基础写作-如何描写一个地方市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖

如何描写一个地方1/34①…isin/on/to…of…②…belocated/situatedin③…liein…④…neighbor/border…5onitseastlies东边有……中国在俄国南边ChinaislocatedtothesouthofRussia.梅州坐落在广东东北部MeizhouliesinthenortheastofGuangdong.◆地理位置2/34①…has/coversanareaof...占地…面积②…takesup+...占地…面积③…is…longand…

wide…多长多宽小镇占地5平方英里。Thesmalltowncoversanareaof5squaremiles.

新疆占我国国土六分之一。Xingjiangtakesupaboutone-sixthofourterritory.这花园长三十米,宽二十米。Thegardenis30metreslongand20metreswide.

◆表达占地面积3/34①…hasalarge/smallpopulation…人口众多/稀少②…hasapopulationof……有…人口③Thepopulationof…

is……有……人口④…percentofthepopulationare...百分之…人口是…

这个城市人口超出一百万。Thiscityhasapopulationofmorethan1,000,000.

这个县农村人口为40万。Theruralpopulationofthecountyis400,000.百分之八十人口是农民。Eightypercentofthepopulationherearefarmers.◆表达人口4/34①…hasahistoryof…②…hasalonghistory.③withahistoryof…中国上下五千年Chinahasahistoryofmorethan5,000years.中国历史悠久，占地960万平方公里Withalonghistory,Chinacoversanareaof9.6millionkilometres.◆表达历史5/34①berich/abundantin….某地含有丰富…，盛产…②…bewealthyin…某地富于…

③…producessth….某地出产…

④…befamous/well-knownfor…某地因…而闻名。⑤Themainagriculturalproductsare...主要农产品是…⑥…bemadeupof/consistof由……组成⑦.…afantasticplace一个极好地方新疆有丰富自然资源，以葡萄而闻名。Xingjiangisrichinnaturalresourcesandisfamousforgrapes.该县主要农产品是小麦、玉米Themainagriculturalproductsinthiscountyarewheatandcorn

◆常用的句型6/34①aplaceofinterest②ahistoricalattraction③ascenicspot;afantasticplace一个极好地方④表示“吸引、著名”sth.attract/appealtosb.;sth.beattractive/appealing/wonderfulbefamousfor因……而著名;befamousas作为……而著名◆著名景点7/341.我向你介绍一下我故乡。

Iwouldliketointroducemyhometowntoyou.2.我故乡,毗邻香港,位于广东省。Myhometown,neighboringHongKong,is

locatedinGuangdongProvince.相关句式8/343.广州,拥有一千三百万人口一座城市,有三百多年历史了。Guangzhou,acitywithapopulationofaboutthirteenmillion,hasahistoryofmorethan2,200years.4.这座城市占地面积达7,434平方公里,人口大约是10,000,000。

Coveringatotalareaof7,434squarekilometersthiscityhasapopulationofabouttenmillion.9/345.它自然资源得天独厚,有丰富煤和金矿,而且气候温和。Itisrichinnaturalsourcessuchascoalandgold,andhasmildclimate.6.我们学校再也不是过去样子了Ourschoolisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.

10/34［能力提升］1.请依据汉字提醒,完成相关地点介绍语汇积累。(1)位于______________________(2)靠近_______________________________________________(3)有(多少)人口________________________________________________________________________

nextto/closeto,intheneighborhoodof,neighboring...belocated/situatedin；lie(s)inIthasapopulationof...;Withapopulationof...,sth....;Thepopulationhasreached...11/34(4)有(多久)历史

_______________________(5)占(多大)面积

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(6)表示“容量”Thehotel________(拥有)120rooms;Thebuildingcan_____(容纳)5000people.coveranareaof...(squarekilometers/squaremeters)possessesholdIthasahistoryof...;Withahistoryof...，12/34(7)是(多少)长/宽/深Itis...____/____/___.=Itis...in_____/_____/_____.(8)著名景点aplaceof______,ahistorical_________,ascenicspot(9)表示“吸引、著名”sth.________________sb.;sth.be__________________________(形容词);befamous____(因……而著名);befamous__(作为……而著名)

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interestattractionattract/appealtoattractive/appealing/wonderfulfor13/342.请依据汉字,完成短文。Guangzhou,thethirdlargestcityinChina,alsoknownasCityofFlowers,servesasthecapitalcityofGuangdongand(1)___________________________________________________________________________(政治，经济，科学，教育，文化中心).(2)________________________________________________(全市面积7434.4平方公里),itishometomorethan11millionpeople.

Covering/Withanareaof7434.4squarekilometersthecentreofitspolitical，economic，scientific，educational，andculturallife14/34LocatedinthemiddleofGuangdong,northofthePearlRiverDeltawiththePearlRiverwindingitswaythroughthecity,Guangzhou(3)___________________________(气候温暖湿润).Besides,itisafamouscitywith(4)______________________________(有着2,200多年历史)andastartingportoftheMaritimeSilkRoad.Withitsbeautifulscenery,Guangzhou(5)____________________________(旅游资源丰富).enjoysawarmandwetclimateahistoryofmorethan2,200yearsabundantintravelingresourcesisalso15/34◆典型例题你将率领一个外国旅游团参观长城，请依据以下信息关键点，用5个规范英语句子写一篇长城简单介绍。你介绍应包含全部信息关键点，介绍开头已经给出，不计入5个句子中。【信息关键点】历史有两千多年历史。特点世界上最长城墙,长6000多千米;建筑材料主要为石头,砖头,修建工作都是人工进行;主要用于防御外来入侵者(foreigninvaders),沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台(watchtower)。现实状况世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游。[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表示全部内容。[评分标准]句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。16/34◆技巧点拨介绍或描述地点基础写作,通常以表格形式来展现写作点。该类表格通常有两列,其中一列概括事物特征、属性,另一列对此特征、属性展开描述。学生必须重新组织表格内容,不能死板地依据表格从左到右翻译,如不能写成“ThelocationofGuangzhouisinthesouthofChina”这么不地道句子,对应表示应该是:GuangzhouliesinthesouthofChina.17/342.确定时态。介绍地点等描述基本特征文章

通常使用普通现在时。3.防止开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对象或设定情景，防止用it作主语引导第一句,而应该详细写出描述对象，如theGreatWall,HongKong等。但假如整篇文章多处用“it”等作主语,文章会稍显逊色,所以在写作过程中,可依据文意适当变换主语,如改写为theplace,thecity等。18/34[例题导写]按次序写作。学生应该按照表格内容(即“历史、特点、现实状况”)先后次序进行写作，这么既可防止重整次序而浪费时间,也防止错改次序而给老师带来阅卷困难。2.草拟提要、简单翻译是写作主要步骤之一。请翻译关键点：有(多久)历史_________________(2)世界最长城墙________________(3)6000多千米长__________________(4)由石头,砖头做成______________(5)由人工修建__________________Ithasahistoryof...bebuilt/constructedbyhandthelongestwallintheworld6000kilometerslongbemadeofstonesandbricks19/346)防御外来入侵者__________________________________________________________________(7)每隔几百米_____________________everyfewhundredmeterspreventthecountryfrombeinginvaded;defendthecountryagainstforeigninvaders(8)著名旅游景点之一

______________________________________________________________________(9)吸引许多外国游客

___________________________________oneofthefamousscenicspots;oneofthefamousplacesofinterest;oneofthefamoustouristattractionsattractmanyforeignvisitors20/343.规范表示名词。假如名词修饰语过长,应转用“a/an/the+名词+of”表示,

比如,“两千多年历史”应该写成“ahistoryoftwothousandyears”,而不能写成“twothousandyears’history”。21/344.变换表示,丰富句式。请按要求完成句子：(1)Itismorethan6000kilometersinlength,______________________________________(“是世界上最长城墙”,使用非限制性定语从句)(2)ItwastheGreatWall_____________________________________________inancienttimes.(“帮助人们防御外来入侵者”,使用强调句)thathelpedpeoplefightagainsttheforeigninvaderswhichmakesitthelongestwallintheworld22/34(3)_________________________________________________________,therewerewatchtowerseveryfewhundredmetersalongthewall.(“长城主要用于防御外来入侵者”,使用原因状语从句)(4)TheGreatWallisoneofthewell-knownplacesofinterestonearth,_____________________________________________.(“每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游”,使用非谓语结构)AstheGreatWallwasbuilttodefendpeopleagainsttheinvaders

appealingtoalargenumberofforeignerseveryyear23/34(5)TheGreatWallis____afamoushistoricalattraction____itattractshundredsofthousandsofforeignvisitorseachyear.(使用“如此……以致”句型表示)(6)So________________________thatitattractshundredsofthousandsofvisitorshomeandabroadeveryyear.(“长城如此吸引”,使用倒装句)attractiveistheGreatWallsuchthat24/34LadiesandGentlemen，welcometotheGreatWall.

25/34TheGreatWall,whichismorethan6,000kilometerslong,isthelongestwallintheworld.Ithasahistoryofmorethan2,000years.Itismadeofstonesandbricksandalmostalltheconstructionwasdonebyhandwithoutanymachine.Asthewallwasbuilttodefendthecountryagainstforeigninvaders,therewerewatchtowerseveryfewhundredmetersalongthewall.Now,theGreatwallisoneofthemostfamousplacesofinterestinChinaanditattractsmanyforeignvisitorseveryyear.26/34◆课堂练习梅州历史悠久，被尊为“世界客都”地理位置：广东省东北部。东部与福建省交界，南部与广东省潮州市、汕尾市毗邻，西部与广东省河源市接壤，北部与江西省相连。面积：1.59万平方公里人口：505多万人方言：客家话、潮汕话（只限丰顺）著名景点：千佛塔、雁南飞、雁鸣湖27/34（From潮州市质量检测卷）将笫四句拆分成二个句子。“客家人祖先源自中原,素来崇文重教。”写成“TheancestorsofHakkasmigratedsouthwardfromCentralChina.Educationhasalwaysbeenregardedasanimportantmatterinthehakkacommunity.”Example3：笫四部分表格中，“车程所需时间”一栏，用一个句子（However,ittakes1hourtogotoZhongshanUniversitybybuswhileonly20minutestoJinanUniversity.），而“课程设置”一栏却拆分成二个句子（What’smore,inZhongshanUniversity,allthecoursesaretaughtinChineseaswellasEnglish.Comparedtothis,EnglishistheonlylanguageusedinJinanUniversity）附：07潮州市质量检测卷:梅州市位于广东东北部。总人口491万人（年）。梅州市是著名世界客都。客家人祖先源自中原,素来崇文重教。客家人行走天下，移民世界，且在海内外商界不乏成功者，所以有“东方犹太人”之称。MeizhouCityissituatedinthenortheastofGuangdongProvincewithapopulationof4.91million.ItisthebiggestoftheHakkascommunityinthecountryknownastheCapitalofhakkas.TheancestorsofHakkasmigratedsouthwardfromCentralChina.Educationhasalwaysbeenregardedasanimportantmatterinthehakkacommunity.BecauseoftheHakkas’successesinbusinessworldwide,theyareregardedasOrientalJews.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou,.LiHua28/34年体育盛事—奥运会将在伦敦举行。你校一年一度英语体育节将至，请你依据以下表格内容,用英语写一篇介绍伦敦文章，张贴在体育节宣传栏上。［写作内容］概况伦敦是英国政治、经济、文化中心和首要工业城市。位于英国东南部,面积1580平方公里天气天气多变，时常下雨交通交通方便、发达,但费用较高旅游风光旖旎,吸引了四方游客,给游客留下了深刻印象◆可选课外作业29/34London,themostimportantindustrialcityofEngland,servesasthecentreofitspolitical,economicandculturallife.LocatedinthesoutheastofEngland,itcoversanareaof1580squarekilometers.Theweatherischangeableanditrainsoften.Peoplecanenjoytheconvenienceofthemeansoftransportation,butatarelativelyexpensiveprice.Withitsbeautifulscenery,Londonattractsvisitorsfromallovertheworld,leavingthemadeepimp