语满分作文赏析

14旅游话题NO.1（2022·湖北武汉·中考真题）假如你是李欣，你与Bob叔叔及其家人约定了一起去北京旅行。请你给Bob叔叔写一封英文电子邮件，告知你的旅行安排。内容要点如下：1.6月30日下午2:00机场见；2.酒店已预订好，直接前往；3.第二天观看升旗仪式；4.游长城，吃北京烤鸭；5.补充一两点与旅行有关的信息或想法。注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数60—80；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：bookv.预订

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flag-raisingceremony升旗仪式【满分作文赏析】DearUncleBob,I’msogladtohearfromyouaboutvisitingBeijing.Here’sthetripplan.We’llmeetattheairportat2p.m.onJune30th.WecangotothehoteldirectlytohavearestasI’vealreadybookedtherooms.Thenextdaywe’llwatchtheflag-raisingceremonyatTian’anmenSquareearlyinthemorning.Itmustbeamazing!WhatabouttheGreatWall?It’sworthvisitingandyou’llbeimpressed.Asfordinner,we’llhavethedeliciousfood,Beijingduck.Honestly,Iamgettingexcitedaboutthetrip.LookforwardtomeetingallofyouinBeijing.LiXin【解析】1.题干解读：题目要求根据内容要点及参考词汇给Bob叔叔回一封邮件，告知Bob叔叔自己对旅行的安排。2.写作指导：邮件的开头和结尾已给出，写作时要补全正文内容，要以第一人称为主，时态多用一般将来时。邮件可分为两段式：第一段介绍具体的计划；第二段表达自己的期待。要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。NO.2（2022·浙江绍兴·中考真题）假设你是刘军，在上周末的乡村旅游中，你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件，反映这些问题并提出建议。UncivilizedbehaviorsSuggestions●threwrubbisheverywhere●pickedflowers●climbedtrees●putrubbishintobins●…注意：（1）邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；（2）你的建议至少两条；（3）词数：80—100；（4）邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：不文明行为uncivilizedbehavior；编辑editorDeareditor,IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorswhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiuJun【满分作文赏析】Deareditor,IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorswhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend.Somevisitorsthrewrubbisheverywhereandleftplasticbagsflyingaround.Somepickedflowerswithoutpermissiontotakephotossothattheycouldshowoffonline.Andsomeclimbedtreesforfun,whichmightresultinseriousaccidents.Ithinkitwrongtoenjoyoneselfatthecostofothers.Visitorsaresupposedtoprotecttheenvironment,likeputtingrubbishintoproperbins.Andtheyshouldbecarefulnottocausetroubletothelocalsandkeepawayfromdanger.Inthisway,agreener,cleanerandmorecivilizednewvillagewillbethereforusalltoenjoy.YourssincerelyLiuJun【解析】1.题干解读：本文主要以题干表格中的内容讲述一些游客的不文明行为并提出相关的建议，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段主要描述自己发现的游客的一些不文明行为；第二段提出自己的建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。NO.3（2022·内蒙古包头·中考真题）假定你是李华，下周你的英国朋友Alan要来北京游玩，并发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封邮件。Hi,NextweekI’llbewithyouinBeijing.Ican’twait!Wecoulddolotsofexcitingthingstogether.AndnowIneedtopackformytrip.WhatshouldIbringwithme?Ialwaystakelotsofthingsinmybagandcan’tfindwhatIreallywant!PleasetellmehowIcouldpack.SinceIaminterestedinhistoryandcultureofChina,Iwanttoknowwherewewillgo.I’dliketogetyousomesouvenirsfromwhereIlive.Whatwouldyoulikemetogetyou?I’msoexcitedaboutthetrip!Seeyousoon.AlanMakealist（T-shirts,sunglasses…）Placesmallbagsinsidebigbags…Placesofinterest（thePalaceMuseum,theGreatWall…）Postcards,books…参考词汇：packv.打包

souvenirn.纪念品注意：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。HiAlan,I’msohappytogetyouremailsayingthatyou’recomingtovisitusnextweek.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyou!LiHua【满分作文赏析】HiAlan,I’msohappytogetyouremailsayingthatyou’recomingtovisitusnextweek.Sinceyouaregoingonalongflight,Isuggestyoumakealistofthingsyoutake.Itisabithotinsummerhere.SoyoucantakeT-shirtsandsunglasseswithyou.Doyouhatethatfeelingwhenyoucan’tfindwhatyou’relookingforinyourbag?M