试题导练（十四）

试题导练（十四）试题展示阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ihadbeenswimmingpetitivelyforaboutfiveyearsandwasreadytoquit.IwasoftentheonlyAfricanAmericanattheswimmingpetitionsandourteamcouldn'taffordgooduniforms.However,mynumberonereasonforwantingtoquitwasthatIkeptreceiving“HonorableMentions".Anyathleteknowsthatyoudon'twanttohaveabookshelffullof“HonorableMentions",whichyougetjustbecauseyoushowedup.Onesummerday,thedaybeforeabigswimmeet,IdecidedtotellmygrandmathatIwasquittingtheswimteam.WhenItoldher,shelookedmeintheeyeandsaid,“Baby,rememberthesewords‘Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.’Yourgrandmotherdidn'traiselosersorquitters.Yougotothatmeettomorrow,andyouswimlikeyouareagrandchildofmine,youhear?”Iwastooafraidtosayanythingbut“Yes,ma'am.”Thenextdaywearrivedattheswimmeetlate,missingmy groupofswimmersinthe15/16agegroup.MycoachinsistedthatIbeallowedtoswimwiththeoldergroup.Iknewthatshewasincludingmeintheracesothatourjourneytothemeetwouldnotbewasted,andshehadnoexpectationswhatsoeverthatIwouldeinanythingbuteighthplaceandonlythat,becausethereweren'tninelanes.AsImountedtheboard,alltheothergirlslookedatme.Iquicklynoticedthatthesegirlswereallheretodojustonethingbeatme.Allofasudden,mygrandma'swordsranginmyhead,“Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.Youswimlikeyouareagrandchildofmine.”“Yes,Grandma,IwillswimlikeIamagrandchildofyours,"Isaidtomyself.注意:续写词数应为150左右。Paragraph1:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析①人物:I;mygrandma;mycoach;theothergirls②情节线:③主题:1)面对困难,永不言弃,才能收获成功;亲人的鼓励给予我们勇气、动力和信心。④情感线:readytoquit→tooafraidtosayanythingbut“Yes,ma'am.”→Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.(confident)→?作者已经参加了五年的游泳比赛,准备退出。然而,奶奶坚定的支持和鼓励的话语让作者不得不又去参加游泳比赛。在比赛的那天,作者却迟到了,没赶上自己年龄组的游泳赛,教练却坚持让她和年龄大一点的选手比赛,作者无奈接受了这样的安排。比赛开始前,想起奶奶的话,信心又被激发出来。思考:根据阅读部分的情感线,在接下来的续写部分,作者的情感可能会有哪些变化?努力比赛→依然只获得“HonorableMentions”→感到气馁,彻底退出游泳比赛;奋力拼搏→赢得比赛→坚定信心→感悟到奶奶话语的力量。续写时,同学们可以根据自己推演出来的故事情节,恰当体现某种情感变化。细读语言①第一段:However,mynumberonereasonforwantingtoquitwasthatIkeptreceiving“HonorableMentions”.此句表明作者想退出游泳比赛的最主要原因是她这些年在所参加的游泳比赛中都是被授予“荣誉奖”。思考:作者已经参加了五年的游泳比赛,却每次都被授予“荣誉奖”,她心灰意冷,准备退出比赛。然而奶奶说的话却迫使作者又一次走进游泳比赛的现场。她会有怎样的表现呢?续写第二段中的ItwasthenthatIheardtheclapsandcheersaroundme暗示作者的比赛结果如何呢?她这一次是否会赢得比赛?②第二段:‘Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.'此句是作者的奶奶激励她时说的一句话,并且这句话在阅读部分最后一段再次出现。思考:正是奶奶说的这句话激励作者又一次走进游泳比赛现场，奶奶说的这句话贯穿全文。在续写部分,我们可否再次提及这句话回响在作者耳畔,与上下文之间进行较好的呼应?③高频词:swim,quit, my grandma,Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit是本文的关键词和句,在阅读部分反复出现,是串联整个故事发展脉络的重要成分。思考:这些高频词和句如果在续写部分出现,会如何决定故事的走向呢?作者在此次游泳比赛中表现如何呢?奶奶说的话对她起到了什么作用呢?她是否还会考虑退出游泳比赛呢?研读首句第一段首句:关键词:harder;首句译文:扑通一声!我游得比以前任何时候都卖力。第二段首句:关键词:heard,clapsandcheers;首句译文:就在那时,欢呼声和掌声淹没了我。续写部分预测:第一段内容:奶奶激励的话促使作者又一次走进了游泳比赛现场。比赛过程中,作者充满了力量,希望不会辜负奶奶的期望。在比赛中,她可能会遇到强劲的对手,但是奶奶的话语萦绕在她耳畔,激励她奋力拼搏,尽自己最大的努力来应对这场游泳比赛。续写首段应讲述作者比赛的经过和心理活动。第二段内容:根据续写第二段首句ItwasthenthatIheardtheclapsandcheersaroundme,可推测,续写第二段应讲述作者获得了17/18岁年龄组游泳比赛的冠军,以及作者获胜后的感想,结尾应给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。微写作练习根据要求和括号内的提示完成下列句子。遭遇打击局面落后补全句子:①Icouldn't__________________(追上)theotherpetitors,and__________________(远远落后).②Theotherswimmers__________(超过)meand_________________________(让我望尘莫及).身心疲惫①扩充句子:Halfwaythroughtherace,Ifelttired.Halfwaythroughtherace,Ialreadybeganto_______________(感到非常疲惫).②转换表达:Theintensepetitioncausedmetobreakdown.Theintensepetitiondroveme_________________________(濒临崩溃).坚持不懈激发动力转换表达:Mygrandma'swordssoundedinmyear.①Allofasudden,mygrandma'swords____________________(回响在我耳边).②Atthatmoment,thepowerfulwordsofmygrandma_________________________(又一次回响在我耳边).全力以赴补全句子:①Iwilledmyarmsandlegstokeepswimmingand used_________________________(最后一点力气)toswimthelast50meters.②SoenergeticwasIthatI____________________(游得比以前更快了).Withmyarmsmovingsmoothly,Icutthroughthewater____________________(像飞鱼一样).得偿所愿击败劲敌①补全句子:AssoonasItouchedthewall,Ilookedupatthescreen,_______________(焦急地等待)theresult.②扩充句子:Icouldn'tbelievetheresult.I_______________(几乎不敢相信)theresult.③转换表达:Thoughitwasanarrowvictory,Iwonmyfirstbigracethatday._________________________(虽然险胜),Iwonmyfirstbigracethatday.自我突破补全句子:①IrealizedI_________________________(创造了一个新的个人最好成绩)itwasabrandnewrecord.②Myconfidence__________(恢复)andIspenttherestoftheeventgluedtomyseat,tooexcitedtolookanybodyintheeye,andit_______________(最终成为)themostfortablemeetforme.登台领奖①补全句子:_________________________(眼泪顺着我的脸颊流下来)asIstoodonthewinner'spodium.②扩充句子:Iacceptedtheawardtoapplause.Iacceptedtheawardto____________(雷鸣般的)applause.衔接连贯合并句子:1.IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadahalfbodylengthleadovertheothergirls.Thegirlssoonspedupandnarrowedthegap.①IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadahalfbodylengthleadovertheothergirls.________(连词),theysoonspedupandnarrowedthegap.②IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadahalfbodylengthleadovertheothergirls,__________________________(定语从句). 2.Istoodonthewinner'spodium.Iwepttearsofjoy.①Istoodonthewinner'spodium_________(连词)wepttearsofjoy.Istoodonthewinner'spodium,_______________________(动词ing形式).小试身手请你将自己的习作写在题目后的横线上吧!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：遭遇打击1.①catchupwith;fellfarbehind②passedby;leftmeinthedust2.①feelextremelytired ②totheedgeofbreakdown 坚持不懈1.①ranginmyhead/cars②echoedagaininmyears2.①everylastbitofstrength②swamfasterthanever;likeaflyingfish得偿所愿1.①waitinganxiouslyfor ②couldhardlybelieve ③Narrowvictoryasitwas2.①setanewpersonalbest②wasrebuilt/restored;endedupbeing3.①Tearsrandownmyface②thunderous衔接连贯1.①However②whosoonspedupandnarrowedthegap2.①and ②weepingtearsofjoy 小试身手Onepossibleversion:SPLASH!IswamharderthanIhadeverswumbefore.Afterthefirstflipturn,IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadahalfbodylengthleadovertheothergirls.However,theysoonspedupandnarrowedthegap.Halfwaythroughtherace,thegirltomyleftalmostdrewlevelwithme.whileIalreadybegantofee