上海市部分区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语汇编：写作（含解析）

上海市部分区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语试题汇编写作上海市青浦区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末调研卷英语试题IV.GuidedWriting49.Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin80-100wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是浦韵中学的高一学生李文(LiWen),你们校刊的“TraditionandCulture”栏目正在举办征文活动，征文主题为“我与中国传统节日(ChineseTraditionalFestivalandMe)”。你的征文必须包括：●一个具体节日；●你的体验和认识。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________上海市徐汇区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末质量调研英语试题Ⅵ.GuidedWriting(10%)【上教版】64.Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositioninabout80-100wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.近日，学校正举办主题为“ThepersonIadmire”的征文大赛。假设你叫王海，请你写一篇短文，介绍一位你敬佩的人，内容包括：1.描述此人的外貌特征和性格特点；2.阐述此人对你的影响。(注意：文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名。)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________上海市上海市嘉定区2023-2024学年高一上学期1月期末英语试题66.Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositioninnolessthan100wordsaccordingtothesituationgiven.假设你是王明，你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中，他发邮件给你，说他不喜欢旅游，宁愿在家里玩游戏。回复李华一封邮件，告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。在邮件中，你必须：1.指出李华的认识误区;2.结合具体例子来说明旅游的好处。注意：文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________上海市虹口区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷65.Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositioninabout80-100wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.近日，校园内流浪猫(homelesscats)增多，学生会拟设立一个爱心猫舍(shelter)，供师生在此处喂养流浪猫。假设你叫王海，请你写一份邮件给学生会表达你的想法，内容包括：1.你是否赞同设立爱心猫舍；2.你理由。(注意：文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________上海市闵行区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末区统考英语试卷64.Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学的学生李华.你和同学们上周末去医院参加了志愿者活动，请按照以下四幅画的先后顾序，给校刊“英语角”版面写一篇英文稿件，介绍此次经历（可合理增加一些细节），并简要说说心得体会。稿件的第一句已给出。参考词:self-serviceregistrationmachine自助挂号机consultingrooms诊室WeChatMoments朋友圈Lastweekend,myclassmatesandIworkedasvolunteersinahospital…….__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案上海市青浦区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末调研卷英语试题【答案】ChineseTraditionalFestivalandMeOfalltheChinesetraditionalfestivals,IlovetheSpringFestivalbest,whichisconsideredasthebest-knownChinesefestivalwhenallChinese,homeandabroad,gettogether,wavinggoodbyetothepastandgreetingthefuture.WiththeapproachingoftheNewYear,everyoneisreadytodothehousecleaning,preparingnewornaments.OntheSpringFestival’sEve,myfamilyandIgatheraroundthetableforabigdinner,afterwhich,westayuplateorallnight.WhatIammostexcitedaboutistheredpacketsIwillreceiveinthefollowingdays,includingtheonesIgetfromrelatives.ChineseSpringFestivalisrepresentativeofthespiritofreunionandofgreatimportancetoallChinese.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求以“我与中国传统节日(ChineseTraditionalFestivalandMe)”为主题写一篇征文活动。【详解】1.词汇积累在……之中：of→among认为：consider→regard装饰：ornament→decoration激动的：excited→thrilled2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：WiththeapproachingoftheNewYear,everyoneisreadytodothehousecleaning,preparingnewornaments.拓展句：AstheNewYearapproaches,everyoneisreadytodothehousecleaning,preparingnewornaments.【点睛】【高分句型1】OfalltheChinesetraditionalfestivals,IlovetheSpringFestivalbest,whichisconsideredasthebest-knownChinesefestivalwhenallChinese,homeandabroad,gettogether,wavinggoodbyetothepastandgreetingthefuture.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句和非谓语动词作状语）【高分句型2】WhatIammostexcitedaboutistheredpacketsIwillreceiveinthefollowingdays,includingtheonesIgetfromrelatives.（运用了what引导的主语从句和省略关系词的定语从句）上海市徐汇区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末质量调研英语试题【答案】范文ThePersonIAdmireInmylife,Ihaveencounteredmanyremarkableindividuals,butonepersonwhoparticularlystandsoutismyneighbor,Mr.Smith.Heisamanofmediumheightwithabaldheadandapairofsparklingblueeyes.Mr.Smithnevergivesup,regardlessofthechallengeshefaces.Hefacedatoughtimeintherecenteconomicdownturn,yetheneverlosthope.Heusedtheopportunitytolearnnewskillsandstartedhisownsmallbusiness.Hisstoryofperseveranceisaninspirationtome,teachingmethatsetbacksaretemporaryandcanbeturnedintoopportunities.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“ThepersonIadmire”为题写一篇短文，介绍一位敬佩的人。【详解】1.词汇积累遇到：encounter→meet非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary机会：opportunity→chance挫折：setback→frustration2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Mr.Smithnevergivesup,regardlessofthechallengeshefaces.拓展句：Mr.Smithnevergivesup,nomatterwhatchallengeshefaces.【点睛】[高分句型1]Inmylife,Ihaveencounteredmanyremarkableindividuals,butonepersonwhoparticularlystandsoutismyneighbor,Mr.Smith.(运用了who引导定语从句)[高分句型2]Hisstoryofperseveranceisaninspirationtome,teachingmethatsetbacksaretemporaryandcanbeturnedintoopportunities.(运用了that引导宾语从句)上海市上海市嘉定区2023-2024学年高一上学期1月期末英语试题【答案】DearLiHua,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.Iwasdisappointedtoreadyourrecentemailexpressingyourdislikefortraveling.WhileIunderstandyourpreferenceforstayingathomeandplayinggames,Iwanttoshedsomelightonthevalueoftravel.Travelismuchmorethanjustseeingnewplaces;it’saneye-openingexperiencethatbroadensourhorizons.JustthinkofthecountlesshistoricallandmarksandculturalartifactsyouencounteredduringyourEuropeantrip.Theseexperienceshelpusunderstandtheworldbetterandappreciateitsdiversity.Forinstance,whenyouvisitedtheEiffelTower,didn’tyoufeelasenseofwonderandexcitement?Thatsamefeelingiswhattravelisallabout.It’saboutexperiencingnewthings,meetingnewpeople,andlearningaboutdifferentwaysoflife.Moreover,travelisagreatwaytode-stressandrecharge.Gettingawayfromthefamiliarenvironmentandroutinecanrejuvenateourmindsandbodies.Iknowyoumentionedyouwouldratherstayathomeandplaygames,butIbelievethebenefitsoftravelfaroutweighthecomfortsofhome.Ihopemywordsresonatewithyou,andmaybeeveninspireyoutoembracetravelmorefullyinthefuture.Remember,theworldisabigplacefullofhistory,culture,andbeautywaitingtobediscovered.Yours,WangMing【解析】【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中，他发邮件给你，说他不喜欢旅游，宁愿在家里玩游戏，要求考生给他回复一封邮件，告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。【详解】1.词汇积累表达：express→show欣赏：appreciate→admire另外：moreover→furthermore激励：inspire→encourage2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Iwasdisappointedtoreadyourrecentemailexpressingyourdislikefortraveling.拓展句：Iwasdisappointedtoreadyourrecentemail,whichexpressedyourdislikefortraveling.【点睛】[高分句型1]WhileIunderstandyourpreferenceforstayingathomeandplayinggames,Iwanttoshedsomelightonthevalueoftravel.(while引导的让步状语从句)[高分句型2]Travelismuchmorethanjustseeingnewplaces;it’saneye-openingexperiencethatbroadensourhorizons.(that引导的定语从句)上海市虹口区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷【答案】DearStudentUnion,Istronglysupporttheinitiativetoestablishashelterforhomelesscatsonourcampus.Thepresenceofthesecatsnotonlyenrichesourcampuslifebutalsoremindsusofourresponsibilitytowardsalllivingbeings.Providingasafehavenforthemwillensuretheirwell-beingandalsopreventanypotentialissuesarisingfromtheirunmanagedpresence.Furthermore,suchanactofkindnessandcompassionwillsetapositiveexamplefortheentirecommunity,fosteringacultureofcareandrespectforalllife.Ibelievethatwithourcollectiveeffort,wecanmakeasignificantdifferenceinthelivesofthesecatsandcontributetoamorehumaneandsustainablecampusenvironment.Thankyouforconsideringmythoughtsonthismatter.Sincerely,AConcernedStudent【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。校园内流浪猫(homelesscats)增多，学生会拟设立一个爱心猫舍(shelter)，供师生在此处喂养流浪猫，要求考生就此事写一份邮件给学生会表达你的想法。【详解】1.词汇积累建立：establish→setup提供：provide→offer另外：furthermore→additionally重要的：significant→important2.局势拓展简单句变复合句原句：Providingasafehavenforthemwillensuretheirwell-beingandalsopreventanypotentialissuesarisingfromtheirunmanagedpresence.拓展句：Providingasafehavenforthehomelesscatswillnotonlyensuretheirwell-beingbutalsopreventanypotentialissuesthatmayarisefromtheirunmanagedpresenceoncampus.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thepresenceofthesecatsnotonlyenrichesourcampuslifebutalsoremindsusofourresponsibilitytowardsalllivingbeings.(运用了notonly...butalso...句型)[高分句型2]Ibelievethatwithourcollectiveeffort,wecanmakeasignificantdifferenceinthelivesofthesecatsandcontributetoamorehumaneandsustainablecampusenvironment.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)上海市闵行区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末区统考英语试卷【答案】Lastweekend,myclassmatesandIworkedasvolunteersinahospital.Inthemorning,adoctorgaveusalecture,tellingusofourrolesasvolunteers.Itwasthefirsttimeformetoknowthedailyworkinahospital.