高考英语复习浙江强基联盟读后续写-Findbackmydog-Spider讲义

续写题目：狗与主人再团圆MyfamilymovedfromToowoomba,CanadatoLondonin1950.Mymotherwasingreatpainfromthe1950s

epidemicofpolio

（小儿麻痹症）.ShewishedtovisitspecialistsinLondon.Thedaybeforeweboardedtheship,

Fatherbadeatenderfarewelltohisfiveyearold

“friend”

atthedock（码头）,anAustraliancattledog,Spider,who

waslovedbyusall.Father’sfriendSandywastobehisguardianwhilewewereoverseas.Sixweekslater,aletterarrivedfromSandy,givingmyfatherthenewsthatSpiderhadrunawayjusttwo

weeksafterwehadsailed.Iwillalwaysremembermyfather'sfacecrumblingandhiseyesglisteningashereadthe

letter.Wetriedtoforthim,knowinginourheartshowuselessthiswas.Sandyhasadvertisedconstantlyon

ABCradioandotherlocalnewspapers.Despitesome

“sightings”

inthedockatfirst,thedogwasneverfoundlater.

ItseemsSpiderdecidedtosearchforuselsewhere.WesailedbacktwoyearslaterandreestablishedourhomeinToowoomba.Myfatherimmediatelybeganhis

ownsearchingforSpider.SeveralmonthspassedbuttherewasstillnonewsconcerningSpider.Thedogwasgone,

possiblyshotordeadfromstarvationorexhaustion.Onecoldmorning

eightmonthsafterourreturn,myfatherhadacallfromanoldladywhosaidshewas

puttingfoodout“foraveryolddog”.Inthenightthefooddisappeared.Thishadbeengoingonforafewweeks.

Thatwasenoughformyfathertointerruptmyhomeworkandwesetoffimmediately.Whenwearrivedattheold

lady’shouse,sheinvitedusintoanoldbush.Sadly,shethentoldusthatthe

“dingodog”

hadn’tbeenaroundfora

fewdays.Myfatherhadastrangelookinhiseye.Heputtwofingerstohislipsanddidhisspecialwhistle

（口哨）forSpider.Paragraph1:Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.Paragraph2:Fromthenon,Spiderandmyfatherwouldhangoutatthedock.前情回顾：1950年，由于母亲与小儿麻痹症有关的健康问题，全家从加拿大图文巴搬到伦敦。临走前，父亲向他心爱的澳大利亚牛头犬蜘蛛道别。父亲的朋友Sandy同意在全家出国期间照顾Spider。Sandy的一封信告诉家人，Spider在他们离开两周后逃跑了。尽管努力寻找他，包括在ABC电台和当地报纸上登广告，Spider仍然下落不明。两年后，一家人回到图文巴，父亲再次开始寻找蜘蛛。一位老太太联系了这家人，报告她一直在喂一只“很老的狗”，可能是蜘蛛。老太太把他们带到一棵老灌木，但说“野狗”已经好几天没见了。.父亲试图用两根手指抵住自己的嘴唇，以此来唤回蜘蛛。续写情节发展：第1段：突然灌木丛中出现了一声狗叫。(1)Ourattentionisdrawn(2)Spiderappears(descriptionofappearance)(3)Peopleanddogsgathertogether第2段：从那时起，Spider和我父亲会在码头闲逛(1)Thesignificanceofthedock(2)Descriptionofhumandoginteraction(3)Humandogemotionalevaluation(4)Borrowingdockforsublimation参考范文1Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.

“ItmustbeSpider!”

myfatheryelledexcitedly.Andthenextmomenthewasoutinthebush,followingthesoundofthebark.Curiously,Ifollowedmyfather’sfootsteps,prayingthatsomemiraclewouldeup.Yes,thereinthebushlayadog,skinnyandhungry,AnditwasourSpider,thedogwehadbeenmissingbadlyandlookingformadly.Hestruggledtohisfeet,approachedusandthrewhimselfintomyfather’sarms,whichmadehiseyesmoisten.Asiffindingbackhislonglosttreasure,myfatherscoopedupthedog,putitintothecarand,withheartfeltgratitudetotheoldlady,headedbackhome.Fromthenon,Spiderandmyfatherwouldhangoutatthedock.

BothmyfatherandSpiderenjoyedthemomentstogether.Everymorning,theywouldgreetthenewdaytogether,watchingthesunrisingbeyondthehorizonandtheshipssailingoutofthehustlingharbor.Andtowardstheevening,theywouldembracethelastrayofthesunlightdisappearingbehindthehorizonandwatchshipsinginforaquietnight.Dayinanddayout,Spiderwasgraduallybackonhisfeetwithmyfather’scareandtheirbondseemedtobestrengthening.Deepdownatheart,myfatherpromisedtohimselfthathewouldneverleavehisSpideraloneagainnomatterwhathappened.AndhewouldacpanySpidertilltheendoftheworld.参考范文2Suddenlythere

wasasoundinthebush.Outofthegrowthflewthisbattereddogrightinto

myfather'sarms.Spiderhadleapedoverthetenniscourtfencewithgreatforceandcertainty.

Myfather'seyesshone,andtheoldladyandIstoodtherewithtearsinoureyes.Hekeptlicking

myfather'sfaceandmakingchokingnoises.Hesmeltdreadful.Wewrappedhiminanold

blanketandIheldhimonmylaponthewayback.

Heneveroncetookhiseyesoff

myfatheras

wedrovehome.

EverysooftenIreceivedalickofgratefulness.Fromthenon,Spiderandmyfatherwouldhangoutatthedock.Oncehome

wehadthetaskof

gettingallthepricklesoff

him.Beforehewasputina

tintub,wegentlycleanedhimupwithsoap.

Spiderstoodstoicallythroughallthisasmyfather

alsoexaminedhisteethandears.Spiderspenttherestofhisdaysyearsonthefrontporch,

contentandsatisfied,

alwaysinwaitformysisterandmeinghomefromschoolwherehe

wouldgiveusalotoflickstomakesurewewereallright.Hethenwaitedformyfatherbythe

garagedoor.

Weneverlefthimanywherealoneagain.参考范文3Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.

However,nothinghappened,Daddroppedhishead,sawbislipsweretrembling.Nervousashewas,dadtriedagainandagain,desperateandhopeless,.Atthatverymoment,ayellowdotappearedattheendoftheroad.“WasitSpider?"Myheartbegantobeatwidely,mypalmsconstantlysweating.Ididn'tknowwhattodo.Dadgrabbedmycoatandrushedstraightahead,prayingforathousandoftimesthedogwasourSpider.Closerandcloser.FinallylcouldclearlyseethepoordogSpider.Itwashim,mylonglostfriend,spider..Spiderlookedlikeanoasisonthevastandbarelandofthedesertformydad.Oh,poorSpider.Wesawthepitifulpetdognow,coveredwithdustanddirt.Andoneofitslegswasbadlyhurt.Everyonepresentheldtheirbreathandlater,thefiled,crowdcouldn'tstoptheirtears.Fromthenon,Spiderandmyfatherwouldhangoutatthedock.BothmyfatherandSpiderenjoyedthemomentstogether.Everymorning,theywouldgreetthenewdaytogether,watchingthesunrisingbeyondthehorizonandtheshipssailingoutofthehustlingharbor.Seeingthesmileondadsface,lfeltrelivedthatheregainedhislosttreasureagain.Sunshinecastingaworeglowontheground,thecrazebutrewardingexperiencewasdeeplyengravedinmymind,givingmealostfriendagain.Alloureffortsweren'tinvain!参考范文4Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.

Myfatherjumpedoutofhisseatandranoutside.WeheardhimcallingSpider'sname,Wewaitednervouslyinside,prayingthatSpiderwould

ebacktous,Afterafewminutes,weheardmyfather'svoiceagain,louderandmore

excitedthistime.

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