写作Lesson10求助信答案

Lesson10求助信课前检测一.简答1.最近生活和学习怎么样呢？我写信来请你帮个忙。2.七月份我会去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛，我在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难，请你帮我解决。3.我打算赛后去看你，盼回复。二.翻译1.Iamwritingtoseekyourassistance.2.IwilltakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestinBeijinginJuly.3.Ihavedifficultyinsearchinginformationandusinglanguage.Therefore,I’mwritingtoaskforyoursuggestions.课中讲解一．掌握谋篇布局思路求助信框架结构第一段：写信目的—自我介绍（或问候）+请求对方帮助第二段：内容要点—说清楚遇到的困难（背景）及原因，再说出求助的具体细节第三段：表达感谢—感谢对方的帮助，盼回复（盼相见）二．能够正确遣词造句1.开头【思路句】我叫李华，来自你上学期写作课。我写信的目的是要向你求助。【遣词】seekyourassistance【句型】Iamwritingtoseekyourassistance.【造句】I’mLiHuafromyourEnglishwritingclasslastterm.I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance.【升级1】中文：我叫李华，你上学期写作课的一名学生。我写信的目的是要向你求助，希望你可以对我这个暑假的求职申请书和个人简历提点修改的意见。英文：I’mLiHua,astudentfromyourwritingclasslastterm.I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance,hopingthatyoucankindlyoffermesomerevisiontipsregardingmyapplicationandresumeforasummerjob.【过关检测】1.填空seekyourassistance2.翻译句子I’mLiHua,astudentfromyourwritingclasslastterm.I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance,hopingthatyoucankindlyoffermesomerevisiontipsregardingmyapplicationandresumeforasummerjob.2.正文（1）【思路句】我正在申请一份外资公司的暑假兼职。【遣词】applyfor;parttimejob;foreignpany;summervacation【造句】I’mapplyingforaparttimejobataforeignpanyduringthesummervacation.【升级】中文：暑假快到了，我想在一家外资公司申请一份兼职的工作，我觉得这会是一个人成长的黄金机会。句型：With…aroundthecorner,Iintendtodosth.,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.英文：Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,Iintendtoapplyforaparttimejobinacertainforeignpany,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.（2）【思路句】我已经写好了申请书和个人简历。【遣词】plete;applicationletter;resume【造句】Ihavejustpletedmyapplicationletterandresume.【升级】中文：我已经写好了申请书和个人简历,它们就在附件里。句型：Ihavedonesth.,which….英文：Ihavejustpletedmyapplicationletterandresume,whichhasbeenattachedtothisletter.（3）【思路句】我不确定自己用语和格式对不对。【遣词】sure;language;format【造句】IamnotquitesureofthelanguageandformatI’veused.【升级1】中文：我害怕我写的申请材料会因为母语的干扰而不尽如人意，语法和用词不够地道。句型：I’mafraidthat…mayhaveleftmuchtobedesiredasaresultof….英文：I’mafraidthatthegrammarandvocabularyinmyapplicationmaterialsmayhaveleftmuchtobedesiredasaresultofmothertongueinterference.【升级2】中文：考虑到这是我第一次写这种正式的文章，用语和格式上可能会有错误。句型：There’slikelytobesomethingwrongwith…consideringthatit’smyveryfirstattemptatthis….英文：There’slikelytobesomethingwrongwiththelanguageandformatconsideringthatit’smyveryfirstattemptatthistypeofformalwriting.（4）【思路句】如果你能腾出时间帮我修改附件的文件，我会十分感激。【遣词】grateful;sparesometime;revise;document;attach【句型】Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldsparesometimetodosth..【造句】Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldsparesometimetorevisethedocumentsattached.【升级1】中文：如果你可以抽点时间帮我检查一下我附上的申请书和个人简历并做一些必要的修改，我会非常感激。英文：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsparesometimetogothroughtheapplicationletterandresumeattachedandmakenecessaryrevisions.【升级2】中文：我想知道你可不可以在下周五前腾出一点时间帮我检查一下我的求职材料，对我的用语和格式提一些宝贵的建议。句型：Iamwonderingifyoucouldkindlysparesometimeto…beforenextFriday(时间),offeringvaluablementson….英文：IamwonderingifyoucouldkindlysparesometimetocheckmymaterialsbeforenextFriday,offeringvaluablementsonmyuseofwordsandformat.【过关检测】1.填空（1）havepleted;hasbeenattachedto;（2）asaresultof2.翻译句子（1）Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,Iintendtoapplyforaparttimejobinacertainforeignpany,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.（2）IamwonderingifyoucouldkindlysparesometimetocheckmymaterialsbeforenextFriday,offeringvaluablementsonmyuseofwordsandformat.3.结尾【思路句】感谢你的好意。期待你的答复。【遣词】kindness;lookforwardto;reply【造句】Thankyouforyourkindness.Lookingforwardtoyourreply【升级1】中文：感谢你的好意。期待你在方便的时候能给我回信。英文：Thankyouforyourkindness!Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourconvenience.【升级2】中文：谢谢你的关注，我期待着你的早日答复。英文：Thankyouforyourdueattention,andIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.【过关检测】1.填空（1）kindness;Lookingforwardto;（2）atyourconvenience2.翻译句子Thankyouforyourdueattention,andIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.三．能够正确使用语篇衔接词1.范文【基础版范文】DearMs.Jenkins,I’mLiHuafromyourEnglishwritingclasslastterm.I’mwritingtoaskforyourassistance.I’mapplyingforaparttimejobataforeignpanyinmycityduringthesummervacation,andIhavejustpletedmyapplicationletterandresume.However,IamnotquitesureofthelanguageandformatI’veused.Iknowyouhaveaverybusyschedule,butIwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsparesometimetorevisethedocumentsattached.Thankyouforyourkindness!Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua【升级版范文】DearMsJenkins,I’mLiHua,astudentfromyourEnglishwritingclass.I’mwritingtoseekyourassistanceinthehopethatyoucankindlyoffermesometipsregardingmyapplicationandresumeforasummerjob.Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,Iintendtoapplyforaparttimejobinaforeignpany,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.YetI’mafraidthatthegrammarandvocabularyinmyapplicationmaterialsmayhaveleftmuchtobedesiredasaresultofmothertongueinterference.Furthermore,there’slikelytobesomethingwrongwiththeformatconsideringthatit’smyveryfirstattemptatthistypeofformalwriting.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsparethetimetorevisethedocumentsattached.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourconvenience.Yourssincerely,LiHua课后练习补救练习一.补全句子1.aroundthecorner;agoldenopportunity;personalgrowth2.Intendingto;havewritten3.appreciateit;sparesometime;attached4.atyourconvenience二.翻译1.I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance,hopingthatyoucankindlyoffermesomerevisiontipsregardingmyapplicationandresumeforasummerjob.2.Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,Iintendtoapplyforaparttimejobinacertainforeignpany,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.3.I’mafraidthatthegrammarandvocabularyinmyapplicationmaterialsmayhaveleftmuchtobedesiredasaresultofmothertongueinterference.4.There’slikelytobesomethingwrongwiththelanguageandformatconsideringthatit’smyveryfirstattemptatthistypeofformalwriting.5.IamwonderingifyoucouldkindlysparesometimetocheckmymaterialsbeforenextFriday,offeringvaluablementsonmyuseofwordsandformat.巩固练习1.填空DearMsJenkins,I’mLiHua,astudentfromyourEnglishwritingclass.I’mwritingtoseekyourassistanceinthehopethatyoucankindlyoffermesometipsregardingmyapplicationandresumeforasummerjob.Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,Iintendtoapplyforaparttimejobinaforeignpany,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.YetI’mafraidthatthegrammarandvocabularyinmyapplicationmaterialsmayhaveleftmuchtobedesiredasaresultofmothertongueinterference.Furthermore,there’slikelytobesomethingwrongwiththeformatconsideringthatit’smyveryfirstattemptatthistypeofformalwriting.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsparethetimetorevisethedocumentsattached.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourconvenience.Yourssincerely,LiHua2.完成作文（1）写出中文思路●问候并表明需要求助●介绍自己制作的中国结（外观、象征意义和价格）并提出具体求助内容●表示感谢，盼回复（2）根据中文思路，完成篇章写作。DearTom,Howareyoudoing?I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance.I’mmakingsomeChineseknotswithsilkthreads,clothandothermaterials.Andtheylookreallybeautifulintheshapeofadiamond,about5incheslongand4incheswide.InChina,theseknotsstandforfriendship,loveandgoodluck.Peoplecaneithergivethemasgiftstofriendsorhangthemintheircarsorhouses.Theyareonly4.99USdollarseach.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulds