2023届山东省日照市高考二模英语试题含答案

参照秘密级管理★启用前试卷类型：A2020级高三校际联合考试英语试题2023.04本试卷共三部分，共10页。满分120分。考试时间100分钟。注意事项：1.答卷前，考生务必将自己的条形码粘贴在答题卡相应的位置。2.回答选择题时，选出每小题答案后，用铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其它答案标号。回答非选择题时，将答案写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。3.考试结束后，将答题卡交回。第一部分阅读（共两节，满分50分）第一节（共15小题：每小题2.5分，满分37.5分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。AFromamulti-dayhikefollowingtheroutesofaJapanesepoet,toaclassicclimbintheArgentinianLakeDistrict，therearethousandsofincredibletrails（小路）thatallowustogetupclosetonature.AppalachianTrail,UnitedStatesExtendingfor2,200miles,theAppalachianTrailislistedasthelongesthiking-onlyfootpathintheworld.ItrunsfromSpringierMountaininGeorgiatoMountKatahdininMaine,passingthroughsomeofthemostremotecountryintheUnitedStates.Thatmeansit'sahardtask,eitherforthosewithendlessvacationallowance,orwalkerslookingtodoasmallpieceofaclassicroute.TheBashoWayfarer,JapanThisself-guidedtripfollowsaroutetakenbythepoetMatsuoBashoover300yearsago.Thesix-dayhikestartsinSendaiandworksitswaythroughthenor-themTohokuregion,passingthroughtheUNESCOWorldHeritage（遗产）SiteofHiraizumiandalongtheancientDewaKaidopath.Withitsbeechandcherryforests,itfinishesatthetempleofYamadera.MountToubkal,MoroccoThepathupwardsrisesfromthevillageofImlil,passingoveradryriverbedbeforerisingsharplythroughatempleandontowardsalargemountaincottage.Afterovernighthere,hikerssetoffupthesnowfieldtothepeak,wheretheAtlasMountainsopenoutandtheviewsarebreathtaking.Alocalguideandmuleteersforcarryingluggageareamust.TheDingleWay,IrelandItisaring-likepaththatoffersthebestwaytogetundertheskinofwildCountyKerryinIreland'ssouthwest.StartinginthetownofTralee,theclockwisepathfollowsnarrowroads,takinginthewidesweepofsandatInchStrand,passingalongtheclifftopsoutsideDingletownandheadingaroundtheedgeofMountBrardon,thehighestpeakontheDinglePeninsula.1.WhatdoweknowabouttheBashoWayfarer？A.Itoffersnoguideservice.B.Itwasbuiltbyapoet.C.ItendsinthenorthernTohokuregion.D.Itisontheworldheritagelist.2.Wherecanhikersenjoyagoodviewofsnow？A.AppalachianTrail.B.TheBashoWayfarer.C.MountToubkal.D.TheDingleWay.3.WhatisspecialabouttheDingleWay？A.Itfollowsacirclepath.B.Itisthelongestintheworld.C.ItfinishesatMountBrandon.D.ItreachesthehighestpeakinIreland.BKe'NyzjahFerebeewasstandingbythekitchenworktop,addingcupcakelinerstoapan.Sheusedanicecreamspoontofilleachwithcakebatter（面糊）toensuretheywouldlookidentical.Afinishedgroupsatonthecounterwithwhitebuttercreamturningontop.Thecupcakeswerefora2-year-old's“Moana”-themedbirthdayparty.Thenextday,shehadordersforatwo-tieredcakeandtwobirthdaycakes.Whilemostteenagersarespendingthesummerhangingoutwithfriendsandworking,Ke'Nyzjahisfillingorders,updatingherwebsiteandgettingnewbrandingphotos.SheownsandoperatesKayKeBakery,ahome-basedbusiness,specializingincustomcakesandcupcakes.Sheoffers14flavors.Sherequiresatleasttwotofourweeks'noticeonorders,andshegetssixtosevenaweek.In2020,shestartedbakingoutofboredomandadesireforcake.Sheaskedhermomforasolution.Mompointedhertoaboxofcakemixinthecupboard.Ke'Nyzjah'sfirstattemptfailed.Butshetriedmakingmorecakesthenextday.Shegotbetter.ShewatchedhoursofYouTubevideostocomeupwitharecipeandtoteachherselfbakingtechniques.“OnceIgotonInstagramandstartedseeingotherpeople'sdecoratedcakes,that'swhenIgotinspiredtobeacakeartistinsteadofjustabaker,"shesaid.Shetookbusinessclassessuchasdigitalmarketingatherschool.Shealsoregisteredforacoursetobecomeacertifiedcustomerservicespecialist.Ittaughtherhowtotalktocustomersandgetthroughasale.She'sconstantlytryingtofindmorewaystopromoteherbusinessandfindnewclients.“It'salittledifficulthavingtokeepupwithbothmyInstagramandmyFacebookpagesandmanagingschool,personallifeandabusiness.Itcanbealotsometimes,butImanage.”NakesiaFercbec,Ke'Nyzjah'smother,feltherdaughter'sfatherhasbeeninfluential.Ke'Nyzjahgiveshermotheralargeofthecredit.“She'slikemybiggestsupporter.She'smademewhoIam.I'vecometorealizethatIamanincredibleperson."4.WhatwasKe'Nyzjahdoingaccordingtothefirstparagraph?A.Designingathemedparty.B.Makingcakesforbusiness.C.Preparingforherbirthdayparty.D.Placinganorderforcakesonline.5.WhatcanbeinferredaboutKaykeBakery？A.Itiswellreceived.B.Ithostspartiesforcustomers.C.Itisajointbusiness.D.Itmainlyprovidesserviceforkids6.WhatmightbeachallengeforKe'Nyzjah?A.Attendingbusinessclasses.B.Teachingherselfbakingtechniques.C.Gettingalongwithherclients.D.Balancingherbusinesswithschooling.7.Whatisthetextmainlyabout？A.Ahome-basedteenbaker.B.Aboredom-killingbakery.C.Howtobecomeacakeartist.D.Howtostartabusiness.CCrossingPhoenix,Arizona,are180milesofcanals.In1867,thecity'sfoundingfather,JackSwillingsawtheremainsofirrigation（灌溉）channelswanderingacrossthelandscape.Herealizedthat,centuriesbefore,somesocietyhadfarmedthisdesert.Soonafter,Swillingbeganclearingtheblockedcanalstobringagriculturebacktotheregion.Threeyearslater,Swillingandotherpioneersmettoconsidernamesfortheirsettlement.ThetoptwowerePumpkinvilleandStonewall.Luckily,EnglishadventurerDarrellDuppaproposedanameinspiredbytheresurrection（复兴）ofthecanals.“Agreatraceoncelivedhere.andanothergreatracewilllivehereinthefuture,"heconsidered.“Ipredictthatanewcitywillspring.phoenix-like,fromtheruinsandashesoftheold.”GaryHuckleberry,aresearcher,said,“Inthesouthwest,wehavesomeseriousissuestodealwithintermsofwater.TheColoradoRiveristhemainsourceofwaterforthesouthwest.andit'soverdistributed.We'vegotpopulationgrowthandclimatechange.Howarewegoingtodealwiththat?Ithinkthere'ssomethingtobelearnedbylookingatpastsocietieswhomanagedwaterforthousandsofyears.”ThatgreatsocietywastheHohokam.Between100and1450AD,theyconstructed1,000milesofcanals.AstheHohokamexpandedtheirnetwork,theyconstantlyrepaired,cleanedanddivertedthecanals.“Itrequirescooperation,becausealltheusersofthewaterfromthatcanalhavetoagreenotonlytoconstructit,butalsotomaintainit,”Henderson,ascientist,said.“Userswouldhavetoagreetocertainconditionstokeeptheentiresystemgoing."TheHohokamcommittedtosharingwaterandputthemselvesontimetables.TheHohokamusedcanalirrigationfor3,00)years.“That,tome,isthedefinitionofsustainabledevelopment,"Huckleberrysaid.“Theylearnedhowtosustainablyfarm,tomanagewater,tonotdestroytheirsoilsinawaythatisworthyandmightgiveusinsightintohowwemightdealwiththecurrenttrouble.Ithinkoneofthekeylessonsisthatyoudon'tputallyoureggsinonebasket.”8.Whatisparagraph2mainlyabout？A.Thereconstructionofcanals.B.Theoriginofthecity'snamePhoenix.C.Thediscoveryoftheirrigationchannels.D.Theagriculturaldevelopmentinthesettlement.9.Whatdoestheunderlinedword“that”inparagraph3referto?A.Thesourceofwater.B.Theclimatechange.C.Thepopulationgrowth.D.Theoverdistributionofwater.10.WhatdoesHendersonsayabouttheHohokam？A.Theywereexpertinfarming.B.Theywerepoorattimemanagement.C.Theyhadastrongsenseofteamspirit.D.Theyfoughtfortheirrightstousewater.11.WhichofthefollowingwouldHuckleberryagreewith?A.Canalirrigationisoutofdate.B.Sustainabledevelopmentmatters.C.Farmingcansolvecurrenttrouble.D.Thelossofsoilsisworsethanbefore.DResearchersinSingaporehavedevelopedanelectronicmaterialthathelpsrobotssensetouchandnearbyobjects.Thematerialisakindoffoam:asolidsubstancethatisfilledwithairandissoft.Andthefoamhasanotherusefulquality.Itrepairsitselfwhendamaged,muchlikehumanskin.ThematerialiscalledAiFoam,whichisshortforartificiallyinnervatedfoam.Toinnervatemeanstosupplywithnerves.Inrobots,AiFoamwouldgatherinformationfromnearbyandsendittoacomputercontrollingtherobot.AiFoamisastretchypolymer（聚合物）combinedwithamixturethatlowerssurfacetension.Thismeansthatifyoucutthematerial,itcanreturneasilyintoonepiece.Tocopythehumansenseoftouch,theresearchersmixedmicroscopicpiecesofmetalintothematerial.Thentheyaddedverysmallelectricalconnectionsbeneaththesurfaceofthefoam.BenjaminTee,aleadresearcheronthenewmaterialattheNationalUniversityofSingapore，saidthatwhenthereispressureonthematerial，themetalparticles（颗粒）getcloser.Themovementchangestheirelectricalproperties.Theelectricalconnectionssensethesechangesandsendinformationaboutthemtoacomputer,whichthentellstherobotwhattodo.“WhenImovemyfingernearthesensor,youcanseethesensorismeasuringthechangesofmyelectricalfieldandrespondsaccordinglytomytouch,”hesaid.Therobotichandsensesnotonlytheamountbutalsothedirectionoftheforceplacedonit.Thatcouldmakerobotsmoreintelligentandresponsive.TeesaidAiFoamisthefirstmaterialofitskindtocombineself-repairingpropertieswithnearnessandpressuresensing.Afterspendingovertwoyearsdevelopingit,Teeandhisteamhopethematerialcanbeputtousewithinfiveyears.12.WhatisonefeatureofAiFoam？A.Itismadeoutofair.B.Itisalow-costmaterial.C.Ithasself-repairingability.D.Itcanreplacehumanskin.13.Howdoestheauthordevelopparagraph2？A.Bygivinginstructions.B.Bylistingexamples.C.Bymakingcomparisons.D.Byofferingexplanations.14.Whichofthefollowinggivesorderstotherobot？A.BenjaminTee.B.Theresearcher.C.Thesensor.D.Thecomputer.15.WhatcanwelearnaboutAiFoamfromthelasttwoparagraphs?A.Itcanmeasuretheshapeofyourfinger.B.Itcanchangethedirectionoftheforce.C.Itwillcomeontothemarketinthenearfuture.D.Itmakesrobotsmoresensitivethanhumanbeings.第二节（共5小题：每小题2.5分，满分12.5分）阅读下面短文，从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。Hurricaneseasoncanbewildandunpredictable.__16__Herearesomewaysyoucanbeefupyourhomesecurityinhurricaneweather,evenifyouneedtomoveout.__17__Thatactuallydoesnothingtoensureyoursafetyinthepowerfulwinds.Stickingtohurricanesheltersorplywood（胶合板）istheonlywaytogowhenitcomestoprotectingthosepointsofentryinhurricaneconditions.Buysheetsofplywood,measureyourwindowsandusebrackets（支架）toholdtheplywoodinplace.Sandbagsareveryuseful.Whilesandbagswon'tbeabletohelpintheextremestorm,manypeoplewillbeabletopreventfloodingandextensivedamagetotheirbelongingsbyplacingsandbags.__18__Anystormwaterthatiskeptoutofyourhomeisstormwaterthatwon'tbeabletodamagethebelongingsinsideyourhome,sosandbagsarewellworthhavingatyourdoorwaysduringahurricane.It'simportanttopreparetheinsideofyourhomeforstrongwindsandrain.Butyoushouldalsokeepaneyeontheoutsideofyourhouse，too.Trim（修剪）trees，especiallydeadbranches，topreventanythingelsethatcouldflythroughawindowandcausedamageduringahurricane.__19__Youshouldalsotakepicturesofexpensiveitemslikeelectronicsandkeepnotesoftheirserialnumbers.__20__Also,therearealwaysbadpeopleoutrightafterastorm.Iftheworsthappensandyourhomeisbrokenintorightafterabadstorm,havingpicturesanddetailednotesaboutwhatwasinyourhomepriortothehurricanewillmakeiteasierforpolicetotrackdownstolenitems.A.Youshouldhaveacameraathome.B.Itcanbestrongenoughtoresisttheforcefulwinds.C.Makingsurenothingislooseinyouryardisimportant.D.Youmayseepeopletapingwindowsbeforeahurricanecomes.E.Theywillbeabletoeffectivelykeepstormwateroutinmanycases.F.Itwillaidwithyourinsurancecompanyifanythingneedstobereplaced.G.Thesedangerousstormscanbringdamagetoyourhomeandbelongings.第二部分语言运用（共两节，满分30分）第一节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）阅读下面短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。ResidentsofaWiltshiretownhavecreatedaverticallivinggardentofightpollution.Thewallofplantshasbeen__21__tothesideofashopinBridgeYardinthecenterofBradford-on-Avon.StephanieEdwards__22__theideaandbroughtittothetowncounciltoputinto__23__.“Asamatteroffact,theplantshave__24__withtheminsects,andwe'vehadacoupleofbirdssittinguptheresoit's__25__forsureandwemustnotforgetthe__26__ofhealthandwellbeing,”shesaid.Thewallhadbeeninthe__27__since2019andtookaboutfivedaystoconstruct.Thewallis__28__seasonalplants,lowenergyLEDlighting,birdhousesandbughotels.AlexKaysaidthelivingwallhadanumberofbeneficial__29__.“Idon'tthinkthatanyonewillguaranteethatthiswillsolveourairqualitysituation,butitwill__30__it,”shesaid.“It’snotjustthetrafficandthe__31__quality,butthisisaboutwellbeing.Thisisgoodforthe__32__.JamesSullivan-Tailyour,whoownsthenearbySwanHotel,saidhewasreally__33__withthewall.“Ithinkit’s__34__acleanertown,anicertown,butalsosomething__35__thatisgoingtoattractvisitorsaswell,”headded.21.A.limited22.A.explained23.A.action24.A.filled25.A.changing26.A.benefits27.A.waiting28.A.connectedto29.A.aspects30.A.make31.A.life32.A.business33.A.familiar34.A.designing35.A.abnormalB.movedB.formedB.troubleB.sharedB.growingB.causesB.planningB.mixedwithB.profitsB.helpB.soilB.agricultureB.carefulB.creatingB.strangeC.attachedC.testedC.shapeC.broughtC.marketingC.meaningsC.paintingC.madeupofC.viewsC.leaveC.waterC.technologyC.patientC.describingC.uniqueD.pulledD.predictedD.productionD.keptD.workingD.resultsD.destroyingD.brokenupintoD.examplesD.findD.airD.communicationD.pleasedD.copyingD.common第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。SamanthaCristoforetti,thefirstItalianfemaleastronautinspace,__36__(post)agroupofphotosandseveralChinesesentencesonherTwitteraccountduringhermissionattheInternationalSpaceStation.Attachedtothephotos__37__(be)severallinesfromPrefacetoPoemsComposedattheOrchidPavilion,anancientChinesecalligraphymasterpiece__38__famousChinesecalligrapherWangXizhifromtheEasternJinDynasty.Cristoforettievengave__39__accuratetranslationofthelines,saying,“Lookingup,Iseethevastnessoftheuniverse.__40__(bow)myhead,Ilookatthemultitudeoftheworld.Thegazeflies,theheartexpands,thejoyofthesensescanreachitspeak,__41__thisistruehappinessindeed.”“Herquotation（引语）ofthelinesshowsthatshe__42__（careful）observedtheuniversewiththevisionofChinesecivilizationwhileobservingChinafromspace.Suchaquotationisveryspecial,__43__showsherambitionandasenseofpride,”saidProfessorWangHuifromTsinghuaUniversity.Herquotationalsosparkedaheated__44__(discuss)amongforeignInternetusersonsocialmedia.SomenetizenssaidthatwithherChineselanguagecapacity,Cristoforettialsohastheability__45__(work)attheChinesespacestation,whileothershopethattherewillbelessconflictandmorecooperationintheworld.第三部分写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节（满分15分）假定你是李华，你校原定于本周五举行为期两天的“农耕研学（AgriculturalFieldTrip）”活动，因天气影响将延期举行。请你写一封邮件告知交换生David，内容包括：1.说明变动原因；2.告知变动情况。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearDavid,DearDavid,Yours,LiHua第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。December1952inWisconsin,wasbitterlycold.Acurious7-year-old,Iwasinhesitationwhenmyfatherarrivedhomefromworkwithsomethinghiddeninhisjacket.“GuesswhatIhave，”hesaid.Heslowlyunwrappedthejackettotakeoutafrozenowl（猫头鹰）.He'dfoundthefrozenbirdonhiscarwhenheleftworkandguessedthatithadflownintothewindshield（挡风玻璃）.Dadthoughtitmightbealiveandwantedtoletitwarmup.Mymotheragreedtoletthebirdstayovernight，soDadandItookittothebasement（地下室）andcarefullylaiditnearourcoalstove.Iwasthefirstoneintothekitchenthenextmorningforabowlofcereal（麦片）.Ifoundtheowlrestingonthesugarbowlasifwaitingforitsbreakfast.Ihurriedtotellmyparentsthattheowlwasaliveandsittingatthekitchentable.Momdidn'tlikethatitwasinthekitchenandwanteditoutofthehouse.Dadinstructedmetoopenthebackdoorwhileheforcedtheowltowardme.Iheardtheflappingofwings,butbeforeIcoulddirectitsflightoutside,theowlturnedaroundawayfromthecoldaircominginthedoorandflewpastme,downthestairsintotheshelterofthewarmbasement.Restinginthespacenearthetopofthebasement,theowlwassafelybeyondourreach.Wetrieddrivingitoutwithabroom,butitcalmlyflewtothefarsideofthebasement.SoonDadandIwerelaughingtoohardtocontinue,andwerealizedtherewasnowaywecoulddrivetheowloutifitwantedtostay.MomagreedtohaveitinthehouseuntilDadcouldcatchitwhenitbecameweakfromhunger.Butthatneverhappened.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thedoordidn'tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.Thedoordidn'tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.Asspringarrived,weknewitwastimefortheowltoleave.2020级高三校际联考英语试题参考答案第一部分阅读理解（共20小题；每题2.5分，满分50分）1—3ACA4—7BADA8—11BDCB12—15CDDC16—20GDECF第二部分英语知识运用（共两节，满分30分）第一节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）21—25CBACD26—30ABCAB31—35DADBC第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）36.posted37.were38.by39.an40.Bowing41.and/so42.carefully43.which44.discussion45.towork第三部分写作（满分40分）一、评分原则1.本题总分为15分，按6个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于60和多于100的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差，以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第六档（13—15分）：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的。——覆盖所有内容要点。——应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。——语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第五档（10—12分）：完全完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的。——虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。——应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。——语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。——应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第四档（7—9分）：基本完成了试题规定的任务，整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。——虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。——应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。——有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。——应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。第三档（4—6分）：未恰当完成试题规定的任务，信息未能清楚地传达给读者。——漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。——语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。——有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。——较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。第二档（1—3分）：未完成试题规定的任务，信息未能传达给读者。——明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。——语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。——较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。——缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。第一档（0分）——未能传达给读者任何信息。内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。三、参考答案DearDavid,Howiseverythinggoing?I’msorrytotellyouthatsomeadjustmentshavebeenmadetothetwo-dayAgriculturalFieldTrip,whichwasscheduledforthisFriday.Accordingtothelatestweatherreport,there’sgoingtobeaheavyrainthisFriday.Thus,ourschoolhasdecidedtoputoffthefieldtripuntilitgetsbetter.Weatherpermitting,theactivitymaytakeplacenextFriday.Iwillletyouknowonceitisconfirmed.Ihopetheunexpectedchangewon’tcauseyoumuchinconvenience.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua第二节（满分25分）一、评分原则1.本题总分为25分，按七个档次进行评分。2.评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。（1）续写内容的质量、完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度；（2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性；（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3.评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4.评分时还应注意：（1）词数少于120的，酌情扣分；（2）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分；（3）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第一档（0分）——未作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。第二档（1—5分）——内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节；——所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误极多，严重影响理解；——几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。第三档（6—10分）——内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节；——所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解；——未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。第四档（11—14分）——创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情境基本相关；——使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影响理解；——尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。第五档（15—17分）——创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关；——使用了比较恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许错误，但基本不影响理解；——使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第六档（18—21分）——创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度较高；——使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错误，但不影响理解；——比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第七档（22—25分）——创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高；——使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解；——自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。三、参考答案Thedoordidn’tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.Inthedaysthatfollowed,theowlcaughtthemiceinthebasementandenjoyedeverymealofthem.Beforelong,itbecamesofatthatDadmighthaveeasilycaughtit.Buthedidn’t.EvenMomneveraskedhimtodriveitoutofthehouse.Iusuallyshowedmyfriendstheowlthatlivedinmybasementandexplainingitseatinghabits.Timepassedquicklyandthreemonthswentbybeforeweknewit.Asspringarrived,weknewitwastimefortheowltoleave.Onawarmafternoon,wedecidedtosetthebirdfree.Iopenedthedoor,thoughIhatedtodoit.Theowlseemedtoreadourmindsandflewoutintothetallpeartreeinourbackyard.W