试题导练（十三）

试题导练（十三）试题展示阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasintheeighthgrade,Ibecameinterestedinmountainclimbing.ThenIclimbedmyfirstmountainafairlygentle3,900footpeaknearwhereIlivedinSurrey,BritishColumbia.Ilovedthechallengeofconquering(征服)somethingbiggerthanmyself.Ilikedclimbingmoreandmore.SoonI'dclimbednearly100peaks.MyparentswerehappyI'dfinallyfoundahobby.Twoyearsago,onDecember30,whenIwas16,IwenttoOregontoclimb11,240footMountHoodwithmyfriendMelOlsen.It'ssafertostartwinterclimbsatnightwhenthere'slessriskofthesunmeltingthesnowpack(积雪).Thatday,westartedat3a.m.Thetemperaturewasabout14degrees.Alongtheway,wemettwootherclimbers,andthefourofuscontinuedontogether.Afteraboutfivehours,wereachedDevil'sKitchen,aplaceatabout10,000feet.Bythispoint,thewindconditionswereunfavorable.Myexposedskinfeltasthoughitwereburning.Thetrailwefollowedgrewnarrowerandsteeper.Ataround9a.m.,wereachedanicestep.Ivolunteeredtogofirst.Iplacedmyleftfootonit.ConfidentIwassafe,Iputmyfullweightonit.Suddenly,Iheardaloudnoise,andawholepieceoficebrokeoffthestep,rightundermyfoot.Inaninstant,Ifellbackward,rollingdownthemountainasifIwereacharacterinavideogame.Afterafewseconds,IcametoastoponashallowslopejustabovetheDevil'sKitchen.I'dfallen600feet.Myclothesweretornintosmallpieces,myhelmetwasbroken,andmyfacewasbloodiedfromcutsandscratches.Fortunately,forthemostpart,Iwasfine,exceptthatIwassufferingfromasharp,greatpaininmyleftleg.注意:续写词数应为150左右。Paragraph1:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2022·湖南郴州·一模)文本分析①人物:I;MelOlsenmyfriend;twootherclimbers②时空线:atthefootofMountHood→Devil'sKitchen→anicestep→ashallowslopejustabovetheDevil'sKitchen→?③情节线:④主题:1)面对困难,不放弃,坚持就是胜利;2)团结协作,互帮互助。细读语言①第一段:SoonI'dclimbednearly100peaks.此句表明作者极其热爱登山,在很短的时间里就登上了近百座山峰。思考:作者在此次登山途中遭遇意外,摔了下来,那么她会因此害怕意外发生,就此停止登山吗?续写第二段首句中的Iwassoonclimbingagain暗示作者在此次登山事故后又开始登山。在续写时，我们可否与此句中的climbednearly100peaks呼应,表现出作者热爱登山,又登顶了很多座山峰呢?②第二段:Alongtheway,wemettwootherclimbers,andthefourofuscontinuedontogether.思考:作者在此处交代了与自己一同登山的几位朋友。作者受伤后,朋友们会如何去应对呢?续写第一段是不是可以写朋友们在作者受伤后帮助她的具体行为呢?③第三段:Ivolunteeredtogofirst.Iplacedmyleftfootonit.这两句描写了作者在登山过程中遇到艰难、不好走的路时自告奋勇,要求先打头阵。思考:续写第二段首句中的Thisaccidentmademereflectdeeply暗示这次事故让作者有了深刻的反思。那么,作者会有哪些反思呢?续写部分,我们需要从哪些方面来突出作者的反思呢?④尾段:Myclothesweretornintosmallpieces,myhelmetwasbroken,andmyfacewasbloodiedfromcutsandscratches.Fortunately,forthemostpart,Iwasfine,exceptthatIwassufferingfromasharp,greatpaininmyleftleg.这两句说明作者摔下来后身受重伤,尤其腿部剧痛难耐。思考:这句话给下文埋下的伏笔是什么?作者的腿严重受伤,应该是不能独立行走了。续写部分我们需要交代清楚作者是如何被救的。受伤如此严重,作者一定感到剧痛难忍，那么我们在续写部分是否有必要描写作者的心理和感受呢?⑤高频词:mountainclimbing,snow,ice,pain是本文的关键词，根据所给的两句段首句，mountainclimbing和pain肯定会在续写部分复现,我们可以思考一下它们出现的场景。研读首句第一段首句:关键词:yelled,help;首句译文:我大声呼救。第二段首句:关键词:reflectdeeply,climbingagain;首句译文:这次事故让我有了深刻的反思,但我很快又开始登山了。续写部分预测:第一段内容:根据续写第一段首句Iyelledforhelp可推测，续写第一段的内容围绕获得救助的过程展开。第二段内容:根据续写第二段首句Thisaccidentmademereflectdeeply,butIwassoonclimbingagain可推测，续写第二段主要围绕作者通过此次经历得到了哪些反思,以及后续又开始登山展开叙述。微写作练习根据要求和括号内的提示完成下列句子。动作描写1.扩充句子:MelOlsen赶到“我”身边。MelOlsenhurriedtomyside.①_________________________(她一听到;使用assoonas引导从句)mycryforhelp,MelOlsenhurriedtomyside.②____________(一听到;使 用on开头)mycryforhelp,MelOlsenmadeherwaydownandhurriedtomyside.补全句子:他们为“我”检查身体。①____________________(深吸一口气),theycheckedmylegcarefully.②Theysecuredmylegand_________________________(呼叫救援队).3.改写句子:我被送上救护车，送进医院。①Theyrushed metohospitalimmediately.________________________________________________(改为被动语态)②Theyloadedmeintoanambulanceandtookmetoahospital.______________________________________________(改为被动语态)心理、情绪描写描写“我”忍受剧痛的心情。①扩充句子:Itriednottocryfromthepain.Itried ____________(竭力)nottocryfromthe________(难以忍受的)pain.②转换表达:Afteraverylongtime,therescueteamfinallyarrived.After____________________(使用what引导的从句),therescueteamfinallyarrived.③扩充句子:I'dbeenlyingontheiceforfourhoursbeforethe rescuers reachedme.I'dbeenlyingontheice_______________(痛苦地)forfourhoursbythetimetherescuersreachedme.补全句子:描写“我”的反思。①I_______________(学到一个教训):Alwaysbecareful.②IwillbealwayscarefulwhenIgooutdoors.Afterall,____________________(安全永远是第一位的).③Iwillalways______mypersonalsafety __________(考虑)andtakeothers'suggestionsseriously.3.扩充句子:描写“我”的内心感悟。①Thisexperiencetaughtmealifelesson.This________(令人害怕的)experiencetaughtmea_______(珍贵的)lifelesson,throughwhichIknewtheimportanceoffriendship.②IrealizedIwasluckyandblessed.Irealized____________________(使用感叹句)toberescuedand____________________(使用感叹句)tohavesuchsupportivefriends.衔接连贯合并句子:1.Iwasseizedbyterror.MyheartpoundedIrapidly.Mypalmsstartedtosweat.______________(动词ed形式),myheartpoundedrapidly_________(连词)mypalmsstartedtosweat.2.Icamebacksafeandsound.Thismadeeveryonerelieved.Theyallworerelievedsmilesaftertheysawme.①Icamebacksafeandsound,_________(关系代词)madeeveryonerelieved.②________________________(动词ing形式),theyallworerelievedsmiles.小试身手请你将自己的习作写在题目后的横线上吧!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：动作描写1.①Assoonassheheard②Onhearing2.①Takingadeepbreath②calledforarescueteam3.①Iwasrushedtohospitalimmediately.②Iwasloadedintoanambulanceandtakentoahospital.心理、情绪描写1.①extremelyhard;unbearable②whatseemedlikeages③inawfulpain2.①learnedalesson ②safetyalwaysesfirst ③take;intoaccount/consideration3.①frightening;valuable②howluckyIwas;howblessedIam衔接连贯1.Seizedbyterror;and2.①which ②SeeingIwassafeandsound 小试身手Onepossibleversion:Iyelledforhelp.Hearingmycryforhelp,Melmadeherwaydownandotherclimberscame