2024八年级英语下册Unit2I'llhelptocleanupthecityparks写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版

写作能力提升练UNIT2I’llhelptocleanupthecityparks.假如你是李华，上周日你和几位同学组建了一支志愿者小分队，去一所贫困的乡村学校服务。请根据下表内容写一篇英语短文，介绍你们的志愿活动。时间上周日地点一所贫困的乡村学校人物你和几位同学活动打扫学校，修理桌椅，赠送书籍和玩具……要求:1.包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实；3.词数：80左右。［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。1.上周日我和几位同学组建了一支志愿者小分队，去一所贫困的乡村学校服务。LastSunday,severalofmyclassmatesandI_________________________________________________inapoorvillageschool.【遣词造句】就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。setupavolunteerteamandwenttovolunteer2.我们和那些学生打扫学校和教室。We______________________________________withthestudents.3.我们帮助修理了教室里破损的课桌和椅子。Wehelped____________________________________intheclassrooms.cleaneduptheschoolandtheclassrooms(to)fixupthebrokendesksandchairs4.我们向那些学生赠送了书籍和玩具。We____________________________tothestudents.5.为了让他们高兴起来，我们还和他们做游戏。Inorderto_____________,wealso_____________________.gaveawaybooksandtoyscheerthemupplayedgameswiththem［巧妙衔接］利用连词，使句子意思连贯。本文中，可以使用first,then,afterthat等表顺序的词来介绍我们所做的志愿活动，使文章显得有层次性。Ilikedoingvolunteerjobsbecausehelpingothersmakesmehappy.LastSunday,severalofmyclassmatesandIsetupavolunteerteamandwenttovolunteerinapoorvillageschool.First,wecleaneduptheschoolwiththestudents.Thenwehelpedfixupthebrokendesksandchairsintheclassrooms.Afterthat,wegaveawaybooksandtoystothestudents.［连句成篇］Tocheerthemup,wealsoplayedgameswiththem.Althoughweweretired,wefelthappytohelpthem.Ihopewecanhelpthemallthetime.帮助他人，快乐自己。张明和他的几个同学经常在周末去村里看望空巢老人。假如你是张明的朋友，请根据提供的信息介绍一下上周日，他们一起去看望李奶奶所做的事情。你对他们的做法有何感想？你是否愿意参加类似的活动？请说明理由。提示要点:1.帮李奶奶打扫院子，洗衣服；2.和李奶奶一起做饭、吃饭；3.陪李奶奶去村里的广场散步，给她讲学校的故事。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：I'mZhangMing'sfriendandIhaveknownthatheandhisclassmatesalwaysgotovillagestodosomevolunteerwork.LastSunday,ZhangMingandhisclassmateswenttoseeGrandmaLi.Theyspentahappydaywithher.Inthemorning,theyhelpedGrandmaLicleantheyardanddo________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________somewashing.Theyalsohelpedhercookandatewithher.Afterlunch,theywentforawalkwithGrandmaLionthesquareofthevillage.Theytoldhersomethinginterestingthathappenedatschool.Theywereallhappy.Ithinkwhattheydoismeaningful.