01 图画作文之叙事描写类（解析版）-【高分·技能】2024年中考英语写作常考题型全面突破

01图画作文之叙事描写类近三年考情分析近三年考情分析年份地区话题命题形式2023年黑龙江龙东在雨天乐于助人图画作文湖北天门和乡下的爷爷在城里一起生活图画作文2022年黑龙江龙东假日活动图画作文湖北天门就诊经历图画作文2021年黑龙江龙东参加志愿者活动图画作文湖北荆州小英雄王二小图画作文写作方法指导写作方法指导题型分析：图画作文一般提供一幅或者多幅图画，要求考生根据题目要求进行写作。图画作文主要考查考生的观察能力和理解能力，首先它要求考生抓住图画所传递的信息，然后根据自己掌握的信息进行发挥、创作。此类题型的体裁比较广泛，可以是记叙文，要求将图画中的信息完整地表述出来，也可以是说明文，根据图画内容从时间、过程、步骤等方面加以解释，说明，还可以是议论文，描绘图画中的一些现象，得出结论，提出解决问题的方法。写作方法：1.仔细审题，准确定位（1）确定主题。考生须通过分析图画的表层含义来弄清命题意图，从而确定文章的主题。（2）确定体裁。仔细阅读图画及文字说明，确定文章体裁。多幅图的图画作文通常要写成记叙文，单幅图的图画作文则通常要写成夹叙夹议文或议论文。（3）确定人称。日记、周记、议论文一般采用第一人称。（4）确定时态。日记、周记类以过去时态为主，而议论文则以现在时态为主。2.认真读图，进行图文转换考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究，以便准确掌握图画所传达的信息。如果图画以系列形式（即两幅以上）出现，考生除需掌握每一幅图画的信息外，还应该对图画之间的相互联系有所理解，以便全面把握图画要传达的主要内容，在写作时不遗漏信息要点。3.确定段落，草拟提纲根据要点确定段落。寓意型图画类作文可采用三段式的模式来写提纲并确定段落：第一段描述图画并揭示寓意（寓意一般用一句话来概括即可），第二段分析图画内容并揭示原因，最后一段发表评论或提出建议，其中第二段、第三段是写作的重点。对于叙事型图画类作文（通常会涉及多幅图，要求对某一事件的发生、发展进行叙述），可根据图画的数目和具体内容来确定段落。写作攻略4.斟词酌句，组句成篇根据要点内容，确定文章结构，然后选择恰当的词语并结合要点

间的关系及文章的体裁，选择适当的句型将要点呈现出来。注意句与句及段与段之间的衔接。5.检查与修改重点检查是否有遗漏的要点、是否有错误的语法结构或短语、是否有拼错的单词等。写作模板写作模板【模板之图画寓意】As

isvividlyshown/described/depictedinthecartoon/picture,图画内容概括；Inthefirst/leftpicture/cartoon,描述图一内容.Asisshowninthesecondcartoon/picture,

描述图二内容.Itis

therefore

safetodrawtheconclusionthat提示寓意或主题句，回应主题但不是主题句的重复。【模板之看图记叙文】第一段，确定事件的时间（when)、地点（where)、人物（who)及事件（what);开篇句：XXXandXXtookpartin...yesterday/today/lastweek...第二段，介绍事件的原因（why)和过程（how);过渡句：Onthewayto...Bythetime...第三段，总结事件的意义和收获。结尾句：Itwasquiteanexperienceforus,whichI'llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.常用表达常用表达【素材之单词和短语】1.表示时间immediately,earlyinthemorning,theotherday,bythetime,thefollowingday,atthesametime,inaflash,onthisoccasion2.表示解释：inotherwords,thatistosay3.表示递进：besides,moreover,furthermore,worsestill1,furthermore,inaddition,notonly……

butalso,inthefirstplace……

;inthesecondplace……,equallyimportant【素材之句式】★首段模板句式1.Asisvividlyshown/described/depictedinthecartoon/picture...2.Thepurposeofthepictureistoshowusthat...★经典过渡句1.ItisacommonphenomenoninChinathat.2.Infact,youcanseemanysuchexamplesinlife.3.Justastheoldsayinggoes...4.Moreandmorepeoplehavecometorealizethat...★结尾段模板句式1.Itisthereforesafetodrawtheconclusionthat...2.Therefore,inmyopinion...3.Itwasquiteanexperienceforus,whichI'llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.中考真题精讲中考真题精讲（2023·黑龙江龙东·统考中考真题）仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。提示词：rainheavily,umbrella,bethankfulto…要求：1.话题作文和图示作文任选其一。2.词数：80—100之间。3.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LastFridayafternoon,whenTomwasonhiswayhomeafterschool,itrainedheavily.Hewalkedslowlyintherainwithhisumbrella.Suddenly,hesawanoldmanwithawalkingstick.Hedidn’thaveanumbrella.Tomcameuptohimasquicklyaspossibleandsharedhisumbrellawithhim.Tomtooktheoldmantohishomesafely.TheoldmanwasthankfultoTom.Aftersayinggoodbyetotheoldman,hewenthomehappily.WhatagoodboyTomis!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：根据图片和提示词，把图中所示内容表达完整，条理清晰，意思连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，根据图片顺序和内容描述Tom帮助老人的全过程；第二步，对Tom进行赞扬。[亮点词汇]①onone’swayhome在某人回家的路上②asquicklyaspossible尽快③bethankfulto感激[高分句型]①LastFridayafternoon,whenTomwasonhiswayhomeafterschool,itrainedheavily.(when引导的时间状语从句)②WhatagoodboyTomis!(感叹句)（2023·湖北天门·统考中考真题）尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德。东东的爸爸妈妈把乡下的爷爷接到了城里一起生活。假如你是东东，请结合图片提示，发挥你的想象，用英文写一篇80词左右的日记。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Today,Grandpacametomyhouse.Wehadabigdinnertogether.Afterdinner,Grandpatoldinterestingstoriestomybrotherandme.Wedrankteaandplayedchesstogether.Wehadagoodtime.Atabout9:00intheevening,mymothertoldusitwastimeforbed.InordertohelpGrandpasleepwell,Momdecidedtolethimsleepinmyroom,andmademesleepwithmybrother.LookingafterGrandpaisourduty.ThebetterGrandpalives,thehappierweare.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇日记；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍介绍爷爷到我家来了；第二步，具体介绍爷爷在我家的饮食起居等安排；第三步，最后总结照顾爷爷是我们的责任。[亮点词汇]①abigdinner大餐②playchess下象棋③lookafter照顾[高分句型]①ThebetterGrandpalives,thehappierweare.（the+比较级……，the+比较级……）②Momdecidedtolethimsleepinmyroom,andmademesleepwithmybrother.（and连接的并列句）（2022·黑龙江龙东·中考真题）图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。提示词：holiday,activities,colorful,meaningful,museum.要求：1.词数：80-100之间。2.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Intheholiday,XiaoLiandherclassmatestookpartinmanyactivities.XiaoLijoinedtheartclub,andshepracticedhandwritingcarefully.Somegirlsjoinedthecookingclub,andtheyfeltveryexcitedaboutit.Theydidn’tdothatinthepast.Theirparentsthoughtitwasawasteoftime.Theyonlyneededtostudy.Butchildrenwerereallyfondofcooking.Somewereinthesportsclubtodoexercise,suchasrunningandplayingbasketball.Otherswenttothehistorymuseum.Theretheylearnedalotabouttheheroesintheirhometown.Theymadegreatcontributionstotheirhometown.Childrenadmiredthemverymuch.Allthechildrenfellinlovewiththeholidayactivities.Theywouldleavesweetmemoriesduringtheirlifetime.Whatcolorfulandmeaningfulactivitiestheyhad!【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片和提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍图片中的孩子们做了哪些假日活动；第二段总结。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。（2022·湖北天门·中考真题）饮食不当，可能会诱发多种疾病。以下图片是李华同学的一次就诊经历，请结合图片及所给提示词，发挥你的想象，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，讲述一下他经历了什么，以后要注意些什么。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。提示词：attheclinic(诊所)；junkfood；stomachache；medicine____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文PossibleVersionOne:Oneday,LiHuahadastomachache.Hisfathertookhimtoaclinicrightaway.Attheclinic,anurseaskedwhatwaswrongwithLiHua.Heanswered,“Ihadastomachache,maybeIatetoomuchjunkfoodlastnight.”Then,thenursetookhimtoseeadoctor.Thedoctorexaminedhimcarefully.Hetoldhimtotakesomemedicineandrestinbed.Onedaylater,LiHuafeltbetter.Herealizedthathewouldcatmorevegetablesandfruit,lessjunkfoodinthefuture.PossibleVersionTwo:LiHuaisaboywholikeseatingjunkfoodverymuch.Lastnight,afterdinner,hestartedeatingagainasusual.Afewhourslater,astrongfeelingofstomachachestruckhimandhisfaceturnedpaleatonce.Hisfathertookhimtothenearestclinic.Soonanursecameandaskedwhathappened.Thedoctorgavehimsomemedicineandtoldhimtostayinbed.Hedidn’tfeelbetteruntilhetookthepills.Junkfoodisdelicious,butitisnotsohealthy.Weshouldeatregularlyanddosportsoften.Thebetterlivinghabitsare,thehealthierwe’llbe.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据图片以及图片上的词汇展开想象写一篇作文，关于李华的就诊经历。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时行文；人称以第三人称为主。结合题干内容和图片可知李华应该是肚子疼。所以可以围绕这一点展开叙述。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。（2021·黑龙江龙东·中考真题）仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。提示词:volunteer;theoldpeople’shomes要求:1.话题作文和图示作文任选其一。2.词数:80—100之间。3.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lastweek,severalofmyclassmatesandItookpartinavolunteeractivityheldbythecommunity.Wewenttotheoldpeople’shomesbybus.There,welearnedaboutthehealthsituationoftheoldpeopleandhelpedthemcleanup.Somecleanedtheyardandsomecleanedtheroom,suchassweepingthefloorandcleaningthetableandsoon.Wewerebusyallafternoon.Weweretired,butwewerehappy.Iwilltakepartinsuchactivitiesinthefuture.【详解】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和图片提示，写出一篇有关参加志愿者活动的作文，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

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写作指导：写作时要图片内容紧密联系起来，用第一人称来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。（2021·湖北荆州·中考真题）没有共产党，就没有新中国。七十多年前，为建立新中国，在党的领导下，中国人民浴血奋战，涌现出许许多多的英雄人物。今天我们来用英语讲述小英雄王二小的故事吧！要求：1.故事必须包含图表所提供的四个要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；2.80词左右。故事开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：儿童团theChildren’sLeagueTheStoryofWangErxiaoAlongtimeago,therewasayounghero,whowasWangErxiao.Pleasefollowmetorecallhisstory.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheStoryofWangErxiaoAlongtimeago,therewasayounghero,whowasWangErxiao.Pleasefollowmetorecallhisstory.WangErxiaowasbornin1929.Whenhewaselevenyearsold,hisparentspassedaway.ThenhebecameamemberoftheChildren’sLeague.Wangwascleverandbrave.OnthemorningofOctober25,1942,hewaskilledbyenemiesforprotectingvillagers.Hewasjustthirteenyearsold.Weliveintimesofpeaceandmaybewedon’tneedtosacrificeourselves.Butweshouldremembertheheroeswhooncefoughtfortheircountry.Atthesametime,weshouldstudyhardtobuildabettersociety.【详解】1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据给出信息，介绍英雄王二小的故事。并写出自己的感悟，注意要点齐全，行文流畅。2.写作指导：本文开头已给出，正文部分可分为两段，一段介绍故事，一段介绍感悟。介绍王二小故事时，使用一般过去时，介绍感悟，用一般现在时。注意多使用从句和短语，为文章增色。名校模拟题提升练名校模拟题提升练（2023·上海杨浦·一模）LastFriday,Marywenttothenightmarket.Lookatthepicturesandwriteastoryinatleast80wordsonthetopicLuckyMary（上周五，Mary去了夜市。请根据图片提示，以《幸运的玛丽》为题，写一篇不少于80个单词的短文）写作提示及要求：①下列词汇你在写作的过程中可能会使用到：dartn.飞镖，teddybearn.玩具熊，gamestand游戏摊位。②关注图片传递的信息与图片之间的关联，适当增加对话或内心独白。③写作内容中不得出现真实姓名和校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：LuckyMaryLastFriday,Marywenttothenightmarket.Whileshewaswalkingaimlessly,shesawagamestandplayingdarts.Theprizewasateddybear.Marylikedthisteddybearverymuch.Shespenttenyuanplayingwithdarts.Playingthisgamewasnottoodifficultforher.Intheend,allthreeofherdartswerehit.Thegamestandownerwassurprised.Marywontheteddybear.Shewenthomewiththeteddybearhappily.Howluckyshewas!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇图画作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：考生要根据三幅图片中传递的信息介绍玛利的经历。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍玛利去玩飞镖游戏的过程；第二步，感慨玛利很幸运。[亮点词汇]①verymuch非常②spendmoneydoingsth.花钱做某事[高分句型]①Whileshewaswalkingaimlessly,shesawagamestandplayingdarts.（while引导的时间状语从句）②Playingthisgamewasnottoodifficultforher.（动名词作主语）③Howluckyshewas!（感叹句）（2023·广东广州·开学考试）你还记得TomSawyer和Becky受困于山洞的故事吗？以下图片描述了他们成功自救的过程。请根据关键词提示续写故事。要求：1.80词左右；可适当发挥；2.故事内容合理、完整；句子及篇章结构准确、连贯；3.不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。TomandBeckyhadbeentrappedinthecaveforalongtime.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TomandBeckyhadbeentrappedinthecaveforalongtime.ItwassodarkinsidethecavethatBeckyfeltveryafraidandcried.SoTomdecidedtofindtheexithimself.HeaskedBeckytoholdontotheropeandwait.Hepromisedthathewoulddefinitelycomeback.Aftertyingtherope,Tomwentonexploringalone.Hekeptdiggingwithaknife,andafterawhile,Tomsawthelightthroughtheholehehaddug.HewasextremelyhappyandhurriedbacktofindBecky.Intheend,thetwoofthemsuccessfullygotoutofthecave.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；②时态：时态为一般过去时；③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。[写作步骤]第一步，承接上文表述汤姆和贝基在山洞里的情况；第二步，表述贝基感到害怕，汤姆决定独自去寻路；第三步，表述汤姆探险的过程以及最终结果。[亮点词汇]①decidetodo决定做②goon继续③intheend最终[高分句型]①ItwassodarkinsidethecavethatBeckyfeltveryafraidandcried.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）②Hepromisedthathewoulddefinitelycomeback.（that引导的宾语从句）（2023·陕西西安·模拟预测）上个月，西安市政府迎接了创建全国文明城市巡检。为配合此项工作，上周日，你们学校组织了一场名为“文明无句号，创建无止境”的环保活动。请根据以下图片及提示，用英文写一篇短文，简要介绍你们的活动和感受。参考词汇:cleanup;guidethepedestrians（行人）;volunteer;...要求：1.使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）Tobuildacivilizedcity,ourschoolorganizedanenvironmentalprotectionactivitylastSaturday.Wedidmanymeaningfulthings.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Tobuildacivilizedcity,ourschoolorganizedanenvironmentalprotectionactivitylastSaturday.Wedidmanymeaningfulthings.Itwasafineday.Someofourclassmateshelpedwiththecleaning.Therewasalotofgarbageouttherebecauseofpeople’suncivilizedbehavior.Wecleanedthemup.Somestudentshelpeddirectthetraffic.Ifweencountereduncivilizedtrafficbehavior,wewouldcorrectitpromptly.Somestudentswenttothenursinghome.Wetellthemstoriestomakethemhappy.Althoughweweretiredthisday,wewereveryhappy.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，首先承接短文开头。第二步，介绍你们的活动和感受。第三步，总结。[亮点词汇]①helpwith帮助②becauseof因为③cleanup清理[高分句型]①Ifweencountereduncivilizedtrafficbehavior,wewouldcorrectitpromptly.（if引导的条件状语从句）②Althoughweweretiredthisday,wewereveryhappy.（Although引导的让步状语从句）（2023·山东滨州·一模）请根据以下四幅图画信息，用英语写一篇文章，以“MemoriesofaSnowyDay”为题目。参考词汇：rollvt.滚动要求：(1)词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；(2)文章应包括所给内容要点，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯；(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。MemoriesofaSnowyDay________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：MemoriesofaSnowyDayIhavesweetmemoriesofasnowyday.Oneday,whenIgotup,Ifounditwassnowingoutside.Everythingwascoveredindeepwhitesnow.ThenIworethickwarmclothesandwentouttoenjoytheworldofsnow.Imadeabigsnowballandrolledithappily.Later,myfriendscameandweplayedtogether.Wemadeasnowmanandusedacarrotforitsnose.Itlookedfunny.Itwasalsoexcitingtohavebigsnowballfights.Wethrewsnowballsateachother,screamingandlaughing.Wereallyenjoyedourselvesonthesnowyday.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍下雪了自己出去滚雪球；第二步，介绍自己和朋友一起堆雪人和打雪仗。[亮点词汇]①getup起床②makeasnowman堆雪人③enjoyoneself玩得开心[高分句型]①whenIgotup,Ifounditwassnowingoutside.（when引导的时间状语从句）②Wethrewsnowballsateachother,screamingandlaughing.（现在分词作状语）写作方法指导写作方法指导写作方法指导写作方法指导写作方法指导写作方法指导写作方法指导写作方法指导写作方法指导写作方法指导写作方法指导写作方法指导（2023·山西临汾·一模）近期你校英语社团举办了“第三届看图编故事”比赛，根据比赛规则，每位参赛选手抽签选择图片。假如你是参赛选手李华，你抽到的故事见下图，请根据图片内容用英语写一篇短文为你的即兴讲故事做准备。要求：1.仔细观察图片内容，展开合理想象叙述故事；2.词数不少于80词，故事的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：灌木丛bush；手提箱suitcaseAtthreelastSundayagroupofboyswereplayingfootballhappily.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： AtthreelastSundayagroupofboyswereplayingfootballhappily.WhenitwasJim’sturn,hekickedtheballsohardthatitlandedinabush.Hehadtogetit.Tohissurprise,hefoundasuitcaseaswellastheball.Helookedatthesuitcasecarefully,andthoughtitmustbevaluable.Hecalledthepoliceatonce.Verysoon,apoliceman