高三下学期一模英语读后续写+超市里的启示+讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwastheseconddayIleftmylovelyhometownforthecitytolivewithmygrandfather,whowastakingmetothesupermarketforthefirsttime.“Iforgot.You’veneverseenasupermarketbefore,haveyou?”Ishookmyhead,indicatingindifferencetothesurroundings.“Imagineitlikethis,”Grandfathersaid,“Thisstore’sspeakingtoyou.Itistellingyousomeofthenewthingsthatyou’veneverlearned.”Ididnotunderstand.“Atradingpostinaremotetownonlyshowsyouasmallpartoftheworld.Thisstorespeaksofaworldthatisaverybigplace.”“SoIshouldjustforgetmyroots,isthatit?”Angryandupset,Iwasexpressingmyreluctancetolivehere.“Absolutelynot.Carryitwithyou,sothatyoumayfreelynavigateinbothworlds,bigandsmall.”Ignoringwordsfromhim,mygazefellonawomanselectingsomegreenapples.Ithoughtsowhatifit’sabigworld,butI’dratherpurchasewhateverinatradingpostfortheyonlystockedonetypeofapples,atleastallripe!Noticingtheexpressionsonmyface,Grandfatherchuckled.Hegracefullywalkedovertothetablewherethegreenappleswereandselectedhalfadozen.“You’llgetastomachacheifyouconsumegreenapples,”Isaid.Grandfatherappearedasthoughhewasgoingtolaughagain,buthedidn’t.Therewasnowordanymore.IfollowedhimwhileGrandfatherfilledthecartwithournecessities,encounteringnumerousnewitems.Iwasburningtoaskhimwhatthosestrangefoodswere,andwhattheirflavorsandoriginswere.However,IkeptitinmymindthatIwassupposedtobeboredanduninterestedinanything,thus,keepingsilentalltheway.Asweexitedthesupermarket,Grandfatherwassmilingasifheunderstoodsomeprivatejokes.Abouthalfwayback,hegesturedformetostop,bendingovertofindtheplasticbag.注意：

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请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Hepickedoutagreenapple.__________________________________________________________Paragraph2:WithhiswordsinmindIcouldn’thelptakingabite,too.______________________________________________________________【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和爷爷离开了家乡，作者感到在城市里格格不入，爷爷劝说作者去适应，但作者不为所动，作者愤怒又沮丧，购物时看到有人在挑选青苹果，觉得还是呆在偏远城镇好，至少那里的贸易站里的苹果都是熟的，爷爷看到作者注意到青苹果后就选购了一些青苹果，看着爷爷推车里的一些新物品，作者感到好奇，但碍于面子又不好意思问爷爷，要走出超市时，爷爷停下弯腰去找塑料袋。5w分析：Who(谁):主要人物是叙述者（我）和他的祖父。叙述者是一个从家乡来到城市与祖父同住的年轻人，而祖父是一个智慧且有洞察力的长者。What(什么):叙述者和祖父第一次去超市。祖父试图向叙述者解释超市的意义，以及它如何象征着更广阔的世界。叙述者最初对此感到不感兴趣，但随着时间的推移，他开始对超市里的商品和它们背后的故事产生了兴趣。When(何时):事件发生在叙述者离开家乡的第二天。具体的时间点没有明确说明，但可以推测是在一天中的某个时刻，可能是上午或下午，因为祖父选择了一些绿色苹果。Where(何地):事件发生在城市的超市里，然后是他们离开超市回家的路上。超市是一个充满各种商品和可能性的地方，象征着更广阔的世界。Why(为什么):祖父带叙述者去超市的目的是为了让叙述者了解和体验更广阔的世界。他用超市作为一个隐喻，说明即使在一个小地方长大，也可以通过学习和探索来了解更广阔的世界。叙述者最初对这种变化感到抵触，但最终开始接受并欣赏这种新的视角。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“他拿出一个青苹果。”可知，第一段可描写爷爷邀请作者一起品尝青苹果，作者认为它没熟拒绝吃它，看到爷爷吃得津津有味后，作者感到困惑，爷爷再次劝说作者吃青苹果。②由第二段首句内容“考虑到他的话，我也忍不住咬了一口。”可知，第二段可描写作者咬完青苹果后惊讶地发现它味道不错，爷爷借此机会告诉作者：不能只凭外表或最初的印象来判断事物，拥有开放的心态去学习、探索。

2.续写线索：爷爷拿出青苹果——邀请作者品尝，作者拒绝——看到爷爷吃得很带劲，作者感到困惑——爷爷再次劝说作者吃青苹果——作者咬了一口——作者惊讶地发现味道不错——爷爷借机教育作者——作者感悟

【参考答案】Paragraph1:Hepickedoutagreenapple.“Wouldyouliketoshareitwithme?”mygrandpaasked,withasmileonhisface.“Absolutelynot!I’msureit’snotripeanditwilltasteterrible,”Ireplied,shakingmyhead.Heshruggedhisshouldersandtookabiteoftheapple.Watchinghischewwithenjoyment,Ibegantofeelpuzzled—Couldagreenappleactuallybedelicious?Atthatmoment,mygrandfathersaid:“Youneedtotryitifyouwanttoknowwhetherit’sgoodorbad.Thisapplemaybedifferentfromwhatyouexpected,anditmightsurpriseyou.”Paragraph2:WithhiswordsinmindIcouldn’thelptakingabite,too.Surprisingly,itwasn’tasunpleasantasIhadimagined.Instead,auniqueblendoffreshnessandsweetnessemerged.MyeyeswidenedinsurpriseasIlookedatmygrandfather,who,asifeverythingwaswithinhisexpectations,said“Manythingsinlifearelikethis.Wecan’tjudgethemonlybytheirappearanceorinitialimpressions.Sometimes,weneedtotakeachancetolearnit.”Inoddedthoughtfully,filledwithadmirationforhiswisdom.Thegreenappletaughtmetheimportanceofexploringanewworldwithanopenmind.下水文1Paragraph1:Hepickedoutagreenapple,holdingituptothelightasifexaminingapreciousgem."Yousee,"hebegan,hisvoicefilledwithwisdom,"thisappleisnotyetripe,butitholdsthepromiseofsomethingmore.It'sliketheworldwe'resteppinginto;fullofpotentialandwaitingtobediscovered."Hisanalogywaslostonmeatfirst,butasIwatchedhim,Ibegantoseethesupermarketinanewlight–notjustasaplaceofcommerce,butasasymbolofthevastpossibilitiesthatlaybeforeme.Paragraph2:Withhiswordsinmind,Icouldn’thelptakingabite,too.Thetartnessoftheapplesurprisedme,buttherewasasweetnessbeneaththathintedatmaturity.Itwasatasteoftheunknown,aflavorthatwasbothforeignandexciting.Aswecontinuedourwalk,Ifoundmyselfaskingquestionsabouttheotheritemswehadseen,curiousabouttheirstoriesandtheculturestheyrepresented.Grandfather'slaughterechoedinmyears,asoundofjoyandanticipationforthejourneywewereabouttoembarkontogether–ajourneyofdiscovery,oflearning,andofbecomingapartofsomethingmuchlargerthanourselves.下水文2Paragraph1:Hepickedoutagreenapple,amischievousglintinhiseyes."Youknow,"hesaid,pattingtheapplegently,"thisisn'tjustanapple.It'sasymboloflife'sjourney."Heexplainedthatjustastheapplematuresfromgreentored,wetoogrowandchangethroughexperiences.Hisanalogywassimpleyetprofound,makingmereconsidermyinitialdisdainfortheunfamiliarsurroundingsofthecity.Paragraph2:Withhiswordsinmind,Icouldn’thelptakingabite,too.Thecrisp,tartapplewasastarkcontrasttothesweet,familiarapplesfrommyhometown.Itwasatastethatchallengedmypalate,muchlikethecitywaschallengingmycomfortzone.Aswewalked,Ifoundmyselfopeninguptotheideaofexploringthisnewworldwithanopenmind.Grandfather'swisdomhadsparkedacuriosityinme,urgingmetolearnmoreaboutthediverseworldthatlaybeforeus,andtoappreciatethejourney,notjustthedestination.下水文3Paragraph1:Hepickedoutagreenapple,hisfingersgentlytracingthecontoursofitsunripeskin."This,"hesaid,"isthebeginningofunderstanding."Heexplainedthatthegreenapple,li