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同等学力英语考试第二卷包括翻译（30分钟，20分）和作文（30分钟。15分）。考试时候第二卷得分必须大于等于18分，才能算及格。翻译翻译分为中翻英（100-120汉字），和英翻中（80-100英语单词）。对于两种翻译最重要的是单词，所以这一点请大家自己努力提高。英翻中tips找主干1）如果英语句子主干很容易找到，主干前没有修饰语时，顺译。2005年英翻中第二段。2）如果主干之间有较长的修饰限定语时，一定要分析清楚主干，一部分一部分的翻译，然后综合。时间状语，可以直接翻译到句首或者句末，不参加到汇总综合中，以降低难度。例2005年第一段第一句3）句中出现thatwhichwhatwherewho这一类引导词时，要明确知道他们引导的是从句。例2005年第一段第二句第二，遇上生词怎么办？1）分析词性例2005年第二段第一句circulation2005年第二段第二句中entailsintegrate2)联系上下文作文出题人，评卷人，考生出题人：出题内容：常见社会话题，一般不会出很专业的东西。比如工作，住哪里出题形式：（一）提纲作文1）阐述观点2）解决问题3）谚语警句型例，98年，WhyWeWork99年ThequalitiesoftheCross-CenturyTalents2000年WhichismoreImportant,WealthorHealth?01年theGreatestInventioninthePastCentury05年whetherCollegeStudentsShouldBeAllowedtoGetMarried.06年CollegeGraduatesWorkasVillageOfficials07年WhoandHowtoTakeCareoftheSeniors?09年Myopinionaboutblog（二）看图作文08年Self-confidenceistheKeytoSuccess.02年TheIncreaseintheNumberofChineseTravelingAbroad.（三）摘要作文03年Whatwillmoneybringus,fortuneormisfortune?04年TheGoalofLife（四）书信作文同等学力;英语;写作同等学力作文评分原则：作文题采用总体评分（GlobalScoring）方法。阅卷人员从内容和语言两个方面进行综合评判，就总的印象给出奖励分（RewardScores），而不是按语言点的错误数目累计扣分。评分标准如下表格：得分表达能力1411852切题与否切题切题基本切题基本切题思路紊乱内容表述清楚清楚不够清楚不清楚条理不清文字表达通顺，连贯性较好连贯勉强连贯连贯性差谈不上连贯语言表达能力表达灵活多样；基本上无语言错误，仅有个别错误表达灵活；有少量语法错误语法错误相当多，其中有些是严重错误严重语法错误较多语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多为严重错误总体印象切题，内容丰富，语言流畅连贯，表达能力较强切题，内容较丰富，语言流畅可读基本切题，内容能说明主题，语言基本可读基本切题，表达能力差，文章勉强可读思路紊乱，基本上不具备书面表达能力，文章不可读

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4．字数不够酌情扣分：字数149~140139~130129~120119~110109~100<99扣分123579作文模式：根据提纲先翻译，如果没有提纲自己审题时，先写出提纲。但是现在的考题一般都有提纲，所以考生不需要在写作内容上费神。作文字数；150字，25分钟，也就是10到15个句子。一般说来，第一段2-3个句子对情况进行说明。后面的两个或者三个段落，一般都是说明自己观点。对每个话题一般正反面观点分别三个。然后每个观点加一个句子进行拓展。需要总结的时候，2-3个句子足够。作文但是一定要记得：尽量使用简单的，以表达的观点。为自己降低难度。因为阅卷老师没有时间仔细看你的内容是否有深度。例：06年Directions:Inthispart,youaretowriteacompositionofnolessthanI50wordsabout"CollegeGraduatesWorkasVillageOfficials".Youshouldwriteaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.PleaseremembertowriteitclearlyontheANSWERSHEET.Somecollegegraduateschoosetoworkasvillageofficials.1.

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3.Conclusion单词和翻译表达能力最重要准备的过程，可以综合参考过去的作文真题，先用中文把自己要写的内容表达出来，你就会看到写作文，你自己最常用那些句式。然后去模式中找到最易于自己记忆的一个模式，这样作文就变成了填空题，简单多了。Withthedevelopmentoftechnic,itbecomestruethateveryfamilyhasacomputer.Theinternetgivesusmoreopportunitytocommunicatewiththeothersallovertheworld.AndBlogisoneofthewayforourcommunication.Inmyopinion,itisgoodforustohaveablogontheinternet.Wecanrecordeverythingwhichwewant,itwillbeagreatwealthforusinfuture.Andtheblogisalsoagoodplatformforustoshowourselves.Fromtheblog,wecanmakemorefriends,becausewecanknoweachotherfromourblog,fromtheblog,wecanfindtheguyswhohavethesimilarhobbiesorinterestings,andwecandiscussthesubjectwhichbothofuslike.Sometimesitisalsoanotherenjoymenttoreadthestranger’sblog,maybeyoucanfindyourpotentialfriendsinthisway.Ofcourse,theblogalsogivesusmoretroubleinourlife.Sometimestheblogbecomesthetoolofthecheater.Theyspreadthefakenewsorinformationbytheblog.Itisnoteasytoidentify.Andsomebadguyscangetyourinformationeasily,butyoudon’tknowwhattheywilldoforyou,andsomeofusarecheated.Theinfluenceofblogisactuallyadouble-edgedsward.Weshouldtrytomakethemostadvantagesandavoiditsharmfulnessatthesametime.Lettheblogbeahappyandusefulthingtoeveryone.

比较法开头（1）Untilrecentlythegeneralattitudetowardday-dreamingremainedhostile.Day-dreamingwasviewedasawasteoftime.Oritwasconsideredanunhealthyescapefromreallifeanditsduties.Butnowsomepeoplearetalkingafreshlookatday-dreaming.Theythinkitmaycontributetointellectualgrowthandleadtotheattainmentofactualgoals.句型：Foryears/untilrecently…hadbeen/wasseen/viewed/regardedas….But(thatischangingnow)(peoplearetakingafreshlookatit).Withthe(growing/mounting)(demandfor/interestin/concernover)…,people….（2）Inrecentyearsthereisatendencytowardslivingaloneadramaticsteponthepathawayfromtheclose-knit,extendedfamiliessocommonjustafewdecadesago.Accordingtoacensusreport,householdsconsistingofjustonepersonhaveincreasedto14percentinthepastyear,comparedwith4percent20yearsago.Whyarepeoplelivingalone.句型：Inrecentyears,thereisa(steady/subtle/significantshiftof)(general/growing/healthytendencyto)(upward/welcome/undesirabletrendtoward)….Accordingtoapoll/study/survey,thereisXpercentof…,comparedwithYpercentlastyear.Why…?（3）throughoutourliveswearetyrannizedbypaper-andpencilteststhatpurportedlyrateourintellectandpredictfuturesuccess.IQtests,CETs,TOEFLs,GREs,job-aptitudequestionnairesallcalibrateourpotentialintheeyesoftheworld,andofteninourowneyeaswell.Butmostpsychologistsconcedethatreal-lifeachievementhaslittletodowiththesetestscores.AsGarrisonKillor,anotedpsychologistwrote,“smartdoesnotcountformuch.”句型：(Throughoutourlives)(Historically)(Traditionally),wetendto….Butmostscientists/researchers/doctorshavenowfoundthat….(4)Severyearsago,peoplewereoftenalittlesurprisedwhentheyheardthatacollegestudentwasdoingapart-timejob.“why?Maybeheisshortofmoney,“theythought.Nowadays,itisnotanuncommonoccurrencethatcollegestudentsareworkingastutors,salesmenandtourguides.Manystudentsputupadvertisementsonbulletinboardsorlamppoststosearchforoddjobs.Whydomanystudentsshowgreatinterestinapart-timeorasummerjob?句型：severalyears/decadesago,people….Now/today,….Why(dopeople…?)(hassuchchangetakenplace?)SolidificationDrill:topic:WhereShouldtheDyingSpendTheirRemainingTimeSomepeoplethinkahospitalisagoodplaceforadyingpatienttospendhisremainingtime.Otherpeoplebelieveitisathome.Whatisyouropinion?Usethesentencepatternswhichhavebeenintroducedabovetogiveanopeningtoyourcomposition.sampleThereseemstobeanincreasedtendencythatwhenapersonisdyingofaformofcancer,orotherkindsofincurablediseases,hisfamilywillsendhimtoahospital,nomatterhowmuchitmaycost.Theythinkthatthisisacorrectexpressionoftheirloveforhim,forhecanreceivethebestpossiblemedicalandsurgicaltreatmentatahospital.Despitetheirgoodintentions,however,Ibelieve,adyingpersonshouldspendhislastremainingdaysathome,withhisfamilyaroundandinthewarmthoftheirlove.比较法句型：Justassittinginthedriver’sseatofacarbecomesdrivingonlywhenwetakethesteeringwheelinhandandcontrolthecar’smovement,soourmind’smovementsbecomethinkingonlywhenwedirectthem.对立法开头句型1：Whenaskedabout…,(thevast/overwhelmingmajorityof/most/many/quiteafew)people(say/think/believe/answer)that….But(otherpeopleregard/view/see/thinkof…as./Ithink/viewquiteabitdifferently.)对立法开头1.Whenaskedaboutthebiggestproblemtoday,manypeoplesaythatitistheseriousenergycrisis.Theyareafraidthattheworldwillsoonrunoutofoilandrunshortoffood.Butotherpeopleholdoptimisticviews:theyregarditasanaturalresultoftheeconomicdevelopmentandbelieveitwillbeonlysolvedwithfurtheradvancesineconomyandtechnology.2.Whenaskedwhatkindofcareertheywillpursueupongraduation,mostofcollegestudentssaythattheywouldchooseajobwhichwillbringthemalotofmoneyandacomfortablelife.Workinginabigbankorcompanyiswhattheydesire.ButIthinkquitedifferently.Iwouldpreferacareerwhichwillhelprealizemypotentials.句型2：Thereisa(public/general/much)(debate/discussion/controversy)(today/nowadays)(on/about/over/asto)the(problem/issue)of….Thesewho(criticize/oppose/objectto)…(contend/argue)that….Theybelievethat….Butpeoplewho(advocate/favour)…,ontheotherhand,(maintain/assert)that….3.Thereisageneraldebateonthecampustodayoverthephenomenonofcollegestudents’doingapart-timejob.Thosewhoobjecttoitarguethatstudentsshouldnotspendtheirprecioustimeinthisway.Butpeoplewhoadvocateit,ontheotherhand,claimthat,bytakingamajor-relatedpart-timejoborsummerjob,studentscannotonlyimprovetheiracademicstudies,butgainmuchexperience,experiencetheywillneverbeabletogetfromthetextbooks.4.Thereismuchdiscussiontodayaboutwhetherfasteconomicgrowthisdesirable.Thosewhocriticizeeconomicgrowtharguethatwemustslowdown.Theybelievethatsocietyisapproachingcertainlimitsongrowth.Theseincludethefixedsupplyofthenaturalresources,andthepossiblenegativeeffectsofindustryonthenaturalenvironment.Peoplewhowantmoreeconomicgrowth,ontheotherhand,arguethatevenatthepresentgrowthratetherearestillmanypoorpeople.Theymaintainthatonlycontinuedgrowthcancreatethecapitalneededtoimprovethequalityoflifeandprovidethefinancialresourcesrequiredtoprotectournaturalsurroundingsfromindustrialization.Solidification:人们普遍认为青少年吸烟人数上升是经济发展不可避免的结果。他们认为：如果电视上没有香烟广告，香烟不是到处可买得到，孩子的零用钱不是很多的话，青少年不太可能染上吸烟的习惯。但我怀疑这是否是一个满意的解释。虽然有广告和其它尚业因素的影响，我认为主要原因是社会和个人因素而不是经济上的。Itiscommonlybelievedthattheriseinteenagesmokingistheinevitableresultofeconomicdevelopment.TheyarguethatiftherearenocigaretteadvertisementonTV,nocigarettesavailableeverywhere,andnoadequatepocketmoney,teenagersareunlikelytotakeupthehabitofsmoking.ButIdoubtthatitisasatisfactoryexplanation.Whileconcedingtheeffectofadvertisingandothercommercialfactors,Ithinkthattheprimarycauseissocialandindividualratherthaneconomic.Solidification:Topic:myviewondonatingblood【范文】MyViewonDonatingBloodPeople'sideasaboutdonatingbloodvaryfrompersontoperson．Somepeoplethinkthatitisglorioustodonateblood．Theyholdthisopinionbecausethosewhoareinurgentneedofbloodcanbesaved．However，othersholdthatitisfoolishforpeopletodonateblood．Intheiropinion，bloodisverypreciousandlosing200mlormoremaydoharmtotheirhealth．数据法开头TeenagesmokingsoarsChinanowhasexperiencedanalarmingincreaseintheteenagesmoking.Inthepastdecadetherateofteenagesmokinghasalmosttripled:itrosefrom8percentin1982to23percentin1992.Atthesametime,theageofthesmokershasdropped:theybegantosmokeatanearlieragesomeasyoungas7yearsold.Evenworse,moreandmoregirlsaretakingupsmoking.Thestatisticslookdisturbing.Thefactorsforagreatriseintheteenagesmokingarecomplex.…..描写法开头Advertisements,perhaps,aremostomnipresentinabigcitysuchasShanghai.Theyshoutatusfromthetelevisionscreenandtheradioloudspeakers;wavetousfromeverypageofthenewspaperandmagazine,gazeatusfromtheroadsidebuildingsandpassingvehiclesalldayandsignaltousincoloredlightsallnights.Scarcelyadaypassesthatwecannotmeetanadvertisement.Facedwithafloodofadvertisements,somepeoplecomplainthat….惊语法开头Eachyearthousandsuponthousandsofgraduatesfloodthejobmarket,wavingtheircollegediplomasandcertificates,expectingbetterjobsintheirmajors,onlytobefrustratedanddisappointed.Accordingtothecharts,only58percentofcollegegraduatesin1992couldfindjobsintheirspecialties,comparedwith89percentin1981whenChinahaditsfirstcollegegraduatesaftertheCulturalRevolution.Whydocollegegraduatesfinditincreasinglydifficulttogetarewardingjob?Onereasonperhapsthat….故事法开头Theotherday,ImetMissLee,myoldclassmate,whotoldmethatshehaddecidedtoquitherjobasateacherattheendoftheschoolyearandtogointoacompany.Shesaidthatshecouldn’tmakealivinginherchosenprofessionandthatnotevenhermoonlightingtwiceaweekcouldputheroutofthefinancialquagmireshewasin.MissLee’scaseisnotunusual,itistypicalofthousandsofyoungteacherswhoarequittingtheirjobsinsearchofmorelucrativework.OnceinanewspaperIreadofacrowdofpeoplewhoremainedappallinglyindifferenttothepleaofamother.Asshefailedtooffertherequiredamountofcashasapricetosaveherdrowningson,thewomanatlastwatchedhersonsinktodeath.ThestoryisnotrareinnewspapersandonTV,andthecasualnessanddetachmentourpeoplenowhavedevelopedhasarousednationwideconcern.Ihaveafriendwholiesinahospital,slowlydyingofapainfulandincurabledisease.Althoughthereisnohopeofrecovery,thediseasesometimespermitsitsvictimtolingeronformanymonthsinevergreattorment.Myfriend,apprisedoftheoutcomeandknowingthatthehospitalexpensesareaseveredrainonhisfamily’slimitedfinancialresources,decidesthatdeathhadbettercomeatonce.Shouldthefamilymeethisdemanddespitetheenormousloveforhim?Shouldthedoctorruntheriskofprovidinghimwiththenecessarydrug?Suchadilemmaweoftenmeetinourdailylife.Onceuponatimetherewereabrotherandsistersquabblingoveranapple,witheachinsistingonthelargeslice.Justastheboyhadgainedcontroloftheknifeandwaspoisedtohackoffthelargershareforhimself,theparentssaid:“Holdit!Idon’tcarewhocutsthatappleintotwopieces,butwhoeverdoeshastogivetheothertherighttoselectthepiecetheywant.”Naturally,toprotecthimself,theboycuttheappleintotwopiecesofequalsize.Thetalemaybeapocryphal,butitsunderlyingmoralhascontinuingrelevancetoday.Therearesomesituationsinwhichtheneedsoftheprotagonistsarenotreallyinopposition.Ifthefocusshiftsfromdefeatingeachothertodefeatingtheproblem,everyonecanbenefit.问题法开头Whatdoesittaketosucceedinone’sstudiesorcareer?Opinionsvarywidely.Givenapproximatelyequalcircumstances,someclaimthesuccessfactorislargelyamatterofluckbeingintherightplaceandtherighttime.Othersspeakofutterdevotiontowork,combinedwithadegreeofruthlessness.Stillothersmaintainthatitisundoubtedlyamatterofhowmuchintelligenceyouhaveorsimplyhowmucheducationyourmotherhad.Shouldascientistberesponsibleforhisdiscoveries?Opinionsvarywidely.Tosomepeople,theanswerisnegative.Theythinkthatthefunctionofthescientistinsocietyistosupplyknowledgeandthatheneedn’tconcernhimselfwiththeusestowhichhisknowledgeordiscoveriesmaybeput.Butotherpeoplearguethatascientisthasadutytomakesurethathisdiscoveryisusedfor,notagainst,society.“WhyhaveIchosentoattendcollege?Isthefour-yearacademiclifeworthwhile?”Ihaveputthesequestionstomyselfatmanytimesinthepasttwoyears.HaveIcomebecauseofparentalinfluence,orbecauseIhavesomegoalofmyownthatIwishtopursue?Afterponderingthesequestionsonmanyoccasions,IhavefinallyreachedtheconclusionthatIhavecometocollegenotformoneynorforfamebutforknowledge,forabetterunderstandingoftheworldaroundme.Solidification:“我们为什么一定得学这些愚蠢的东西？”我读大学时听到同学的所有抱怨和问题中，这种抱怨是最多的了。我会回答说，这些东西能开阔你的眼界，为今后的生活作好准备。“whydowehavetolearnallthisdumbstuff?”OfallthecomplaintsandquestionsIhaveheardfrommyclassmatesduringmycollegelife,thiswastheonemostfrequentlyuttered.Iwouldanswerthatitcanwidenyourmindandprepareyouforyourfuturelife.Solidification:我的朋友WilleamLevin博士是云南大学的社会学教授，他是一名获奖教师，多产作家，写过几本自己研究领域内受人推崇的著作。但他解释说“我在小学七年级时不及格留过级”。他从学业的平庸中脱颖而出决不是偶然的。事实上，有许许多多人开始学习时普普通通，后来冒尖成为杰出的大学生或研究生。有四个因素导致这一点：能力、机会、突发事件以及一段准备好接受变化的时期。MyfriendDr.WilleamLevinisprofessorofsociologyatYunnanuniversity,anaward-winningteacherandtheprolificauthorofanumberofrespectedbooksinhisfield.But“Iflunkedthesevengrade,”heexplained.Levin’sescapefromeducationalmediocrityisfarfromunique.Infact,therearethousandsofeducationallatebloomerswhogoontobecomebrilliantcollegeorgraduatestudents.Fourimportantfactorscanaccountforthis:capacity,opportunity,atriggeringeventandaperiodofreadinesstoacceptchange.如何通过句子开头的变化使句子变得生动一些WhymanyyoungcouplesarereluctanttohavechildrenReluctancetohavechildrenisalsoattributedtotheincreasingdemandforpersonalitydevelopmentandself-fulfillment.Manyyoungpeopletraveltodifferentkindsofschoolsandlibrariesafteraday’sworktolearnforeignlanguagesandcomputers,todoresearchwork,andtoacquireknowledgeofdifferentkinds.thechancesofsuccessandtheopportunitiesforambition.Thusachildisoftenseenasaliabilityratheranasset.Finally,preferenceforhavingnochildrenalsohassomethingtodowithacouple’sfinancialcondition.Itisestimatedthat,amongotherexpenses,thepaymentfortheirchild’sdaynurseryalonecostsaboutRMB300amonth,abigchunkofthefamily’sincome.Tohaveachildrequirescouplestotightentheirbeltscuttingbackonfoodandentertainmentexpenses.Itisnatural,therefore,forthosewhowanttohaveaneasylifetogiveuptheideaofsettingasidemoneyforachild.1.近100万的中国人在过去15年里去了美国。Thepast15yearsbroughtalmostonemillionChinesetotheUnitedStates.2.我们现在以把这件事忘得差不多了。Thiseventisnowalmostfadingfromourmemory.3.学生当然需要作出不懈的努力。Continuouseffortsonthepartofthestudentsarecertainlyrequired.4.我们通过调查可以得出这个结论。Investigationledustotheconclusion.5.他气得说不出话来。Angerchokedhiswords.任何语法成分和词性来写文章段落的起始句1.Displayedinthisfiercecompetitionishiscourageandtacticalskill.2.Learninganewlanguageoftenmeansademandingjib.3.Tobeabletofillleisurewhenoneisretiredisnoteasyformostofpeople.4.Equallyessentialtothehighestsuccessinlearningalanguageareintenseinterestpluspersistenteffort.5.Toooften,studentsstrayintothehabitofcheatingontest.6.Fromtheshortagearisesthedemandfornuclearpowerasanewsourceofenergy.7.Antipathytothecountrysidehasbeenassociatedwithpovertyandlabor.8.Suchisthecasewhenanewpolicyorlawisadopted.9.Whatisnecessaryworkforonemaybevoluntaryplayforanother.变化的实例a.Therearemanypeoplewhoprefertogobybike,becausetheyarenotsatisfiedwithbusservice.b.Thepublicpreferenceforridingbicyclesreflectstheirdissatisfactionwithbusservice.a.Therearemoreandmorepeoplewhorealizethecloseconnectionbetweenenergyandpopulation.b.Thecloseconnectionbetweenenergyandpopulationisincreasinglyrecognized.a.Therearefewandfewgreentreesinmanybigcites,whiletherearemoreandmoreconcretebuildings.b.Thenumberofconcretebuildingsinmanybigcitieshasenormouslyincreasedattheexpenseofgreenbelts.a.Therearefewerandfewercitizenswholiketoseefilms.b.Filmsarenowlosingtheirappealformanycitizens.a.Therearemanypeoplewhocomplainofseverehousingshortages.b.Housingshortagesbecomethesourceofgreatcomplaint.a.Inordertogetaharmoniousdevelopmentforallstudents,schoolauthoritiesshoulddesignanewprogram.b.Schoolauthoritiesshoulddesignanewprogramwhichwillpermitaaharmoniousdevelopmentforallstudents.a.Inordertopreventtheproblembecomingtooserioustosolve,wemusttakeanimmediatestep.b.Animmediatestepmustbetakenbeforetheproblembecomestooserioustosolve.a.Inordertobuildastableandprosperousnation,peopleshouldmakenewefforts.NeweffortswillbringChinaintoastableandprosperousnation.a.Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,wecanhaveaplentifulsupplyoffoodandcommodities.b.Theadvanceofscienceandtechnologyhasmadeitpossibleforustohaveaplentifulsupplyoffoodandcommodities.a.Withtheexpansionofindustry,naturalresourcesaregraduallyexhausted.b.Therapidexpansionofindustryleadstoaprogressiveexhaustionofnaturalresources.a.Withtheimprovementofstandardofliving,evenordinaryfamiliescanaffordcolorTVsets.ColorTVsetsarenowwithineasyreachofordinaryfamilieswhohaveenjoyedtheimprovedstandardofliving.a.MoreandmorepeoplenowprefertostayathomeandwatchTV.b.PeopleinincreasingnumbersprefertostayathomeandwatchTV.a.Moreandmorepeoplewhobecomemoreandmorerichcanaffordamotorcycle.b.Thegrowingnumberofpeoplewhobecomeincreasinglyrichcannowaffordamotorcycle.a.Moreandmoreteenagerssmokecigarettesinrecentyears.b.Teenagesmokingistontheriseinrecentyears.a.Moreandmoreteachersareneededwiththedevelopmentofeconomy.Thereisanincreasingdemandforteacherswiththedevelopmentofeconomy.a.Moreandmoretreeshavedisappearedinthecity.b.hereisasharpdeclineinthenumberoftreesinthecity.结论性结尾Inconclusion,Iwouldliketosaythatchangeisaproblemconfrontingmostofustoday.Thechangeswhichalreadytakenplaceineveryfieldofourlifeareirreversible.Continuationofthegrowthwhichhasalreadybegunisinevitable.Duringthisevolutiontherearegreatrewardstobewonbythosewhoarewillingtotaketheopportunitiesbeingoffered.Takingintoaccountalltherelevantfactorswhichaffectandcontributetotheattitude,wemaysafelyconcludethatwewon’tmakeadentintheattainmentofwomen’ssocialstatusandtheirequalopportunitiesineveryfieldifmen’sattituderemainsunchallenged.Tearshavebeenlikenedtotheclarifyingandbeneficialeffectsoftherainwhichcomesafterathunderstormonasultrysummerday.CharlesDickenswrote,“Heavenknowsweneedneverbeashamedofourtears,fortheyarerainupontheblindingdustofearth,overlyingourhardhearts.”and,indeed,theevidenceuponallsidessupportstheviewthatunderconditionswhichcallforit,acryisawonderfulrestorative.Solidification:总之，健康比财富更重要。那些有了钱却失去健康的人，如同穷人一样会感到不幸福及不幸。如果一个人要实现自已的理想，健康乃是成功中最重要的部分。Inconclusion,healthismoreimportantthanwealth.Thosewhoarerichbuttheirhealtharenomorehappyandfortunatethanthosewhoarepoor.Ifyouwantwishtocometrue,healthisthemostimportantingredientofyoursuccess.号召性结尾Itishightimethatweshouldurgeanimmediateendtothisdeplorablephenomenon.Ourcollegesanduniversitiesshouldbemorewillingtoshouldertheirresponsibilitiestostudentsandtheirfamilies.Buttoooften,theseresponsibilitieshavebeenevaded.Thiswecannotafford.collegecurriculashouldbegearedtotheneedsoftheeconomicgrowth.Itistimethatgovernmentanduniversitiesattachedmuchimportancetothemodificationofthesystemofourhighereducationandputanendtothecurrentwasteofcollegetalentondegreesandcertificates.Thereisnodoubtthatadequateattentionmustbepaidtotheimprovementofrecreativepossibilitiesintheneighbourhoodofthehome,andtheurbanenvironmentmustofferasmanyrecreationactivitiesaspossible.Foranimportantpartofthetimewhichwedonotpassinsleepingorworkingisusedforactivitiesataroundhome.Clearly,orderandstabilityisindispensabletoanation.Ifwearetomaintainafavorableenvironmentforsocialdevelopment,andifthenationistoremainprosperous,itisvitalthatwemakeamaximumcontributiontoitsorderandstability.solidification很明显，我们不能等待他们改变主意。如果我们要确保第一流的青年人源源不断充实进教育事业，就有必要加深公众对教育的理解，同时对献身教育事业的人给予较高的经济待遇。Obviously,wecannotaffordtowaitforthemtochangetheirminds.Ifwewanttoinsureasteadyflowoffirst-rateyoungmindsintotheeducationfield,itisnecessarywewidenthepublicunderstandingofeducationandofferadequateeconomicrewardsforthosedevotedtoeducationaswell.事实证明型句型Thereissufficientevidencetoshowthatparentsareparticularlyinfluentialinthedecisionsoftheirchildrenaboutcollege.Parentswhodidnotthemselvesgraduatefromcollegeappeartohaveastronginterestinhavingtheirchildrenattendcollege.Infamilieswherebothparentsholdcollegedegrees,pressuretoattendcollegemaybelessobviousbecauseitissimplyassumedthechildrenwillalsoattendcollege.Everyyearwethrowawayincrediblequantitiesofbottles,cans,paper,andonandon.Buildingsaretorndownaroundus,andnewonestaketheirplace;theyarecheapertoreplacethantorepair.Allthefactslendsomesupporttotheviewthatwehaveenteredthe“consumersociety”,orratherthe“throwawaysociety.”Allavailableevidencepointstothefactthatsomemoreandmoreyoungpeoplearedeclaringtheirallegiancetotraditionalvalues.Thephysicaleducationprogramhasbecomeanindispensablepartsofcollegelife.Itcontributesdirectlytoaperson’sphysicalfitness.Personalexperienceleadsmetobelievethatitisofgreatvalueespeciallytoastudentwhoworkswithhisbrainmostoftheday,andhencecaneasilybecomeweakandvulnerabletodiseasebecauseofinactivity.Withthegeneralparticipationinsports,student’shealthhasmarkedlyimproved,sohastheefficiencyoftheirstudents.Physically,themostimportantvalueofexerciseisthewayittrainsyourheart.Studieshaveshownthatpeoplewhocontinuetoexerciselateintoadultlifelivelongerandarelesslikelytodiefromheartattacks.Drills:最后，并没有任何现有的资料表明上课次数和课上表现有相应的关系。一个人的课程成绩是以他的努力和效率来决定的，而不是以他上几次课来决定的。一个学生可能上课的次数很多，但是有谁知道他坐在教室里只是在白日作梦呢！Finally,noneoftheavailabledatashowsanyprovencorrelationbetweenattendanceandperformanceinacourse.One’scourseperformanceismeasuredbyhiseffortsandefficiencyratherthanbythetimesheattendsclass.Astudentmayhaveahighrateofattendance,butwhoknowswhetherornotheisjustsittingtheredaydreamingallthetime?必背句型(samplesentencesforimitation)(1)今昔对照法*Whiletenyearsagothenameofcreditcardswasonlyknowntoasmallnumberofpeople,theconceptof“buynowpaylater