Unit4JourneyacrossavastlandUsinglanguage写作课件高中英语人教版(2019)选择性

Unit4Journeyacrossavastland

Ane-mailofjourneythePrairieSeeingthetruenorthviarail:VancouverandtheheartofCanada

Seeingthetruenorthviarail:TorontoandMontrealWhatwillthepassageprobablytalkabout?Itwillprobablytalkaboutthenextlegoftheirtrip.onepartofajourneyorrace

What’sthetypeofthepassages?TraveljournalWhatarethefeaturesofatraveljournal?The

type

ofthe

passageisThe

majorcontentsofthepassageareTraveljournal.whointimeorderduring

their

first

day；the

next

day；after

another

day

on

the

train；night

came

again；when

they

woke

up

the

next

morning;after…wherewhatscenery/activitieshowfeeling/routewhen——people——time——placesInadditiontospectacularmountainpeaksandforests,onehighlightoftheirtripwasbeingabletoseemanydifferentcreatures....thebluewaterliterallytooktheirbreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeauty.Thebushesandmapletreesoutsidetheirwindowswerered,gold,andorange,andtherewasfrostontheground....Montrealisacitywithwonderfulsightsandsounds.MostofusspeakbothEnglishandFrench,andthecityhasuniqueQuebeccultureandtraditions.Therearefantasticrestaurantsandclubsaround,too.Q3:Howcanwemakethedescriptionofthetravelappealing?languagefeatures?—descriptivelanguageUseaccurateandpicturesqueadjectives...thebluewaterliterallytooktheirbreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeauty.Thetrainthunderedon,throughtherollinghills.Thegirlssawhundredsofskyscrapersofglassandsteel,andold-fashionedcarsrollingby.ThatnightthetrainwasspeedingalongtheStLawrenceRiver.Usevividverbsdescriptivelanguage

accurateandpicturesqueadjectives

vividverbs

todescribethecharacteristicsorstateofthesubjectortoshowsubjectivefeelingtodescribeactivitiesandactionsWritingTaskImaginethatyouareLiDaiyu.Usingthemapandyournotes,writeanemailtoyourparentstellingthemaboutthetrip.Beforeyouwrite,pleasethink:StructureHowmanypartsdoyouplantowrite?Whataretheirfunctions?Whatorderwouldyoufollowwhendescribingthejourney?ContentWhatdoyoulearnaboutCanadafromthejourney?WhatimpressedyoumostinLiandLiu’sjourney?Howdoyoufeelaboutthejourney?Whichexperiencesareyougoingtowriteabout?Why?Westartedin...Thenextday...Wearoseearlythenextmorning...Then...Now...

love,LiDaiyu

DearMumandDad,beginning

body

ending

greeting+purposewho,when,where,what,howcommunicativesentence+signatureCanadamajorcitiesgeographyweathercultureagriculturetransportationlanguageWhatdoyoulearnaboutCanadafromthejourney?DearDadandMum,___para.1_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________para.2_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________para.3__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,DaiyugreetingpurposebodywhatwhenwhohowendingsignatureStructure：Attention:1.mainlyinpasttense2.usediscoursemarkers3.acoherentemail4.vividdescriptions5.trytoreducemistakeswhere审题1.确定文体：这是一篇电子邮件，向朋友介绍一次难忘的旅游经历。2.主体时态：以一般过去时为主。景物描写用一般现在时。3.主体人称：人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。谋篇第一段：开门见山，介绍本次旅行的目的地和想参观的景点。第二段：自己的游览经历，时间、地点、人物及交通方式等如描述旅游中的所见所闻等。另外，可适当表达自己的内心感受，把叙事、写景、抒情相结合。第三段：旅游的心得体会，总结全文，发出邀请。审题谋篇核心词汇1.景色

_______2.让人惊叹

______________________3.在黄昏

_______4.返回

____________________5.一定会

___________6.参观，拜访

___________scenerytakesb.’sbreathawayatduskmakeone’swayback遣词造句beboundtopayavisitto1.七月七日，我和表妹刘倩乘飞机去了加拿大，一个以枫叶闻名的地方。OnJuly7，mycuisionLiuQiangandItookplanetoCanada，where

.2.这是目前为止最棒的旅行，我真的太爱它了。

andand

I

really

love

it!3.第二天，我们从温哥华出发，在这里购物，然后徒步旅行。Thenextday，started

in

Vancouver,

where

we

went

shopping

for

gifts

and

then

went

hiking.Thebeautifulsceneryonthemountain

.isfamousforthemapletreesIt

has

been

a

wonderful

trip

so

far

tookourbreathaway4.接下来，我们乘火车去洛基山脉的路易斯湖，然后乘坐长途汽车穿过洛基山到贾斯伯。Then

we

took

a

train

to

Lake

Louise

in

the

Canadian

Rockies,

then

a

coach

through

the

Rockies

to

Jasper.5.这里景色壮观-大片森林山脉，碧绿的湖，各种动物。甚至看见灰熊The

scenery

was

spectacular—massive

forests

and

mountains,

beautiful

blue

lakes,

and

all

kinds

of

animals.We

even

saw

a

grizzly

bear!

6.从这出发，我们坐长途火车到多伦多，被加拿大大草原的空旷和宽广所惊讶。From

there,

we

took

a

long-distance

train

to

Toronto.

We

were

amazed

by

how

empty

and

wide

the

Canadian

Prairie

was.

…7.目之所及的尽量延伸。路过温尼伯格后是湖和山，如此美丽。It

just

stretched

on

and

on,

as

far

as

the

eye

could

see.

But

then

after

we

passed

Winnipeg

we

were

in

a

land

of

lakes

and

hills.

It

was

all

so

beautiful.8.我们登上国家电视塔，看到令人吃惊的景色，瀑布上方水雾缭绕We

went

to

the

CN

Tower

and

were

surprised

because

we

could

see

misty

clouds

rising

from

the

Niagara

Falls

across

the

lake.

9.我们到蒙特利尔老城区购物From

there

we

travelled

to

Montreal

where

we

went

shopping

in

the

old

town.

10.我们在餐馆吃饭遇到一个男孩摄影师，他告诉我蒙特利尔及其文化Then

we

stopped

at

a

restaurant

where

we

met

a

cool

guy

named

Jean-Philippe.

He’s

a

photographer.

He

told

us

all

about

Montreal

and

its

culture.

11.这里的大多数人说法语，也说英语。最后，我们到了哈弗里克斯Did

you

know

that

nearly

everyone

there

speaks

French?

Luckily,

many

of

them

speak

English

as

well.

Finally,

we

caught

the

train

to

Halifax.12.这是一场美好的旅行，有很多美好的回忆。我们计划下周结束旅程飞回家。It

has

been

a

great

trip,

filling

us

with

so

many

happy

memories.

We

plan

on

spending

about

a

week

here

getting

rested

up

from

our

journey,

and

then

we’ll

fly

home.Timetowrite.

Dear

Mum

and

Dad:

Thank

you

so

much

for

allowing

me

to

go

on

this

journey!

It

has

been

a

wonderful

trip

so

far,

and

I

really

love

it!

We

started

in

Vancouver,

where

we

went

shopping

for

gifts

and

then

went

hiking.

Unfortunately,

it

rained

the

first

day

we

were

there,

but

then

it

became

clear

after

that.

…Then

we

took

a

train

to

Lake

Louise

in

the

Canadian

Rockies,

then

a

coach

through

the

Rockies

to

Jasper.

The

scenery

was

spectacular—massive

forests

and

mountains,

beautiful

blue

lakes,

and

all

kinds

of

animals.

We

even

saw

a

grizzly

bear!

From

there,

we

took

a

long-distance

train

to

Toronto.

We

were

amazed

by

how

empty

and

wide

the

Canadian

Prairie

was.

…It

just

stretched

on

and

on,

as

far

as

the

eye

could

see.

But

then

after

we

passed

Winnipeg

we

were

in

a

land

of

lakes

and

hills.

It

was

all

so

beautiful.

Toronto

was

amazing.

We

went

to

the

CN

Tower

and

were

surprised

because

we

could

see

misty

clouds

rising

from

the

Niagara

Falls

across

the

lake.

Then

we

had

dinner

in

Chinatown

with

Lin

Fei

(she

says

“Hi!”).

…PossibleVersionFrom

there

we

travelled

to

Montreal

where

we

went

shopping

in

the

old

town.

Then

we

stopped

at

a

restaurant

where

we

met

a

cool

guy

named

Jean-Philippe.

He’s

a

photographer.

He

told

us

all

about

Montreal

and

its

culture.

Did

you

know

that

nearly

everyone

there

speaks

French?

Luckily,

many

of

them

speak

English

as

well.

Finally,

we

caught

the

train

to

Halifax.

It

has

been

a

great

trip,

filling

us

with

so

many

happy

memories.

We

plan

on

spending

about

a

week

here

getting

rested

up

from

our

journey,

and

then

we’ll

fly

home.Love,Daiyu篇一：加拿大之旅DearMumandDad,

亲爱的爸爸妈妈，

I’minthecityofMontrealnow,readytocatchthetraintoHalifax.Don’tworry.Iamhavingawonderfultime

我现在在蒙特利尔市，准备乘火车去哈利法克斯。

别担心。

我在这里玩得很开心。here.Youknow,whatimpressedmemostwashowdiverseCanadais.Tobeginwith,Canadaissovastthatyou’reableto你知道吗，给我印象最深的是加拿大的多样性。

首先，

加拿大幅员辽阔，你可以在这里experienceavarietyofsightshere.Forinstance,notonlycanyouenjoytheexceptionalbeautyofmountainsandforests体验各种各样的风景。

例如，

你不仅可以欣赏到加拿大落基山脉独特的山脉和森林之美，intheCanadianRockies,butyoualsohaveachancetoseegreatlakeslikeLakeLouiseandLakeHuron.What’smore,还可以有机会看到路易斯湖和休伦湖等大湖。

此外Canadaisacountrywithmulticulture.HereinMontreal,mostpeoplespeakEnglishandFrench.Andweevenhad加拿大是一个多元文化的国家。

在蒙特利尔，

大多数人说英语和法语。我们甚至吃了中国菜，ChinesefoodbecauseChinesepeoplehavebeencominghereformorethanahundredyears.因为中国人来这里已经有一百多年了。

IhavelearnedalotaboutCanada.Thankyousomuchforgivingmethechance.IplantoflybackhomenextFriday.我对加拿大了解了很多。非常感谢你给我这个机会。我计划下周五飞回家。Love,LiDaiyu(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases1.______________利用2.________________如下3._______________游览

4.________________出发5.________________七日游

6.________________欣赏风景7.____________动身去某地

8._____________名胜古迹takeadvantageofasfollowstakeatoursetout/offaseven-daytripenjoythesceneryleaveforplacesofinterest9.________________和……一起10.________________即将来临

11________________乘公共汽车12._________________旅游景点13._________________度假14.__________________15.____________________(了解)当地文化16._____________________拓宽知识面aroundthecornertakeabustogetherwithtouristattractionbeonholiday/vacation入住（旅馆）/退房checkin/outunderstandthelocalculturebroadenone’sknowledgeStep2

Listphrasesandsentences.①________________vt.网上预订②________________登记③________________提前

④________________同时⑤________________四天的旅行

bookonlineinadvanceatthesametimeafour-daytripcheckin参考范文DearRichard,ThankyouforyourletteraboutyourtripinXi'an,

whichisamazing.Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyplansforthecomingholidays.

WiththeNationalDaycoming,IamgoingtotraveltoHainanIslandtoseeitsbeautifulscenerywithmyfamily.Wewillspend6daysthere,fromOct.1thtoOct.6th.

It’sbecauseofitsbeautifulscenerythat

wechoosetotraveltoHainanIsland.Otherthanhikingontheisland,wehaveplanedmanyotheractivitieslikesurfinginthewater,spendingthenightsinthetents.Iamsurewewillhaveawonderfulholiday.Inmyopinion,travelcannotonlyenrichmyknowledge,butalsobroadenmyhorizons.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua

1.我听说它是一个令人惊叹的景点，我迫不及待的想去。2.对于我来说，兵马俑的故事几乎令人难以置信。3.我们还计划去西安的其他几个地方。I'veheardthatitisanamazingsight,andIcan'twaittogo.Tome,thestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.We'realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi'an.4.我爸爸和我都期待去陕西历史博物馆，因为……MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,because……5.我们将坐火车，十月假期开始前一天离开。We'retakingthetrain,leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.1.七月七日，我和父母乘车去了四川乐山，一个以大佛闻名的地方。OnJuly7，myparentsandItookabustoLeshan，SichuanProvince.Leshan

.2.当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我感到自己是多么的渺小。

anddownatthelargefeet，IfeltIwassosmall.3.第二天，我们登上了峨眉山，那里的美景让我们惊叹。Thenextday，weclimbedMountEmei.Thebeautifulsceneryonthemountain

.4.如果我有时间，一定会再来游览乐山。IfIhavetime，I

Leshanagain.isfamousfortheGiantStoneBuddhaWhenIlookedupatthelargeheadtookourbreathawayamboundtopayavisitto句式升级1.用非限制性定语从句改写句1。________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.用现在分词短语作状语改写句2。______________________________________________________________________3.把句3改成以关系副词引导的定语从句。_______________________________________________________________________________OnJuly7，myparentsandItookabustoLeshan，Sichu