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阅读下而材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。ARuntoRememberThirteencanbeachallengingage.
NotonlydidIhavetoadapttomychangingbody,
I
alsohadtodealwithmyparents'
bitterdivorce,
anewfamilyandtheupsettingmovefrom
mycountryhome
toacrowdedsuburb.Whenwemoved,
mybelovedcompanion,
asmallbrownpony
(小马),hadtobesold.
Feelinghelplessandalone.
Icouldn'teatorsleep,
andIcriedallofthetime.
Imissedmy
family,
myhomeandmypony.
Finally,
myfather,
realizinghowmuchImissedmypony,
purchasedanoldredhorseformeatalocalmarket.
Myhorse,
Cowboy,
waswithoutadoubttheugliesthorseintheworld.
He
waspigeon-toedandknock-kneed.
ButIdidn'tcareabouthisfaults.
Ilovedhimbeyondallreasons.IjoinedaridingclubandfacedrudecommentsandmeansnickersaboutCowboy's
looks.
IneverletonhowIfelt,
butdeepdowninside,
myheartwasbreaking.
Theother
membersrodebeautifulregisteredhorses.WhenCowboyandIenteredthe
eventswherethehorseisjudgedonappearance,
we
werequicklyoutofthegame.
Ifinallyrealizedthatmyonlychancetocompetewouldbein
thetimed-speedevents.
Ichosebarrelracing
(绕桶赛),aneventinwhichahorseandits
riderattempttocompleteatriangularpatternaroundthreebarrelsinthefastesttime.OnegirlnamedBeckyrodeabigbrownhorseintherace
events,
Shealwayswonthe
blueribbons.Needlesstosay,
shedidn'tfeelthreatenedwhenIcompetedagainstheratthe
nextshow.
Shedidn'tneedto.
Icameinnexttolast.
ThebittermemoryofBecky'ssmirks
(得意的笑)
mademedeterminedtobeather.
For
thewholenextmonth,
Iwokeup
early
everydayandrodeCowboyfivemilestothearena
(运动场地).WepracticedforhoursinthehotsunandthenIwouldwalkCowboyhome.
OnthewayhomeIwouldbesotired:
thosefivemilesseemedtwiceaslong.Allofourhardworkdidn'tmakemefeelconfidentbythetimetheshowcame.
Isatat
thegate
andsweateditoutwhileIwatchedBeckyandherhorsechargethroughthepattern
ofbarrels,
finishingthecoursewithcase.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Myturnfinallycame.NocheersfilledtheairwhenIfinishedmyshow.故事大意:Thisarticlemainlytellsthestoryoftheauthorwho,attheageof13,sufferedfromfamilyupheaval,movedawayfromhishometowntoacongestedandunfamiliartown,andfeltlonelywithoutthecompanyofhispetfoal.Later,theunattractiveCowboyparticipatedinhorseracingandbecameadarkhorse.Theauthorrealizedthroughthiscompetitionthataslongastheyworkhardenough,theycancontroltheirowndestiny.续写情节发展:第一段:Myturnfinallycame.
S1我紧紧抓住缰绳,因为我的老朋友似乎对他们的假笑感到恼火。S2抚摸着牛仔红色的大脖子,走进了竞技场。S3比赛开始,一切进展顺利,我们绕过一个又一个障碍。S4我们绕过最后一个弯道,冲向终点线。S5wecompletedtheracesuccessfully.第二段:NocheersfilledtheairwhenIfinishedmyshow.
S1我们的跑步结束时,大家出奇地沉默。S2但几秒钟后,首席裁判宣布:“冠军归牛仔”,打破了全场的沉默。S3牛仔和我打败了贝基和她那匹引以为豪的木马!S4那天我收获的远不止一条蓝丝带。S5我意识到,如果我非常想要一些东西来实现它,我总是会成为赢家,我可以成为自己命运的主人。
高分范文1:Myturnfinallycame.
TheinstantIturneduponthearena,IheardBeckyscreamingandshoutingruderemarks,followedbylaughterfromthosesurroundingher.Icouldfeelmyfaceburning.Tryinghardtocomposemyself,IinstructedCowboytochargethroughthepatternofbarrels.WewereabouttocompleteatriangularpatternwhensomehowCowboygotasuddenfright,almostknockingoverthethirdbarrel.Ireactedpromptly,pattingCowboygentlyandencouraginghimtomoveon.Ultimately,wemadeit!(81W)NocheersfilledtheairwhenIfinishedmyshow.
AsIwasleavingthearena,Iheardmynameannounced.Muchtomysurprise,IcompletedthecoursewithlesstimethanBecky,whichmeantthatIbeatherandrankedfirst!Allofasudden,thunderousapplausearosefromthecrowd.WhatwasincrediblewasthatBeckycametocongratulatemeonmysuccessandapologizedforbeingrudetome.NotonlydidIgetthefirstprizeandfriendship,butIregainedself-confidenceaswell.Whatalife-changingruntoremember!85W高分范文2
Myturnfinallycame.Mypalmssweatingandlegsshaking,Iclimbedontothehorseback.Gigglesandcatcallsrockedthearena.Angryandashamed,Iloweredmyhat,tightenedmyreinandspurredthebuttofthehorse.“Comeon,Cowboy.Wecanbeatthemall!”Iyelled.Understandingly,Cowboynoddedandshotforwardlikeabullet,asiftoproveitwasthebestrunnerinthisgame.Left!Right!Left!Right!BeforeIcametomysenses,theshowwasover.(84words)
NocheersfilledtheairwhenIfinishedmyshow.Butsecondslaterthetotalsilencewasbrokenbythechiefjudge'sannouncement:"ThechampiongoestoCowboy".Thunderouscheersandcongratulationsrangoutintheopenfield.WalkingoffthepodiumwhereIreceivedtheblueribbon,Iwalkedbacktomy`hero'andcarefullyputtheribbonarounditsneckandrodearound.Onceagainwhistlesand
everywhere!InoticedBeckyhadturnedherprideintojealousy.Butatthisverymoment,Ididn'twanttocomfortanybody.Itonceagainprovedthetruthoftwooldsayings:"Don'tjudgeabookbyitscover.""Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart."(115words)
高分范文3Myturnfinallycame.
Iheldfasttothereinformyoldbuddyseemedirritatedattheirsmirksandwantedtocarryofftheblueribbontoprovehewastheveryking.Atthegunshotofthesignalpistol,hespedlikeahare.Sofamiliartothebarrelracingwashethathealmostfinisheditinaflash.Suddenlyasoccerrolledoverinfrontofhim,whichwasfollowedbyakid.Cowboywasstartledbythesurprise,lettingoutawarningneigh.TheboywassafeandsoundbutIalmostlostmybalance
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