Unit10写作能力提升练课件人教版八年级英语下册

UNIT10

写作能力提升练UNIT

10I’vehadthisbikeforthreeyears

你的家乡每天都在发生着日新月异的变化。请根据下面的提示，以“TheChangesinMyHometown”为题写一篇英语作文，描述一下你家乡的变化。内容包括：1.过去的家乡什么样；2.现在的家乡什么样；3.对未来家乡的期待。要求：

1.语法正确，语句通顺；2.词数80左右。

［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语完成句子。1.我的家乡近几年发生了很大的变化。Myhometown

haschanged

⁠alotinrecentyears.2.它曾经是一个安静的地方。It

usedto

⁠beaquietplace.3.环境不如以前那么好了。Theenvironmentisnot

asgoodas

⁠before.4.我希望我的家乡越来越漂亮。Ihopemyhometownwillbe

moreandmore

⁠beautiful.haschangedusedtoasgoodasmoreandmore［巧妙衔接］文章以时间为主轴，分别描写家乡的过去、现在和将来。使用表示时间的介词短语或副词，如inthepast，nowadays，inthefuture等来衔接文章，使文章层次分明。［连句成篇］TheChangesinMyHometownMyhometownhaschangedalotinrecentyears.Inthepast，theairherewasveryfreshandtheriverwasclean.Thehousesweresmallandold.Peoplewenttoworkonfootorbybike.Itusedtobeaquietplace.Nowadays，thingsarequitedifferent.Thehousesarebigandbright.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Thechangeshavebroughtyoungpeopleamodernlife.Theyallfeelhappy.Buttherearefewertrees，andtheenvironmentisnotasgoodasbefore.Ihopemyhometownwillbemoreandmorebeautifulsothatwecanliveahappierlifeinthefuture.

澳中友好协会准备举办以“AGiftfromtheHeart”为题的征文比赛，要求参赛者分享在一些特别的日子里用心准备的礼物。写作要求：词数：80～120；参考要点：1.介绍特别的日子；2.分享赠送的礼物；3.表述礼物的意义。AGiftfromtheHeart

Whilethinkingabouthowtocheerhimup，IsawmyEnglishnotebook.Althoughitwasveryimportanttome，Idecidedtogiveittohim.Helookedatmeinsurprise.HeknewhowcarefullyItookthenotes.ItoldhimthatIcouldalsohelphimlearnEnglish.

Mikehasmadeprogresswiththehelpofmygift，thenotebook.It’snotexpensivebutit’sfrommyheart.

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Whilethinkingabouthowtocheerhimup，IsawmyEnglishnotebook.Althoughitwasveryimportanttome，Idecidedtogiveittohim.Helookedatmeinsurprise.HeknewhowcarefullyItookthenotes.ItoldhimthatIcouldalsohelphimlearnEnglish.

Mikehasmadeprogresswiththehelpofmygift，thenotebook.It’snotexpensivebutit’sfrommyheart.

⁠一、话题分析本单元以“居住环境(Livingenvironment)”为话题,运用所学时态和短语描写物品承载的记忆、讲述周围事物的变化以及对将来的展望。二、素材积累(一)“描写喜欢的物品或事物”类作文的常用词汇:favoritething//give//birthday//like//sweetmemories//raise//asfor//inone’sheart//goback//mychildhood//haveabigfight//placesofinterest//differentkindsof(二)“描写喜欢的物品或事物”类作文的常用句型:开头句1.Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodisatoybear.2.Pleaseallowmetointroducemybeautifulhometowntoyou.3.IhavealotoftoysandIlikethetoyrabbitbestofall.中间句1.Thetoybearhasleftmesomanysweetmemories.2.It’sspecialtomebecauseIusedtoplaywithitalmosteveryday.结尾句1.Wecouldnotonlymakefulluseofoldthings,butalsomakesomemoneyinthisway.2.Ibelieveyouwillfallinlovewithmycityandhaveawonderfultime.(三)句子升格1.Idon’twanttopartwiththesetoys.(升格为含though引导的让步状语从句的复合句)→Idon’twanttopartwiththesetoysthoughI’mgettingolder.2.I’llkeepitforever.Itcanremindmeofmygrandma.(升格为含动词不定式表目的的句子)→I’llkeepitforevertoremindmeofmygrandma.三、写作任务你小时候最喜欢的东西是什么?它有什么特别的地方?它给你带来了怎样的回忆?请写一篇关于它的英语短文。不少于80词。【写作方法及写作模板】“三步三段式”描写喜欢的物品或事物引出Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodisa...Ihavehaditfor...详细描写...gaveittome.IrememberwhenIwassixyearsold...Iwouldnevergotobedwithoutit.Ilikeitverymuchbecause...感受Thetoybearhasleftmesomanysweet

memories.Evennow,Idon’twantto...【高分作文】____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodisatoybear.Ihavehaditfortenyears.Mymothergaveittomeonmyfifthbirthday.It’sspecialtomebecauseIusedtoplaywithitalmosteverydayuntilIwastenyearsold.Ithoughtitwasoneofmybestfriends._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________