Unit 1 Friends第7课时 示范公开课教学课件【八年级英语上册（译林版）】

Unit1Friends

Task4/29/2024Warming-upWorkingroupsoffouranddescribeoneofyourbestfriendstoyourgroupmembers.Whatisthenameofyourbestfriend?Whatdosehe/shelooklike?Whyishe/sheyourbestfriend?NoseLooksPersonalityMyfriendPre-writingbig,small,round,bright,smilingclever,smart,polite,friendly,kind,generous,hard-working,helpful,honest,humorous,patientLet’shaveabrainstorm.beautiful,pretty,good-looking，handsome,lovely,cute,short,tall,fat,slim,smart,strongEyesFaceHair

long,round,square,smallbig,small,long,short,straightblack,darkbrown,long,short,straightWordsusedtodescribeaperson.Pre-writingLookandlearn.squaresmilingPre-writinghandsomefathard-workingpatientReadDaniel’sarticleandanswerquestions.Pre-writing1.WhoisDaniel’sbestfriend?Kate.2.Whatdoesshelooklike?She’stallandslim.Shehaslonghair.Shehasaroundfaceandasmallnose.Shehasbrightsmilingeyes.3.What’sshelike?She’sfriendly,helpfulandpatient.4.Whatwouldsheliketobewhenshegrowsup?Shewouldliketobeateacher.Readagainandthinkaboutwhateachparagraphtalksabout.Pre-writingDaniel’sbestfriendKateParagraph1Paragraph2Paragraph3Paragraph4KateisDaniel’sbestfriend.Kate’slooksKate’spersonalityKate’sfutureplanIntroductionMainbodyEndingLet’ssummarize.Pre-writingHowtoorganizeyourideaswhenwritingaboutyourbestfriend.DescribeyourbestfriendIntroductionMainbodyEndingthenameofyourbestfriendhis/herlooksandpersonalityhis/herfutureplansShareyourwritingChooseatopicCollectdetails(细节)Writeafirstdraft(草稿)Improveyourwriting(改进)CheckforerrorsWriteafinalcopyTheprocessofwritingPre-writingLookandlearn.4/29/2024Chooseatopicandmakeachart.1.Chooseonepersontowriteabout.2.Makeachartlikethis.LooksPersonalityEndingtall,thinasquarefacebigbrighteyesshortstraighthairtellfunnyjokesnevertelllieshisfutureplanhumoroushonest…Topic:Tom……Pre-writing4/29/2024Writeafirstdraft(草稿).While-writingWriteapassageofintroducingyourbestfriendandremembertoincludeaintroduction,amainbodyandanendinginyourpassage.ContentCompletepointsStructureAclearstructureLanguageNogrammarandspellingmistakes

HandwritingCleanandprettyResult:_________≥9

Excellent≥7

Good=

6

Notbad≤5

NeedtoworkharderPost-writingEvaluateyourwritingsingroups.4/29/2024Checkyourwritingforerrors.Tomistallandslim.Hehaveasquareface.Hehasbigbrighteyesandshortstraighthair.Heoftenwearsabluebaseballhat.Helookshandsome.Tomisahonestboy.Icanalwaystrusthimbecausehenevertellslie.He’sreadytohelpothersanytime.hehasagoodsenseofhumourandoftentellsmefunnyjokes.Tomoftenlistenstootherpeoplecarefullyandhelpsthemsolvetheirproblems.Hewouldliketobeasocilworkerwhenhegrowsup,

Ithinkhewillmakeagoodsocialworker.anaHe.socialhasPunctuation(标点)

Capitalization(大写)

Grammarerror

SpellingPost-writing4/29/2024________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Tomisbothmyclassmateandmybestfriend.Tomoftenlistenstootherpeoplecarefullyandhelpsthemsolvetheirproblems.

Hewouldliketobeasocialworkerwhenhegrowsup,

Ithinkhewillmakeagoodsocialworker.Useyourbesthandwriting!Tomistallandslim.Hehasasquareface.Hehasbigbrighteyesandshortstraighthair.Heoftenwearsabluebaseballhat.Helookshandsome.Tomisanhonestboy.Icanalwaystrusthimbecausehenevertellsalie.He’sreadytohelpothersanytime.Hehasagoodsenseofhumourandoftentellsmefunnyjokes.MyBestFriendPost-writingWriteafinalcopy.

SummaryHowtoorganizeyourideaswhenwritingaboutyourbestfriend.DescribeyourbestfriendIntroductionMainbodyEndingthenameofyourbestfriendhis/herlooksandpersonalityhis/herfutureplans

SummaryTheprocessofwritingPrewrite:

chooseatopic&collectdetails(细节)Write:writeafirstdraft(草稿)Revise:improveyou