高三下学期英语二轮专题复习1.建议信学案

应用文学案建议信Letterofadvice应用文学案建议信Letterofadvice一、写作攻略建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤：1.首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，注意语气。2.主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。3.结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。写作这类题目时,要注意审清题目，不要跑题，时刻记得书信的交际功能，要考虑到收信人的感受。在给对方提建议时应该时时说到I和You，要让人时刻感受到这是一种交流。二、写作要点建议信是一种应用文体，主体时态常用一般现在时，主体人称为第二人称。1.写作主题:作者对有关问题进行分析，并对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.写作对象：1）写给某个人，就此人遇到的问题提出自己的观点和看法。2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3.基本框架：1）开头（beginning）：开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点。2）对提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议。3）呼应开头，重申观点。4.注意事项：1）写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。简明扼要，目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。2）建议信一般为半开放性写作，因此建议的角度要多样化。3）符合英语信件的基本格式。三、常用套语建议信开头常用句式：I’mwritingtoexpressmyviewabout/on…Youhaveaskedmyopinionon….soIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.It’smypleasuretoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowto…建议信表达建议常用句式：Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialtoyouifyoucould…Inmyopinion,it’sveryimportantforyouto…Inmyopinion,itwouldbewiseofyouto…I’mafraidyou’dbetter…建议信结尾常用句式：Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/remendationsuseful/ofimportance.Ihopeyoumayconsidermyadvice.Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouforfurtherdetails.四、常用篇章模式DearBob, I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon….HerearesomesuggestionswhichIhopewillbeofsomehelptoyou. Tobeginwith,itisagoodideato….,throughwhichnotonlycanyou….butalsoyoucan…..Next,Ithinkitwouldbebeneficialifyou….Thisisbecause….Lastbutnotleast,ifpossible,….ThereasonwhyIremenditisthat…. I’llbemorethanhappyifyoucantakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Ifyouneedfurtherinformation,don’thesitatetocontactme.Sincerelyyours,LiHua五、实战演练例1：假如你叫孙军，是郑州市第12学高中部的一名学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤的现象，包括以下要点：问题：学校和一所小学毗邻，对着马路，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤；学生过马路在车辆中穿行危险。建议：政府应采取措施，如修天桥等。注意：1.书信应包括以上内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数100左右； 3.参考词汇：市长mayor,天桥overpass第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。现以此题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）第一人称文章的题材是什么？一封信要写的文章主题是什么？（topic）建议政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况怎样安排信息点的顺序？（order）说理逻辑性动作是什么时候发生的？（时态）（when）一般现在时第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题：学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家长接送，交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。建议：政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。1)学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街(standnextto…primary…facethemainstreet…)推荐句型：Therebe+并列句There’saprimaryschoolnearourschool,andbothschoolsfacethemainstreet.非谓语结构Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,facingthemainstreet.Standingnexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolfacesthemainstreet.将介词短语提前（全倒装）Nexttoaprimaryschoolstands/lies/isourschool…,facingamainstreet.润色小建议可将standnextto替换为高级词汇/短语,如：(belocatednextto(near/beside/by)2)在…对面beoppositeto3)高峰期交通繁忙表达Thetrafficisbusyduringtherushhour.Duringtherushhour,thereisalotoftraffic.还可用so….that…Duringtherushhour,therearesomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroadthat…用with结构是不是更高级？Withsomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroad,…润色小建议“高峰期”可意译:atpeaktime，alargecurrentofcarsandpeople4)“交通繁忙”可译为:trafficjambechoked(up)with…,becrammedwith…被…堵塞/塞满5)加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.用非谓语结构如何？是不是句子更高级了？Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,makingthetrafficheavier.What’smore,…pickup….make….Tomakethingsworse/What’sworse,manyparentsingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.用so….that….或too…toThechildrenaresoyoungthatparentshavetosendthemtoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.润色小建议makingthetrafficheavier可换为makingthesituationmoreserious.6)学生过街在车辆中穿行危险固定句型Itis+adj.+forsb.todo….Itisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.润色小建议:适当增加形容词和副词：itisextremelydangerous，itisofgreat/tremendousdanger7)政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。简单句:Isuggestthatthegovernmentshouldtakestepssuchasbuildinganoverpass.表语从句Mysuggestionisthatthegovernmentshould…固定句型Itishightimethat…(虚拟语气)Itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuilding…润色小建议适当添加一些意思（过渡句）Inordertorelievethestressoftrafficproblems,…Aimingtosolvetheseproblems,thegovernmentshould…Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuild…第三步:连句成文，但要注意篇章的连贯性请将选项填入下面文中，以使行文连贯A.AsaconsequenceB.AccordingtothephenomenonstatedaboveC.WhenitestotrafficjamsD.WhatmakesthingsworseisthatNexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet.___________,it’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._______________childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.___________,it’sofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._________________,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.（Keys:CDAB）范文：DearMayor, I’mastudentofNo.12HighSchool.HereIamwritingtouncoverthetrafficproblemsinfrontofourschoolgate. Myschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschoolandfacesamainstreet.Whenitestorushhour,theroadiscrammedwithbusesandcars.Besides,childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage,whichcontributestoanevenworsetrafficsituation.Asaconsequence,it’sofgreatdangerforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad. Therefore,it’shightimeforthegovernmenttotakesomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpasstorelievethetrafficburdenandimprovethetrafficconditionofthisarea.Wewillappreciatethehelpverymuch.Thankyouforyourtime!Yoursfaithfully,SunJun例2.假定你是李华，你的英语朋友Peter来信向你询问如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊，电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。认真审题，根据题意在下面填入你认为恰当的句子（可一句多译）。DearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.1._______________________________________________________________________________.First2.___________________________________________________________________________Then,3._______________________________________________________________________________Besides,4.____________________________________________________________________________Inaddition,youcanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.5._______________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua参考一下：1.①Hereareafewsuggestions.②Thefollowingareafewsuggestionsforyou.2.①itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.②youhadbetterattendaChinesecourse,where,withotherstudents,youcanlearnundertheguidanceofateacher.3.①italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.②beingrepeatedlyexposedtoChinesebooks,magazines,andTVcanalsohelpyoualot.4.①itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.②itisbeneficialtoyoutolearntosingChinesesongs,whichcanmakeyourlearningmoreinterestingandeffective.5.①TryandwritetomeinChinesenexttime.②Lookingforwardtoyourprogress.例3：假定你是李明，今年刚升入某高中上学，总体感觉宿舍环境良好、设备齐全。但是，仍然存在一些不尽人意的方面，为此想给校方提些建议。要点：1、冬天室内暖气不足，供暖系统需要进一步改进；2、家具设计不合理，没有供放书的书架。构思：1）写作对象：时态人称2）可用到的词汇及短语：obligation:n.义务，责任generallyspeaking:总的来说situate:v.处于，位于wellequipped:adj.设备齐全的maintain:v.保持，维持place:v.放置ina...manner:以......的方式其他：3）可用到的句型FreshmanasIam,Ifeelthatitismyobligationtomakesomesuggestionsconcerning...Iwou