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ContinuationWritingTechnique:HowtowritelogicallyContentI.Lead-inII.CasestudyIII.Discussion&Self-evaluationIV.Rewrite&Present&Evaluate
Threelogicians(逻辑学家)walkintoabar.Thewaiterasks,“Wouldeveryonelikeabeer?”
Thefirstlogician
said,“Idon'tknow.”
Thesecondonesaid,“Idon'tknow,too.”Thethirdsaid,“Yes.”Q:Whowant/wantsabeer?A.Onlythethirdlogician.
B.Thefirstandthirdlogicians.
C.Thesecondandthird
one.
D.Allofthem.QuizPrincipleofconsistency(原文一致原则)
Thecontentshouldbecohesive,coherent,andconsistent.ThreePrinciplesofWritingPrincipleofbeingpostive(正能量原则)Thestoryshouldbepositiveandpromotecoresocialistvalues.Principleoftortuous(曲折性原则)Thestoryshouldhavetwistsandturns,wherethecharactersencounterdifficultiesorproblems,butwillsolvethemeventually.logicplotstructurepositiveenergyHowtowritelogically?续写,就是接着说,展开说。Wellbegunishalfdone.Steps:阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Itallbeganwhenmyyoungerbrother,Chris,andIwentovertoUncleHoward’sforThanksgiving.Whenwefinallygottomyuncle’s,ChrisandIwentoutsidetoseeifUncleHowardneededhelpwithanything.SinceChriswasonlynine,hegottheeasierjobofcleaningupthewateringcans.Iwastwelve,oldenoughtohelploadthewheelbarrow(手推车).ButwestillfoundtimetoaskUncleHowardalotofquestionsaboutturkeys.Hemusthavebeenimpressed,becausewhenwewerefinished,hewinkedatmydadandhandedusoneturkeyegg.
“Youkidsputthisunderahatchinghen,”hesaid,“andintwenty-fivedays,you’llhaveafineturkey!”Chriswassoexcitedthathenearlydroppedtheeggonthewayhome.Dadputtheeggunderanoldhen,andeverydayChrisandIwouldchecktoseeifithadhatchedyet.Twenty-fivedaysseemedlikeforever.Finally,onthetwenty-sixthday,ChrisandIwalkedintothecoop(鸡舍)afterschooltofindtheoldhenscratchingonthefloor.Behindherwasoneballoffluff(绒毛),fallingoveritsfeetandlookingsortofconfusion.Whenitgotolder,wecouldtellthatitwasatom(雄火鸡).WenameditTimothy.
CaseStudy(广东二模)
Timothygrewandgrew,dashingtowardsthefeedwethrewout.Helikedtowanderinthewoodsandfindtastyberriesandweedseeds.MomkepttellingusnottogettooattachedtoTimothy,becauseweweregoingtohavehimforThanksgiving.Butweneverpaidtoomuchattentiontowhatthatreallymeant.
Then,onedaytowardtheendofOctober,DadgaveChrisandmeinstructions.“Iwantyoutostartgivinghimcornalongwithhisregularfeed,”hesaid.“Wewantanice,thick-fleshedbirdforThanksgiving.”AfterDadturnedandwalkedaway,Chris’sfacebegantowrinkle,justasitdoesbeforehestartstocry.
Paragraph1:IcomfortedChris,sayingwecouldhideTimothywherepeoplecouldn’tfindhim.
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Paragraph2:WithTimothygone,UncleHowardprovidedanotherturkeyonThanksgiving.
____________________________________________________________________TheauthorandhisbrotherChrisgetaTurkeyeggfromtheiruncleandwashatched.WhenThanksgivingcame,mothertoldthemthattheywoulduseTimothyfortheThanksgivingTurkey,buttheauthorandhisbrotherdidn'twantthat,sotheymanagedtohideTimothyandsavehim.Whatarethecontradictionsoftheplot?ForeshadowinginPara.1:backgroundinformation
WHO:_______________________________
WHEN:______________________________
WHERE:_____________________________
WHY:_______________________________
WHATHAPPENED:_________________________________________
Chris,I,UncleHowardbeforeThanksgivingDayatUncleHoward’shousetocelebrateThanksgivingDayUncleHowardhandedusoneturkeyegg(Para.1)Itallbeganwhenmyyoungerbrother,Chris,andIwentovertoUncleHoward’sforThanksgiving.Whenwefinallygottomyuncle’s,ChrisandIwentoutsidetoseeifUncleHowardneededhelpwithanything.SinceChriswasonlynine,hegottheeasierjobofcleaningupthewateringcans.Iwastwelve,oldenoughtohelploadthewheelbarrow(手推车).ButwestillfoundtimetoaskUncleHowardalotofquestionsaboutturkeys.Hemusthavebeenimpressed,becausewhenwewerefinished,hewinkedatmydadandhandedusoneturkeyegg.Predict:1.Whatmayhappentotheturkeyegg?2.What’sourattitudestowardtheturkeyegg?3.HowwillwecelebratetheThanksgivingDay?ForeshadowinginPara.2
Think:1.Whathappenedtotheturkeyegg?
2.Whydidwegivetheturkeyaname?What’sourfeelingstowardit?2.Itshowed
ourlovefortheturkey.(Para.2)“Youkidsputthisunderahatchinghen,”hesaid,“andintwenty-fivedays,you’llhaveafineturkey!”Chriswassoexcitedthathenearlydroppedtheeggonthewayhome.Dadputtheeggunderanoldhen,andeverydayChrisandIwouldchecktoseeifithadhatchedyet.Twenty-fivedaysseemedlikeforever.Finally,onthetwenty-sixthday,ChrisandIwalkedintothecoop(鸡舍)afterschooltofindtheoldhenscratchingonthefloor.Behindherwasoneballoffluff(绒毛),fallingoveritsfeetandlookingsortofconfusion.Whenitgotolder,wecouldtellthatitwasatom(雄火鸡).WenameditTimothy.1.Itwashatched(孵化)intoaturkey.laythefoundationofourhidingandsavingtheturkey.ForeshadowinginPara.3
Think:1.Whatdoesitmean“weweregoingtohavehimforThanksgiving”?WillhimbekilledorbeamascotofThanksgiving?Orwillhebesenttoothers?
2.Why“weneverpaidtoomuchattentiontowhatthatreallymeant”?(Para.3)Timothygrewandgrew,dashingtowardsthefeedwethrewout.Helikedtowanderinthewoodsandfindtastyberriesandweedseeds.MomkepttellingusnottogettooattachedtoTimothy,becauseweweregoingtohavehimforThanksgiving.Butweneverpaidtoomuchattentiontowhatthatreallymeant.1.ItmeanstheywantedtokilltheturkeyfortheirdinneronThanksgivingDay.2.Becauseweneverthoughtabouttheturkeywouldbekilledatthattime.ForeshadowinginPara.4
Think:1.WhatdoesDadmean“Wewantanice,thick-fleshedbirdfor
Thanksgiving”?
2.WhydidChris’sfacebegintowrinkleandstarttocry?
(Para.4)Then,onedaytowardtheendofOctober,DadgaveChrisandmeinstructions.“Iwantyoutostartgivinghimcornalongwithhisregularfeed,”hesaid.“Wewantanice,thick-fleshedbirdforThanksgiving.”AfterDadturnedandwalkedaway,Chris’sfacebegantowrinkle,justasitdoesbeforehestartstocry.1.DadwantedtokilltheturkeyfortheirdinneronThanksgivingDay.2.Chrisknewtheturkeywouldbekilled,sohefeltverysad.Para.Para.1Para.2Para.3Para.4OriginalsentenceChris,I,UncleHoward;Thanksgiving;handedusoneturkeyegghaveafineturkey,Chriswassoexcited,wenameditTimothyMom—kepttellingusnottogettooattachedtoTimothy
We—neverpaidtoomuchattentiontowhatthatreallymeantDad—wantanice,thick-fleshedbirdforThanksgiving
Chris—wrinkle,cryforeshadowingbackgroundinformationourlovefortheturkeytheturkeywillbekilledwanttohideandsaveitstorylinePara.1
IcomfortedChris,sayingwecouldhideTimothywherepeoplecouldn’tfindhim.Think1:IcancomfortChris,whichmeansI'm___________andhavemany_______.Think2:Whytheywantedtohidetheturkey?A.Theydon’twanttheirparentstokilltheturkey.B.It’snotreasonabletoreleasetheturkey.C.Both.Think3:Wherewouldpeoplenotfindtheturkey?A.underthebed B.inthewoods C.inthecoopmorecalmerideas“Helikedtowanderinthewoodsandfindtastyberriesandweedseeds.”两段首句定一框,二框二首正能量Para.2
WithTimothygone,UncleHowardprovidedanotherturkeyonThanksgiving.Think1:Whatdoesgonemeanabouttheturkey?A.hidden B.died C.lostThink2:Whatwasourfeelingwheneatinganotherturkey
onThanksgiving?A.happy B.confused C.guiltyPara.1
IcomfortedChris,sayingwecouldhideTimothywherepeoplecouldn’tfindhim.Para.2
WithTimothygone,UncleHowardprovidedanotherturkeyonThanksgiving.Summary:Theconnectionbetweenthetwoparagraphsshouldbebasedonacorrectunderstandingofthew
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