新高一衔接课英语学科学员资料(10作文)

第10讲：第10讲：作文学习目标学习目标1.了解高中写作的特点2.明确高中写作的思路3.掌握常见的表达句型4.提高书面表达的能力例题讲解学习内容例题讲解学习内容假定你叫张华。一家英文报社来信邀请你调查一下中学生对网络的使用情况，并依照调查结果写一篇报道。请根据下表提供的信息，对你的调查作简要介绍，发给报社。主要的用途出现的问题1.阅读国内外新闻，学习英语2.发e-mail、欣赏音乐、看电影玩游戏等3.网上购物1.过多地在网上玩游戏，浪费了时间，影响了学业2.浏览不健康信息，有害身心健康注意：词数80左右；文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数Deareditor,I’mwritingtotellyousomethingabouthowthestudentsusetheInternet._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopeeverystudentcanmakeuseoftheInternetproperlyfortheirstudies.知识点1：写作步骤——认真审题★根据所给文字信息或图画信息，审清作文题材、人称、时态、要点。例题审题结果如下：答案: 1〕关于网络优缺点的介绍； 2〕第一人称和第三人称为主； 3〕一般现在时为主； 4〕要点1：阅读国内外新闻，学习英语；要点2：发e-mail、欣赏音乐、看电影玩游戏要点3：网上购物要点4：过多地在网上玩游戏、浪费了时间，影响了学业要点5：浏览不健康信息，有害身心健康~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~知识点2：写作步骤——列出提纲★以词及点，即用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。例题提纲要点如下：答案： 要点1：readnewsathomeandabroad；learn/studyEnglish 要点2：sende-mails；listento/enjoymusic；see/watchfilms；playcomputergames 要点3：doonlineshopping 要点4：spendtoomuchtimeinplayingcomputergamesonline；wastetime；influence/affect/haveabadeffectontheirstudies 要点5：readunhealthy/harmfulinformation；doharmtoboththeirbodyandmind~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~知识点3：写作步骤——组词成句★用组词成句的方法将提纲要点的词语扩展成句子。例题连词成句如下：答案： 要点1：TheycannotonlyreadnewsathomeandabroadbutalsolearnEnglishthroughtheInternet/byInternet. 要点2：ByusingtheInternet,theycanalsosende-mailstotheirfamilies,relativesandfriends,enjoyvarioustypesofmusic,watchmoviesandplaycomputergames. 要点3：Theycandoonlineshoppingwithoutleavingtheirhomes. 要点4：Theyspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesonline.Therefore/Consequently/Asaresult,itwastesalotoftimeandaffectstheirstudies. 要点5：Theyreadsomeunhealthy/harmfulinformation,whichdoesharmtoboththeirbodyandmind.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~知识点4：写作步骤——连句成篇★主语、谓语等主干成分要齐全；★适当增加时间、地点、条件等背景知识；★选用准确的连接词衔接各个句子；★把握上下文的逻辑关系；★补齐开头与结尾例题连句成篇如下：Deareditor,I’mwritingtotellyousomethingabouthowthestudentsusetheInternet.Asweallknow,theInternetisplayinganimportantroleinourdailylife.Thereisnodoubtthatitbringsstudentslotsofconvenience.Tobeginwith,theycannotonlyreadnewsathomeandabroadbutalsolearnEnglishthroughtheInternet/byInternet.What’smore,byusingtheInternet,theycanalsosende-mailstotheirfamilies,relativesandfriends,enjoyvarioustypesofmusic,watchmoviesandplaycomputergames.Last,theycandoonlineshoppingwithoutleavingtheirhomes.However,everycoinhastwosides.TheInternetalsohasitsdisadvantages.Theyspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesonline.Therefore,itwastesalotoftimeandaffectstheirstudies.Tomakethingsworse,theyalsoreadsomeunhealthy/harmfulinformation,whichdoesharmtoboththeirbodyandmind.IhopeeverystudentcanmakeuseoftheInternetproperlyfortheirstudies.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~知识点5：写作步骤——润色提升运用较复杂的句子结构，如三大复合句，强调句，倒装句，非谓语动词，独立主格等；长短句结合，防止通篇简单句或长难句；尽可能使用高级词汇或地道短语；主被动结合，防止句子主语过于单一，重复。例题润色提升如下：Deareditor,I’mwritingtotellyousomethingabouthowthestudentsusetheInternet.Asweallknow,theInternetisplayinganimportantroleinourdailylife.Thereisnodoubtthatitbringsstudentslotsofconvenience.Tobeginwith,withthehelpoftheInternet,theycanhaveaccesstolearningthelatestnewsathomeandabroadaswellaslearningEnglish.What’smore,theInternetalsomakesitpossibleforthemtokeepintouchwithothersbysendinge-mailsandtorelaxthemselvesbyappreciatingmusic,seeingfilmsandplayingPCgames.Last,itismoreconvenientforthemtodoonlineshopping.However,everycoinhastwosides.TheInternetalsohasitsdisadvantages.Theyareaddictedto/arehookedon/areburiedin/arelostinonlinecomputergames,whichresultsinawasteoftimeandpoorperformanceintheirstudies.Tomakethingsworse,theyreadsomethingunhealthy/harmfulontheInternet,whichisphysicallyandmentallyharmfultothem.IhopeeverystudentcanmakeuseoftheInternetproperlyfortheirstudies.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~知识点6：写作步骤——检查修改，标准书写拓展：★如何有效衔接、表达层次1〕表示顺序/对照：first—second—third，firstly—secondly—thirdly，firstofall—then/next—afterthat—finally，ononehand—ontheotherhand表示转折：onthecontrary表示总结：ingeneral,inaword,inshort,onthewhole,inbrief,toconclude,tosumup,inconclusion,…表示因果：because/becauseof,asaresult,therefore,thanksto…表示递进：besides,what’smore,whatwasworse,moreover,furthermore,inaddition…表示让步：inspiteof,despite/despitethefactthat…★如何表达自己的观点1〕Asforme,…2〕Inmyopinion,…3〕AsfarasIamconcerned,…4〕Frommypointofview…5〕Iholdtheview/beliefthat…6〕Personally,Ibelievethat…7〕Accordingtomyexperience,Ithinkthat…★如何引出话题1〕Thereisnodoubtthat…毫无疑问…2〕Itcannotbedeniedthat…不可否认…3〕Noonecanignorethefactthat…谁也不可无视…★总结句、开头语1〕Tosumup/Inshort/Inconclusion/Inaword/Allinall,…总之，…2〕Takingallthefactorsintoaccount,wecandrawaconclusionthat…考虑到以上因素，能得到这样的结论：…3〕Fromthediscussionabove,itcanbesafelyconcludedthat…根据以上讨论，可以得出如下结论…4〕Tobebrief,weshouldbeawareoftheimportanceof…总之，我们应当明白…的重要性。5〕Therefore,itisnecessaryforusto…因此，我们有必要…6〕Onlyinthisway/whenwe…,canwe…只有用这种方法/只有当…时，我们才能…课堂练习课堂练习有人认为，自行车在不久的将来会再次成为人们的新宠，对此你持何种态度，为什么？请利用今天所学的表达形式写一篇100词左右的短文。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:Manypeoplethinkthatthebikewillsoonbecomepeople’sfavoriteonceagain.Astothis,Ican’tagreemore.WhileIadmitthatitissometimesinconvenientforonetogoonalongtripbybike,bicyclesstillhavemoreadvantagesthandisadvantages,comparedwithcars.Thereareseveralreasonsthataccountformyopinion.Tostartwith,theyareaffordableformostpeopleandconvenienttopark.Next,theybringnoenvironmentalproblem.Inaddition,unlikecars,theyalmostcausenotrafficproblems.Finally,theybenefitpeople’shealthgreatlybygivingthemphysicalexercise.Inaword,wehavegoodreasontobelievethatthebikewillsoonbecomepeople’sfavoriteoncemore.能力提升能力提升〔一〕如今，生活在大都市有许多优势，同时也有不少烦恼。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍城市生活的利与弊，并说明你的态度〔是否喜欢城市生活〕文章开头已给出。注意：100词左右。利弊方便购物花销大、住房昂贵交通便利空气污浊休闲、娱乐形式多样公交车拥挤Nowadayslivinginbigcitieshasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:Nowadayslivinginbigcitieshasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Therearealotofgoodpointslivinginbigcities.First,itiseasyforpeopletogoshoppingsincemostbigcitieshaveshoppingcenters.Convenienttransportationisanotherreasonforpeopletolovecitylife.Buses,subwaysandtaxiscantakeyouanywhereyouwant.Besides,withallkindsofentertainment,onecanneverfeelbored.However,notallthingsaresatisfying.Thebiggestproblemisthehighexpenses.Accommodationinbigcitiesissoexpensivethatonecanhardlyaffordit.Furthermore,theairinbigcitiesisnotsofreshasthatinthecountryside.Asforthetransportation,itisoftenverycrowdedinpublictransport,especiallyinrushhours.Inspiteofthedisadvantages,Istilllovethelifeinbigcitiesbecauseitisfullofexcitement,whichisappealingtoyoungpeople.〔二〕当下很多年轻人都热衷于极限运动，但也有人不能接受极限运动，他们各自都持有自己的理由。请根据下表所提示的信息，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，可适当发挥，不要逐字翻译。2.说明你的立场，并补充除表格中之外的1—2条理由。3.字数100左右。对极限运动的看法热衷于极限运动的一方1.新鲜、刺激、有趣2.对人类自身极限的挑战不接受极限运动的一方1.太危险，伤害身体2.花费太高Onepossibleversion:Extremesports,likebungeejumping,skateboarding,skysurfing,etc.,areverypopularwithyoungpeoplenowadays,buttherearealsodifferentvoicesfromtheopposition.Peoplewhoareinterestedinextremesportsholdthatthesesports,differentfromtheregularsports,aremoreexcitingandinteresting,andthattryingextremesportsisagreatchallengetothelimitsofhumanbeings.However,some,especiallythegenerationofparents,questionthesafetyofdoingextremesports.Theyworrythatpeoplemaygetinjuredbecauseextremesportsrequirespeedandskills,whicharemuchmoredangeroustopractice.Anotherconcernisaboutthehighexpenditure,especiallyontheequipment.Asanextremesportsfan,Iadmitthatdoingextremesportscanbedangeroussometimes,butthiscannotbeasufficientreasontodenyalltheenjoymentandexcitementthatwecanexperiencefromextremesports.Inmyopinion,doingextremesportscanhelpuskeepfit.Mostpeoplearelivingastressfullifeanddoingextremesportsisagoodwaytogettheirstressrelieved.Inaddition,mostextremesportsaredoneoutdoorsinnature,whichoffersusanopportunitytogetclosetothenature,explorethenatureandhaveabetterunderstandingoftheharmoniouscoexistenceofhumanbeingsandthenature.Whydon'twetryextremesports?〔三〕请你根据以下个人资料写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍我国著名田径运发动刘翔，并简述他的事迹给你的启示。注意：1.内容包括全部信息。2.结构完整。3.使用连接语句使文章连贯。Name:刘翔DateofbirthJuly13,1983PlaceofbirthShanghaiInhischildhood对体育表现出极大的兴趣，课余接受专业训练训练期间严格要求自己，成绩进步显著2004年，雅典〔Athens〕奥运会金牌，成为中国田径〔trackandfield〕获奖第一人2006年，瑞士〔Switzerland〕创下一项新的世界纪录因伤入院治疗。不放弃，出院后训练更加努力。战胜压力和伤痛重返赛场2009年世锦赛〔theWorldAthleticsChampionships〕银牌LiuXiang—BackasaKing_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________